Intertwined SS ~ UPDATED [email protected] 2[CH1,[email protected]]25th Sep

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Posted: 2018-09-18T09:29:30Z
Hello and welcome!! Hug

This was a very abrupt idea which occurred to me when  the track of chaos between Rajdeep and Nandini (Nandini pointing a knife on Rajdeep while saving herself) was airing on tv and I decided to pen it down but was reluctant to post it(still am LOL, as I don't know if any readers are here)!! 

It's been written in a narrative way which has mixed perspective as in 3rd person's view as well as I have shown Mauli, Kunal and Nandini's individual Perspective.
I feel language has a big role to portray the emotions. That is why Dialogues are mixed in Hindi and English since the show's original language is Hindi.  But if time permits I might put translations!

Sincerely hoping this short story doesn't cross more than 6 or 7 chapters!!LOL

There can be inconsistency and I apologize for that and request to ignore if you find any!! Since the characters of the show is not executed in a clear manner so it's a bit challenging to how one might perceive how I have sketched these 3 characters.

Disclaimer : This is absolutely fictional and only for the ones who loves reading. So don't even try to find any logic!! LOL  
If any resemblance found with any other story that's a mere co incidence as I condemn stealing hard work done by anyone. Pm me if you have objection.
Likewise, This plot is my sole fictitious creation hence do not copy, modify or else actions would be taken.

Do show your support by giving feedback. Thank you!! Embarrassed
Edited by WaveTeal - 2018-09-24T12:05:39Z
Posted: 2018-09-18T09:30:30Z

INDEX :

Chapter 1 - Page 1 ~ Scroll Down

Chapter 2 - Page 1 ~ Scroll Down

Chapter 3 - Page 2

Chapter 4 - Page updating 

Chapter 5 - Page updating 

Chapter 6 - Page updating 

Chapter 7 - Page updating 



Edited by WaveTeal - 2018-09-24T12:08:37Z
Posted: 2018-09-18T09:31:05Z

Synopsis of the show : Nandini was married to Rajdeep who is abusive towards her. She is rescued by her best friend Mauli. There comes a time when Nandini gets pregnant and Mauli being a doctor by profession tried to save her. Seeing Nandini's life is at threat Mauli shelters Nandini in her home.
Soon Nandini develops feelings for Mauli's husband Kunal. Eventually both agrees to confess of their love and gets involved into the illicit extra- marital affair behind Mauli's back. 

This SS starts on after 2.5 years interval. Mauli divorced Kunal and is living with Kunal's mother and Grandmother who both supported Mauli in her agony. 


Chapter 1 : Blast From the Past!



Reality seems almost beautiful as a dream with him. So much so that it surpasses that thin border between fantasy and reality and plunges her into those never ending motions of reverie!!

And it's all his fault!!

Cribbing inside her mind she smiled displaying those beautiful dimples on either side of her cheeks!! Puffy cheeks as he always calls while teasing her!! Remembering so she pursed her lips in a childish huff but then the next moment smiled as his name flashed on her phone's screen!!

Still, to this day, that man makes her go weak on knees with his mere texts. She blushed in a deep red hue reading his affectionate words coated in the spice of his huff. 
For the umpteenth time, his remembrance plunged her deep into their realm of love!!

Can he too feel how she misses him, remembers him, yearns for him! 

That beautiful smile of his which is enough to make her forget the whole world flashed inside her mind and she counted the hours again to meet him, to securely throw herself in the warmth of his arms; To inhale into his redolence which enthralls all her senses! He is her sacred palace, her home!!

That minty warmth of his lips lingered on her parched ones and she discovered herself biting her lips amidst a gigantic conference room filled with people!! Turn for another tint of blush to appear on her cheeks as she hid her embarrassment and tried to focus on the ongoing talk. This atrocious man would never stop to be the subject of her everlasting crush!!

"(Temptations are always there, especially in the workplace-

Temptation is that overused term which often misleads someone into thinking it's something sinful. Dark in nature. 
But how truthful this is? Imagine a marriage without temptation. A career without being tempted to work creatively. This misused word has several aspects latched...<<Read more)

She twisted her lips viewing that headline with the excerpt of some article popping up on the news website she was browsing. 

Scrolling down she Searched for the datasheet which was about to be shown at the presentation. 

