First...I'm so sorry for being a couple of months late. But I finally got the time to read this story again. So in the next 2 days, I will comment about every part that I missed.
Chapter 14
Such an amazing update π
I was wondering how Adi and Zoya will meet again once they reach Mumbai. But I'm glad that Adi invited Zoya to his house knowing that she is a stranger to the city.
So the Hooda family is finally introduced. And it seems that Anjana is a positive character while Harsh still has that tiff going on with Adi.
Zoya dear...eavesdropping is a bad habit. But I'm glad you did so because now we have a little peek into Adi's past. π
It's really heartbreaking that Harsh seems to always underestimate and criticize Adi and taunt Anjana.
Aditya is really smart. He knows how to get the truth out without even trying much.
So Yash's truth is finally out π‘ And he had the audacity to try and make excuses of the situation. Just a friend? Yeah sure.
Dang it. I was truly rooting for Pooja to be the girl he was cheating on Zoya with. π
Oh no...Zoya don't cry for that guy. He doesn't deserve it. π
You know this was my favourite chapter until now because there was a big revelation for Zoya and little more info about Aditya's life.
My favourite part of this chapter was that Aditya was so concerned and making all these efforts for a woman he met only a couple weeks ago. I guess he truly knows how to value friendship. π
I love how you've written this very simply. Every scene went well with the flow and that's the specialty of your writing. βοΈ
Thanks a lot for the PM