Akshan ff ek anokha rishta Chapter 16 Pg 22 - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: nish_vir

Aj acting as a cute kid is freakin adorable *squeal*

Does Guddan know that Aj crack ho gya?
Is aj's family aware of Guddan?
Kaushalya doesn't look like a chudail in ur story?
So Aj rejected Guddu's love!!!
So many queries!!!
Update soon ;)


Thank you for commenting will update soon
you will come to know about kaushalya chudail giri from the story
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Posted: 5 years ago
#22
Chapter - 2
Next day gupta house Kaushalya arranging everything as the boy and his family will be arriving soon bhusan and ronak are just silent Spectors they are feeling bad as they can't do anything for guddan then kaushalya sent ronak to check on guddan ronak went to guddan's room and saw her seating sadly is wearing her ear rings ronak then stood beside her guddan just hugged him and start to cry

R- di bas chup ho jao aise rone se kuch nahi hoga

G- ronu aab tu hi bata hum kya karein asie sajna Sabrina bas hum sirf ek hi insaan ke liye karna chah ate the unke alawa hum kisi aur ke bare mein nahi soch sakte

R- par di unhone aapko mana kar diya tha to kyun unki wait kar rahi ho o nahi ayenge di please life main move on karo

G - nahi yeh humse na ho payega please ronu

R- ok di aap jo bhi karo mein apke sath hu

Ronak assured guddan that everything will be fine then went outside guddan get ready she is looking very beautiful after some times the boy and his family arrived kaushalya bhushan welcome them kaushalya then bring guddan the boy abhi like guddan at first sight he want to talk to guddan alone so kaushalya ask guddan to take abhi to her room guddan is not at all interested in all this abhi thought she is feeling uncomfortable so he start the conversation

Ab- guddan ji sharma ne ki koi baat nahi aap mujhe freely baat kar sakti hai

And guddan just waiting for the opportunity start her drama

G- thank God abhi ji aap aise bilkul nahi ho to mujhe ye sharmaba nahi padega

Abhi who is little shock by her sudden behavior said yes she can talk

G- aap kitne open minded ho to shadi ke baad hum aaram se daru pe pange

Abhi just choke at her word but some how manage him self and said

A- aap drinks karte ho

G- ha para aap to open minded ho na to apko kaisi takleef aur aap to humare raju ko bhi hare saath rakhne doge

Ab- raju kon apka cat ya dog

G- nahi o to humara boyfriend hai humari shadi ho gayi to bichara devdas ban jayega to shadi ke baad o humare saath rahega bilkul hum sath sath hai movie ki tarha

Abhi just smile can't say anything when they come inside to talk to others guddan say she like him bit abhi just imagine hum sath sath hai of guddan and raju he immediately said that he doesn't want to marry so soon and left with his family now kaushalya is super angry she went to her slap guddan very hard

K- phir se isse bhaga diya kitna acha rishta mila tha tu na bojh hai bojha humari life ka pehele to apni sagi ma ko kha chuki ho aab kya hume chain se nahi rehene de sakti
Guddan run to her room crying very badly

G- lord krishna aap humse kya chahate ho pehele hum se humari ma chin li phir humara pyar kuch to karo lord humse aaur bardasht nahi hota

On the other side in jindal house durga just come from out side she is very tensed she was coming from lawyer as she want the whole property in her name but the thing she come to know from lawyer shocked her laxmi come their

L- jiji kya hua aap gaye the na lawyer ke paas kya hua

D- bahot kuch hua hai laxmi antra ma badi chalak nikili marne se pehele ussne aise cheez ki hai hum property kya uska itna sa bhi hissa nahi le payenge

Then durga start to think about the lawyer' word

So here is the chapter please comment how is it
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Posted: 5 years ago
#23
Amazing update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#24
Looks like the property thing might be a reason why Akshan might get married, m just guessing.
I hope Guddan meets AJ soon cause AJ really needs her
Aur AJ ko thik sirf Guddan Ka Pyaar Kar Sakti Hai
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Posted: 5 years ago
#25
Chapter - 3
Durga recalled lawyers word about the property which she want to transfer in her name

Flash back

Durga went to jindal's family lawyer she want the property at any cost she went inside the lawyer's cabin

D- sharma ji namaste

la- are durga ji namaste aaiye bethi ye yhana kaise aana hua

After setting down D- aap to jante hai na Aj ki halat o sayad hi kabhi thik ho paye to main chati thi ki property kishor ya vardaan ke nam kar de ya phir dono ko adhi adhi property mil jaye to

La- dekhiye mujhe pata hai Aj ji ki halat para property kissi aur ke naam nahi ho sakti

