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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: shelly_nair

Waiting for your update. Plz pm me.


Thanks Shelly... will update today. 😳
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: RainStars

Part 1 is aptly named as Anticipation!

Mount Abu track is my favourite track of the show. It would have been great if the CVs had incorporated a college trip too in the show. Thus, it is no surprise that I totally loved the premise of this story. This is my first Samaina fanfiction and I am really excited to read how it unravels.😊

I loved how you showed that Naina has truly gotten over of all the bad memories of the bet and treasures all the good memories of Mt. Abu. Sameer's realisation that finally there is someone in his life, who loves him unconditionally; for whom just having his presence beside her is a memory to cherish. I practically swooned when Sameer confessed that for him, it was always her; even if he did not realise it at Mt. Abu☺️. I so wished this particular scene unfolds in the show too.

The photo session was an absolute delight. Loved how Sameer practically ordered the gang to wait while Samaina got their photo clicked. Just when I thought it could not get any better, Sameer demands Naina to be beside him in the group pic too. Oh God, will I ever get a guy like Sameer here?

The story has started with their first photo as a couple and I cannot wait to read how many firsts it is going to encompass.😛

PS: Would read the next part soon and comment.


Thank you so much for the wonderful comment dear... 😳 It was such a pleasure to read it.

Hahaa... don't we all want a guy like Sameer... 😉 I hope you find yours... 😳

Will look forward to your other comments... and I will update this one soon. 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja1973

When r u updating ...waiting


Today... 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidhimehra

Waitung for some romance which only mou can gv us...desperately wtg for all ur stories and for nxt part too

Pls updt.


Hi Vidhi... updating this one today... 😳
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: shana123

You sure create magic with gour words leaving us spellbound to your stories. And the best part of your stories is that its what the viewers want to see but will never get on ITV. looking for more updates on all your stories. New story doesnt mean we forget your old ones. still waiting on those.


Thank you so much dear... 😃

I will update this one soon... thanks a lot for loving my stories so much.
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: VandyP

Phew... Finally

Mou...u should first take a bow for creating such a masterpiece yet again...and I don't know what ur "T" in "TS" means...for me it means atleast "TEN" shots...and I'm not settling for anything less

U know mou...the way u have laid out this story...it looks like a prequel to forever...and a sequel to eternity...ur detailing...and ur writing...it's just getting awesome with each passing day ...⭐️

I will post my comment for the first part in this post...

The packing...yes...that's exactly how girls pack for a trip away from family...😆...there are so many hidden treasures and the fear of getting caught...and then... Not relaxing till the point u are actually out of bounds😆

But...having been to nainital in winter's...I exactly know that those skirts are going to cause so many problems...esp in that windy and chilly weather🤣

I liked how u incorporated chachajis trust in Sameer thru that one line...👍🏼


Aah... Naina choosing clothes for sam😳...donno y... But visualising it looked cute...we need to see this in the show...😳

U know...Naina hiding the cordless under the pillow brings back so many memories😆...and I keep wondering y she doesn't reduce the ringer volume level so that it doesn't ring loudly...coz that's exactly wat I used to do😆

Mou...samaina phone convos have always been the highlight of the show... And I totally love it wenever u describe one in ur updates...each nuance...the body language...their smiles...ur descriptions are so apt...that it's such a treat to re read them 😳


And...I simply love the always trying till u succeed Wala majnu Maheshwari😆...the way he tried for that kiss in the phone ...I'm do looking forward to him keep going ahead with his mission in nainital too😉

So Sam has started noticing how Naina sees him differently...and the growing physical awareness

Mou👏
Trust u to close each and every open loop from the show👏...

That letter kiss...I still remember how we had kept on hoping that the CVS will bring it up... But they never did...

