Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

mannet ss: hidden. pt1 pg6 /tsr pg14

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prologue



geet cut phone angrily 
G-hell!

here my dad is ready to give my bali and there he is not even picking up my call. 
MAAN SINGH KHURANA once i see u na i'll cut u into pieces 


geet said while throwing phone when her sister Rajji rush inside her room 

R- di bad news 
ladke vale aa ghe 
maa is calling u downstairs 

G- i'm not coming 
i told u before 


when rano come in her room being helpless 
Ra- geet if u don't want me dead then plz come ur dad too coming back . 

a shiver ran down her spine . she knew it well if she don't go downstairs then surely her maa is in big trouble 


geet agreed unwilingly 

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mohinder smile widely as soon he see geet coming downstairs 

mo- here she is
my daughter geet 


geet look downstairs clenching her fist . she was about to yell at him when she froze looking at behind her dad 
not the guest 
driver behind her dad 
MAANSINGH KHURANA
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so how is it?

if i continued then it is gonna solaly CONTINUED ON IF :)

BUT I WON'T SEND PM FOR THIS ONE

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the story belong to me only! 

any problem do pm me

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Posted: 5 years ago

INDEX



character sketch - pg4

CHAPTER 1 PG6
Edited by Ramjanki - 5 years ago
nishamna thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice prologue. Looking forward to reading update 
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hooo new wala
Congo shongo
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Congrats for the new story👏
Nice prologue
Will be waiting for the update
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice prologue it seems interesting  will be waiting 
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wow another story! congrats on the new SS!! superb prologue! 

already waiting for updates and character sketch! 



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Posted: 5 years ago
Very nice starting. Very good one. Thanks for the new story. Please continue.
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congrats for new story

very nice prolouge 
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Congrats on new story!!!
Kya woh ladka who came to see Geet is Maan?