D- par kyun Aj Ki sign se to ho sakta hai na

La - ji nahi asia nahi ho sakta sari property pehle antra ji ke naam thi apko pata hai o chat thi ki Aj dusri shadi kar le unke marne ke baad

D- ha janti hu para Aj ne inkar kardiya tha par iska usse kya lena dena

La- kyun ki marne se pehle antar ji ne sari property Aj ji ki hone wali second wife ke naam kar di taki Aj unki baat man jaye aur dusri shadi karle to Aj ki sign se kuch nahi hoga
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Laxmi got shocked hearing it from durga she start scratch back of her neck

l- ye antra ma bhi na khuda to swarg sidhar gayi hume narka mein daal gayi property ka sapna chodo durga di puti kaudi bhi nahi milne wala

D- nahi mein durga jindal hu mere hote yeh property kissi aur ki nahi ho sakti uske liye mujhe apni sasur ki shadi hi kyu na kari pade

Durga smile evilly and Laxmi just staring at her as she don't know what is going inside durga's mind

At evening saru come home from office and went to check on Akshat she enter inside his room and saw him setting on the bed talking to his teddy she don't know who give that teddy to Akshat but he is very protective towards the teddy don't let anyone to touch it

Sa- papa dekho main aagayi aap kya kar rahe ho.

A- saru tum aa gayi main na abhi chotu se baat kara raha tha ye na badmash ho gaya hai meri baat hi nahi man raha

Sa- acha koi nahi hum milke usse datenge ye bataiye aap ne khana khaya medicine li aur kisiko tang to nahi kiya

A- ha ma ne mujhe khila diya aaur uss durga dayan ne bhi oo yuk wala medicine di hai

Sa- ok aap khelo mein fresh hone ja rahi hoon
Saru then went to her room she thought although durga don't care for Akshat but still never miss to give him medicine this is the plus point about durga

On the other hand guddan went to a park in order to have some fresh air she went near a tree sat down their start to reminces about her life her mother died when she is 7 years old bhushan in order to take care of her remarried to kaushalya she first pretend to love her but soon start to torture guddan in absence of bhusan she even try to stop guddan to go to school but due to bhusan can't do anything then ronak born when he start to understand everything he always support guddan guddan is only intelligent in studies but can't do other work properly and always messed things up she passed her 10th board kaushalya in order to stop her further study try to burn her certificate but bhusan stop her and sent guddan to Delhi for her further study her life changed in Delhi and from clumsy guddan she became perfect but then again destiny play with her and take her love from her guddan come out of her trance look towards the sky

G- partner apne meri zindagi mein pyar likha hai ki nahi jise bhi pyar kiya usse mujhse chin liya kyun main kiska kya bigada hai jo mujhe ye saja de rahe ho kab tak meri pariksha loge please unse mujhe mila do

On the other hand in jindal bhawan durga was thinking and planing to get Aj married to a girl who will be the puppet of her hand and will give all the property to her

Akshat unware of the happenings sleeping peacefully and destiny again start to play his game but this time to give solace to the two lost souls
Ye ishq nahi aasaan
Ek aag ka dariya hai
Tujhe milke hi jaana hai
Jeene ka tu jariya hai
That's it friend please comment and like
Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#26
Awesome 👏
Loved how u included the new song lyrics too in the end of this os😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
#27
Beautiful update dear
Loved it alot
Really feeling bad for akshan
Durga is such a devil
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#28
Superb update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#29
I hope AJ and Guddan meets each other soon
They desperately need each other right now.
Yeh Durga toh sach main ek dayaan hai
Nice update 👍🏼
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Posted: 5 years ago
#30
Chapter - 4
Next day at jindal house everyone setting on dining table having their breakfast saru join them after giving food and medicine to akshat laxmi then signal durga to talk to all regarding akshat durga just noded her head

D- mujhe aap sabse kuch baat karni hai

Everyone look at durga wondering what she want to talk

S- ha durga bahu bolo kya baat karni hai

D- dadi main Aj ke baare mein baat karna chati thi

K- durga tum phirse papa ko mental asylum mein to bhejne ki baat nahi kara rahi ho tumhe kitni baar

D- nahi kishor mujhe pata hai apne dadi ne pehele hi uss chiz ke liye mana kardiya hai mein kehe rahi thi ki aab mein aaur laxmi ghar ke kaam mein busy rehete hai to Aj ka khayal sirf dadi ya saru rakhti hai par dadi ki umar ho gayi hai aur saru ko bhi office jana padta hai to Aj ke sath har waqt to koi reh nahi pata

S- to tum kya chati ho ke Hum lalla ke liye kisiko laye jo uski har waqt dekhbhal kare

