Guddan

Nothing is Impossible-AkshAn FF (LAST EPI)(Pg 64) UPDATED: 1ST MARCH

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nothing is Impossible - AkshAn FF

Hi all. I am new to this forum. I have written FFs before on other sites and this is my first time writing a FF on India Forums and AkShan. Hopefully you all will like the story.

Table of Contents
Introduction- Page 1
Episode 1- Page 2
Episode 2- Page 4
Episode 3 - Page 5
Episode 4 - Page 8
Episode 5- Page 10
Summary of Epi 1-5 - Page 11
Episode 6 - Page 11
Episode 7- Page 14
Episode 8 - Page 15
Promo - Page 16
Episode 9 - Page 18
Episode 10 MAHA EPISODE - Page 21
Summary of Epi 6-10 - Page 24
Episode 11 - Page 25
Episode 12 - Page 27
Episode 13 - Page 29
Episode 14 - Page 32
Episode 15 MAHA EPISODE - Page 34
Episode 16 - Page 36
Summary of Epi 11-16 - Page 38
Episode 17 - Page 38
Episode 18 - Page 40
Episode 19 - Page 42
Episode 20 - Page 44
Summary of Epi 17-20 - Page 45
Episode 21 - Page 46
Episode 22 - Page 49
Episode 23 - Page 51
Episode 24 - Page 52
Episode 25 - Page 54
Summary of Epi 21-25 - Page 56
Episode 26 - Page 56
Episode 27- Page 58
Episode 28 - Page 60
Episode 29 - Page 62
Episode 30 - Page 64


Well, this is the introduction of the story.

I have made some changes to the story and characters here including the age of the main characters.

Character intro
[Be] Main Lead [/B]
Guddan Gupta (24 yrs old)
Guddan is a simple yet naughty girl. She is always being made fun of due to her dumb behaviour and failures by saying Guddan Tumse Naa Ho Payega. Guddan is a 12th standard pass as she failed in college and her step mom continues to taunt her for that. She is closest to her dad and younger sister Revati.

Akshat Jindal (36 yrs old)
Akshat Jindal is a very rich entrepreneur by profession and owns a restaurant brand. He has three sons. In actual, Akshat has adopted them , and they are the biological sons of his eldest brother who died in an accident when AJ was 21 yrs old.
As a kid, AJ was adopted by Mr and Mrs Jindal due to which he has favour on them. He has a dark past as his first wife, Antra died due to cancer. Akshat dearly loved Antra and they both eloped and got married to each other when they were in college.

Supporting Characters
AJ's family

Durga Kishore Jindal (30 yrs old)
Durga is the eldest daughter-in-law in the Jindal family and looks after the household. She was the best friend of Antra too. Durga is a responsible person and strict too. She respects and supports AJ a lot. She liks to be dominating. Durga has a 4 yr old son here.

Laxmi Vardaan Jindal (27 yrs old)
Laxmi is the middle daughter-in-law in the Jindal family and she is the funniest one. She is someone who acts smart but in actual is a bit dumb. She is a cheerful person. She has an elder unmarried sister Shweta and she wants Shweta to marry Akshat. But she is afraid to say so, as along with AJ, Durga is against AJ's marriage too.

Saraswati Rahul Jindal (24 years old)
Saraswati is the youngest daughter-in-law of the family who recently got married and entered the Jindal house. Saraswati was also the classmate of Guddan and she hates Guddan as she is dumb and is from middle class wheras Saraswati is the topper and from a very rich family.

Dhruv
Dhruv is the son of Durga who is 4 yr old boy. He is naughty and will be very close to Guddan.

Dadi/Mrs Jindal
The mother of AJ. She and her husband adopted AJ years back. Her husband and biological son died in an accident years back after which AJ adopted her grandsons.

Kishore, Vardaan and Rahul are the three adopted sons of AJ and the gransons of Dadi.

Guddan's family
Bhushan Gupta
Guddan is closest to her dad. He pampers both his daughters a lot, especially Guddan. He remarried only for Guddan and wants Guddan to be happy.

Kaushaliya Gupta
Guddan's stepmom who dislikes and taunts Guddan for her foolishness. She doesn't care about Guddan and pretends to care about her. She only cares about her husband and younger daughter.

Revati Gupta (20 yrs old)
She is Guddan's younger sister who loves her sister like anything. She never treats Guddan like her step sister. Guddan inspires Revati a lot. She is also lovingly called Chutki by her family.


