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shanki/shamita ff personal love letter part 3 last part p12th December

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part 1:-

at darjeeling station,
a BMW car enters in there.
its a quite silent place. a man around 35 come out of car and went to counter.
man:excuse me,yeh shimla wale train kab aaye gye.
counter:3 hours late hoga.
man:kya 3 hours late hoga,okey..
the man go and sit on a bench.
a coli is sitting there.
coli:kisi lene aaye hai aap ji.
man:aapne patni ko.

at train,
a women is seen enjoying the view of mountain. she asked the tc.
women:bhai shahab aur kitna waqt lage gya.
man:3 ghanta aur.
women:thik hai..
at station,

coli:aapko newspaper mein dekha hai sayad.
man:haan,dekha hoga sayd india ke top lawyers ,justice shantanu majumdar..
coli:haan..aapka yahan kya kaam.
shantanu:tea garden buy kiya hai yahan toh isse ke kaam se aaya hai yahan.

waise aapka koi kaam hai kya ab.
coli:na ji .
shantanu:toh baat kar lete hai.
akela kya karinga station mein.
kahani sunnen gye.
coli:sunaye..
magar kiske
shantanu: mere.
17 years ago,
shantanu  pov,
i am shantanu majumder,studying at university. i just fall for a girl of my class.
but unfortunately i never ever get a interaction with her.
1st me and her subject are different. we just a only one class together that also in a week.
an the girl also don't serious about study and bunk the class.
the university is ending soon.
and i want to propose her but how,
my friend ansh give me idea to write a love letter to the girl.
and i take his opinion.

whole night i write only one love letter .
and finally its done.
i describe myself, my background, my love for her in the letter. i could any girl will fall for me after reading this letter. and this happens.

next day,
i don't get chance to talk her so i went to her driver and asked for her address so that i had so scope for myself. i can't meet her after all today was last day of college.
next day,
i went to her house which i get address. its an apartment which look rich and classy people lives.
will she accept my love.
i asked for help from the  watchman.
who was a nice man.
shantanu:kya aap humare madat karenge.
watch:thik hai,paar kis ghar mein jaake dena hai.
suraj:3c flat ke ladki ko.
watchman:acha tum asmita betiya ke pyaar mein par gaye ho.
waise woh hai bohat ache.
shantanu:haan jante hai hum abhi aap jaye aur dejeye uss ye letter.
watchman:thik hai..
the watchman leaves.
i can see the home through windowd.bit i only can see their shadow.
precap:don't know. 

its a sweer love story hope you guys enjoy and do comments 

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Posted: 5 years ago
No comments.maybe my story is not good
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow another story on shamita 
Very interesting starting 
Awe shantanu fall in love with asmita but couldn't confess 
So he wrote love latter to her as his friend suggested 
Shantanu is hopping that asmita will accept his love 
Continue plz 
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Posted: 5 years ago
just saw the post.. so couldn't comment earlier😆😆 continue the story❤️
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Posted: 5 years ago
Thanks for this very FIRST SHAMITA FF
PLEASE UPDATE SOON🤗
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Amazing start... Shan loves Asmita but couldn't express his love and wanted to confess through a letter... It's interesting... Continue soon... If can please add English translation for Hindi dialogues...
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Nice work keep going 
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very nice start pls continue 
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part 
shantanu see under the tree shelter and wait for his lady love. 
at apartment, 
a girl is dancing heart on the music.

Albela Sajan Aayo Ri
Albela Sajan Aayo Ri
Mora Har Man Sukh Paayo Ri
Albela Sajan Aayo Ri
Albela Albela Albela
Albela Albela Albela
Albela Sajan Aayo Ri
Dhir Naa Naa..
Dhir Naa Naa..
Dhir Naa Naa Naa Naa
Chauki Puraao Magal Gaavo

door bell ring she stop her dancing and went to open the door and see the watchman. 
watchman:asmita betiya. 
ashima:ji uncle koi kaam hai. 
watchman:kaam nahi hai ye letter ek ladke ne tumhe dene ko bola hai. 
kyun ladka.
watchman:neche betha hai. 
watchman leaves. 
ashmita take the letter and went near the window and secretly seen him,before he can see her she moved away and breathing heavily. 
don't believing. 

asmita start reading the letter. 
and get amused reading the letter how good the guy is.
and most important thing is that she already likes him but never have the courage to talk to him like she.
she see him waiting for her answers. he will wait for her answers thorough its yes or no. 
asmita:i can't believe shantanu bhi mujse pyaar karte hai. 
main bhi usse bohat pyaar karte hoon. 
magar ab main kya karo bohat nervous feeling ho rahe hai. 
haan maho ya naa.
ma papa woh kya sochenge.
main kaise kya karu.
aur itne jaldi itna bada faisla lena sahi nahi hoga.
main ma papa se baat karunge.
its a bright sunny day. 
shantanu is sitting on hot sun.ashmita see him secretly as she dont want him to realise that she is seeing him but suraj understand all this and smile at her childish nature. 
asmita feel bad.
she took lunch and call watchman. 
asmita:kaka aap uss yeh khana de doon aur haan ho sakte toh uss samjhu ke woh yeh na rahe.
watchman:humne toh samjhaya betiya.
magar woh nahi samjhta hai.
magar suna hai ladka bohat a ha hai mera beta arvind bhi toh same college main parta hai.
asmita:mujhe pata hai woh kaisa hai humesha sabk madat karne wala sabki izzat karne wala.
aap abhi jaaye 

watchman brings lunch for shantanu 
shantanu:yeh sab kis ke liye. 
watchman:aapke liye betiya ne bejhe hai.
shantanu:Hume toh usska haan kya intezar hai. 
khir choro yeh lunch he le lete hai. bukh lage hai bohat. 

shantanu have the lunch. asmita see this from window and smiles. 
day passed.itz evening. 
shantanu is sitll sitting on there.heavy rain is happening. 
asmita feel tensed for shantanu 
her mother come to her.
sunaina:sorry beta late ho gaye ho.
waise dekho kon aaya hai karan ke maa.
karan ke saath hum tumhare rishta karna chate hai.
asmita get shocked. 
precap:ends.

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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome update 
Wow even asmita love shantanu 
She was so happy to shantanu love her
But poor girl was so nervous & also thought abt her parents 
On the other hand shantanu was waiting for asmita's answer 
Oh got asmita's parents fix her marriage with Karan 
Now what she will do?
Continue plz