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Nice start.countinue soon.maan lost in geet beauty.oh she hurt his ego and make hin angry.let see what happend now.next update soon.pls add me in urs pm list
Posted: 5 years ago
Congrats and welcome back dii
Posted: 5 years ago
Nice update 
Maan went to village 
Where he lost in Geet beauty 
Later he ask her to give lift 
But she went from there 
That make him angry 
Let see will he know why Geet didn't went with him 
Thanks for PM 
Update soon 
Posted: 5 years ago
Nice update maan like geet but she run away from him as he is rich which hurt maan ego waiting to see what happen so update soon
Posted: 5 years ago
Welcome back..
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
Posted: 5 years ago
Lovely start. Maan is stunned seeing Geet. And when he sees her near the college he without thinking just goes to her and offer lift. But for Geet it's different in a village and she runs away. And of course Maan gets angry before even thinking. 
Posted: 5 years ago
Welcome back simran missed ur update so u gonna start with this where maan is absolutely smitten by his servant daughter he still has to realize but totally acting like a teenager so cute even banged his head against the wall maan wanted to give her lift but he forget that it's village and ppl might think differently but janab is angry now 

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