PYAAR - a myth or truth (part 4 updated)

Posted: 5 years ago
Hey guys 
welcome to my first story which is a real story 
a story of a ordinary girl GEET  having so many dreams 
what will happen to her 
will her dreams be shattered in a way that it will just break her down or they will bring a new geet 
will she be able to get the luv for which she has always dream 

kya woh inn sawalon ke jawab kabhi jaan payegi

Love/ pyaar kehne ko to ye duniya ke sabse khubsurat shabd hai pr kya wakayi inke koi mayne hai ?

Kya ye wakayi sabke liye sabse khubsurat ehsaas hai ?

Kya ye sabko milta hai ?

Kya pyaar se hume kuch umeed krne ka haq hai?

Kya pyaar ki neev vishwas pr tikki hoti hai?

Ye kuch aise sawaal hai jinka mtlb shayad aaj hr koi dhund rha hai


please i request all of u to tell me if i should continue this or not 
as ur support is really required as it requires for me to go through all once again n its really tough for me 
n if u hv any suggestions plsss pm me 

plss listen this song 
https://youtu.be/mW6FnvovzXg 
Edited by Diyakanika - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
INDEX

Part 1 - page 1
part 2 - page 2
part 3 - page 3
part 4 - page 4
Edited by Diyakanika - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
CHRACTER SKETCH
These will be the main characters more will be coming as the story will move 

GEET  HANDA : she is our sweet bubly girl who lives in her own fairy tale world . she just want luv n trust for which she can do anything 


SANAYA  : school frnd of geet


ROMI : school frnd of geet


MAAN SINGH KHURANA : youngest child of raj cant tell much about him u will know as the story will move


AJAY(MOTA) : best frnd of maan


FAKRA : best frnd of maan 


YASH HANDA : brother of geet working with his father a btech 


RANO HANDA : mother of geet


MOHINDER HANDA: father of geet doing a small business


DEV SINGH KHURANA: elder brother of maan by 9 yrs n has hearing n speaking problem from birth


RAJ SINGH KHURANA : father of maan has a small construction business with both sons working with him 

SNEHA SINGH KHURANA: mother of maan

SAMIRA SINGH KHURANA : wife of dev 

ISHA SINGH KHURANA, SACHIN SINGH KHURANA : childern of dev n samira



KAVITA GARG :second child of raj n 7 yrs older to maan 

YOGESH GARG: husband of kavita

LAKSHAY GARG , BHAVESH GARG : children of kavita

ANVESHA RATHOD : third child of raj n 5 yrs older to maan , married to arjun (luv marraige against family)

ARJUN RATHOD : husband of anvesha

VISHAL RATHOD : son of anvesha









Edited by Diyakanika - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago

PART 1

Two girls sitting n sharing their daydreams about their marriage with each other. These r no other than our geet n her best friend sanaya around 15 yrs old.

Geet : sanaya u know after seeing vivah movie I was like dreaming about my marriage. Do u also think about urs

Sanaya : haan yaar the movie is also my fav n I  had thought about some moments of my life my marriage

Acha lets do one thing we will make one story for ours u tell me urs n iwill tell u mine okk

Geet : haa yr that's a grt  idea

U know that I want a life partner who will luv me the most n will always remain loyal to me. U know I just want these things from him nothing more than that

Sanaya : ha yr I know u how u r

U will gv everything for luv

May god give u what ever u want from ur life. 

Posted: 5 years ago
Congrats on your first story! 

nice intro! 
Edited by khwaishfan - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Please post character sketch! 
Posted: 5 years ago
Part 1

nice update! well written! 

loved Geet and Sanaya's bond! 

update soon! 

hope you will not leave this incomplete! 
Posted: 5 years ago
Congratulations on your story 

The concept is interesting 

The introduction is Captivating 
Posted: 5 years ago
Part 1 

Geet and her friend Sanaya are 15 years old and both 
are talking about what they expect from their marriage 

will be waiting for part 2 
and please do PM me as I'm not active 
to visit threads just respond to PM's now 
Posted: 5 years ago

Part 2

Geet : sanaya u know what today I will tell u my story which I want sorry wish to happen in my life

Sanaya: finally u hv decided to tell me. Now pls don't delay more I just cant wait

Geet : ha ha bta rhi hun na

Sun

He will come to see me as u know I will be doing arrange marriage only from their our story will start. N then our rishta will be fixed  n u know their he will be dying to hv my no n talk to me due to the presence of all we will not be able to talk n he will just hold my hand without anyones knowledge.

Sanaya : hayeee so cute na

Geet : do u want to listen to me or not

Sanaya : acha acha baba tub o lab kuch nhi bolungi pakka tu bol na

Geet :  acha thik hai sun

Pta hai phir kya hota hai

Roke main wo mera no leta nhi hai pr uski behn leleti hai. Phir pta hai ghar jane ke baad wo mujhse baaat krna chatha hai n he literaly goes n beg for the no to her sis n after a lot of buteering n teasing she gives him my no but wo ek shart pr ki pehle wo mujhse baat kregi

Pr us din late hone ke karan wo call nhi krte pr agle din subah call krte hai pehle uski behn hi baat krti hai but phir wo phone le kr  bahar aa jata hai to talk to me n u know me main blank ho jati hu ki kya baat kru. So pehle we just keep quite n then jaise use meri ankhi baatien samajh aa gyi ho wo mujhe pehle frnds ki tarah baat krta hai n then our relationship blosoms from their

N u know what hume pta hi nhi chalta kb dheere dheere hum eek dusre se pyaar ho jata hai

Pta hai we will be on msgs or calls most of the time

The time btwn our marge should be of minimum 4 mnths

As it is the best time na

Pta hai hum do teen baar milte bhi hain ek dusre se pr chup chup ke n that was the best part u know

Pta hai shadi se pehle karva chauth ka vart aa jata hai n u know wo mujhse zyada pareshaan tha mere vart ko lekr

Pta hi nhi chala kab shadi ka time aa gaya we got married aur pta hai meri vidai main sabki aankon main aansoo aa gye n u know usne mujhe car main hug bhi kiya n u know iske liye di ne (are uski behn ne ) mujhe kitna tease kiya

Phir pta hai it was time for gameof finding ring in which usne mujhe jitane ke liye khud haar gya n u know phir ayi humari suhagraat ki n wha pr ...

Sanaya : are bol na kya hua

Geet : nhi main nhi bta rhi

Sanaya : tub ta rhi hai ki nhi

Geet : phir kabhi abhi mummy bula rhi hai late ho gya hai byeee

Saying this geet ran to her house n just keep dreaming ...

 

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