Guys,trying to write something new for the first time.so please bear with me and let me know if i can proceed with it.
the story is about two individuals with huge age gap and different pov /diff ways and how they try to solve thr problems and fall in love with each other.
characterization remains the same except Rahul and Ronak
Rahul:will be introduced as guddan's best friend wo bi shadi se pehle se hi wo bi kaise bana best friend wo aaage pata chalega.
Ronak:very handsome and guddan's childhood best frd and pretty rich wo rich kaise bana wo bi baad mai pata chalega.
Episode 1
Court scene-
Judge: saare gawa and saboot ko dekte huye adalat ye failsa sunati hai ki Akshat jindal pe unki biwi antara jindal ki hatya ke aarop mai bekasoor maante huye unhe baa izaat rihaa karti hai...
Dadi-Dekha maine kaha na meri guddan lalla ko bacha legi..muje pata ta guddan ek din sab ko galat saabit karke dikayegi..guddan kabi kisi ka bura hone nahi desakti..teen bahus sar jhukate hai ye sunke..dadi goes and hugs lalla and then hugs guddan and kisses her on her forehead and thanks her.
Guddan says dadi ye tho mera farz tha aur aapko diya hua waada kaise thod sakti..aapko vada kiya ta na aapke bete ko sahi salamat aapke paas lekar aaungi..lijiye guddan ne aaj apna vada pura karliya.
JIndal Mansion-EVery one are happy celebrating this.
Bhushan and Ronak guddan ke paas aake bolte hai ab tumne jo wada kiya humse use nibhane ka wakt aagaya hai
Guddan says haan papa ab wakt aagaya hai kuch failsla lene ka and looks at jindal family and aj and goes upstairs
Rahul goes to guddan and says tum kya khush ho is failse se ?dekho agar tume ye nahi karna chahti tho mai bhushan uncle and ronak se baat karunga..
GUddan:Nahi Rahul isi pal ke liye tho maine itne din intezar kiya..mai khush hu bus fikar is baat ki dadi kaise react karegi.
Ronak:Dont worry dadi ko hum sab samjayenge .wo sab hum deklenge tum jadli change karke aajao.
Aj looks at ronak and rahul and bhushan thinks kuch tho hai aisa kyu lagra kuch bura hone wala hai..aakir kya baat kar rahe hai ye sab guddan se aur guddan court ke baaad itna wiered kyu behave kar rahi hai??muje guddan se baat karna hoga and he was about to go ronak stops him sayin guddan has gone to change her dress..
Guddan:apne room jake dress change karke kuch papers ke saat neeche aati hai..aj dadi sab guddan ko jeans t shirt mai dek ke shock hojate ..guddan neeche aake aj ke haat mai papers deti hai aur bolti hai Mr akshat Jindal aj hum aapko is rishte se aur shadi naam ke is bhoz se aazad karte hai humesha ke liye.
Aj:papers dek ke shock hoke rehjata hai aur guddan ki aur shock hoke dekne lagta hai.puch ta hai ye kaisa mazak hai guddan
Dadi:lalla kya hai isme ..
AJ: guddan muje divorce dena chahti hai maa.
Guddan :bina alimony ke Mr akshat Jindal bina alimony ke ek sikke bi nahi chahiye hume aapse.
Durga:kya matlab ye koi mazak hai kya..abi abi tho sab teek hua tho ab aap kyu aisa mazak kar rahe hai...hua kya hai aapko?
Guddan:ye sab mazak kyu lagra aap sabko such yahi hai..aap sabko yahi laga na humne inse dhoke se shadi ki aur inke paiso ke liye shadi ki..mai ek laalchi ladki hu isi liye inse dhoke se shadi ki thi na??..tho ab jab hum bina alimony ke is rishte ko thod rahe hai tho aap sab ko mazak lagraha hai??is me koi mazak nahi hai durga ji...aapne humse pucha ta na humne shadi kyu ki uska such tho aapko pata chal gaya haina ki humne chutki ki jaan bachane ke liye inse shadi ki wo bi saru bahu aapke bhai ke kaale kartooton ke waza se...aur agar such kahe tho ye shadi sahdi hi nahi tha.. bus hum dono ke liye ek samjhota ta,na inhone ne kabi is shadi ko is rishte ko maana na humne kabi is shadi ko accept kiya.
