Bundle of Joy- AkshAn OS

Posted: 5 years ago


Hi all. I had no plans to write this OS, but I am writing this as requested by Raglak_Akshan. The concept was also requested by her. Hopefully you all will like it. And thank you for the positive response for my FF. Hopefully you all will like this OS
too.


Bundle of Joy- AkShan OS

It has been a year since Akshan were married. In that one year a lot happened in their life. A lot of changes happened that Akshat has never anticipated neither Guddan.

The girl whom Akshat considered as clumsy and making mistakes all the time, saved his family several times. Be it exposing Perv's true face infront of the entire family which he didn't dare to
do and consoling Siddhi, or saving the family from clutches of Dutta's evil plans or even risking her life to prove his innocence on Antra's murder case. She solved the murder case and proved Akshat had no hand in Antra's murder and it was a distant relative who got Antra killed. Inspector Rawat apologised to Akshat for that.

Guddan didn't only manage to win the heart of Akshat but also the heart of the three bahus. Now their saasu maa were their best friend. When Guddan risked her life to save his life and gave his Antra justice, he started falling for Guddan. He thought twice as he thought he was too old for Guddan, and Guddan had considered him just a friend.

As for Guddan, before AJ fell for her, Guddan was the one who fell in love with her AJ Uncle. She now calls her hubby, Akshat Jii. Guddan had always lack of confidence, but when she and Akshat became friends, he always inspired her which made her fell for him. And the guy whom she used to call Uncle, was not even the biological father of his three sons. He had adopted them which made Guddan respect him even more. No wonder why AJ looked so young.

Well, fate had plans and Guddan and AJ were reunited after AJ confessed his love to Guddan. They both were in love with each other and pampered each other. AJ made Guddan more confident while Guddan made AJ openly laugh and talk with everyone.

Dadi was happy that her wish got fulfilled.
And so were the three bahus as they found the perfect Saasu Maa in Guddan after what she did. The three sons were very close to Guddan as she will help them escape from AJ's scoldings.


One night,
The entire family had went out for a wedding, while AJ and Guddan were alone at home. It was raining heavily that day. Guddan enjoyed in the rain. AJ comes with the umbrella.

AJ: Guddan, what are you doing?! You will catch cold!

Guddan: Akshat Jii I am enjoying the rain! (Spinning in the rain)

AJ: Guddan...

Guddan: You also come and enjoy with me!

Guddan throws the umbrella from AJ's hand.

AJ: What is this Guddan! Now I am totally drenched!

Guddan: You have to enjoy the rain!

Guddan continues jumping and having fun while AJ laughs at her childishness.

AJ: Enough, Guddan!

As AJ holds Guddan they both look at each other sharing an intense eyelock. AJ eyes at Guddan's lips and they share a kiss.

AJ carries Guddan in his arms and takes her to their bedroom. He untangles the dori of Guddan's dress and kisses on her back.

Guddan and AJ come closer to each other and they consummate their marriage.

After three months,
The entire Jindal family is having dinner while Guddan is serving dinner.

Everyone is smiling and talking. Guddan serves AJ his food while AJ smiles looking at Guddan.

As she is done, Guddan feels giddy and she holds her head. Guddan faints, and AJ holds Guddan before she falls.

AJ: (patting Guddan's cheek) Guddan!!!

Durga: Saasu Maa!!!

Dadi: Saru bahu, go and call our neighbour doctor!

Saru: Okay Dadi!

AJ carries Guddan to their room and makes her lie on the bed.

The doctor comes and check Guddan.

AJ: Doctor, is everything okay?

Dr: There is a good news. Guddan Maa Bane Wali Hai.

Everyone gets happy hearing this. AJ is very happy too.

Dadi: Lalla, this news has made everyone happy!

Durga: I think we should leave the to be parents alone for a while.

AJ goes to Guddan.

AJ: Guddan, how are you now?

Guddan: Akshat Jii, are you happy?

AJ: What kind of question is this? I am very happy. (Carrassing her face)

AJ realised Guddan is tensed.

AJ: What happened? You are not happy?

Guddan: I am. You know Akshat Jii I love babies but I don't know if I can take care of our baby. I am scared.

AJ: Guddan if you can become India's youngest and best Saas, then you can be a great mom too!

Guddan: But being a mother is a big responsibility too! I don't know if I can fulfill it well.

AJ: Guddan look at me!

Guddan looks at AJ.

AJ: Don't think too much! I know you can do it. You will be a great mom. I know you this much.

AJ carrases Guddan's belly.

