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AKSHAN OS - the rising


It was after the Christmas party was over.durga gathered everyone in the hall it was Jindal guptas and Manny who was there. They guys were silent as Durga shows some video where majnu was proposing guddan saying that will u be there always for me n guddan is saying yes.guddan was shocked as she thought Durga was trying to accept her. When majnu tried to speak up AJ make him quiet with his daggers of glare.


AJ went to his mother n started " bahut bharosa tha na aapko apki gudiya par aaj tak aap iski har galti ko nazarandaaz Kar Gaye aap ne hamesha iska sath Diya or isne kya Kiya sirf dhokha Diya paison k liye property k liye bus is k alawa use aata hi kya hai. Pahle paison k liye mujhse shadi ki or ab shadi k baad Kisi gair k sath is Tarah ki harkat kya aaap ab BHI yahi kahengi ki yeh bekasoor hai. Are  bilkul thik Kaha tha Durga bahu be ye ladki ek chaalak dhokhebaaz giri hui or characterlesss ladki hai." As before AJ could have said any thing else dadi gave him a strong slap with her full force and everyone was shocked. The Akshat Jindal was slapped by his mother.


Bhushan tried to say but dadi said" Nahi samdhi ji ab Jo BHI bolna hai main bolungi or ye Sab sunenge. Or khaas Kar k ye Akshat Jindal Jo Khud ko na jaane kya samajhta hai. Janta hai aaj Maine tujhe thappad kyon mara kyonki aaj Tu apni sari maryada paar Kar gaya. Teri jurrat kaise hui guddan k bare me aisa sochne ki BHI " at this statement Akshat as well as everyone was scared because none of them has seen this words of dadi before. " Tum sabko ye dikha ki guddan isse shadi Karne ko taiyyar ho gayi magar kyon hui wo main batati hu parv me shadishuda hote hue BHI revati se pyaar Ka jhootha natak Kiya. Guddan ne isse madad mangi badle me isne shadi Karne ki shart Rakhi or MERI guddan apni Bahan ko bachane isse shadi Karne ko taiyyar ho gayi. Durga ko laga ki ye paison k liye shadi Kar Rahi hai guddan ne use Sangeet wali subah Sab Kuch bataya magar Durga me guddan ko Sangeet se bhagakar use hi galat sabit Kiya orshadi toot gayi. Parv Yaha Nahi ruka usne guddan ki mummy ki


Kamzori Yani paison k sahare revati orapne baare me BAAT ki or shadi wale Din revati ki kidnapping Ka natak Karaya tab MERI guddan ne apni Bahan ki khatir ek Baar phir Khud ko kurbaan Kar Diya. Jab use laga ki revati ki kidnapping me AJ Ka hath hai to wo is Ghar se chalo gayi lekin apni Bahan ki izzat bachane


K liyeek Baar phir wo is Ghar me rakhne cHali aayi jahan use Kabhi BHI bahu biwi SAAS ya maaa Ka pyaar darja or ahmiyat Nahi Mili. Sabki khushiyan  muskurahatein hasi Ka khayal rakhne wali Jo sari duniya k samne jhoothi hansi hasti hai Apne Dil me dher saare zakhm liye baithi hai MERI guddan. Use pata Chala ki uski shadi ki sazish uski maa ne Ranchi thi to wo toot gayi magar usne is pariwaar ko apnakar use apni Zindagi Ka maksad Bana liya in sabki ki muskurahat or hasi hi uski sabse badi Khushi ban gayi. Or tune MERI usss guddan pe ungli uthai. Uske charitra par sawaal Karne haq tujhe Nahi hai ye seeta agnipariksha Nahi Degi kyonki Tu Ram Nahi hai. Ha Nahi hai  Mera beta ram . Majnu or us k rishtey par sawaal uthaya tune to sun guddan ne majnu urf sidhaant ko Yaha revati k liye bulaya tha wo chahti this ki Sab k samne sidhant revati ko propose Kare taking revati mana na kar sake sidhaant Ka dare door Karne k liye usne use rehearsal Karne ko Kaha tha. Or ye video jab Bani thi na tab main BHI wahan chair par baithi hui thi" dadi was coughing n AJ tried to hold her but she stopped him guddan rushed to dadi n said " maa aap bus kijiye ab Dekhiye apki tabiyat kharaab ho Rahi hai pls bus kijiye ab " dadi to AJ " Dekh Raha hai iss ladki ko are abhi BHI ye mujhe chup isiliye Kara Rahi hai taki uski sachchai jaanne k baad tu khud Jo chhota  na mahsoos Kare are abhi sharam Baki hai to mafi mango Durga bahu apni SAAS se." Durga asked "mujhe maar Kar dijiye sasumaaa main bahut galat thi"


