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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part -2 the rising


Akshat was at the poolside with his legs half dipped in the pool's water. He was continuously thinking about how he met guddan their lovely collision their Nok jhok their fall holding each other. After the flashbacks he started to think about today's maa's revelation about guddu's understanding. He was thinking that a girl whom he never thought could be able to do any thing but she had started to make his family laugh n live. She started to teach his sons the meaning of a family. Even though He has never accepted her as his wife but she knows very well what does the soulmate bond stands for as one day he was passing by he was telling Kishore to give some time to Durga bahu.


He again started to think that he has accused his wife regarding her character then he remembered maa's words that "Mera beta ram Nahi hai" he was so ashamed that he started to think how would she react. "Kis Munh se maafi mangu" but somehow he stood up n walked to his room but what he saw it just trash his heart into million of pieces.

He saw that guddan was crying her heart out after pressing her mouth on the pillow she was screaming loudly but the sound of her scream was so loud that he could hear it clearly. He broke into many pieces but tried to gather himself n went to her he be t on his knees n put his hand on her shoulder n she looked him up. Today her eyes was saying another story they were she was angry on him but this was something else. She wanted to cry on his chest but this was something else.

She stood up wipe her tears. "Door hatiye mujhse Mr. Akshat Jindal" AJ was shocked hearing his name like this she was fuming in anger. " Mujh jaisi characterlesss ladki ko chhoona apko Shobha Nahi deta." Guddan Meri BAAT suno" kya sunu main Mr. Akshat kya sunu aap mujhe dhokhebaaz samajhte Hai ye sunu ya aapko Lagta hai ki Maine aapse paison k liye shadi ki ye sunu ya phir majnu k sath Apne affair Ka kissa sunu ya ye ki aap mujhse nafrat karte hai" Nahi guddan aisa Nahi mujhe galatfahmi ho gayi thi " kaise hui apko galatfahmi ki main or majnu apko Lagta hai ki main aisi ladki hu ohhh ab samajhi aapko Lagta hai ki main un ladkiyo me se hi Jo paiso k liye shadi krti hai or Apne zameer k sath samjhauta Kar Leti h to for your kind information" saying this she pinned Akshat to the wall hold his collar n looked directly into his eyes today AJ found that she was some one else she was not that one guddan who always seems to be childish who doesn't care about what everyone even AJ says about her failure. " For your kind information Mr. Akshat ki bhale hi bachpan se mujhe MERI maaa Ka pyaar Nahi Mila mummy ne Kabhi mujhe Nahi apnaya. Bhale hi ye shadi maine majboor ho Kar apko Bina bataye ki ho lekin jis pal aapne meri mang ye sindoor or gale me ye mangalsutra Bandha thaa na us pal se chahe unchahe main aap k sath bandhi chuki thi bhale hi ham ek doosre ko pati patni Nahi mante magar us pal se aap k alawa Kisi or bare me sochna to door aisi Soch BHI mere dimag me Lana mere liye gunaah hai Galti Nahi or aaap Shayad ye bhool Gaye ki main galtiyan Karti hu gunaaah Nahi" then she leave him n again started to burst " aapko pata hai Akshat JIS din Dutta ne mujhe kidnap Kiya or aap mujhe bachane Aaye the us din se Maine aap par bhagwaan se BHI zyada bharosa Kiya or aap Aapne mujhe itna Gira hua samajh liya kaise Kar Sakte Hain aap aisa mere sath kaise" saying this she again hold his collar then dropped her on the floor. On seeing her in this state AJ was crying from his heart he went to her on his knees n hold her n this time guddan didn't stop him.


She herself hung on his shoulder n started crying her heart out.


AJ was caressing her hair with his hands.