Meanwhile, her phone blinked, notifying about the pile of unread messages! 
A smile adorned her seeing his beautiful name on the list as she typed her reply!!
"I thought someone is angry on me and wouldn't text back to me!! But yeah I know you are itching to say how you miss me!! Same here baby!!"
                                            8. 10 Pm

"Come back to earth honey!! 
Knowing how you wished to be left alone how can I miss this golden chance of pestering my Lil Miss Pouty?? 
Also, I can use these late replies of yours for the times when your highness would start accusing me of being busy!! Huh!!"
                                            8. 11 Pm


"Accha ji!! So my Mr. Pouty is free & that's why am blessed with so many messages. My poor soul thought you are missing me!! By the way, if you are so free lemme send you an article I just saw, do your timepass with that till I get back to you!! 
I love to be annoyed by you!!"
                                            8. 15 Pm

And she attached that random "Temptation" Article link. A joyful grin beamed upon her beautiful face; knowing how he must be pouting by their little teasing sessions as well as trying to hide his adorable smile as always!!

Finally, within a few minutes, her work came to an end. Sighing a relief for passing a fruitful busy day the first thing she did was unlocking her phone and dialing her ever so impatient man of dreams!!

"Haan ji...Baas abhi abhi nikli hoon, Aab sukun mill gaya aapko?? Aur...Dher sari baatein batani hain... 
Haan munne se toh kab ki baat karli, wo so bhi gaya hoga...
Lekin ye...Pata hain parking lot mein naa..." As she was walking towards the car, her chirping voice got interrupted by a whispering sound which invaded her eardrums vaguely!!

- N A N D I N I -

She immediately tried to turn around just to find out someone has muffled her mouth. 

"Chor mujhe...Kaminey..." She screamed her lungs out which roughly seemed inaudible!!

"N a n d u...Oho ho...Aise kaise dear Mrs. Aab toh haat aayi ho...Waise ye raat ke andhere mein tumhara chhuppan chhuppayi ki khel ki adat gayi nahin..." Wriggling furiously, she heard that man's creepy voice which made her stunned for a second but swiftly gathering all the numb senses she channeled her energy and cast a blow on his stomach!! 

"I said...Leave me you creep...How dare you bloody...Leave me...
Police???...Help...??
Bewda(Drunk) hain kiya...Pee ke aaya hain...!!" Rajdeep got stunned with a sudden sharpness hitting on his abdomen while heard Nandini raging like a tigress!! 

Even though late yet his enlarged orbs along with shocked neurons did surmise that was a blow channeled by her elbow.

Who would have known a timid docile woman like her can behave in such a way! 

Rajdeep was astonished, deeply confounded by the transformation he was seeing in Nandini. And he smiled with his eyebrows dancing momentarily while an agitated Nandini tried to run for her life with Rajdeep catching his favorite prey once again! 

With horror, she felt one of his arms locking her elbows this time and another one wrapping around her lips to muffle the future sound waves! More appalling when his hot breathing touched her neck, making the hair strands stand up in terror!

"Chup chap mere sath chalo babe...Iss sunsaan dark parking lot mein na koi deewana doctor na koi aashiq police aane wala tumhe bachane...! Aahhh..." He couldn't finish his whispering as an acute burning sensation like bee sting spread on his hand! 

"Areh...Ye toh aab kaat ti bhi hain...Not bad baby. Tum toh janglee billi ban gayi ho??? Kafi weight loss bhi kar liya wah, gym bim jaa rahi ho kiya??
Waise jana hi padega gym, kheer kaju sweets itnaaa banega ghar pe toh diabetes ki toh balle balle!!
Par main sacchi mein impressed hoon, itni shareef lag rahi ho inn kapdo mein lekin pehle se kayiii zayada hot bhi!!
Kuch din aapne aashiq ke sath kiya reh liya itni parivartan. Ya phir ye kisi aur aashiq ka ishq ka khumar hain? Kapde bhi itni shareef wali pehni hain??? Wah ji wah!!" An evil smirk flourished on Rajdeep's face as he saw Nandini running away while jerking his hand off which she has mercilessly bitten, "Oo...dear Mrs..
Ooh Nandini...Ruk jaa panchi...
Itna mat udh kahin pankh mein chot na lag jaye!! Kabse iss paal ke talah mein hoon dear Mrs. aur dekho toh sahi...Mili bhi toh tum aise...Par isbaar tum bach nahin paogi mujhse...
Aakhir paisa toh main leke rahoonga uss deewana doctor se. Dekhte hain tumhare ishq ki roohani jazbaat usey kitna mazboor karti hain, jab usey ye pata chalega ke uski panchi aab phir se  mere pinjre mein kayed hain!!"

