Adiya ff ek duje ke vaste part 3 posted on 5th oct

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Posted: 5 years ago

Intro:-
Aditya hooda: a renowed bussinessman in town.lives with his sister mahi and daughter tia.he hates girl after his wife pooja betray him with his friend yash
zoya:a orphen girl.lives with her foster parents.loves them a lot.she is a doctor.
Mahi:adi's sister,love her brother and want to back in his life.doing fasion design.
Tia:3 years old girl,loves her father a lot and want a mother.she start speaking.


Edited by Fariha2908 - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Nice character sketch
Mahi is Aditya's sister...nice twist 😆
Continue the story soon
Posted: 5 years ago

Part 1:-
At morning,
The sky is dark for the rain.the storm just be come.
A beautiful girl standing at the window and enjoying this view of nature.
She is our Zoya,who take a silp of coffee and smile and watch the atmoshphera.
Suddenly someone shouting on her name.she run down stair and shocked to see the view.
A man holding his hand on his chest and a women holding him.its Rakesh and rima.
Zoya's foster parents.after her parents died they took her responsibilities.
Zoya: papa kya hua aapko.
Rima:pata nahi mujse baat karte karte kya ho gaya innhe dill pe jor lag raha hain
Zoya:mujhe lagta hai ke yeh heart attack hain.
Ra:kya heart attack.
Zoya:jaldi inn he hospital le jaana hoga.
At road,
Zoya calling for taxi and vehicles but no use.she is suparb tensed.
A car coming from otherside..she place her hand for lift.
The car stop.
Zoya:please humare madat ke ji unhe heart attack hua hai hospital le jaana bohat jaruri hain
The guy is none other than is Aditya hooda
Aditya look at Rakesh and nod yes.
He help her to sit rakesh on car and went to hospital.
Atfer reaching hospital,
Zoya take Rakesh inside without saying anything.
Aditya also didnt stay there but left from there.
At hooda mansion,
Aditya reach at his house and see his sister waiting for him.
Mahi:bhai aap kaha the mein litne pareshan the.kaha the aap raat ko.
Aditya:tum jante ho main kaha tha.
Mahi get sad.
Aditya drinking water.
Mahi:kab tak aap dusre ladkiyun ke zindegi barbaat karte raho gye
Aditya get angry.and throw the glass of water on floor.
Aditya :main kisi ke zindegi barbaat nahi karta samjhe
Woh mean ladkiyan aapne marzi see mere saath aayte hai bed pe samjhe.
Mahi:mana ke aap ke saath galat hua hai paar aap aane saath kyu galat hone de rahe ho.
Aditya dont say anything and left forom there.as he enter in his room and sit on the bed.
He feel two tiny hand on his shoulder.he look back.and find his daughter tia.
Tia:papa aap kaha the..
Mela aaj bidthday hai aapk dhul toh nahi gaye.
Tia is 3 years old so she talk like this.
He hold her hand and shout on mahi  who come there.
Aditya:yeh ladki mere kamre mein kya kar rahe hain.
Le jao isse..
Mahi:tia beta tum mere room mrin jao main abhi aayte ho.
Tia leaves from there cryingly.
Mahi:bhai,aap tina ke saath yesa kyu karte ho woh aapke beti hain.
Aditya:magar woh aapne ma pooja ke bhi beti hai.jab bhi main usse dekhta ho mujhe ussme sheena kya dhoka yaad aayta hain.
Saying that Aditya left for wash room.
Precap: Aditya and Zoya 2nd meet.
Guys give comments lots

Edited by Fariha2908 - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Amazing chapter 👏
Arjun helped take Zoya's father to the hospital. He is a womanizer whoa 😲
He is so rude to his daughter...poor her 😭
Is his wife Sheena or Pooja? I'm confused
Update soon

Posted: 5 years ago
Part 2:-

Tia is crying on mahi's lap.maahi tries to console her.
Tia:papa mujhe humesha datte kyu hain.mujse woh bilkul pyaar nahi karte.

