Hum Bane Tum Bane EDKL UPDATED CHAPTER 21: Yuvi and Suhani P65(Page 52)

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Posted: 2019-03-14T07:32:14Z
Finally read 
Awesome beyond awesome wrote 

Ash Clap



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Posted: 2019-03-14T08:51:13Z
Originally posted by The.Wanderer




Thanks Ima. Smile You ca call me Ash chechi. It is such a cute word... Big smile I hope you like rest of my stories as well. Smile
Thanks chechi,And the new update was awesome
Posted: 2019-03-15T16:56:49Z
Nice update dear
Poor him, full house is against him but at least he realised that it was his wife revenge.
Update soon please
Thanks
Posted: 2019-03-15T18:41:28Z
Hi Ash Hug

Excellent update Clap. I am loving this ML track so far but I am missing the Behir scenes Cry

Bella is doing a great job teaching Mahir a lessson. But I can't help but feel bad for him sometimes. I still think he deserves the balcony GIF though

Anu is the perfect lesson for him. He has finally figured out his wife knows everything. He definitely took his time!

I think only Bella can help him with his insecurities. I want to read more about this. I think Mahir is afraid of losing Bella. He should be telling Bella about these insecurities, not creating more trouble Angry

I don't feel bad anymore. He deserves another balcony kick

He didn't learn his lesson from last time. He should know never to do this with his wife D'oh

I like Yuvi in this story. He isn't being evil and annoying like he usually is LOL.

I want to see more of how Yuvi and Bella were when they were dating. I think Yuvi's return is not helping with Mahir's insecurities and losing Bella

You asked for feedback on your writing. I have one for you inspired by SaRah and Nikkie. Write more SRs ROFL

Update SOON. I don't know how I will wait for your next chapter. I really want to know what Mahir does next

P.S. Can we please have Mahir or Bella's birthday in one of the chapters? Embarrassed

Edit:
@Varsha you have to review this one too Tongue

@Nuomi thank you for always reading my comments. I hope this one is long enough for you Big smile Edited by fortitudeoth - 2019-03-15T18:41:45Z
Posted: 2019-03-19T22:55:27Z
Originally posted by humtumsalman


poor mahir
rest awesome

You already feeling bad for Mahir? Shocked Abhi toh saza shuru hui hai!! Wink

Thanks Smile
Posted: 2019-03-19T22:56:02Z
Originally posted by Arshukaurkhushi


Finally read 
Awesome beyond awesome wrote 

Ash Clap





Thanks Arshu.Big smile You are here after a long time. Embarrassed
Posted: 2019-03-19T22:56:19Z
Originally posted by ImaJain


Thanks chechi,And the new update was awesome

Thanks Ima. Smile
Posted: 2019-03-19T22:57:06Z
Originally posted by asifiqbalsh


Nice update dear
Poor him, full house is against him but at least he realised that it was his wife revenge.
Update soon please
Thanks


Thanks Asif! And yes he knows but can't do anything about it. 

I will update today or tomorrow. Big smile

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