It was dark. Almost 9 Pm. And she didn't know where she was headed. All she knew was pressing the accelerator hard and never looking back! 

A few horns buzzed at a time while she could see that creepy man's car was closing by. 

With shaking hands, she rummaged through the dashboard for her phone!!

Damn it where is it?? Did she drop it anyhow??

One of her heartbeats dropped instantaneously with nervousness peaking high!! What will she do now?? Where is the nearest police station??? She knew she is panicking and leading the situation towards a bad ending by jumbling up thoughts!!

Calm down. It's fine. Calm the heck down. The phone must be here. Let's search again!!

Clenching the steering wheel firmly, she closed her hazels for a split second and then took a deep inhalation. 

Next, she tried to remember again where might the phone be. Looking down towards her feet she felt something is shining like a mirror. That's it! 

That's her phone. Oh, good lord, she found it! 

With a lot of effort, she shakily bent down and clutched over that shining device which was sadly switched off due to some impact probably. 

And that was the moment where everything changed. Her trembling hands trying to switch on the phone while she looked at her passenger side only to find that exceedingly creepy face smiling towards her! 

Damn, he caught the pace of her car and is screaming something intangible! But good that the phone is turned on and the speed dial is straight on the action!

She saw her phone lit up before she could dial and a bitter smile shook her face while she received the call instead of calling for the police!! 
She felt that's the only voice at this moment of crisis what she needs to hear! Which can make her calm down and help to think a little straightly!!

Before she could even form any other thought or feel the cold aluminum of her phone against her earbuds a loud earth shattering horn numbed her senses!

Rajdeep again bumped the honks hard seeing her scared face. His tires screeched hard while he stamped an impact against her car, making her jump for the instance with the heavy jolt produced by Rajdeep's car!!

But surprising him, she didn't stop the car rather accelerated more. The next thing he saw her car going straight into a bowl of passing light! 

With darkness pouring into her eyes she felt her car's left side crashed right against a bus and everything got filled with chaos!!!!!


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10. 05 Pm at the night. 

"Dr. Mauli immediately report to room number 101.."

I heard the vigorous announcement buzzing for the second time. While throwing a warm smile towards my patient I had to drag my busy feet. It's a very chaotic situation!! We didn't even have the time to breathe!

"Oh great...Here she is..." I entered hearing our senior doctor's urgent voice.

"Yes...Sir...What is the urgency??" Preparing my stethoscope I gathered he was waiting for me, maybe there is some patient with pregnancy from that accident! 

"Dear...This accident case got a little bit complicated. The patient is unconscious and pregnant. It's a miracle that her child is still breathing. Since Dr. Riddhima is dealing another so now you have to take care of this. She seems to sink her pulse, you, Dr. Mehta and Dr. Aayush discuss what can be done now...
Have a thorough check-up and take all the measurements possible...
Good luck!!"

"Oh..ok??" Saying so I didn't ever anticipate how my whole world was going to spin within the next few seconds!!

Doctor Gupta was gone for minutes yet my eyes refused to blink, jaws clenched with numbness, pupils enlarged! 

A sense of freezing chillness traveled down my spine, numbing the sense receptors with the feeling of Deja Vu!!

I forgot to blink seeing the abnormality!

This can't be happening. It seemed like that same woman who inflicted an immeasurable amount of pain in my life, she is lying right there, unconscious, all helpless!! 

"Nandini??" Gasping all the emotional turmoil within, my lips escaped her name faintly!

Still trying to process that I am seeing her unconscious and vulnerable body in front of me. Also that it was indeed Nandini!

Yet again played by that sarcastic fate now I had to be the one, the savior of that entity's child. That same Nandini who painted malice in my peaceful life. 

A crooked smile of irony surfaced on my face, inadvertently. My eyes must've glimmered with unspoken waves of sorrow. 



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Edited by WaveTeal - 2018-09-18T20:56:08Z


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Posted: 2018-09-18T09:31:39Z
Chapter 2 Love, Myth??


My eyes must've glimmered with unspoken waves of sorrow.
 
