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Thread 1 Maaneet FF : "GULLAM" (thread 2 pg 1)

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Posted: 5 years ago

Gullam

What happens when a gullam(slave) marry his owner's daughter ????

Introduction
maan Singh Khurana ...age 28 ...MD of Khurana construction ...great business man... eligible bachelor...but there's a one secret about him that no one knows that he's a gullam...yes he's a gullam a slave ... everyone in the corporate world is scared with his one look but he's scared of his maalik his owner his master Mohinder handa... everyone thinks that he live in his big mansion in Delhi that his home is in Delhi ...No...only Monday to Friday he lives in Delhi in his big mansion but every weekend he goes back to the place where he belongs ...at his master feet with the noose around his neck and the leash in his master's hand yes that's his life ...he's a gullam
Geet Handa - only daughter or heiress of mohinder handa...20...princess of her bauji... recently graduated...and her father is looking for a suitable groom for her...the one who can be "joru ka gullam" yes she love to rule other people and hate taking orders even from her parents .
Mohinder Handa - owner of Bheravgarh(imaginary name) ...a small village in U.P... he's like a king of Bheravgarh...and master of his gullam maan
Savitri Devi Khurana - maan's dadima...she only have maan her grandson on the Name of famiy...loves him a lot but years back because of some reason she sacrificed her grandson to the cruel world of slavery...now which she regrets and curse herself for her that mistake.

Others character will reveled when the story start 


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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice starting & different concept 
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
kafi interesting hai
but I'll read it after your exams😊
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intresting and different ..would love to read further
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Posted: 5 years ago
Sound interesting 
Maan as slave 
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Posted: 5 years ago
different concept ...
excited to read ..
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Posted: 5 years ago
Sounds interesting
Will love to read
Something different
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Posted: 5 years ago
Interesting story is it gonna be a dark story as maan is a slave no one knows whole world sees him as a strong personality and businessman but he is nothing but a slave geet is exactly like her dad who likes to rule and is looking for a job ka Gulam plzzz don't make it so intense give a little back bone to maan
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Posted: 5 years ago
Interesting concept
Do continue soon