Posted: 5 years ago
Hey friends

i write this OS for Geet 8th Anniversary Celebration - thread link 
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Around 9 PM, in small town Amritsar at bus stop, one Man sitting of Roadways Bus for going to Delhi, in this period, one bike come and stop near bus stop, one guy removed helmet and handover to another guy, he realized he is not any guy but girl, her long hairs, her pink lips, her side face, he can see from that side, that Man shouted on her, she turn face to my side, wipe the tears from back hand... Her beautiful eyes now fill with tears... he not able hear what both talking but he feeling bad for that girl , she take  bag from him and silently take steps towards bus Stop, that guy left her here alone...

His eyes not want to miss her expressions, he not getting why his heart not liking tears in her eyes , she feel someone gaze upon self, she look towards him, he look down not want meet eyes with her... he don't want she get to know he staring her... He is feeling catch...

Bus come and both take steps in bus, she take window seat and placed bag on another seat, he roam in full bus, only two seats are emptied, first occupied by her bag and another man sleeping not ready to take him space, in end he come back to her seat and pick her bag placed on floor and sit beside her...

In mid he start stealing glances of her face, she so much lost in today event, how her one year relation break...few more tears slipped from her eyes... he feel bad for her.. He want to distract her mind...

Excuse me

.

What

.

Can you close the window, I feeling little cold?

.

She not move and again lost in own miseries... he stand and close the window, his hand touched her hand... she take hand back and he also come and sit beside her...

.

She close the eyes and lost in past hour incident

.

Only for him, she wear tight fitted jeans, sort top with black jacket, all things going good with him, she lost in his arms, he hold her more close and try to kiss him... she is perfect match for her, but she feeling uncomfortable, she push him...

What you have problem geet

Whenever I try to come closer

You push me

Karan I specially come here for you

I get ready for you

But I not feel good

I mean

.

Just shut up

You love me right

.

Yes

But

.

Then what you have problem

I think you are not perfect for me

.

Please karan listen me once

.

I can't spend my life with abnormal girl

Who can't kiss own boyfriend

Loser

.

She opened the eyes and feel same stranger gaze, she wipes the tears and said own self

Am normal

Geet you are normal

.

He thinks what she mummers, why she holding fingers tightly

I hope she is fine

.

He placed hand on her shoulder, she opens the eyes and next moment her lips touched his cheeks... he placed palm on cheek and get sweet shock in own life, first time one stranger girl kissed him...he blushed little...

Geet : am normal

Dekha tumne

I kissed you

.

Karan ko lagta hai am abnormal

Mein kiss nhi kr sakti

Dekho now I kiss you

.

Let me call him

I tell him I kissed one stranger

.

Few seconds ago he flying in sweet world sudden boy name in her life makes him restless; he held her hand and said tumhe call nhi krna chaiye

Geet : tum hote kaun ho

.

Whi stranger jisse tumne kuch minutes phle kiss kiya

.

Geet : dekho mujhe call krne do

.

He is not right for you

.

Geet : oh hello

He is my perfect match

He matching with my check list

She takes out one book from bag and showed him

He read "HOW TO FIND HE IS PERFECT MATCH FOR YOU

Maan : ye sb book na bakwas hoti hai

Tum in sb cheezo me believe krti hu

Geet : I don't getting why I talking with you

Maan : tum ladkiyo ka na yhi problem hai

Kuch khdo

Toh mooh fela ke baith jaati hai

.

Geet : you

.

Conductor : bus going stop here for 15 minutes

Kissi ko kuch khana pina hai toh samaan lele

.

Maan : chalo niche chalte hai

Geet : am not going down

Maan : bhookha rehna hai pure raste

Jaha tak mujhe lagta hai

Due to fight you not eat anything

Geet : how you know

Maan : because I use brain

Not follow books like you

Geet give him glare and come down with small bag...

     *********

Maan : it's tasty

Geet : hmm

Maan : so how you meet with Karan

Geet : my online friend

We regularly meeting from past two years

Not getting suddenly what happen to him

He never behave like this before

Then suddenly he start coming closer

I not like all this

I mean

Maan : relax I understand

Waise what your dream

Geet : hmm

Nothing

Actually my dad has so much money

So I never feel to think about that topic

You

Maan : I want to open a Hotel

Mera khud ka Hotel

Geet : now you are studying

Maan : yes

Doing MBA in HR & Marketing

And you

Geet : am in final year of BA

But not interested in study

I like to spend time with friends

Outing

Movie

Shopping

.

Waise all the best

Maan : thanks

          ***********

Bus reached to delhi , and while journey both casually share about school days...