phir aj ko dek ke kaha aapne pucha na jab shadi ko mana karke chale gaye the tho vapas kyu aaye..hum isi liye vapas aaye the thaki antara ji ka khoon ka ilzam aapke sar se hat jaaye ,ye proove karne se aap innocent proove hojayenge aur meri family bi safe hogi...jis kaam ke liye hum aaye the aapki bahuon ki saas banke wo kaam pura hua isiliye ab divorce papers pe sign karliya humne. ab aap aur hum aap ke bahu on ke saas nahi hai na hi ab hum duniya walon ke saamne pati patni hai and ab aap har bandan se aazad ho.ab aap ke zindai mai na galtiyon ke liye jaga hoga ,na galtiyon ki dukaan aapki zindagi mai hogi.
AJ:looks hurt and keeps looking at her
Durga:Aj aap aise kyu chup chap dekrahe hai rokiye inhe ..ye hosh mai nahi hai kuch bi bole jarahi hai
Guddan:She turns towards durga and other bahus and tells ab aap is galti ki dukaan se chutkara milgaya.durga ji aap ka jaga abi bi badi bahu hi hai ise koi nahi lesakta..jitna bi wakt aap sab se bitaya acha laga..kuch meeti aur kadwi yaadein ko saat lekar jarahi hu.
Dadi:guddan tum kyu aisa kar rahi ho beta agar kisi ne kuch kaha tho mujse bol mai unko daantungi par tum is ghar ko chod ke mat jaao...
guddan: dadi na ye ghar mera hai na yaha ke log kabi muje kabi apna maana hai dadi sivay aapke.. aap hi chahte haine mai khush rahu aur muje beti bolti haina tho phir aaj beti hone ke haq se kuch maangarhi hu aapse please muje is baar mat rokiye jaane dijiye.dadi starts crying...guddan promises she il b in touch with her.
AJ looks hurt and keeps looking at her.
Dadi goes to bhushan and tells ye tho bache hai zald bazi mai failsa lele te hai hum bade hi samjhana chahiye aap tho rokiye guddan ko galat kadam utane se..
Bhushan dadi se bolta hai maa ji hum tho apni beti ko usi din lejana chahte te jis din humsab ko parv aur kaushalya ke kaale kartooth ke bare mai pata chala..maa ji meri beti is ghar mai jab se kadam rakhi hai us din se mai dekraha hu na use is ghar ki bahu hone ka izzat mila na insaan hone ka sammaan ..har baat pe agar kuch mila tho sirf aur sirf beizzati mila..har baat pe tumse naa hopayega bolek discourage kiya gaya..meri beti pal pal tut rahi thi maaji..bhale hi itne log hai is ghar mai..phir bi maine apni beti ko akela mehsoos karte huye dekha..usne mere liye revti ke liye sab kuch sehen kar rahi thi...par ek baap ke liye apni beti ki khushi se zyada kuch bi nahi..isi liye usi din maine guddan ko apne saat lejane chala jis din parv ka such saamne aaya..par meri beti ne mana kiya aur vaada kiya jis din aj ji ka naam antara ji ke khoon ke ilzaam se clear hoga us din wo mere paas vapas aayegi..aur ab mai apni beti ko vapas lejana chahta hu..
Dadi :looks at aj and cries and tells lalla kuch karo jis ghar ko phir se ghar banaya us ghar ko tut ne se bachao..rokho guddan ko jaane se..aj keeps looking at guddan
Ronak:dadi hum jaan te hai aap guddan se bohot pyar karti hai..par kya aap tab bi yahi bolegi agar guddan aapki sagi beti aur aj aapka damad hota?? tab bi yahi bolti beti mat jao...dadi aapke beta aaj bi unke pehli patni se pyar karte hai..infact uni ke liye ye dusri shadi ki..uni ke yaadon ke saat jeerahe hai..tho aise mai ek baap aur ek dost kaise guddan ko ek aise rishte mai dhakele jaha pyar hi na ho agar kuch ho tho sirf samjotha?? dadi aap bi jaante hi rishta do logo se jhud ta hai..ye kaise rishta jaha dil ka kya in dono ka kayal tak nahi jhudte??thali do haat se baz thi hai sirf ek haat se nahi..