Promo
A girl is shown working hard. She tries to arrange chairs in a wedding nicely. She manages to do it. She smiles happily and the next moment all the chair falls over each other. She hits her forehead. A lady(Guddan's step mom) comes there.

Kaushaliya: Guddan Tumse Na Ho Payega

Guddan: Sorry Mamma.

Scene shifts where Guddan is shown married and she is confused how to wear a saree. She manages somehow and as she is about to go out, her saree loosens and she struggles with it a lot.The three daughter in laws come and say

"Saasu Maa Aap Se Na Ho Payega."

Guddan enters in the kitchen and she looks at the utensil. Guddan gets upset and tells herself

Guddan: Guddan Tumse Naa Ho Payega.

As Guddan is about to go, a hand stops her. Guddan looks. And a guy with
spectacles(we all know who) comes there.

AJ: Guddan Tumse Ho Payega, nothing is impossible.

Guddan gets encouraged. And she starts cooking and thanks saying.
Guddan: Thank you AJ...

AJ leaves from there. Guddan is clueless thinking how would she do the impossible?

So here is the introduction of the characters and promo. If you all like my story, I will post the first episode this weekend. I really need your support. Thank you.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awsm. Character just wanted to listen from AJ on the show also ki guddan tumse ho payegaaa😉
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Posted: 5 years ago
Hello and welcome to this forum ðŸ˜Š
This was a superb character sketch beautifully written 
Continue soon ðŸ˜³
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Posted: 5 years ago
Well to the forum...waise toh i am also new to this forum😛..
Love ur characterization...waiting for the start now
Post asap😳
Btw whats ur name??
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome cs and promo
Love it
Update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: kayafever

Awsm. Character just wanted to listen from AJ on the show also ki guddan tumse ho payegaaa😉



Same! Even I wanted to listen AJ saying this to Guddan
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Hello and welcome to this forum😊

This was a superb character sketch beautifully written
Continue soon😳



Glad u liked it! Will be posting the first epi today
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: ...pratu...

Well to the forum...waise toh i am also new to this forum😛..

Love ur characterization...waiting for the start now
Post asap😳
Btw whats ur name??



Haha. Well u can call me Jo.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome cs and promo

Love it
Update soon



Thank you. Will try to post it tonight 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
Episode 1

Hi all. Thank you so much for the response in the introduction. Glad you all liked it.

So here is the first episode.

Scene 1: Guddan's house
The episode begins with a lady walking here and there.

Kaushaliya: I don't know where this stupid girl.

A girl is shown combing her hair.

Kaushaliya: Guddan!!!


That girl is none other than Guddan. As Guddan hears her name, she stops combing her hair and her comb gets stuck to hair. She tries to seperate the comb from her hair.

Kaushaliya: Where are you?? Guddan!!!

Guddan quickly comes out of her and she tries to take out the comb from her hair. While coming out, she accidentally collides with the door. Guddan rubs her head and still tries to seperate the comb.

She climbs down the stairs and manages to seperate the comb, finally! But the teeth of the combs are broken.

Kaushaliya: Where were you? I was calling you out for a long time!

Guddan: Sorry Maa, the comb got stuck to my hair. But finally I managed to seperate the comb out. See. (Smiling and showing the comb)

Kaushaliya: And you broke the comb!

Guddan looks at the comb.

Guddan: Never mind I will buy a new comb.

Kaushaliya: Guddan Tumse Naa Ho Payega.

Guddan: I just have to buy a comb.

Kaushaliya: You can't even comb your hair properly. Anyways, listen. I am going out for a while. Look after the house, okay. Don't mess up anything.

Guddan nods.

Kaushaliya: I have told Chutki to cook so you don't need to enter the kitchen.

Guddan nods.

Kaushaliya leaves.

Just then a girl comes and hugs her from behind.

Revati: Guddan Didi!!

Guddan: Chutki!!

Revati: Didi, let's watch a movie! They are showing your fav hero Akshay Kumar's movie!

Guddan: Akshay Ka Movie!! (Excited)

Revati: Yes!

As Guddan is about to go,

Guddan: But Maa told you to cook and I have to look after the house. After all I don't know how to cook.

Revati: Maa went to parlour today. She will take 4 hours. By then we can finish the movie then I will cook.

Guddan: Alright.

Guddan and Revati watches the movie.

While watching the movie,

Guddan: Akshay is such a dashing hero.

Revati: Don't worry Dii you will get your hero one day.

Guddan: I wonder when that day will come!

Scene 2: A Wedding Venue
A venue is shown. It seems that a wedding is going to happen there. The prepartions are going on.