Geet : so

Maan : time come to say bye each other

Geet : wish you all the best for your dream

I wish for you, you get success in your project

Maan : thanks

Bye

Geet : bye

        ***************

(Two unknown people share some dreams, secrets, what you feel, now what happen next...know soon)

After one year

Today is her boyfriend birthday, she giving party in one of famous Hotel in Delhi...

Thank you baby for this surprise

He try to kiss on her cheek, she make some distance , he feel awkward due to her sudden withdrawal, he give her glare, she just force the smile on her lips...

.

He held her hand and make excuse for some privacy, he take her to corner...

What is all this Geet

Geet : Aman am sorry

I know you not like my withdrawal

Par mujhe ye sb nhi pasand

He held her hand tightly and pressed little

What you like

Make me ashamed in front of all

She tries to touch his cheek; he pushes her hand and left inside...

Few tears slipped from her eyes, why he like that, he and she is perfect match as per horoscope then why this fight between us...she wipes tears hurriedly and come inside...

.

.

In mid of party, her one of close friend Priya held her hand and asked

Sb thik toh hai na

Geet nodded

Priya : this time too you going pay all expense

Am right

Geet : he is my boyfriend

And I arrange this surprise for him

And I have money

I mean my dad can afford this then why not

Priya : why he never take out single penny from own purse

Geet : common priya

Why you always make this issue

Priya : you never going understand...

.

One by one all left ...geet also left outside then she realized, she forget the purse inside...

Geet : aman you go

Mera purse rh gya

Bs 5 minute me aayi

Aman : ok

      **********

When she come inside , she seen one man clearing the table, she pick the purse and going left, but his side view make her turn, this man only looking down, she bend little , make him lift the eyes...

Tum

Oh god

She feel so much happiness seen him after so long time, she hugged him by wrapping arms around his neck... he take step back make her frown...

Ye tum kya kr rhi ho

.

Geet : that's mean mein tumhe yaad hu aaj bhi

He nodded

Geet : you know am here

He nodded again

Geet : then why you not come to meet me

.

Mein kaise

Am here only a servant or you can say one of waitress

Geet : common Maan

Maan : aapko jaana chaiye

She held his hand and asked can we meet again

Maan : no

Geet : why you so much tuff or hard like Coconut

Maan : mein toh humesha se asa hi hu

I just want to say one thing

Change your choices

Geet : you pointing to AMAN

Maan : who am I

Geet : yaar tum na

Bhut ajeeb ho

Maan : mujhe kaam krna hai

Nhi toh he cut my pay

So please go

Geet : ok

Ok

Raat ko milte hai

Maan : mein raat ko yaha Cleaning ka job krta hu

Geet : can I come

Maan :

Geet : common us waqt toh Manager nhi honga

You going to clean alone this

He nodded.

           *********

At night, he cleans one by one all things, and she roaming behind him...

Maan : can't you sit

Geet : maan am just come here to talk with you

And you giving more importance than me that stupid work

Maan : this is stupid for you

Not for me

This work gives me MONEY for survival here

You never going understand this

Because you have your dad hard work money for wasting in stupid parties

She feels bad to hear this from him...

He not likes her sad face, he realized what he did, he is just angry on her, why she not take life seriously but then realized he have no right on her...

Maan : look

Am sorry

Mujhe tumhe ye sb nhi kehna chaiye tha

And I have no right to pin point your mistakes

Geet : it's ok

We are friends

Right

You can scold me

But not so much loud

Mujhe dra diya

Uff

Idiot

.

Mera chodo

Apna batao

Maan : kya batayu mein

Geet : tumhare dream ka kya huya

Maan : you remember

Geet : yes

How can I forget?

Maan : waiting for results

And doing this job

Geet : why job

Maan : sit

.

Both sited on chairs

Maan : first thing this job giving me experience in Hotel Line

Second I getting money for living here

Geet : your dad also give money

Maan : geet I belong to middle class

I can't put all burden of my expense on my father shoulder

And my sister is younger and her study expense, marriage expense

.

You never going understand this

So leave that topic

.

She sadly smiled and said you think

I not understand Maan

Tum shi ho apni jagah

I have only mine

When I try to ask anything

Whenever I need time

My dad gives me money

And said your wish get fulfilled with this

He held her hand and said don't be sad

You not look good when you sad

I like your smile

She smiled to hear his words...

Maan : I think

Tumhe ab jaana chaiye

Geet : itni jaldi

Maan : I have to go Home and caught some sleep

Fir subh aake kaam bhi toh krna hai

Geet : can I drop you

He wants to deny but at end he nodded...

