Raghab~Naina, Rishabh~Nandini FF-Let Destiny Define Love

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 Let Destiny Define Love

 Introduction

27 years old Raghab Mahera, living in Austria suddenly visits India, only to know why after talking for 7 months, 24 years old Naina Malik, suddenly wants to put a full stop. While he stays at his friend Rishabh's home and denies to leave Naina without getting a proper valid reason, his friend starts developing an unknown attachment to Naina's sister Nandini! Two friends, fall for twin sisters, both of whom are unwilling to enter a new life because of their different reasons. The story revolves around these four people and how LOVE changes them and their wills...

 


Raghab Mahera -Arjun Bijlani

Rishabh Kundra-Vivian Dsena.

Naina Malik and Nandini Malik- Drashti Dhami

Kunal Kundra- Shivin Narana

Rajdeep Thakur- Abhinab Shukla

Raghab's daadi Anju Mhera- Anju Mahendru

Padmini Malik- Pallavi Purohit

Shamsher Malik- Bhupinder Singh

Mohan Kundra- Darshan Jariwala

Radha Kundra- Shama Deshpande




P.S. I am trying an FF for the first time, just to pen down my wild imaginations. I am not writer kind of person! but I will try my best! I hope whoever visits and reads, gets a bit entertained. 

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Index

Chapter 1- Page 1
Chapter 2- Page 1
Chapter 3- Page 2
Chapter 4- Page 3
Chapter 5- Page 5
Chapter 6- Page 5
Chapter 7- Page 6
Chapter 8- Page 7

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Chapter-1

 

 

An evening of May, temperature is about thirty degrees! And a handsome young man about the age of 27-28 wearing white shirt, grey pants n grey waistcoat, is standing outside the Mumbai airport with his luggage, holding his coat in one hand and with a bit of annoyance in his face, dialing and redialing some number in his phone! Someone picked from the other side

"Where the hell have you been??" the man asked

"Parking" answer came from the other side

"I am outside"

"Great!! "Am coming

And another handsome man about the same age appears, wearing royal blue blazer and pants... a lite pink shirt inside!

"You are late"

"You are still kharoos and ungrateful! I came to pick you up and going to let you stay in my house and eat food made by my parents and you are shouting at me because I am... what.. looks at the watch on his wrist "17 minutes late..."

Both glare at each other in silence for a moment then the one in grey says

"Why are you wearing a suit?"

"Mr. Bhatiya's party" replies the other "chal"

And they move towards the parking.

Another young man about the age of 20-21 was already sitting inside the car at the driver's seat speaks

"What's up Raghab bhaiya?"

"Hi Kunal! Why are you on the driver's seat?" askes the man in grey, Raghab Mahera

Then both Kunal and Raghab look at the man in royal blue

" stop looking at me as if I am the first one in the whole world... his words were cut in mid-sentence by Kunal, who completes it for him "... to crash the car in a road side tea shop?!

The man in royal blue glares at Kunal

"You will never grow up Rishabh! Will you?" Raghab questions the man in royal blue, Rishabh Kundra

"I am definitely grown up enough to tolerate a brother like Kunal and a friend like you Rishabh replies "now get into the car please Mr. Punctual! And can we please drive Mr. Physicist?" he adds

Kunal and Raghab smile at each other and after settling in the car, they drive towards the Kundra family home.

Rishabh and Raghab are friends from their engineering college! Their friendship is kind of strange! Raghab used to be topper and way too serious about everything in his life and Rishabh is back bencher, a brat. Raghab lost his parents long back and was raised by his daadi and after completing his masters, he went to Austria with is daadi for his job. Rishabh on the other hand, is the ladla of the family! Living with his mother, stepfather and little brother! He is pampered so much at times that that it becomes difficult to understand, who is younger?! Rishabh or Kunal, who is doing graduation in Physics!

After about 5 minutes, Rishabh cools down and asks Raghab

"So... what brought you here all of a sudden?"

"Long story"

"short mein suna de"

"I am all ears" Kunal joins Rishabh as he takes a short cut

Raghab starts "you remember I came to Pune last year, November, to daadi's saheli's pota's wedding?"

"How can I forget?!! You couldn't meet us for even an hour Mr. oh I am so busy in my professional life" Rishabh taunts

"I would have missed my flight, would have lost my job! I only came because daadi Zidd kar rahi thi aur..." Raghab was cut by Kunal

"Raghab bhaiya please mudde pe aao na! What happened in PUNE?"