Guy: Quickly finish this before AJ sir comes. And make sure everything is perfect, if not AJ sir won't spare you.

Just then a guy with spectacles comes there. He walks in and comes to the guys. He talks to them.

Guy with spectacles: I want everything perfect, so that people will say this is AJ's son's wedding! And finish your work faster!

The guy is none other than AJ.

Decoration Guy: Okay sir!

AJ: If there is any mistake, you are going to get it from me. Get back to work.

Decoration guy gets back to work.

Just then Dadi comes there,

Dadi: LalLa, have you had lunch?

AJ: Yes Maa.

Dadi: You are working so hard! Rahul is not your actual son still you are doing so much for his wedding! Thank you so much for taking care of my grandsons. I don't know what else to say.

AJ: Maa, you also gave me a life. When I had nobody in my life as a kid, you and Papa came in my life and held my hand. I got both my parents that day. Whatever I am is because of you. Bhai's sons are not like my son, they are indeed my son.

Dadi: God bless you Lalla! Can I ask you something?

AJ: Ask.

Dadi: What has happened to you? Where is that Akshat who used to be friendly and laugh with everyone? But now... you have engulfed your life in darkness. When will you move on?

AJ: The day Antra was gone, darkness came back to my life. And darkness will never fade. Darknedd can never exist together.

AJ: "Dhoop Se Kabhi Andhera, Jud Nahi Sakta."

AJ: Maa, should I go now? There is work.

Dadi nods.

AJ leaves.

Dadi: My LalLa has done so much for people. But he faced so much. I hope someone brings back the missing light in his life one day and vanish the darkness from his life.

Scene 3: Guddan's house
Guddan and Revati finishes watching the movie.

Revati: Dii, I will go and cook lunch. Maa also told me to prepare kheer for her.

Guddan: Okay Chutki. Meanwhile, I should clean the house.

Revati: Okay Dii.

Revati is cooking in the kitchen, while Guddan does cleaning.

After completing mopping, Guddan goes to clean the windows.

Revati continues to do her work in kitchen. Guddan is done with her work.

Guddan: Let me go and help Chutki.

Scene 4: Kitchen
A lady is shown talking to the chef. The lady tastes the food.

Lady: What kind of food is this? So less salt. Add more salt.

AJ comes there.

AJ: Durga Bahu

That lady is Durga.

Durga: Yes AJ?

AJ: Glad you are looking after the kitchen. I am not getting time. Anyways, how is the food. Let me taste it.

Durga: They forgot to add the salt.

AJ scolds the chef.

AJ: How could you forget to add the salt?

Chef: Sorry Sir.

AJ: Go and add salt now. And then make sure Durga Bahu tastes it again. If it's not up to the standard, you are going to get it. Is it clear?

Chef: Yes sir.

Just then a little boy comes to Durga pulling her pallu.

Boy: Mumma, I am hungry.

Durga: Dhruv beta...you are very hungry?

Dhruv nods.

AJ carries Dhruv in his arm.

AJ: Durga Bahu, don't worry I will feed him.

Durga: Thank you AJ.

AJ puts Dhruv in his lap and feeds him.

Dhruv: ADaJi.

AJ: ADaJi will feed you.

Scene 5: Guddan's House
As Revati is cooking and Guddan is helping Revati to put out plates, Revati gets a call.

Revati comes to Guddan.

Revati: Dii, there is a problem. Nisha was saying to come to her house as soon as possible. She seems really serious.

Guddan: Chutki, don't take tension. I will manage.

Revati: Dii, Maa is coming anytime. If she sees the food is not ready, she will kill me!

Guddan: How much have you completed?

Revati: Almost done. Just need to add sugar in the kheer and salt in the dal...

Guddan: That only? Chutki you go right now I will help you with that.

Revati: Thank you Dii!

Revati leaves.

Guddan quickly goes to the kitchen.

Guddan: Chutki said salt in dal and sugar in kheer.

Guddan sees the salt and keeps it and she takes out the sugarfree sugar out too.

Guddan takes out the salt to add it to the dal. Just then Kaushaliya comes there and rings the bell.

Guddan: Oh no Maa is here.

In this time, she accidentally adds salt to the kheer.

Guddan: What should I do?

Guddan panicks.

Guddan: Dal yellow, this container also yellow.

Guddan adds sugarfree sugar in the dal as she hurries.

She takes out the dal.

Kaushaliya rings the bell again. Guddan opens the door.