And strangely I felt the tinge of sadness trying to overwhelm me seeing her lying so badly injured in front of me. She might have given me uncountable scars and I never wanted to cross my paths with her ever again. But meeting her like this was never anticipated in my worst nightmares. The feeling of a sharp tug in my heart seeing her fading away and fighting for life was trying to make my visions blurry!!!

I thought I did not love her nor hate her. I thought I could be indifferent. I believed I was stronger now!!!

I thought it didn't matter either She or Kunal existed or not!!

Yet surprisingly I couldn't be heartless. 
Yet every force within my existence told me to save that limp body of the biggest betrayer of my life!! 
I was relieved and saved by the doctor inside me! Or probably there is still some traces of latent love breathing in me???

"Mam...Mam...
Dr. Mauli...Here is the chart..." Breaking my trance the Nurse forwarded those pieces of papers and I rushed my racing eyes to the reports. 

Soon I got engrossed inside my contemplation!!

It has been almost countless months that I had remembered Nandu. Nope, Nandini.

I used to call her Nandu but that right has been snatched way earlier. A few years ago. 

I don't know why but she seemed a little strange to me. She has become quite slender and pale as well. It's maybe due to the blood loss. But certainly looked like she has lost a lot of weight from the last time I have seen her 6 months ago in a mall with Kunal!

As I was breathing heavily to calm myself down while reading the reports something caught my eye!!

In the reports, the patient's name is listed as unknown. Why is that so?? Where is Kunal?? 

I renamed her form. Looking back at her I noticed Nandini's heartbeat has grown pretty stable and the condition of the fetus in her womb too improved gradually. 
All of us passed the sigh of relief seeing the medication working fluidly! But still, the danger was not over completely!

After giving some more time towards observation, I came back to my cabin with, lost inside my pondering. 

It's been a few hours we were engrossed in treating Nandini but still no signs of Kunal!

No. He doesn't live with us anymore. He has moved from the house years ago. Happily living with the supposed "love" of his life!!

This accident that is being talked about, it has at least 24 passengers injured while Nandini being one of them. 

Luckily there was no casualty but it was marked as one of the bizarre accidents which had shaken the community badly. 

We heard, A car in high speed probably lost control in the highway and crashed against a bus which in the impact collided with another vehicle coming from the opposite side. Ironically, that bus which had taken the impact from the speeding car was headed towards Lucknow! Hence making me think Nandini was leaving for Lucknow!

But the question remains the same. Where is Kunal?? Was he with Nandini at the time of collision?? If not then why he is not here yet??

I checked for reassurance once I was done running tests on Nandini. But no trace of him yet!! Maybe he doesn't know yet!

Should I then shoot a call to Kunal?? 

I was staring into my phone's screen, hesitating a little!!

Then Bam!!

It was the time for all the heaviness lurking in the air to go away maybe!! Otherwise, I wouldn't bang with a certain entity who is from some other planet in my opinion!!

This is the third time I had to collide with that airhead yet crazily genius colleague of mine!!

Aayush!! Doctor Aayush Arneja. Our eccentric Punjabi originated physician skilled on bones and ligaments! You may call him our star orthopedic!! Yeah in easy terms haddio ka doctor lol!!

Three years senior to me in the profession but is there any seniority or juniority in friendship?? 

Oh, I would have despised this overrated word called friendship if not for a few extraordinary people still existing in my life!!

He is amongst those very few responsible people because of whom I still have some sort of faith into humanity!! And probably towards friendship as well, even though my history has tried every stone to kill the essence of friendship, companionship from my life!

Aayush is like that brightest star in the dark hollow night which makes you feel the morning is near! The warmth of the sun is not so far, hold your breath a little longer!! 

Umm, actually can I describe him?? I am probably the worst at doing it! So let me stick to a safe epithet as the "Goofiest talented doc! Short and simple!!

And I am??
I am Mauli, a gynecologist who is currently at the peak of her career!! You probably know a little bit of my story; can sometimes relate or sympathize with me! But this is the part what they didn't tell you!! Or I wouldn't show. 

So, for now, let's continue after my infamous collision with Mr. Aayush who instantly invoked a raised brow in my face!! 

"Hi, Mauli.. W...What's up..." God knows why he sounds so nervous at the starting of every conversation with me!!

"Kite...You wanna fly???" I scoffed sarcastically as he was holding my waist and sounded lost while looking into my eyes!!