And see... How beautifully u closed that loop...Sam was definitely going to tease Naina Abt it...and she was going to act innocent 😆... Chalo u gave a new loop to be closed to everyone🤣... Just like we had a flood of aag barasti Hai and aloo paratha...we will now get a tsunami of the letter kiss 🤣

But coming back to that letter kiss...I loved how Sam knows Naina in and out...that's the beauty of growing up together in love...U start knowing ur body together...it's demands together...and that's exactly wats happening with samaina...they are well aware of the growing needs😳


Naina waking up Sam...another realistic touch...⭐️

And chachaji giving extra money...it reminded me of my papa...he used to do the same...😳... Mom used to be strict with pocket money...he always gave us more without her knowledge😳


Man...that description of Sam walking towards Naina ☺️... That walk in the show always did something to my heart...reading the description also did something to my heart ...and that arrogant smirk...gosh...that's simply Randeep☺️


I love how u have kept the core essence of Sam intact in all ur works...he keeps falling in love with the simplicity of Naina and never fails to compliment her


The pic thing... It just shows the growth of their relationship...⭐️
Last time...he did not have the right to stop anyone from coming in between them... But this time he not only stopped everyone...but also held on her elbow too..⭐️

Have I ever told u ...protective Sameer is my favorite?

Sam adjusting luggage like a pro...against hats off to ur detailing👏... He has the most experience as a Traveller...that too ...by trains 😆

And yes...definitely... Neither Sam not Naina would mind sitting so close to each other 😉


I loved the contrasts u drew with regards to the thoughts of Sameer and Naina... While one was looking forward to get a glimpse of the past of the love of her life...the other was dreading the demons and nightmares associated with that place...and it's going to be interesting to see how to deal with these two contrasting thoughts ...



Vandy... I have read your comment several times... and just now read it again...

I have told you several times, but will say it again... you just make all the efforts of writing so totally worth it with your comment... I love reading your take on the sequences I write, and also how you relate it to your own life sometimes.

Sam's walk in that Mt. Abu episode increased a lot of heartbeats... and I still love to watch it so much... I am glad I could create the same impact with my words... 😃

Hahaa... The loops have to be closed sometimes... I always get a feeling that something was left incomplete whenever I see this open loops in the show... that is why I keep looking for ways to close them in my stories...

About protective Sameer... Haha... Yes! You have told me several times, and I know I will hear it several times more... 😆😆

Hopefully you will like the next part too...

Love,
Mou

P.S. Waise title now says "FS" - so what does that mean to you?? 😛
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: VandyP

The journey

U started with the contrasting thoughts...and the way u described Sam's childhood...I'm dying to read wat u have in store for us...because the CVS have conveniently forgotten about it

I liked the farq hai line⭐️...
many times in the past wenever Sameer had made that journey to that place...it had always taken him away from the people he loved... It had always given him bad memories...

But this time ... He was traveling to the same place with his life...looking forward to make so many happy memories...that maybe they would help him erase those bad ones forever...

And I think I now know y u titled this series as Let It Go...😲

Mou... U are brilliant...no ...u are super brilliant⭐️...you are not just giving us the much awaited dream college trip...but also giving us a peek into Sameer's past...I'm so so happy ...and today again I will repeat...
Jo show mein nahi milega...wo mou ki writings mein milega⭐️

I kind of liked the way u are getting back the memories of the Mt Abu trip too...coz that's where it had all started for Sam... And it's imp that he gets a proper closure...and only Naina's reassurances that she treasures every bit of that trip...and he has been able to erase all the sad memories from the past through his love⭐️


Mou... The places which Sam described...each one signifies his urge to fight that lonelliness...to get lost in the crowd...and I'm sure the mountains were never mentioned coz they reminded him of his loneliness ...and somewhere in those mountains...the poet Sameer Maheshwari was born

And boys being boys... They will never carry food with them...and girls being girls will always carry extra 😆


The whole card sequence...another fabulous touch⭐️

And did Naina just ruffle his hair ?😲..
And The Sameer Maheshwari kept pondering over that touch instead of getting irritated ????😲

Hmm... So the nainital gf talks is going to make a re entry ?? ...interesting...and I'm looking forward to read ...

Hi5 to Sam from me... Even I love eating a lot in train 😆


Mou... I liked how u kept mentioning either jbr or principal mam at regular intervals...that's how college professors are... U are allowed to manage on ur own...but...they are there to just monitor u

I loved that sleep sequence...and the realisation that this was indeed their third night together

Another thing that I've noticed in all ur stories...is that Sam is a very light sleeper...maybe a disturbed childhood never let him be carefree and that's wat has developed in his sleep pattern...


Here too... He woke up the moment naina woke up...And knowing how protective Sam is... There was no way he was allowing her to go alone to the washroom...