Kaushaliya: For so long I am ringing the bell. Have you became deaf along with brainless?

Guddan: Sorry Maa, I was keeping the food on the table.

Kaushaliya: Quickly give me food. I am very hungry.

Guddan serves Kaushaliya the dal. Kaushaliya tastes it.

Kaushaliya: It tastes so weird... Guddan can pass me the Kheer?

Guddan: Okay.

Kaushaliya tastes the kheer and gets annoyed.

Kaushaliya: I can't even spit it out. Guddan, tell me truth you have done something right! My Revati can never make such bad food.

Guddan: Yes. I added sugar in dal and salt in kheer accidentally.

Kaushaliya: Now this is how you will kill me right! Where is Chutki?

Guddan: She had to go to study with her friends.

Kaushaliya: Okay. I will just have rice. My fate is bad. That despite having kheer infront of me, I can't have it.

Guddan doesn't want to hear anymore taunts from Kaushaliya so she praises her instead.

Guddan: By the way your face is glowing more.

Kaushaliya: No need to praise me. I know I am beautiful.

Guddan smiles.

Scene 6: Wedding Venue
Dhruv runs after AJ finishes feeding him.

AJ: Carefully!

Dadi comes and sits beside AJ.

AJ: He has became so naughty!

Dadi smiles.

Dadi: Yes!

AJ: If Antra was here today she would have been so happy. Antra loved attending weddings.

Dadi puts her hand on AJ's shoulder.

AJ: Maa you know, I feel bad for making Antra elope with me and getting married in a simple way. She always wanted a grand wedding. But I could never fulfill this wish of hers. I wish I could.

Dadi: Beta, we can't change whatever happened.

AJ: Maa, I have got a lot of work to do. The guests are coming in the evening.

AJ leaves. Dadi looks at AJ sadly.

Scene 7: Guddan's House
Revati comes back home. Revati is sad.

Kaushaliya: Why is your face pale?

Revati: Maa, Nisha was saying that there is test tomorrow. I didn't even know. I was sick the other day, that's why I could not go for class.

Kaushaliya: Then go and study.

Kaushaliya remembers something.

Kaushaliya: That means you can't go with me for Saraswati's wedding right!

Revati nods no.

Kaushaliya: I promised Mrs Singh that I will bring one of my daughters with me, but it's your exam...

Kaushaliya looks at Guddan.

Guddan: Why are you looking at me like this?

Kaushaliya: You will come with me.

Guddan: Where?

Kaushaliya: Saraswati's wedding and wheras.

Guddan: What? But why? Why me? Is it necessary for me to go?

Kaushaliya: Guddan, I am not asking you. I am telling you. You have to come with me.

Guddan: But I don't like to attend weddings...

Kaushaliya: No ifs and buts. You are coming with me and that's final. Go and get ready!

Guddan unwillingly agrees.

In the evening,
Guddan is wearing a blue traditional suit. Guddan is unhappy.

Guddan: I don't even understand what goes on in weddings. The only good thing is food. But last time I went in a wedding, I had food poisoning next day. On top of that, it's that Saraswati witch's wedding!

Scene 8: Flashback
Guddan recalls her college times. How she was in college.

Teacher: Guddan Gupta

Guddan: Yes Sir?

Teacher: This time your result have been very good. You have topped.

Guddan is confused and happy. All are shocked.

Teacher: You have topped from the bottom.

All laughs. Guddan gets upset.

Teacher: Saraswati Singh

Saras: Yes Sir.

Teacher: Well done Saraswati. As always you got first place.

All claps for Saras.

In canteen,
Guddan is walking and Saras puts her leg and Guddan trips. All laughs at her.

Saras: Aww you fell down!

Guddan angrily looks at Saras.

Saras: Well this is where your value is! Neeche!

Saras steps on Guddan's bag and walks away with her friends.

Guddan: (muttering to herslef) Churail!(witch)

Guddan gets out of flashback.

Scene 9: Guddan's Room
Guddan is getting ready.

Revati: Sorry dii, because of me you have to go with Maa

Guddan: Chutki, it's not your fault. Anyways there will be good songs to hear in weddings. Also its such a luxurious wedding.

Revati: But that Saraswati?

Guddan: Who cares about her? She is the bride, so bride's job to feel shy. She won't be able to do anything to me. She will be busy with her own wedding.

Revati: Dii you are so good! That's why you are the best and my fav!

Revati hugs Guddan.

Scene 10: Wedding Venue
Kaushaliya and Guddan comes to the venue. Kaushaliya eyes the place happily.