"Kiyahhh!! Kaha...Kite...Yaha aur hospital mein?? Waise you are looking so cute in this blue outfit!!" He seriously didn't look at the ceiling after blabbering, did he!!

"Dr. Aayush seriously did aunty drop you or what!! Blue outfit?? This is our medical suit!! And I am just coming out from OT...Jaha aap bhi thhey 10 minutes pehle!!!?? Yaad aaya??" I rolled my eyes as he was back on with his tranced stares right at my face, still protectively holding me inside his arms!!

I tore my eyes away from him sensing his gazes turning into something I don't want to acknowledge! 

No, it was not something inappropriate rather I was more scared because even though I want to deny but his eyes seem to reflect the purest form of love!!!

And that is something I didn't any longer associate with!!!

"First thing first...Choro mujhe...
Aur tell me itni tufani speed mein kaha bhag rahe ho, aab kaun si bhuchal aa gaya?? Aayush?? Am talking to you?? Doctor Aaayussshh!!" I pitched high, slapped on his broad biceps, trying to land him back on earth from his lala imaginary world!!

"Oh haan...Sorry..Where were we??...I hope you are ok, lagi toh nahin naa...Kiya keh rahi thi tum??" Blinking away he straightened me and cutely regained his senses by looking at his pager!! 

"Mr. Haddi..I am fine...Don't worry we're still stuck in earth only!!
Now, Tell me...Itna pareshan kyun ho?? Did some patient ran away seeing your scary face or you again broke some limbs while treating??" I laughed and tried to ease the situation with my stupid jokes seeing his facial muscle tense away by my teasing!

I won't lie, the cordial relationship I share with Aayush currently is something I treasure due to its light nature. There has been so many stressful situations and these jokes which might seem lame at times but these help us to lift up the stressed surroundings. 

And being a doctor who faces extreme conditions every day it's very important for us for not letting the seriousness to get inside our head! To have that one certain people, on whom we can always rely upon is what makes the work easier!

"Miss Mauli...If your sky roaming has ended then come to dharti sweetheart...
This is serious for a change...
You know ek high profile case aaya hain in this accident fiasco??
There was someone who is the wife of my school buddy...
I am damn in a hurry for it..." Sensing his serious voice I cut through in the middle and blurted, "Oh...I am so sorry...Mar gayi kiya...That's...So sad...I don..." And I stopped noticing his glares while projecting an innocent face!

Slapping his forehead he murmured something looking up at the ceiling and continued, "Ehh what...Kuch bhi anap shanap bolti ho ladki... Let me finish first...
I was saying that...She has been taken off from our hospital and already boarded to go into London with Dr. Riddhima...
Just imagine waking up, going into OT, Ek chain ki saans bhi nahin liya and then getting bombarded with these responsibilities...
I didn't even have a cup of coffee...
Wahi paperwork ke chakkar mein am getting insane...Kamse kam daas chakkar laga chuka hoon, I think my glucose is down as well!!
Anyway, now am almost done so see you in an hour in the cafeteria GF!!" Could he be any more dramatic but I don't know why the heck I keep finding his blabbering cute!!

"Nautanki...Take some deep breath...It seems you need to be admitted into ICU...
and stop calling me that when we are on duty!! Also, You know I have not said yes!! Waise bhi sahi time pe shaadi kar liya hota tumne then ek teenage baby hota abhi tumhara, kamse kam aab toh bachpana choro!!" I frowned while my pager seemed to buzz.

"Mana kiya tha naa haddi mat bulana, especially on duty??" He repeated my words while frowning, "Uss din I was lucky that sister Lovly didn't hear otherwise it would have been my surname by now in the hospital!!
Aur mera proposal!! You didn't say no either!! Furthermore, what will I even do with your yes?? Injection maru yes or no ko?? 
Ye toh mere dill aur tumhare dill ka mamla hain naa, woh dono samajh lenge!! Tum naa free mein yun beech mein maat aao!! Haa.
Chalo bye aab!! Don't forget the coffee! Your would be doesn't like late comers!!"

"Kiya...Aayush...Pagal...Uff, why god why??" Needless to say how I get stupefied with red hues appearing on my cheeks at moments like this!! 

Looking at my either ways, I sincerely hoped nobody heard his infamous words!! And hell why even am smiling like an idiot remembering his childish demeanors!!

