😆Heyaaa!!!! I read 2 updates back to back... and i am sorry I couldnt reply to the pm either... Had been busy... but but but finally today got the time! Yaiyaaay!😃😃
Chapter 12 and 13!!! WOW!!!👏👏 Extremely well written! I always say that I love the pace with which you are progressing the story. It doesnt feel glitchy or anything. Besides, the plot keeps getting more and more interesting! I am actually hooked to your story and I have a small suggestion to make.😳 You can turn it into a standalone story too by making some small changes in the characters etc.later. You can use this same plot and elaborate this story into a full fledge novel or novella in its own skin! 😳😳 Probably you will laugh off at my juvenile suggestion, but I just had to say it. This story is THAT brilliant! 😊👏⭐️
So yash has been lying!😛 What else could you expect from that scumbag? However, it would be too cliche if he turns out to be the man with whom Pooja was making out when Aditya caught them! 😃😃 I would actually love to see him hiding something else and not cheating on Zoya... and when all her doubts get cleared up and Yash has been proven innocent, and when Aditya leaves Zoya with a broken heart and unsaid love, THEN I want Zoya to start missing him... and I want her to find out that although she is Yash's girl friend, yet she has fallen for Aditya! 😆😆
Okay okay.. I know this is crazy.. Lol..😃 So I should stop bombarding you with more of my nonsense... 😆😆
Before signing off, I have to say, do update the next chapter soon please! And do pm me... 😃
Lots of love to you...😊
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