          *********

Maan : thanks

Bye

Geet : andher tak nhi bulayonge

Maan laugh and said geet where you lost

Its boy's hostel

You can't come inside

Geet : I just lost in your stories

His laugh stopped and said I think ab tumhe apne ghar jaana chaiye

Geet : hmm

When we going meet next

Maan : never

Geet : asa kyun

Tum khi jaa rhe ho

Maan : Geet why you want to meet me

Just think

And second point what your boyfriend feel about this

Geet : why he have any problem

You are my friend

Maan : geet our status is different

So we ending this friendship here

Geet : Maan

Maan : geet please

She nodded and asked can we exchange the number

When you get time

Just drop me small message

He want deny but her eyes carrying expectations, he can't say NO to her... he nodded...

                ***********

One more years Passed

She getting ready for engagement , few month back both meet in one party, after dating two month , he proposed her to Marriage... he is handsome guy, good package , working in one of MNC... she not able to say NO to her... He is sweet like Maan... Why am thinking about him ... but when he go out from my mind... she sadly smiled, remember how she met with him and that kiss...  Those memories still freshen in her mind...

In past one year , in starting month she just wait of his one message... but he never drop any message, some time she try to send message but left unsend... She not getting why his presence give happiness  to me...in one month She break up with AMAN...then she met with Raj... She likes his company...

.

She feels someone pressed her shoulder...

Raj tum yaha kya kr rhe ho

Kissi ne dekh liya toh

She stand from Stool and asked why you come here

Raj : just want to see my bride

Geet : Raj I want to tell you something

I mean about someone

He nodded

Geet : I met with one guy and my first kiss happen with him

He take step back and shouted

You always push me and said no Raj

Marriage se  phle nhi

And now you kissing another guy behind my back

Geet : raj it's not like that

Wo tumse phle tha

Raj : so what

Kitno ko kiss kiya hai tumne

Don't tell me you slept too

.

She pushed him and said get out

Koi engagement nhi hongi

Raj : sorry I reacted little over

Jaan you know na am just possessive for you

Geet : don't

If you not trust me enough

Then no relation going work between us

Raj : geet you can't do this now

He held her arm tightly and said you going marry with me

At down all guests waiting for us

Let's go

Geet : am not going anywhere

Koi engagement nhi hongi

That final

Raj : you

She slapped him hard and said you are also in relationship with someone before dating me

I never asked what relation you both share

Today I just share one truth of my life

And you just blame me

Why you are behind me

Now am feeling Priya said right

You are like another man

Who behind my dad money

And I don't want this type person in my life

.

I confessed one more thing today

I already denied to taking any single penny from this property after marriage

I already signed all papers and give to trust

Raj : are you gone mad

How can you do this

Geet : I can

.

Raj : tum kya ye engagement nhi karongi

Mujhe nhi krni tumse

  He left, she fall down on knees and cried...

             ************

Two months passed

Maan you can't go like that

Just once call her

Maan : kya kahu usse

I reject first top offer of job for my dream project

Then no one ready to finance my project

Yaar me haar gya

Am going back to Chandigarh to my family

Waha ek job ke liye apply kr diya hai maine

Arjun she living in fantasy world

Uske liye sb alag hai

She is princess

And am just

.

Mein usse kuch nhi de sakta

Arjun : you can give her LOVE

Maan : LOVE

She not going live happy with me

Arjun : Maan jaane se phle ek baar mil toh le

Maan : nhi arjun

When we meet first time, I fall to see her, she is cute and innocent... full of lives... her cute-cute logic... but we not perfect ... and I not match with her check list too...he laugh to remember how she showing the book and her so called logic for relation...

Arjun : Maan you love her

Then how can you leave her like that

Maan : Arjun please

He picks the bag and left...

           **********

Priya : what happen to you geet

Nowadays you not come in any party

And why you caged own self in home

Raj is just a idiot

You did right

So come with me

Geet : nhi priya

Tu shi thi

Maan shit ha

Am only wrong

Mein kuch nhi smjhti

Mein toh ye tak nhi smjh paayi mein kyun maan se milna chahti hu baar-baar

Do mulaqat

Priya bs DO

Usne dil pe asi chap chodi

Mein unki kahi baato ko

Usko ek pal na bula saki

.

I try to forget his words that kiss ... I not talked Karan because he stopped me... then I start dating Aman, try to adjust or come back to my old lifestyle... I thinking I going on right track... then I bumped to him.. I just feel true happiness around him...I want his friendship but he not given me that...

Kyun usne mujhe apni dosti tak nhi di

Kya mein itni buri hu uski nighao me

Kasie usse smjhayu me Priya

Mein nhi jaanti ye sb

I mean how relation handles

Mere pass toh relation ke naam pe bs DAD hai

Yes when I small, mom take me to some relatives but after mom death all thing lost...