Aah... That accidental touch

I donno y ...but I feel accidental touches cause a more lingering effect than deliberate ones I'm loving how naina is looking forward to the idea of hugging Sam...and is also enjoying these touches...😳

Damn... I was literally jumping with joy...wen she initiated the convo...giving Sam the perfect opportunity to guage her reactions...Coz he was definitely not venturing towards intimacy unless he was very sure that Naina was comfortable with it...and her leaning on his shoulder...it just gave him the green signal he had been waiting for!


I simply loved how he held onto the cue...and proceeded further...each step at a time ...and that whole hug sequence...on that seat ... No matter how uncomfortable it was...It was giving Sam the greatest comfort and the biggest happiness of his life...😳

Is there a bigger joy than waking up and seeing the face of the love of ur life first thing in the morning?

Loved how jugaadu Sam came into action...and got the seats exchanged😆o
And mou...that teeth brushing and doodh wale ki beti reference 🤣.it reminde d me of their first mandir date...and how Sam had blushed profusely wen oandit had mentioned he should definitely brush and go for the date implying a kiss 🤣

You know mou...the most beautiful journey of a couple is the time wen they both start understanding the unspoken words and desires about each other...there's this urge to do the things u desire...and then...u know...there's still time for it...
And I'm loving how your are portraying this beautifulll journey of samaina in a beautiful place like nainital...a place where Sam has grown up from a child to a young lad...and now the place will also witness his growth as a man
Hmm...so Naina wants to feel the feel of his arms...😳...I'm sure Samm is going to understand it soon...and then as Naina herself said...there's nothing that's going to stop him after that😳a


If the hug was a surprise...bringing in Rohan was a bigger surprise😆...I simply loved how Rohan was introduced...and how he immediately recognized Naina by just the way Sam spoke and looked at her 😳


I loved how u initiated the "Let It Go" process in Delhi itself...Sam got his biggest surprise...his mother and his family...wen he was not expecting it the least 😳 and it was not just his brother coming to meet him...but his mother's efforts to cook his favorite food and send it to him along with a letter...each gesture screaming...that she cared...his brother cared...and maybe his little sister too...and that's wat mattered the most...His family was there for him...😳

Loved the banter between Preeti and Rohan...Sam definitely has a tough job ahead😆

The ease with which Naina and Rohan gelled...I hope the CVS take some cue and give us something in the show too😳

And u described Naina testing her head on Sam's broad shoulders...and we got an exact scene in the show ...

Im liking how u are bringing back those memories of Sam...right from his tears in fear and loneliness ...to his being a rebel and his actions ...be it his first venture into smoking ...or his other rebellious adventures...it's all coming back to him...


So finally he secures a room next to naina😆... I'm all charged up to read up the roller coaster ride that u have planned for us in this series...

Do update fast mou...can't wait anymore 😆



Again... I loved your comment... and have missed it so much... though I know you know that already... 😳


Haha... yes, the doodhwale ki beti was a reference to that episode and also from the one where he "accidentally" promises her that he would meet her in morning to wish her luck for debate competition...

I don't think Sam would ever get irritated if Naina touches his hair... in fact he would cherish in that feeling of being loved... sigh... I want this in show...

Sorry for the short reply dear... but I am aiming to update this story today... 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Yudkbh

Wow i mean this is pure magic.

I love the way how you describe sam bitter memories bcoz cvs to jaise iske bare me bhool hi gaye hai, i always feel ke sam ke life incidents ko bhut halke me dikhaya hai pure show me so thank you u very much jo aapne is point ko dikhane ki koshish ki. Hm sb jaan payenge ki sam kaisa feel karta tha and ab bi uske man me kon se dar kon kon se insecurities hai.and i hope hmari loving naina sam ke un sare biiter memories ko khatam kar ke nainital ko bi ek yaadgar jagah bana degi,
About the writting kya kahu yr u r awesome aap is baat se andaza laga lo ki mjhe aisa lag rha tha padhte time ki me travel kar rha hoo
Pls udate soon 👏


Thank you so much dear... 😳

I am glad you loved this story so much... yes, Sam's childhood and the story associated with it was never shown in the show... I thought a trip to the place where he had literally grown up would be better to share some of my perspectives.. 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: SanayaK

This is one story that we all are waiting to see on the show...but alas.

no one other than you would have done justice to this story.
please update soon dear.


Thank you so much Sanaya... 😳
I will update today...
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: VandyP

Mou...

We need an update 🤔
Please😳


Yes yes... Updating today... madam... 😉
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