AJ: You will be a great mother to our daughter.

Guddan: How do you know it's a girl? It can be a boy also!

AJ: I want a girl! A little Guddan!

Guddan: No. No. I want a little AJ.

AJ: But I want little Guddan.

Guddan: It will be a boy. Mark my words.

AJ: Let's see who will be right?

After 2 months,

Guddan is now 4 months pregnant and she has a small baby bump.

Dadi comes to Guddan.

Dadi: Guddan, here you go. Drink this milk.

Dadi realises Guddan is sad.

Dadi: What happened? Why is your face looking pale!

Guddan: Saasu Maa... this pregnancy is very tough. I don't understand. Sometimes I am happy, sometimes I am sad. I don't feel like eating anything and I still gained a lot of weight.

Dadi laughs.

Dadi: Such a small matter! Mood swings is very normal in this condition. And its a good thing to gain weight, that means the baby is fine and healthy.

Guddan: But this mood swings! You know today, I ruined Akshat Jii's mood in the morning cause of this mood swings!

Dadi: Don't worry Lalla will understand! You are enduring so much. He is going to become a father he also have to endure this much!

Guddan: Yes, you are right!

Guddan drinks the milk.

One day, Guddan is cleaning the room and AJ comes there.

AJ: Guddan what are you doing?!

Guddan: What I am doing?!

AJ: Doctor has told you to have full bed rest and you are doing work here!

Guddan: Akshat Jii I am bored of lying down on the bed. And you like cleanliness. So that's why I decided to clean this room.

AJ: When I want you to keep the room clean, that time you mess up the room and when its not necessary for you to do so, you are doing it! You should have told someone else to do so!

Guddan starts crying!

AJ: Now what happened?

Guddan: You scolded me! (Crying)

AJ: Guddan, relax. Sit down here.

AJ makes Guddan sit down.

AJ: I am not scolding you, but telling you!

Guddan: But you were rude!

AJ: Guddan...Okay fine. I am sorry.

Guddan doesn't listen.

AJ: Okay fine. I hold my ears. Now forgive me. (Holding his ear)

Guddan smiles and removes AJ's hand from his ear.

Guddan: Don't do like this. I don't like to see you like this. I have forgiven you.

AJ: Look, I brought you your fav chocolates.

Guddan gets really happy seeing the chocolates.

Two more months later,
Guddan and AJ are sleeping. Guddan wakes AJ up. Guddan is now 6 months pregnant.

Guddan: Akshat Jii... wake up!

AJ: What happened? Are you okay?

Guddan: I am craving for ice cream!

AJ: What?! Seriously at this time!

Guddan: What to do? Baby wants ice cream not just me!

AJ: Guddan I will bring ice cream for you tomorrow!

Guddan: No I want it right now means now!

AJ: Look Guddan, its very late. Go to sleep now.

Guddan: I want ice cream! I want ice cream!

AJ: Okay fine! I will bring for you!

AJ goes and bring ice cream for Guddan from the fridge.

AJ: Now have it!

Guddan: You are the best!

Guddan eats the ice cream!

AJ: Don't eat too much. You will catch a cold!

Guddan: Okay!

AJ smiles seeing Guddan relishing the ice cream.

2 more months later,
AJ comes back from home and sees his cute wife complaining. And Guddan's delivery date is nearing soon.

Guddan: (carassing her belly) You are becoming naughty day by day. Don't disturb Mamma, if not I will complain to your Papa!

AJ: Why are you scolding my child?

Guddan: The baby is getting more naughty day by day and giving more kicks.

AJ: (carresing Guddan's belly) Our baby just wants to communicate with you and you are scolding her.

Guddan: You let it be. You will support the baby. You won't see my pain. (Pouting)

AJ: Guddan...

Guddan: Akshat Jii I feel like watching a movie. So many movies released. Let's go and watch a movie.

AJ: In this condition, no no. You will stay here at home.

Guddan: But..it's so boring!

AJ: Guddan, you have to understand. You can't go out too much in this condition. Once you give birth after that you can watch. Just wait for 1-2 months more.

Guddan: No No No...

AJ: Guddan, you are not going!

Guddan is sad.

AJ: You want to watch your favourite movie on TV? I will bring popcorn for you.

Guddan smiles.

Guddan and AJ are watching the movie while having popcorn. After the movie ends Guddan finds AJ sleeping. Guddan smiles and she lies on his shoulder and falls asleep too.