D- ha dadi par koi care taker nahi balki Aj ki dusri shadi kara ke

Sa - durga di aap ye kya keh rahi hai

D- main thik keh rahi hu dadi aap janti hai ye antra ma ki akhri wish thi

S- tu keh to sahi rahi hai magar aise ladki kanha milegi jo lalla ka khayal rakhegi

D- oo sab aap mujh pe chod dijiye mein aur laxmi aise ladki le ayenge

Everyone get convinced with durga and dadi told her to find the girl asap as she can't see akshat like this anymore everyone then went to their respective work after every one left durga smile evilly

D pov - aab bas mujhe mere isharon mein chalne wali ladki chahiye phir dekhti hoon aur dadi sorry par aap apne lalla ko pehle jaisa kabhi nahi dekh payenge

She then call laxmi both went out to find a girl for akshat at afternoon dadi went to Akshat room to give him his medicine akshat was playing with the teddy dadi gave him medicine akshat take the medicine on a yck face

A- ma mujhe ye yuck yuck medicine aur nahi kahana mein bilkul thik hoon

S- ha mera lalla tu thik hai magar pura thik hone ke liye ye jarrori hai chal aab so ha bahot khel liya tere chotu ko de mein rakh deti hoon

A- nahi chotu bhi mere sath rahega o akele dar jayega na

S- acha baba thik hai par ye chotu ko tu kabhi kisiko kyun haat laga ne nahi deta ha

A- kyun ki ma isse na mujhe meri pari ne diya hai o mujhe itna pyaar karti hai

,Dadi got confused as about whom he is talking about but don't say anything she made akshat sleep and went from their on the other hand durga laxmi start the bride hunting where as kaushalya also started groom hunting it has been two days both sides of devil's continue with their hunt

Kaushalya was going to shopping after some shopping she got tired want to have some tea or snacks so she went to the near by restaurant and it is jindal's restaurant kaushalya went inside then she seat on a chair waiter come their take her order just next to her chair durga laxmi was seating many Waiters come to them one after another kaushalya saw all this wonder who they are receiving such treatment just then the waiter come their with her ordere

K- suno o log kon hai raja maharaj ki tarah kharidari ki jarahi hai

W-are madam oo iis restaurant ke malik hai apne aksh jindal ka naam suna hoga unke bhau hai

Waiter went from their kaushalya start to have her tea and snack she saw durga laxmi discussing something important out of curiosity she went and seat just behind them to hear their conversation

L- durga di kutton ki tarah gali gali guhm rahe hain mein iss dhoop mein kali pad gayi par ladki khani nahi mili

D- nahi laxmi hume haar nahi mani mujhe kiss bhi halat mein ek ladki chahiye Aj ke sath shadi ke liye

L- apne dekha tha na jaha bhi gaye hain hum log jab kaha ki humare sasur ke liye ladki chahiye sab kaise hume dhake maar kar bhaga diya

D- aab aise kuch nahi hoga chaiye to main paise de kara ladki hi kyun na karod paaon

Kaushalya's eye lit up hearing their talk money start to revolving around her

K pov- hai yeh mauka hai paise kamane ka par ye apne sasur ke liye ladki dhoondh rahi hai koi nahi guddan konsi meri sagi hai chahe buddha ho ya jawan paise ke aage sab ek saman hota hai

Then with a evil smirk kaushalya went to durga laxmi to fulfill his desire of earning money to do the deal of guddan's life

She sat infront of them laxmi saru confused seeing her

D- koun hai aap yaha kyun baith gayi

K- main apki problem ka solution

L- kya matlab hai apka

K- matlab ke main ne suna ki aap ko ek ladki chahiye shadi ke liye meri ek beti hai to aap chahe to

D- to aap humari baate sun rahi thi hume apni sasur ji ke liye ladki chahiye to kya aap apni beti ko

K- koi baat nahi chahe jis ke liye ho meri beti shadi karegi to mujhe khusi hogi

D- ek buddhe ke sath apni beti ki shadi karake aap khus hongi lagta hai kuch aur hi matlab hai apka

K- sahi socha oo meri sagi beti nahi hai aapko ek ladki chahiye mein de rahi hoon na

D- accha aaur badle mein kya lengi

K - kuch nahi baas kuch paise

D- thik hai par apki beti humari sari batte manini chahiye

K- oo bilkul bholi usse aap kuch bhi karwa sakte hai bas mera paise

D- aapko mil jaega hum kal apki ghar ayenge apki beti se milane

K- thik hai

They shook their hands to the cunning deal unknown to them they are cupid in the game of destiny

So here is the chapter please comment and like

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Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 5 years ago
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