Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 72


Awesome Update 


Maan and Geet have to secretly meet in office 

so that Akhil does not find out 

Akhil making Geet feed him while Maan watches

but it was so cute yet seeing Maan's possessive side was awesome

as he kisses Geet's fingers

Geet is she on her way to see Maan

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Posted: 3 years ago

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey read all parts in one go.. really a superb story dear... I'm dying here to read more...i think it's good that Akhil did all these things...so when maan breaks his bones geet won't mind... update soon eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey I caught up with the story after really long and I loved it!!!!

How are you doing? How is the situation in NJ now??? Hope you’re keeping safe!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: B1h2u3v4i5

Hey read all parts in one go.. really a superb story dear... I'm dying here to read more...i think it's good that Akhil did all these things...so when maan breaks his bones geet won't mind... update soon eagerly waiting...


Thanks dear, welcome to the thread. I am so glad that you liked the story. Do add the topic to your watch list to never miss an update

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: anmirza

Hey I caught up with the story after really long and I loved it!!!!

How are you doing? How is the situation in NJ now??? Hope you’re keeping safe!!!


Thanks for catching up with the story. Now dont disappear...lol....coz we all miss you...

I am ok. Thinks are bad here but have got used to being home. How's everything on your side? Stay safe

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Posted: 3 years ago

 

Part 73

 

Cab driver- Par wo toh highway ke beech mein hai,madam

 

Geet- Haan wahin jaana hai

 

Cab driver is puzzled

 

Geet- Aap chaalaaiye please. Late ho raha hai

 

Cab driver stops at middle of the deserted highway

 

Geet gets down

 

She walks a few steps to find Maan waiting for her on his bike

 

She hops on the bike as he zooms off with her

 

They reach Maan’s house

 

She gets in as comfortable as it is her own house

 

G-Pata hai ghar mein pehli baat jhooth bolke aayi hoon main

 

He smiles

 

M-Acha? Kya kaha ghar pe?

 

G-kaha ki main apni friend Manneeta se milne jaa rahi hoon

 

He laughs

 

G-Manneeta!

 

She laughs pulling Maan’s cheek

 

Maan gets up embarrassed

 

M- Stop stop. Let me go and check the food. It will get burnt


She is roaming around the house as Maan is in the kitchen

 

She walks to his workstation thinking –‘ki yeh Maan weekend mein bhi kaam kar raha hai’

 

She goes to close his laptop

 

She notices few confidential documents and information open in his laptop

 

Company’s whole balance sheet is there

 

Geet thinks, Maan ke paas ye sab information…kyun…aur kaise

 

But brushes off thinking Akhil ne koi kaam diya hoga

 

They spend the day hand in hand snuggling into each other

 

Shaam hoti hai

 

G- Late ho raha hai. Ab mujhe jaana hoga warna mamma ko lagega itni der kahan gai main

 

M- Tum aayi bhi toh late thi

 

G-Main late nahi aayi. Tumhare yahan pohonchne mein hi 2 ghanta lag jaata hai

 

M-Hmm. Chalo I will drop you

 

G- No, I will go. Tum jaoge 2 ghanta, aaoge 2 ghanta

 

M-Toh kya hua? I will get to spend more time with you

 

She blushes

 

G- You are not real, right?

 

Maan frowns

 

G-itna acha koi ho hi nahi sakta

 

He looks into her eyes

 

M-Its you. You make me a better man, Geet.

 

Her heart instantly melts into a puddle

 

She mounts his bike as he drives

 

She is enjoying the cool pleasant breeze on her face while holding onto him firmly

 

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He drops her few yards away from her home so nobody can see her

 

She gives him a quick peck on the check and happily runs into her house

 

She enters the house seeing Akhil with her family

 

He runs to her

 

A-Kahan thi tum itni der se, Geet?

 

She looks down

 

G- Friend ke yahan

 

A-Kaunsi friend? Aur itni der kaise lag gai

 

G- Wo…usko…tum nahi jaante

 

A-Aise tumhari kaunsi friend hai jisse main nahi jaanta?

 

She sighs

 

G-Tumhe koi kaam tha?

 

A-Of course! Mera closet kaun saaf karega? It’s a mess! Aur meri dry-cleaning bhi toh laani hai

 

She nods

 

G-Aaj main bohot thak gai hoon. Kal kar doongi

 

A-No! How can you say that? You have to do it!

 

G-Maine kaha naa Akhil, kal kar doongi

 

A-Tum subah se bahar thi! Its your responsibility!Mujhe subah tak ye chahiye

 

She looks at Akhil and walks away into her room leaving Akhil and her whole family gasping


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Sorry for late update. I promise I will try and be regular. Just keep me motivated with your wonderful comments. That's the lifeline of the story. That's what inspires me to write. Thank you for your patience


Dont forget to add this topic to your watch list to never miss an update


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I also need a suggestion . would you like me to move my stories to wattapad or you prefer IF? Let me know

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Geet accidentally going through Maans laptop may stir something in the future I just hope its not going to create any misunderstandings.  Love how Geet told AKhil off. e can sit and stare at his dirty closet lol

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kkiran

Geet accidentally going through Maans laptop may stir something in the future I just hope its not going to create any misunderstandings.  Love how Geet told AKhil off. e can sit and stare at his dirty closet lol


True, that might raise questions in Geet's back of the mind. I loved the line- e can sit and stare at his dirty closet lol. She indirectly did it. I also recall this quote in this situation since I see so much change in Geet: "It doesnt matter what's in front of her, as long as she knows who's behind her"

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Posted: 3 years ago

Akhil is not a normal human being. How can he treat someone like that !