Guddan said "mujhe koi fatal Nahi pasta Durga bahu aap Khud ko guilty mahsoos na karein." Guddan took dadi to her room make her rest.


Gupta leaves to their home. Dil n so s leave to their rooms. AJ also moved outside for some fresh air. Guddan CAme  back to her room.



Hi to alll sorry exams was going so kafi din baad Likha hai. Or FF Ka ab last part update Hoga iska ek part or upload karungi till yet njoy reading it n tell me how was that.


Lots of love

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Posted: 5 years ago
It's superb yaar..thank u...daadi is a rockstar. ..kya dhoya hai AJ aur sabko...loved it...now I can't wait to see AJ'S reaction. ..plz update the next part soon. ...waiting...plz thoda intense hone dho aur guddan bhi AJ ko thoda suna de...
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Wow Dadi just nailed it
Dadi did a superb job by revealing all truths at once
The slap was on the face of all the members of Jindal's for hurting and distrusting Guddan
Waiting eagerly for next update
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow beautiful update dear
Loved it 
So dadi slapped AJ ek tappad Durga also deserved anyways 
Wanna see hw AJ will apologize to guddan
Plzzz do continue soon
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Iss me Guddan nahi...Dadi was the superstar ðŸ˜‰ðŸ˜†
Fantastic os
Continue soon Di
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Superb...dadi rock aj shock...achha hua durga se maafi mangvayiiss scene ka to main kabse wait kar rahi hoon...
Update soon want see how aj will say sorry to guddan
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Originally posted by: kayafever

AKSHAN OS - the rising


It was after the Christmas party was over.durga gathered everyone in the hall it was Jindal guptas and Manny who was there. They guys were silent as Durga shows some video where majnu was proposing guddan saying that will u be there always for me n guddan is saying yes.guddan was shocked as she thought Durga was trying to accept her. When majnu tried to speak up AJ make him quiet with his daggers of glare.


AJ went to his mother n started " bahut bharosa tha na aapko apki gudiya par aaj tak aap iski har galti ko nazarandaaz Kar Gaye aap ne hamesha iska sath Diya or isne kya Kiya sirf dhokha Diya paison k liye property k liye bus is k alawa use aata hi kya hai. Pahle paison k liye mujhse shadi ki or ab shadi k baad Kisi gair k sath is Tarah ki harkat kya aaap ab BHI yahi kahengi ki yeh bekasoor hai. Are  bilkul thik Kaha tha Durga bahu be ye ladki ek chaalak dhokhebaaz giri hui or characterlesss ladki hai." As before AJ could have said any thing else dadi gave him a strong slap with her full force and everyone was shocked. The Akshat Jindal was slapped by his mother.