Midnight,
AJ wakes up and finds Guddan sleeping on his shoulder. He makes sure Guddan doesn't wake up and he makes her lie on the bed and adjusts her pillow. He puts a blanket on her. He kisses on her forehead and then on her belly.

After 2-3 days,
Guddan is helping AJ getting ready for work.

Guddan shows him a thumbs up!

AJ: I will be back by the evening.

Guddan nods.

As AJ is about to go, Guddan gets labour pain.

Guddan: Akshat Jii...(holding her stomach)

AJ sees Guddan struggling in pain. He quickly rushes to her and makes her sit oh the bed.

Guddan: It's paining! Ahhh!!!!

AJ: Guddan! Relax!

Guddan: Aaahhh!!!!

AJ rushes Guddan to the hospital. He drives the car while Durga tries to console Guddan.

Guddan: It's paining a lot.

Durga: We are just reaching the hospital soon.

Guddan is taken to the operation theatre by a stretcher.

Guddan: Akshat Jii...

Akshat: Don't worry Guddan! Nothing will happen to you!!!

As Guddan is taken to the operation theatre. AJ is super worried and walking here and there.

The doctor comes out.

AJ: Doctor, Guddan?

Dr: She is not listening to us. She is not able to push in pain. We need you to be with her.

AJ rushes to the OT.

Guddan: Akshat Jii...Mujhse Naa Ho Payega...Ah!

AJ: Guddan, Tumse Ho Payega. You have to do this. For our baby.

Guddan: Its very painful...

AJ carrases Guddan's forehead.

AJ: Guddan...

AJ talks to Guddan and makes her feel comfortable and she finally manages to push.

The baby cries.

Doctor: Congratulations, it's a baby girl!

AJ: See I told you!

The doctor brings the baby to Guddan. Guddan smiles looking at the baby.

Doctor: You can carry your daughter.

Guddan: I don't have energy to carry the baby in my arms right now...

The doctor passes the baby to AJ.

AJ: My daughter!!

The baby smiles looking at AJ.

After a week,
Guddan is discharged from the hospital. The baby is sleeping in Guddan's arm. AJ is with her. Dadi welcomes them inside the house.

Dadi: She is looking like a doll!

While eveyone is sitting on the sofa,

Lakshmi: AJ have you thought of a name for this doll?

AJ: Yes!

Saru: What will be her name?

AJ: Aakriti.

Guddan smiles looking at their baby.

Lakshmi: I want to take a picture of you three.

Akshat puts his hand behind Guddan's neck and they take a click. Akshat and Guddan looks at each other. Lakhsmi smiles and takes another click.

And Akshan lived happily with their bundle of joy Aakirti.

The end

I hope you all like my OS. Credit goes to Raglak_Akshan for the concept. Hopefully you liked it. As for the FF will post it on Tuesday if not Wednesday.

Posted: 5 years ago
That was cute
Tho It is difficult to imagine a romantic n smiling AJ currently, it was fun reading this
Posted: 5 years ago
Aww...cute story...I felt like I'm watching a episode on tv...so cute...and guddan's craving reminded me my pregnency cravings...I have tortured my hubby for Coke in the midnight at 2am...i have cried also for that and in the morning my hubby did the first job was bought dozen tins of coke...๐Ÿ˜†.crazy cravings ๐Ÿ˜†thank u dear for the beautiful os...
Posted: 5 years ago
this was really cute 
loved it !โค๏ธ
Posted: 5 years ago
Awww๐Ÿ˜ณ Thankyou so much for this beautiful , cutest os Joeee Di...๐Ÿ˜ณ
This was very cute but not more than baby akshan of course ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Apologies for not reading and commenting on this yesterday as my phone started hanging 
And indeed my morning became cuter reading this OS ๐Ÿ˜†
U wrote it too beautifully ๐Ÿ‘ 
That's why I call u a script writer ๐Ÿ˜†
Keep writing more and update the ff too๐Ÿ˜ณโค๏ธ
Posted: 5 years ago
Aww very beautiful random ๐Ÿค—
It's like reading a script
The story was so cute love the pregnancy journey Of Akshan
Keep up the great work

Edited by *Piku* - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Loved it such a beautiful n pure writting๐Ÿ‘
Posted: 5 years ago
Well..it's very good look like a short film๐Ÿค—
Beautifully written and akriti is good name for akshan baby girl๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 5 years ago
Wow dear its beautiful ๐Ÿค—
U r an amazing and talented writer..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Keep writing so we will get more akshan's stories๐Ÿ˜ณ
Posted: 5 years ago
Aww a baby Akshan... how cute! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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