So tell me how was that will update the last part sooon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12
Nice update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#13
Awsome... Plz update next part soon
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#14
Beautiful and emotional update
Really loved it.
Guddans emotional breakdown really felt bad for her
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#15
Beautiful update. ..loved it...👏emotional one...mein ro rahi hun yaar...😭plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#16
Guddan was so hurt😒
Her emotional breakdown was nicely written
Update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#17
Very beautifully written😭
AJ hurt Guddan. Uncle ne bina soche samjhe dil dukha diya
Par ab manaenge bhi!😉
Eagerly waiting for final part😃
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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Chapter-3 last part


Guddan cried her heart out after embracing Akshat in her arms she was hugging him from the left side of his chest. His heart was squeezing when he saw guddan in this state. She then said to him crying "aap mujhe sirf ek baat bataiye kya Galti Karna itna Bura Kam hai ki dunia Ka har shakhs mujhse nafrat kare Maine apni mummy ko sagi maa SE BHI badh k mana or unhone mujhe nafrat k Siva or Kuch Nahi dia. Is shadi k baad Maine is Ghar me BHI sabhi ki apna mana magar Yaha BHI mere sath wo hi hua. Aapko pata hai Akshat I trust you a lot mujhe laga tha koi mujh par yakeen Kare na Kare aap zaroor karenge. Magar". Before she could complete Akshat put his finger on her lips. He said" guddan main janta hu ki Maine tum par shak Kar k bahut BADA gunaaah Kiya hai. Guddan main bahut hi Bura gussail arrogant sadu or ghatiya aadmi hu." Nahi aisa Nahi h guddan tried to defend" aisa hi hai guddan lekin sach ye hai ki Jo BHI hu jaisa BHI hu Sahi ya galat iski ek wajah hai or wajah to wajah Hoti hai na wo Sahi ya galat Nahi Hoti hai na?" Guddan nodded her head in a yes. " Main janta hu ki main Shayad wo shaks Nahi hu jiska Sapna Kabhi tumhare Mann me aaya Hoga or tum janti ho ki MERI Zindagi me aane wali tum pahli Nahi ho. Kisi BHI shadi ko successful banane k liye teen cheez bahut zaruri Hain


1. Pyaar


2. Compatibility


3. Vishwaas


Main Nahi janta hu ki ham Kabhi ek doosre se pyaar Kar BHI payenge ya nahi. Or Main Nahi Chahta ki sirf mere liye tum Khud ko badal do.magar ek waada karta Hun ki tum Jo ho jaisi BHI ho main har situation mein tum par vishwaas karunga or tumhare baad MERI Zindagi me Kisi or k liye koi jagah Nahi Hogi. I promise you that ki tumhari us ideal image of your husband ko bhale hi paar na Kar paun magar us image ko touch Karne ki poore Dil se koshish karunga. Or main tumhe ek achcha husband ban k dikhaunga."


At this guddan looked him with teary eyes n said "Maine Kabhi BHI Apne Mann me koi Ideal husband ki image Nahi banai magar aaj Aapke ye kahne k baad main aapse sirf yahi kahna chahti hu ki mere liye ye hi ideal image of a husband hai Jo na sirf mujh per bharosa karte hai balki mujhe samajhte hai mere tootne par mujhe sambhalne k liye mere sath hote hai or sabse important" wo kya AJ asked " mujhe daily entertainment k liye jhagde ki wajah dete Hain" hearing this Akshat laugh from his heart n guddan joined him n then she hugged him n he responded back tooo hugging her tightly.



Because trust is the building block of a relationship.

Meri kismat me tere pyaar ki dastak si hui hai ,


Aaj do ghadi aansuon ki barish sath sath hui hai,


Mujhko Lagta hai ki MERI Zindagi me bahaar ayegi,


Teri MERI dosti ki shuruaat bharose se hui hai.



Thanks for reading pls do reply n tell me how was that.



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Posted: 5 years ago
#19
Taaliyan rukni nahi chaiye 👏

You have described their emotions so beautifully...now I am literally craving for their aisa vala hug😳😉
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Posted: 5 years ago
#20
Emotional tha lekin it's awesome. ..loved it 👏
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