SamAina FS: Let It Go - Last Part on Page 67 - Page 41

Dreamy

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey Mou
Amazing update
I loved how sameer shared his every dark truth to naina all things which hurt him and his guilts each and everything about sameer is now known to naina and the way naina accepted him and her mistakes was beautiful
Their kiss was so pure ao beautiful it depicted their unconditional true love for each other
You have beautifully potrayed their feelings their love for each other I don't have words to praise your writing
This update was very very very beautiful looking forward for next part.

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Chatterbox1

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Posted: 5 years ago

#402

Wow what a beautiful update..golden belles 😆 This will always remain one the most special update for me ever as you trolled the golden belles..that was the highlight for me 😆

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Sona_G

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Posted: 5 years ago

#403

Lovely long update

The premonition when Naina felt whilst entering the the woods was beautifully wound up with the sun piercing through the trees before they headed back

Sam loves Naina with all his being alright and is a confident young man whom Naina trusts blindly but it hurts when the boy still has his insecurities and fears that she might leave him once he confides his 'dark past'. You can't blame him, it definitely is not the lack of confidence in their love but the lack of love in his life till now, I would blame Vishaka for the state he is in now. Hope with this trip he has got closure with his past and is all set to start anew with his Naina.

I love how Naina accepts his past without any questions and definitely not judging be it his smoking habit or mixing with the wrong group in Delhi or Egg maggi - Chachaji's teaching has always guided her.

On a separate chain, the daal girah diya and sukhoon doondne ke liye bits reminded me of your 'Only for him', a story I can never get over 😊

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Vandie

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Posted: 5 years ago

#404

Hii

Wonderful update

This is my first comment on ur fiction..

It is simply awesome

The love, care n affection with which Naina is helping Sameer to let his painful past go is just amazing..

U are wonderful writer

Waiting for next one eagerly

Regards

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Pooja1973

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Posted: 5 years ago

#405

Hi Mou..an awesome update as usual. The title aptly describes of him letting go his painful memories n of Naina's inhibitions...loved how u have weaved the story...if I'm not wrong it's a four shot..so no more updates 😭😭on this..though I would love more on this...I'm greedy..

Each n every moment and scene created by u seems surreal...love every bit of it...keep writing n giving us wonderful works.😊Thanks for pm

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Rph09

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Posted: 5 years ago

#406

Mere ankhon mein khusi ke ansu hai 😭 What a beautiful update. I wish cvs would show us something like this! 1% bhi dikha de na woh bhi chalega. U so amazingly described the nature as if I was watching all of it. And the hugs & kisses! Wow! Dil ko sukoon mil gaya. Thank u for the pm.

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Fatistic

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Posted: 5 years ago

#407

I'm badly awestruck by the story!

How Sameer opened up about everything with the only fear that has been constant in his life; a beloved one leaving him.
And how Naina assured him about her love for him!!!

As always!! ITS MAGICAL!!!

YUDKBH Magic. ;)

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vandana

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Posted: 5 years ago

#408

Mou...

I have no words to express how beautiful this update was...

That whole confession of Sam's childhood... The pain attached to it ... You portrayed it beautifully with your words...

Will review in detail later...but for now...just take a bow for weaving such a magical sequence with your words

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Satpriya

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Posted: 5 years ago

#409

What a beautiful story

You have just connected all The missing piece in the current show.

Tumne original writer see bhi accha likha hai.

Ye story Dil ko sukun details hai.

Please tum likhna kabhi mat chodna.

Aisa lagta hai ye is story ka last part tha, agar agla part likho toh pls share karna

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Sue123

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Posted: 5 years ago

#410

Hey Mou...

U just made my day.. I just finished reading this part for the nth time..

The update was so so beautiful... The way u have described the nature makes me feel as if am right there in Nainital. Such intricate details have been taken care of so beautifully.

What I liked most about the part was how sameer put forth his entire past in front of Naina (though he feared losing her) and how Naina just put rest to his fears and held him high whilst he let go his past. It indeed made me feel so ecstatic. It made me relive some of my personal moments... a big thank u for it.

U have not only portrayed how Sameer is breaking thru his past but also how Naina is letting go her inhibitions abt intimacy. How she let go her concerns abt what is right ot wrong and the way she embraced it and kissed him with all her love was so soothing.

They both are growing together for and accepting each other in every way possible. Just loving it...

Looking fwd for more more and more..

P.S. Though it was such a lengthy update the content was so good that it made me crave for more.

Lots of love🤗

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