This specimen took almost a decade to propose me(he had a crush on me since our mbbs days as he was my senior). Behind his smiling face, there are also some deeply buried sorrows. Tasting the bitter aftereffect of a broken engagement, hardship with family, he had a rigid idea about relationships as well!!

Meeting me, coming to our hospital has compelled him to think otherwise, that's what he tells me!! He funnily accused me with big eyes and an accusatory tone of being the conspirator who led him to break his rigid promise to himself of never paying heed towards emotional bondages!!

So after denying, concealing his feeling for a long time he stopped running from himself and decided it was the right time. 

Anyway, let's get back to the funny part. When he proposed to me 3 months ago with that flat face of his in the prescription note, I just didn't know should I laugh cry or suggest him some medication!! Not to mention his almost undecipherable handwriting!!

Therefore instead of answering anything, I ended up prescribing him laxative!! Needless to say, I laughed the whole day seeing his face cutely huffed up!!

Deep inside I was getting petrified with the genuineness of his words!!! His mature and responsible side has been always appealing to me.

But above all one thing is conspicuous that we definitely have a very beautiful bonding which is why maybe Aayush is the only one who didn't let me feel miserable with the topic "love/ "commitment"

And that's why there was no need for an answer. It was a proposal done in the most goofiest way possible. 
But it was never a question rather a declaration from his side!! 
And I respect it utmostly! I can never judge anyone or their positive feelings for me even if there is something broken so deeply inside me! 

I know Aayush comprehends I am not the same Mauli he saw 10 years ago! 
He knows I have changed, got badly bruised, damaged, desperately attempted to fix and scars like these which changes you forever!! 

I evolved too. Into something better. At least I hope!

What I feel for Aayush is the term "Complicated... Extremely complicated..."

Gone are those days where I could feel excited like a teenager with the kind of warmth Aayush tries to splash in my life. 
I have grown beyond this superficial imaginary concept of marriage, true love, and blah blah blah!!

These are all myths to protect fake stability in the relationship. Manmade lies. A desperate effort to keep these fragile relationships between man and woman normal!! Yes normal!! Spread the lies and normalize them!! Start with that overused phrase "True love exists!!"

"A man would never break the trust of the woman he loves!!" 

"Love makes our lives beautiful"

"Love is the greatest happiness of life"

Oh dear, do I laugh when I read or hear exaggerated things like this???

Isn't it all the play of dopamine rather?? Okay, oxytocin and testosterone, estrogen and many many more other hormones, chemical reactions as well!!

Except for the reality about love is hideously ugly! 
Truth is that you can't fix broken trust. Truth is that if you trust that will eventually break! 

But I never fancied witnessing this scary side of truth! 
I wanted to be 'Normal'!! I aspired to believe fairy tales existed. I ached so badly to see the glimpse of true love and wanted to live that love a few years ago! 
I solicited to discern my perfect marriage has trust and respect in abundance if not a fairy tale itself. 

I never wanted to grow up to know about these manmade lies about love! I was felicitous in my own fantasy world.
If not immensely passionate love then true love with the purest fashion would have been enough for me!! Would have kept me satiated for ages!
But I forgot love can't be attained only by my efforts. It's a two-way lane!!

Do I sound pessimistic?? 
Shall the truth always be optimistic! Lately, I don't even feel like myself. The old me was gone with the wind, I've told myself.

And so now that I have perceived that 'upside down realm' of reality, I really don't know how to or what to name my developing emotions for Aayush. Nor I have the desire to suppress it!!

Maybe . . . .

My thought chains broke with a loud buzzing of the phone. 

'Dida calling' flashed on the screen. 

"Mauli...Beta..." She sounded awfully tensed and that's quite unusual!!

"Kiya huwa Dida...Sab theek toh hain?? Aap abhitak soyi nahin??" I tried to sound as calm as possible.

"Beta tu ghar kab aa rahi hain?? It's about Kunal...Tu ghar pe aa beta jaldi..." Needless to say my anticipation proved to right as Dida's anxious voice echoed in my senses!!



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Posted: 2018-09-18T11:01:54Z
Amazing start loved it continue soon.
Posted: 2018-09-18T20:29:07Z
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Do share your views!!! Smile
Posted: 2018-09-18T20:29:28Z
Originally posted by sirimiri


Amazing start loved it continue soon.

Thank you very much dear!! 
Posted: 2018-09-19T03:43:43Z
I love Ayush and mauli.
Continue soon please.

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