Mahi:nahi beta..papa tumse bohat pyaar karte ho aur kyu na kare tum ho he itne pyaari.
Tia:jooth bol rahe ho aap na.
Mahi:nahi..
Mahi hug tia and composed her.
At zoya's,
Zoya:thank god ke papa ko heart attack nahi aaya varna main toh darr he gaye the.
Rima:bala ho woh ladke kya jis ne hume lift de.varna kya hota.
Zoya:haan ma sahi kaha maine toh unhe thik se thanks bhi nahi bo paye.
(Jald mauka mull gaye gya)
At aditya's office,
Adi's pa come to him.
Pa:sir hum jo high way project bana chate the gooda village se woh band ho gaya hain.gaonwale ne rok ke rakha hain.
Adi:tum ek kaam karo saare tayari kar lo.hum aajhe yahan jaayenge.
Pa:ok sir.
At zoya's,
Ziya get a fax and get happy.she start dancing in happiness.rima come there.
Rima:are bhai zoya kya hua bohat kush lag rahe ho.
Zoya:ma..hume finally gooda gaon mein medical camp karne ki premission mill gaye aaj he nikal na hoga.aur main uss meinlead karne wale hoon.
Rima:arre wah many many congrats.dekh na bohat jald mere ziya bohat bade doctor bane gye.
Waise konsa goan kya naam baataya.
Zoya:gooda..
Rima:nahi nahi tumhe yahan jaane ke koi jarurat nahi hai.
Zoya:kyu abhi toh aap bohat kush lag rahe the.
Rima:kyu ki mujhe paat nahi tha tum kaha gya rahe hoon.
Main sunna hai ke wahan ke log bihat tradition maante hai.aur purane jamane ke soch rakhte hain.
Kuch hua toh.
Zoya:woh maa mujhe unke soch ko leke kya lena dena mujhe toh bas wahan aapne kaam ke liye jaana hain.
Aur dekh na acha se ho bhi gaye gya
Zoya and aditya photo  photo are shown.they are life going to cahnge in this trip but what will happen.
Precap:2nd meeting.

Posted: 5 years ago
Storyline seems interesting, keep updating dear :)
Posted: 5 years ago

Part 3:-
Adi and zoya sitting on adi's car.adi is driving and zoya in her thought.
Adi look at her once then cpnsontart his driving.
How their life get in 2 days.the 2 unknow person person become what...
Flashblack,

At village,
Zoya and her team set her medical camp well and her work going on well.and here aditya is also same village near the camp.
He is open bridge but villagers dont agree.adi trying to understand them that its for their good.
But no succeed.
At cottage,
Adi to his pa.
Adi:aman,kya hai yeh sab yeh log toh raazi he nahi hote hai.
Suddenly he get dazed.aman hold him.
Aman:sir aap thik ho.
Adi:haan.
Aman check adi
Aman:oh my god sir,aap ko toh bohat bukhar hai.main doctor bulata ho.
Bmadi:nahi nahi mujhe village doctor pe koi barosha nahi hain.
Aman:nahi sir pas mein city se medical team aaye hoi hain medical camp ke liye.
Hum yahan se laa aayte hain.
Aman leaves.


Doctor come with aman who is none other than is zoya.
Zoya see adi lie on bed.she remember he is the same person who helped her on the day.
Zoya treat adi happily.
Zoya:mr hooda yeh injection dene ke baad aap kafi haad tak thik ho
jayenge.
Adi:kya main aapko jaanta ho.
Zoya:haan uss din aapne mere aur mere papa ke madat ke thi.
Yaad hain.
Thanks ke aapne uss din humare madat ke
Adi remember.
Adi:haan yaad aaya.
Zoya:yeh injection thoda drugy hain aapko bohat neend aaye gye aap aram se soo gaye abhi.
Abhi mein chalte ho.
Zoya was leaving when adi hold her hand.
Zoya turn and look on.
Adi stand up difficultly.he look at zoya and hug her tightly.
Zoya get shocked.
Precap:unexpected.


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