Hum Bane Tum Bane EDKL UPDATED CHAPTER 22: BACK TO THE ROUTINE P67(Page 4)

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Posted: 2018-11-27T02:17:53Z
Originally posted by Vrishthi04


Both the part of ur TS was amazing 
Loved the naughty n mischievous bela, seriously want to see something like this in the show too 
Good that here both of them understands each other and are friends first then Lovers  
Can't wait for the next part to get more interesting 

Srry for the late reply 
Want you to cont. this as a FF 
I know I'm being greedy but what can I do when u right so well


I might just continue this as a proper FF after i finish my current one. Even I felt it has the potential.But I can't commit right now. 


But you wanting to read more is huge compliment. Thank you so much. 
Posted: 2018-11-27T02:19:18Z
Originally posted by Viddhi01


Waah bhai waah Ash
Humne dudh kya maanga tune to puri ki puri kheer hi parosh di, kya explosive version hai ye swagrani ka loved loved loved itt..

Aur apne Mahir ji upps Mahir Sir as usual himachal se bhi ucchee vichaar, bestest protagonist of itv..

Clap You deserve an applause here


Thanks Viddhi. It was my pleasure to serve this tasty BeHiryani to all the loving BeHir fans. Big smile
Edited by The.Wanderer - 2018-11-27T02:19:33Z
Posted: 2018-11-27T05:36:29Z
Drunken n seducing bela is a treat u wrote 
Dissection point of view se tagda part aate hi biwi ne machaya maahir ki zindagi me bawal 
U can show bela as a classical dancer and maahir drunk seeing yula too close like vyom n bela stood in yesterday episode 
Abhi to biwi ki pehli rasoi 
Last but not the least dhamakedaar part 2
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Posted: 2018-11-27T08:40:59Z
It was fantastic update
Bela kitni mischievous h aur test bhi le rehi h
Now both love each other but hasn't expressed it yet
Mahirji toh ekdam sharif h yahan bhiWink
Posted: 2018-11-27T09:07:29Z
Originally posted by Arshukaurkhushi


Drunken n seducing bela is a treat u wrote 
Dissection point of view se tagda part aate hi biwi ne machaya maahir ki zindagi me bawal 
U can show bela as a classical dancer and maahir drunk seeing yula too close like vyom n bela stood in yesterday episode 
Abhi to biwi ki pehli rasoi 
Last but not the least dhamakedaar part 2


Thanks Arshu. I will consider these two scenes of I turn it into a FF. Thanks for the suggestion. Big smile
Posted: 2018-11-27T09:29:02Z
Amazing
Posted: 2018-11-27T09:49:56Z
Awesome update

Bela acting drunk

Poor mahir. This man has great self control LOL

Can't wait to read about their morning interaction

Bela will have to explain her behavior to Mahir. It's going to be fun to watch
Posted: 2018-11-27T11:14:29Z
Originally posted by manali9796


Amazing


Thanks Manali!!! Welcome to the forum!!Smile

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