Excellent update . I am loving this ML track so far but I am missing the Behir scenes
Bella is doing a great job teaching Mahir a lessson. But I can't help but feel bad for him sometimes. I still think he deserves the balcony GIF though
Anu is the perfect lesson for him. He has finally figured out his wife knows everything. He definitely took his time!
I think only Bella can help him with his insecurities. I want to read more about this. I think Mahir is afraid of losing Bella. He should be telling Bella about these insecurities, not creating more trouble
I don't feel bad anymore. He deserves another balcony kick
He didn't learn his lesson from last time. He should know never to do this with his wife
I like Yuvi in this story. He isn't being evil and annoying like he usually is .
I want to see more of how Yuvi and Bella were when they were dating. I think Yuvi's return is not helping with Mahir's insecurities and losing Bella
You asked for feedback on your writing. I have one for you inspired by SaRah and Nikkie. Write more SRs
Update SOON. I don't know how I will wait for your next chapter. I really want to know what Mahir does next
P.S. Can we please have Mahir or Bella's birthday in one of the chapters?
Edit: @Varsha you have to review this one too
@Nuomi thank you for always reading my comments. I hope this one is long enough for you Edited by fortitudeoth - 2019-03-15T18:41:45Z