Maan mujhe meri maa ki yaad bhut dilata hai priya

.

Priya wipes her tears and said geet if not taking first step

He pushing you

You can take first step

You go and confessed own love for him

.

Geet : usne jb mujhe dosti nhi di

Wo pyaar kaise de denga mujhe priya

.

When he denied for friendship, I just feel I lost him; I try hard taking his number... I waiting each moment ... just one message... I not able to concentrate relation with aman , we just parted... At that moment too, I not realized this is love...

Then raj come, his sweet nature similar with maan... You thinking

Jitna maine maan ko leke bataya

Wo sweet kaise huya

.

My heart just feels this

.

I think Raj feel this gap

But he proved me wrong

And that two month, I fight hard to make own self confess this is LOVE

.

 I know he

.

Her phone buzzed and hears _____________

.

Where you running geet

Geet : I tell  you later

First I need to go and give him one slap

        She run out and priya laughed, she can guess it's related to maan...

        ***********

Maan standing on bus stand, and feel someone turned him and give him slap...

He placed hand own cheek and look her angry eyes...

Maan : how dare you.

.

Just shut up Maan

How can you go like that?

You not feel once

You need to inform me

.

She held his collar and asked from past one year two months

I just waiting your one message

And you

She pushed him and asked why you doing this with me

Why you take promise from me while giving your number

I never can call you

Only you going decide

.

After that I nodded

And in this you give me promise

Whenever you going out from Delhi for long period you going meet with me

Then why

You not inform me

 

Maan : mein bs chote se kaam ke liye jaara tha

Geet : you liar

You going left me

I know

He tries to hold her hand and she take step back and said I know

Am not perfect like you

Am just silly in your eyes

But I like you

.

Like you is small word

I

.

He placed finger on her lips and said nhi geet

I can't hear your words

She removed his finger and said you have to listen

What my heart feels for you

Maan : I can't

Geet : am not giving you any choice today

.

She cupped his face and lightly kissed on his lips...

             ************

Both sitting in park holding each other hand...

Maan : geet you can think once again

Geet : your words not going change my decision

I love you

And now I know you love me too

Then what you have problem

Maan : I  have no job

My dream spoiled everything

Geet : I don't care

Aaj nhi hai na

Kal hongi

Simple

If you want I can ask from dad

He can help you

Maan : no

Geet : ok

Why you getting angry

I just trying to help you

.

My angry bird

Maan : geet

How you get to know

Am leaving

Geet : wo huya ye

        ***********

Hello

Hey am arjun

Am friend of Maan

He love you so much

Now you thinking from where I get your number

I stole from his mobile

I try my best to make him understand

But he not ready to understand anything

He feels he is not perfect for you

He belong to middle class

Can fulfill your wishes

You listening

Hello miss

Geet : yes

She cut the call

        **********

Maan : that idiot person

Geet : he is smart

You are idiot

You going without confessing own feeling for me

.

Dekho abhi bhi maine I love you kaha

Tum issi janam me kehne wale ho

Yaha angle janam me

Maan : I love you geet

I really love you

But

Geet : please leave your but

Maan : geet I have to go

Tomorrow is my interview

Geet : all the best

And now you can go

But you have to talk with your parents soon

Plus now I can call you whenever want

Maan : yes boss

               ***********

 


Posted: 5 years ago
can I cry in happiness ...you written happy wala os
what can we wish more
thank you priya ji
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by Keepdreaming


can I cry in happiness ...you written happy wala os
what can we wish more
thank you priya ji

yes u can cry in happiness

please do it ðŸ˜‰
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by priya_21




yes u can cry in happiness

please do it😉

you are sooo talented ..u can even make me cry with your happy story 😆
Posted: 5 years ago
loved reading again
very beautiful story
Posted: 5 years ago
lovely one
the defination of perfect thing can't define by booking words
her dream to date perfect guy was never so perfect and finally she understand what the word perfect mean
Posted: 5 years ago
Some are just made for each other...
Posted: 5 years ago
thanks for posting! 

superb OS! well written! they are certainly perfect for each other! 


Posted: 5 years ago
hi
read it in anniversary thread
lovely story
geet is stupid yet innocent ..
list leke thodi Na bf dhoonda jaa sakta hai
geet's all bf was selfish idiots ..
I should thanks maan's friend .. because of him geet got maan.. otherwise maan wouldn't have say I love u to her ever ..
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by Keepdreaming



you are sooo talented ..u can even make me cry with your happy story 😆

thank u so much

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