A business party...
Maan;the famous business man was shining in that party.He saw another person also catching the attention of the crowd.His eyes went blank seeing that person.
MAAN:Geet!
He was seeing her after 2 years.
Geet's eyes captured his vision by mistake.
They both kept looking at each other without knowing that their emotions were causing tears in their eyes.
Not anyone at the party knew that Maan and Geet were a couple once.
The truth is that Maan and Geet were tied upto each other through marriage.They were forced to be a couple.Both believed in love marriage,but they had to do arranged marriage for the sake of their parents.They were too young and immature to get married.
Their ego led to small childish fights which tore their bond terribly breaking their marriage.They parted their ways through divorce and concentrated on business.Both have become successful Business people.There is success in their life,but not love.
Geet realized that her eyes were becoming wet.Her ego did'nt allow her to be weak in front of Maan.So she just walked out.Maan ran after her.
MAAN:Geet!
She did'nt know whether to respond or not.
MAAN:Why are you leaving the party?You hate my face that much?I won't come before you.Don't leave the party.You come back and enjoy the party.I won't spoil your enjoyment.
GEET:I had enough enjoyment.That's why I decided to leave,not because I hate to see you.
She turned back and started walking.Suddenly she turned back.
Maan was looking at her.
GEET:Maan...I want to tell you that I don't hate you.
He felt very happy.
MAAN:Then shall I join you?
GEET:What?
MAAN:I mean...let us walk together.
GEET:Party?
MAAN:I also had enough enjoyment.So I am fine.No need of staying back at the party.
They walked together.
They sat in a garden.
Tree leaves were falling down.
Maan:I am happy that you were willing to spend your precious time with me.In fact I am surprised that you did'nt refuse to sit with me.
GEET:Maan...after divorce I when I thought about our married life I felt our fights were silly.
MAAN:You are right.I also felt so.We were so childish.All were making fun of me for divorcing you because of such silly fights.Our childish fight became a stupid reason for our divorce.We were fools.
Geet became upset:Yes.But what's the use of talking about t now?Now it's too late.We are divorced.
It pricked his heart.
He said in his mind:After divorce only I realized your place in my heart.During our stupid fights and anger towards you I don't know how and when...I had started falling for you unknowingly.I realized it very late.After our separation I missed you every single minute.
GEET:After divorce only I understood that I never hated you.It was just an anger.My stupid anger.I was so short tempered.My age and experience have taught me to control my temper.Now I have control over my temper.
MAAN:Me too.Even I have learnt to control the temper.I understood that anger is unnecessary.Getting angry unnecessarily can break relationships.
They looked at each other emotionally.
Maan noticed a leaf which fell on her hair.He took off the leaf.
MAAN:Sorry.I just...
GEET:It's ok.I love Autumn.I enjoy leaves falling down...especially on my body.
They smiled at each other.
MAAN:Geet...now we both have cleared our mind.Now there is no anger for each other.So shall we be Business partners?
She smiled happily:Of course.
He became very happy.
GEET:I think I should leave now.Bye...
MAAN:Bye.
She started walking leaving him sad.He did'nt want her to go as he was enjoying her company a lot which he never did when they were a couple.
He thought:No.I should not lose her again.I should not repeat my mistake.
"Geet!'He called her loudly.
She looked back.
Maan ran towards her.
MAAN:Shall we be partners?
Geet:Of course Maan.I had agreed to be your partner in Business.Then why this doubt?
Maan:I mean...partner in my life too...
Geet looked at him in disbelief.
GEET:Means?
MAAN:I mean... can you be my life partner?
Geet could'nt believe her ears.
GEET:What did you say?
MAAN:To be frank,after you left only I realized how much I love you.
She became very emotional.Tears rolled down her cheeks.
GEET:Me too Maan.After divorce, everyday I cried thinking of my mistake.I regretted divorcing you.Because I love you.
They both became very emotional.
He wiped her tears:It is God's decision.If we had not divorced each other we would not have known each other's value.Because of separation only we realized that we love each other.
GEET:Yes.God makes pairs.God made us a pair.He separated us,he united us now.
They smiled tearfully.
He caressed her face.
They shared an emotional eye lock.
After a year...
Maan and Geet threw a party on their Wedding Anniversary.
They cut cake and fed each other.
One of the guests asked them:You guys had Arranged marriage or love marriage?
MAAN:Oh!It's so confusing.
Geet smiled:We had both arranged marriage and love marriage.First we did arranged marriage.After that we fell in love with each other and then we did love marriage.
She looked at Maan and smiled:Right Maan?
He smiled:Yes sweet heart...
They smiled at each other while the guests were confused with Geet's answer.
The end
Two young heart when meet, love blossom... falling in love is written of both one destiny but then why pain in this heart... This pain going reside you for forever...
Let's go few years back, when he is just 21 and she is just 18...
I belong to rich family, my parents loved me so much, I always want to go village but my full family living in cities... our college gone in trip to pune, here I get chance to see one village plus I met with her first time here
I never forget that day , that trip which changed my whole life
Vyom , shiv let's go
.
Maan just wait few hours
We just reached here
And you ready to run for outing
Maan : common shiv
Now no another excuse
You both know we have only two days, which teacher given us to explore here
Vyom : and you want to go to Village
Maan : so what wrong in this
You both coming or not
Shiv : coming
Vyom : ok
*********
Morachi Chincholi
A famous village in the midst of non-descript villages! Morachi Chincholi village the names means peacocks and tamarind trees. This village is famous for its tamarind trees (which no one is interested in) and hundreds of free-roaming peacocks and peahens (which everyone is interested in).