abi guddan 20 saal ki hai tho kya aap chahte apni puri zindagi bina pyar aur samman ke is rishte mai bandhe rahe??yaa aage bade apni zindagi mai??shadi ke liye sirf do logon ka nahi dono parivar ka nahi do dil ka milna zyada important hai daadi...pyar ke bina koi rishta nahi tik payega..aj aur guddan ka ristha kache dhaage ki tara hai..ab kisi bi pal tut sakta hai..hum isi liye nahi thod na chahte kyu ki is ghar mai uski beizzati ki gayi ..har ghar mai ladayi jadga arguments hota hai.. hum isi liye ye rishta tod na chate kyu ki bina pyar aur samman ke is rishte ka koi matlab nahi... naa apke bete wo pyar aur samman guddan ko de payenge na guddan kabi iski umeed ki.. aur hum nahi chahte humari dost ek aisi rishte mai ho jaha usko hasne ka ,khush hone ka waza tak na mile..meri dost bachpan se bohot problems saha hai..ab aur nahi..mai chahta hu uski shadi ek aisa insaan se ho jo use pyar desakte... jaha use pati ka pyar milsake..jo pati apni patni ki samman ke liye ladsake..na ki insaniyat ke bahane dunde ... dadi roti hai and lalla ki aur dekti hai..aj keeps looking at guddan ..
bhusan :beta rahul room mai se guddan ki luggage leke aajao
guddan :nahi papa guddan khali haat jayegi..kyu ki yaha par jo bi kapde gehne te wo jindal parivar ki bahu aur saas ke the,guddan akshat jindal ka hai..aur ab mai vapas guddan akshat jindal bankar nahi guddan gupta bankar aapke saat ghar aana chahti hu..bhushan smiles at her ..rev hugs her.
durga says i know we made lot of mistkaes and troubled you infact we were ones who tried to hurt u more but plz for god sake dont punish us like this..we apolozise and we need u jindal family needs u please dont leave..we beg you
guddan says aare ye decision aaj ka nahi us din maine liya ta jis din main is ghar mai grahpravesh kiya tha..mai bus yaha kuch din ki guest banke aayi thi..
aur laxmi bahu agar inko aitraaz na ho tho ab aap apni behen se phir shadi karwa sakte hai..wada karti hu aaaj hum guddan gupta apni saaya bi jindal parivar pe padne nahi denge...
ye bolke guddan leaves with her dad and ronak... aj keeps looking at her...
dadi:cries badly and yells at every one saying khush hai aap sab log kaha ta maine pehle din se mat karo bura uske saat nahi koi nahi suna...jo ladki is parivar ke liye itna kiya usko aakir mai sab milke bhaga diya..
aj says she was here only as a guest aapne nahi suna wo is shadi ko accept nahi kiya hai..muje kabi apna pati nahi maana maa..
dadi:kya tumne kabi guddan ko apni patni maana?usko wo izzat diya jo har patni apne pati se umeed karti hai..maana wo bachi hai sabse umar mai choti hai thodi ziddi hai aur hogayi us se kuch galtiya par usko sudharne ke bajay aap sab usko aur hurt kiya na ho payega bolke..beizaat karke ab bhukdo chali gayi wo...
durga says hum jaante humse galtiya huyi hai unko samaj nahi paaye hume laga wo aj se paiso ke liye shadi ki isi liye humne unhe apna ya nahi...
sons:ab kya faida jab unhone ghar chod ke chale gaye..jab wo thi tab kisi ne unka kadar nahi kiya..insult pe insult karte gaye unke lilaf plotting pe plottings karte gaye...ab bhukdo
Rev keeps looking at them arguing with eachother and she yells at them...bus karo ek dusre pe galti thop ne se acha aage aapko kya karna wo sochiye..