Rishabh frowns

"I was doing that only!" Raghab continues " I met a girl there, Naina Raghab blushes a bit and continues " she was friendly and sweet and I got her number and we have been talking for a while and all of a sudden last week she asked me to call her parents and tell them that I don't want to marry her! I asked why was she doing this! She said she doesn't want to marry me! I asked whether she likes someone else! She said it is not so! I asked her whether she dislikes something about me! she said it is not so... she just doesn't want to marry me!..." this time Raghab gets cut by Rishabh

" And this is why Mr.Topper's ego was hurt and he came all the way from Austria to confront his girlfriend to satisfy his ego... or is it something more, than the ego... Is it the H..."

"SHUT UP" Raghab says and he blushed a bit more

Rishabh smiles a bit and also feels a bit pain for his friend. Raghab can be a bit kharoos, but even he wount like a girl REJECTING Raghab like this! Raghab is a perfect arranged marriage groom material! He is gonna be with Raghab in this WAR now! Kunal on the other hand asks Raghab

"where is daadi then?"

"daadi will be staying in a home for a few days, with her new yoga buddies..."

"OH SHIT!" Rishabh shouts n Kunal pulls the break

Edited by moumita.madhuk - 5 years ago
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Ok very interesting start.. Raghav came to India to know why naina rejected him I like his ego...the conversation was going interesting why rishab shouted like that ? Waiting for next one .Congo for the new story..reading any story in IF after long..character and actors looks interesting too..keep continue next part soon
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Ok very interesting start.. Raghav came to India to know why naina rejected him I like his ego...the conversation was going interesting why rishab shouted like that ? Waiting for next one .Congo for the new story..reading any story in IF after long..character and actors looks interesting too..keep continue next part soon

thank you so much Sanjh! You will know why Rishabh shouted that way very soon!
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Chapter-2

"marwawo ge kiya dono bhai milke?" cribs Raghab, who was in the back seat n just bangs his forehead in the front seat back, due to the sudden break pulling.

The two in the front seat are looking rather frightened. And without thinking Rishabh gets out of the car! Kunal, on the other hand just freezes on his seat. Raghab got confused, but he senses something seriously wrong and gets out of the car within a moment after Rishabh and sees in front of their car on the road, a woman figure, saree cladded, curled up, sideways, facing away from them. Her body language showing that she is in immense pain, but no external injury visible! Rishabh went closer and Raghab behind him.

Rishabh goes to the other side and sees she is holding her stomach tightly with her two hands, to lessen the pain maybe, the right sleeve of her blouse is torn and the face, the face showing immense pain, the face he saw before! Just a few hours ago, at Mr.Bhatiya's party! Sikky and his friends were giving dirtry looks at her backless blouse and were talking to each other about her in a very vulgar way! Rishabh found it pathetic and puke worthy! He was not a saint, but he never likes men talking like this about women's clothing, especially married women! Yes! This woman was there in the party with her husband, just a few hours ago! She was looking so beautiful that most of the eyes got fixed on her only! Her husband was introducing her to everyone! They came to him to! The name was Mr. Thakur! And now this woman is in this situation, at the middle of a lonely road! Why? And only the worst possibility crosses his mind! Horrorstruck,he feels... "No..." whispers Rishabh

Now seeing Rishabh's eyes widen and frozen, Raghab reaches his side and sees the woman and one word comes out of his mouth, shocked, pained "Naina??!!"

The next thing Raghab does is, taking the woman in his arms n taking her inside the car! Rishabh is dumbstruck, but gets in the car and they start for the nearest hospital.

"This is why this Naina did not want to marry Raghab! She is already married! And now this..." the mare thought is horrifying to Rishabh

"Rishabh bhaiya! ... The nearest hospital??" Kunal asks

Rishabh comes to his senses and starts looking for the nearest hospital. Raghab in the backseat holds the woman closely and caresses her face!

They reach the hospital and take her to the emergency department! One lady doctor appears immediately! She throws a questionable not so decent look at the three men as she checks the woman! And within moments she orders the nurse beside her

"OT taiyar karo and you three fill the form"

"She will be ok na doctor?" asked Raghab

"We will need time" replies the doctor

Three word boys come with the strechers and another nurse. The doctor tells the nurse and the word boy in a hushed voice and leaves with the pained woman in the stretcher carried by other two word boys. The three men go behind them, outside the OT! The nurse after a while brings them the form for filling up. Raghab takes the form and ticks friend at the Relationship with the Patient column.