Guddan: Such a beautiful place!

Kaushaliya: For the first time you said the right thing Guddan!

Saraswati's mother welcomes Kaushaliya inside and hugs her.

Mrs Singh: Guddan happy to see you come here. After all it's your friend's wedding.

Guddan: I won't have come here if Maa didn't force me. And Aunty, Saraswati is not my friend!

Kaushaliya: This Guddan always have a habit to joke.

Before Guddan can say anything,

Kaushaliya: Guddan come lets go there is some snacks there. You like jalebis right!

Guddan: Oh yes! (Smiling)

Kaushaliya takes Guddan to one side

Guddan: Maa lets go and eat Jalebi!

Kaushaliya: Can't you stop uttering nonsense? Log Kya Sochege

Guddan: Jalebi Hi To Kha Rahi Hoon. Isme Sochne Wali Baat Kya Hai. Jalebi Aapko Khaana Nahi Chaye, Aapko Diabetics Hai Na.

Kaushaliya: Buddhu, I am not talking about jalebi. I am talking about what you were saying about Saraswati to Mrs Singh. What was the need of saying nonsense!

Guddan: It's not nonsense. Its true. Papa says its not good to lie. So thats why what I am saying is correct!

Kaushaliya: Sorry my Maa, for saying like this. (Folding her hands sarcastically)

Guddan: Areh you are my Maa not I am your Maa.

Kaushaliya: I am going to have snacks.

Kaushaliya leaves.

Guddan: Wait Maa, even I want! I want jalebi!

Guddan tries to follow Kaushaliya and runs behind her.

On the other hand, Laxmi comes there with her sister, Shweta.

Laxmi: Shweta Didi, this is a huge chance to impress AJ. Let's do this!

Shweta: I am looking alright right!

Laxmi: Looking like a fairy!

Shweta: He won't scold me, right?

Laxmi: Just act scared and start your sweet talks. Anyways he is going to melt looking at you!

Shweta smiles.

Durga: Laxmi where were you? I was looking for you?

Laxmi: Sory Durga Dii. I went to bring Shweta Dii.

Durga smiles at Shweta and brings Laxmi with her.

Later,
Saraswati is brought to the mandap. Durga and Lakshmi helps Saraswati sit beside Rahul.

AJ is talking on the phone, Shweta comes to AJ. Guddan is running.

Waiter: Mam coffee!!

Guddan: Maa likes coffee let me take some for her. She will be happy and then she will forgive me.

Guddan takes the coffee.

Guddan runs with the coffee and collides with Shweta spilling the coffee on her clothes.

Guddan: Sorry!!!

Shweta: You!!!

Shweta sadly looks at her dress.

Shweta: It's spoiled. My brand new dress. (Sulking)

Guddan: Do one thing! Go to the washroom and clean up.

Shweta gets angry and pulls Guddan's hair.

Guddan: What you are doing! Leave my hair!

Shweta: Hey you don't teach me, you uneducated girl! You spoiled my dress so I am spoiling your hair!

Guddan: I am not uneducated! I have Class 12 certificate. Maine Kahan Na Galti Se Hua Hai. Meri Baal Khichne Ki Permission Tumko Kisne Diya!

Shweta: (talking to herself) I don't know how such kind of girl from such lowly families can be invited here!

Guddan: Oh hello! Tumne Guddan Ka Baal Khicha Aur Guddan Ne Kuch Nahi Kahan Par Tum Guddan Ke Parivaar Ke Bare Main Aisa Ganda Kahongi, Guddan Yeh Bardaash Nahi Karegi!

Shweta: Really! Show me what you can do! Just look at yourself first! I wonder how your parents brought up such a mannerless girl!

Guddan gets furious.

Guddan: You... (goes to raise her hand)

As Guddan is about to raise her hand, a guy stops her by holding her hand.
Guddan looks at the guy. And that is AJ. Guddan and AJ shares an eyelock.

Mere Haathon Main, Na Teri Lakeerein
Hai Bohot Alag Si, Apni Taqdeerein
Mera Zameen Par Chalna, Tera Hawaa Se Udna
Haan Namumkin Hai, Tera Mera Milna
Ke Dhoop Se Kabhi Andhera, Jud Nahi Sakta
Yeh Ishq Mukammal Apna, Ab Ho Nahi Sakta



End of Episode 1.

Precap: AJ and Guddan's Tashan

I hope it was not boring. As the first episode was focused on Guddan and AJ's life before they met each other.
Edited by randomfancrics - 5 years ago