Jiju kya aap chahte ki aap dono ka thalaq hojay?? jo bi faisla hai soch samaj kar lijiye..kyu ki aap ka har sawal ka jawab ronak bhai ke sawalon mai chupi hai.. puchiye apne aap se aap kya chahte hai.. aur haa ab rishta aisi mod pe aayi hai aap ko apne ego aur pride ko side mai rakna hi hoga agar aap is rishte ko bachana chahte hai tho??
kyu ki mai apni di ko ache se jaanti wo tho unko bi mauf karti jo unki jaan lena chahte..aap tho unke pati ho aur aap sab unke parivar ho.. didi pichle kuch dino se jo kuch hua un sab mai pareshan hoke faisla li hogi..hum di ko samjhane ke koshish karenge..par aap sochiye aap ko kya karna hai..kyu ki di ko aap paison se khareed nahi sakte..sirf di ko pyar se jeeta ja sakta hai..agar aap unko pyar se jeetna chahte ho tho batayi ye hum aapke madad karenge...
jo bi ho zaldi faisla le lijiye ..kuch kariye iske pehle dher na hojay..aur ye sab mai apni di ki khushi ke liye kar rahi hu..jaanti hu unki khushi yahi isi ghar mai hai bus unho ne realise nahi kiya..and she leaves her home
aj keeps looking at rev and recollecting ronak and bhushan and revti words..
dadi:lalla jaao meri bahu ko vapas lekar aajao
Precap:
guddan:mr akshat jindal samajte kya hai apne aapko ...kisne haq diya muje aisa utake lekar aane ka
bhushan and ronak comes to jindal mansion to take guddan back.
AJ:Mrs guddan akshat jindal thoda shant hojayiye..hume kisne haq diya..tho dekiye ye mangalsutra jo apke gale mai hai wo haq diya muje..biwi ho aap meri..pura haq se lekar asaktu aur koi bi muje nahi roksakta..haq hai mera.pati hu aapka
Guddan: laughs like a mad women and says sorry muje samaj nahi aaya teek se..kya kaha aapne?? pati ??kiske pati??ronak rahul yaha koi aur hai kya jiske ye pati hai??
Raahul:yaar kaha phas gaya guddan ko support karenge to papa muje maar dalenge..papa ko support kiya tho guddan zinda dafna degi..
Ronak:says nahi guddan muje bi yahi doubt hai.
AJ:tumara pati hu guddan ,shadi huyi hai humari.aur has kyu rahi ho??
Guddan:hasu nahi tho aur kya karu...aj sahab aapko humne sirf uncle banne ki izzat di ..pati banne ki nahi...oh agar is ko dek ke aisa bolrahe hai (pointing towards mangalsutra) tho aapki galat faimi hai ..ye mangalsutra nahi balki gale mai patta hai ...yaad aaya ki nahi..aapne hi is patte ko mere gale bhandha tha teek vaise ek jaanwar ke gale mai bandhte hai..yaad hai aapko jab ye patta chori hogayi thi tho dadi ne aapko ek naya patta matlab naya mangalsutra lane ko kahan aur jab dadi ne phir se mere gale mai patta bhand ne ke liye kaha tha tho yaad hai aap ne kya kaha..yaad aaya ki nahi..koi nahi bhool gaye honge hum yaad dilate hai..guddan ek laalchi ladki hai jo humse dhoke se shadi ki aur hum kabi ise apni patni nahi maanenge na hi uske gale mai mangalsutra pehnayenge na is shadi ko maanenge..mai sirf antara se pyar karta hu aur is galtiyon ke dukkan ko mai kabi apni patni nahi maansakta hu..yaad aaya???ytho ab ye patta aapko kabse mangalsutra lagne laga aur kab hum aapki patni lagne lage???? aise mazak mat kiya kare hum apne hasi ko control nahi karpayenge
aur kya hua aap sab logon ko...jo insaan duniya ke liye mere pati hai aaj wo muje apni patni patni bolke chillaraha hai..aur jo bahuye chilla chilla ke kaha hum guddan ko urf galtiyon ki dukkan ko kabi apna saas nahi maanenge..tho aaj vahi bahus and bahuon ke sasur ne hume patni aur saas kehrahe hai.. aaaj sura paschim se kaise nikla??hua kya hai aap logon ko?? ..ronak doctor ko call karo muje lagta hai inke dimag ka screw dheela hogaya hai teek jo karwana hai..kyu ki mahashay aj ko ek dhokebaaz laalchi ladki jisne dhoke se paison ke liye shadi kiya aaj usi ko biwi biwi kehrahe hai..aur unke bahu's ne aaj galtiyon ke dukaan ko apna saas banana chahte hai...
Dialogue-uncle banne ki izzat di pati banne ko nahi-credit goes to Captainplus