Bhushan tried to say but dadi said" Nahi samdhi ji ab Jo BHI bolna hai main bolungi or ye Sab sunenge. Or khaas Kar k ye Akshat Jindal Jo Khud ko na jaane kya samajhta hai. Janta hai aaj Maine tujhe thappad kyon mara kyonki aaj Tu apni sari maryada paar Kar gaya. Teri jurrat kaise hui guddan k bare me aisa sochne ki BHI " at this statement Akshat as well as everyone was scared because none of them has seen this words of dadi before. " Tum sabko ye dikha ki guddan isse shadi Karne ko taiyyar ho gayi magar kyon hui wo main batati hu parv me shadishuda hote hue BHI revati se pyaar Ka jhootha natak Kiya. Guddan ne isse madad mangi badle me isne shadi Karne ki shart Rakhi or MERI guddan apni Bahan ko bachane isse shadi Karne ko taiyyar ho gayi. Durga ko laga ki ye paison k liye shadi Kar Rahi hai guddan ne use Sangeet wali subah Sab Kuch bataya magar Durga me guddan ko Sangeet se bhagakar use hi galat sabit Kiya orshadi toot gayi. Parv Yaha Nahi ruka usne guddan ki mummy ki


Kamzori Yani paison k sahare revati orapne baare me BAAT ki or shadi wale Din revati ki kidnapping Ka natak Karaya tab MERI guddan ne apni Bahan ki khatir ek Baar phir Khud ko kurbaan Kar Diya. Jab use laga ki revati ki kidnapping me AJ Ka hath hai to wo is Ghar se chalo gayi lekin apni Bahan ki izzat bachane


K liyeek Baar phir wo is Ghar me rakhne cHali aayi jahan use Kabhi BHI bahu biwi SAAS ya maaa Ka pyaar darja or ahmiyat Nahi Mili. Sabki khushiyan  muskurahatein hasi Ka khayal rakhne wali Jo sari duniya k samne jhoothi hansi hasti hai Apne Dil me dher saare zakhm liye baithi hai MERI guddan. Use pata Chala ki uski shadi ki sazish uski maa ne Ranchi thi to wo toot gayi magar usne is pariwaar ko apnakar use apni Zindagi Ka maksad Bana liya in sabki ki muskurahat or hasi hi uski sabse badi Khushi ban gayi. Or tune MERI usss guddan pe ungli uthai. Uske charitra par sawaal Karne haq tujhe Nahi hai ye seeta agnipariksha Nahi Degi kyonki Tu Ram Nahi hai. Ha Nahi hai  Mera beta ram . Majnu or us k rishtey par sawaal uthaya tune to sun guddan ne majnu urf sidhaant ko Yaha revati k liye bulaya tha wo chahti this ki Sab k samne sidhant revati ko propose Kare taking revati mana na kar sake sidhaant Ka dare door Karne k liye usne use rehearsal Karne ko Kaha tha. Or ye video jab Bani thi na tab main BHI wahan chair par baithi hui thi" dadi was coughing n AJ tried to hold her but she stopped him guddan rushed to dadi n said " maa aap bus kijiye ab Dekhiye apki tabiyat kharaab ho Rahi hai pls bus kijiye ab " dadi to AJ " Dekh Raha hai iss ladki ko are abhi BHI ye mujhe chup isiliye Kara Rahi hai taki uski sachchai jaanne k baad tu khud Jo chhota  na mahsoos Kare are abhi sharam Baki hai to mafi mango Durga bahu apni SAAS se." Durga asked "mujhe maar Kar dijiye sasumaaa main bahut galat thi"


Guddan said "mujhe koi fatal Nahi pasta Durga bahu aap Khud ko guilty mahsoos na karein." Guddan took dadi to her room make her rest.


Gupta leaves to their home. Dil n so s leave to their rooms. AJ also moved outside for some fresh air. Guddan CAme  back to her room.



Hi to alll sorry exams was going so kafi din baad Likha hai. Or FF Ka ab last part update Hoga iska ek part or upload karungi till yet njoy reading it n tell me how was that.


Lots of love


Superb OS please continue soon😊
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Superb OS please do continue soon
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Aj was so ruuudddee😭
Or maybe insecure😉
Or is it me being positively paranoid😆jealosyy!!?😛