The injured woman is inside the OT. The three men are eagerly waiting outside. Suddenly a thought arises in Raghab's mind. He should call Naina's parents. But what is he going to tell them. Giving such news in phone is not a good idea. But he must!

Raghab takes his phone and calls Naina's landline number. Someone from the other side picks the call after a while

"Hallow Raghab beta, pohoch gaye tum Mumbai?" asks a female voice in a formal tone

"Yes aunty ji, I am here in Mumbai. Auntyji, where is uncleji?"

"yehipe hai. Baat karoge unse?"

"nehi auntyji!" Raghab pauses for a moment " auntyji' can you and uncleji please come to the Aseem Hospital of Santacruz West right now?please?"

"Hospital? But why? Beta are you okey?" concern in her voice

"I am okey auntyji" Raghab pauses again " auntyji I found Naina on my way from airport. She met with a small accident. Can you please come?"

"naina?!?" the tone is that of shock and disbelief

"it's not that big! Bus thori si chot lagi hai! Aap log aa sakhe to achchha ho" Raghab lies

"we are coming" and the lady cuts the call

A nurse comes out of the OT after a while.

"How is she?" Raghab asks... worry in his voice

"There are internal injuries, it will take time... look, can you help us to contact her family?"

"I think I can help" a man in khaki was now standing by their side "hallow, I am inspector Khan"

"I have already called her family and they are on their way" Raghab says

"Thank you!" the nurse says and leaves through the corridor

"Ok Mr. Mahera, as you wrote in the form, Ms. Malik, the patient is your friend. Can you please tell me how all these happened?" questions Inspector Khan

Raghab gets impatient to know how sever the injuries were. He is unable to control his emotions. How is telling the story at this moment more than Naina's wellbeing. His annoyance visible in his face!

"Please cooperate Mr. Mahera! Knowing how all these happened is as important as saving her life!" the inspector says

Raghab opens his mouth to say something, but Kunal cuts him and says "I am telling you everything" and starts telling him what has happened

The same nurse comes to the three of them in a hurry and asks "is any of you AB positive? The patient needs blood"

Kunal has stopped speaking and both he and Raghab look at Rishabh! But Rishabh seems lost! Hard to tell whether he heard what the nurse said.

"Rishabh!" Raghab calls him impatiently

"hah??" Rishabh replies as if he just came back to this world

"AB positive blood is needed for the patient" Kunal says

"oh yes! I am AB positive!" Rishabh says coming to his senses and leaves with the nurse.

"So, Mr. Raghab, you knew this lady already and you met her tonight on the lonely road in this situation by ACCIDENT!?!"  Tone of disbelief

Raghab feels hell irritated now. He was about to say something when he notices, escorted by a ward boy, coming through the corridor were, three people... A dishevelled Mrs. Padmini Malik, Mr. Shamsher Malik, looking a bit weak and in white trouser and sky blue shirt...

"Naina?!?!" shocked, surprised, astonished whisper leaves Raghab's mouth...

Edited by moumita.madhuk - 5 years ago
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Congrats Mou on your new ff..
Well the story sounds interesting..Rishab, Raghav along with Naina & Nandini will be an exciting read..Loved the updates..waiting for more..
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omg Raghav thought Nandini as naina and was hell worried for her..so cute ❤️..What happened with Nandini? I hope it's not that bad and now that everything is out in open hope and wish her family will support her..super interesting chapter loved it.
waiting for next one
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Originally posted by: bobby13rocks

Congrats Mou on your new ff..

Well the story sounds interesting..Rishab, Raghav along with Naina & Nandini will be an exciting read..Loved the updates..waiting for more..

Thank you Bobby !! I will try to give the updates asap! Before my vaca ends!!😃
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omg Raghav thought Nandini as naina and was hell worried for her..so cute ❤️..What happened with Nandini? I hope it's not that bad and now that everything is out in open hope and wish her family will support her..super interesting chapter loved it.
waiting for next one

  sorry, you gotta wait for 4th chapter for that. but it is not what Rishabh was imagining.Edited by moumita.madhuk - 5 years ago