We just start taking pictures ...
The village is not very big i.e. the one road which runs through it is probably a 2-3 kms long. But, the peacocks are everywhere...
Vyom : it's looking beautiful
Maan : hmm
Shiv if you want I can drive slowly now
And you can explore here
Shiv : no you enjoy
We come here for you most importantly
We ventured into the fields a bit and managed to see quite a few peacocks. But the problem was that they were extremely fleet footed and often went into the tall grasses literally becoming invisible. Once, we were just looking around standing near the edge of the road and suddenly a peacock rushed out of the bushes just a meter ahead of us. He was there all the while and we hadn't even noticed him. Probably, a sudden movement by us startled him
.
Vyom : now what next
Hope hume yaha raat ko rukne ka kuch mil jaaye
Shiv : let's see
There is also a small temple in the village where it seems bhajans happen in the evenings.
Bhajan voice make us stop, and we enter in temple...
Maan : nice voice
.
Why you looking me like that
Voice is nice
Vyom : kya baat hai
Yaha aate ladkiyo ko notice krne laga
Maan : common
I just talking about voice
.
But his words stopped in mid, she turn to give aarti to all, he just lost to see her face, her black eyes, long hairs which flowing in air, and she trying to put hair behind the ears in mid while giving aarti to all... Her voice which make him to enter the temple... And her glowing faces...
She come and stopped near him...
She waits few seconds, he take aarti, but he lost so much in her... She looks another two boys...
Vyom : hum le lete aarti phle
Vyom & shiv take aarti, then again her step stopped near him...
..
Inhe kya dikhayi nhi deta
Her voice like melody songs in his ears, he blink the eyes slightly...
His friends nodded absently... both not excepting she going ask something like that
Poor boy
She round the hand on fire flames and touch on his both eyes one by one... and left...
Maan touched own face and smiled to feel her...
Shiv slapped on his shoulder and said ye sb kya ho rha hai Maan
Maan : kya huya
Vyom : kya huya
Usse laga tumhe dikhta nhi hai
Maan : uske aange mujhe kaha kuch dikha waise bhi
Shiv : maan let's go back
Maan : shiv
I like her
Shiv : maan we not know her
Maan : ek pal hi kafi hai Shiv
Jaise ek pal mein sharanya ne tumhe dil de diya
Asa lag rha hai
Mera dil ye le gyi
Vyom : ye toh gya
***********
Trio come down , and maan again seen same girl, he take step towards her, his friend try to stop him...
Hey
.
Namastey
.
Aap kya bta sakti hai
Yaha koi resort ho
Raat ko rukne ke liye
.
Chaliye mere sath
.
Mere dost bhi hai waha
.
Vyom , shiv come
.
Aap dono kaise dost hai inke
Inhe dikhayi nhi deta hai
Aur aap dono ko ye puchna chaiye
.
Aur aapne bechare inhe bej diya
.
Maan : what
Kisne kaha mujhe dikhayi nhi deta
.
Aapke dost ne
Vyom & shiv : no
Humne nhi kaha
Aapne khud maan liya
.
Then MR. why you staring me
.
Vyom : wah
Village me English girl
.
Oh village me rhte hai
Iska matlab ye nhi
Anpad hai hum
Smjhe aap
.
Aur aap
Hume kyun gur rhe the
Maan : tumsa hasin maine aaj tak koi nhi dekha
.
Sandle padi na
Toh ye lofarpanti sbhi utar jaayengi
.
Kaka chaliye
She sits in bullock cart and left...
***********
She enters in resort and seen worried face of Kajal...
Kajal kya huya
Kajal : yaar aaj bhi kaka ne hume nhi chuna us room me jaane ke liye
Wo Moni hai na
Is week wo us room me jaayengi
Aur usse wo sb cheeze milengi
Hume kb wo sb milenga
Jb hume bhi achi dresses
Bhut se jewellery
Milengi
.
Kajal abhi hum 18 tk nhi huye hai
Jb ho jaayenge
Tb hume bhi kaka
Wo sb denge
.
Kaka : shi kaha meri geet rani ne
Geet : kaka
Parsad
Kaka : khush rh
Ab jaake tum dono apna kaam kro
Khana banayo raat ke liye sbka
Geet : ji
**********
Hume three room chaiye
.
Tum teeno yaha ke toh nhi lagte nojawan
.
Ji nhi
Hum yaha bs gumne ke liye aaye the
Aur raat ho gyi toh
.
Are achi baat hai
Humara ghav hai bhi bhut pyaar
.
Ji wo toh hai
.
Waise aapne is resort ko acha maintain kiya huya hai
.
Beta ye rhi tumhari chabiya kamre ki
Kuch aur chaiye toh bta dena
.
Dinner
.
Kyun nhi
Abhi bejwata hu kamre me
.
Thanks
**********
Three girls enter in different room taking food tray...
She knocked on door and after getting permission, she entered...
Sir your dinner
.
He turn and both shocked to see each other...
Tum yaha
.
Aap yaha kya kr rhe hai
.
Tumse milne aaya tha
Ye kehna galat honga
Kyunki mujhe toh pata hi nhi tha
Tum yaha mil jaayongi
He takes steps towards her, she take step back, before she run from door, he pinned her to nearest wall...
Daro mat
Bs ek baar meri baat sunlo
.
Mein waisa nhi hu jaisa tum mere bare me soch rhi hu
.
Jis tarah se aapne hume pakda abhi
Usse hum kya soche fir
.
He take step back and said sorry
Dekho mein sch mein tumhe pasand krta hu
.
Kitna jaante hai aap hume
Jo pasand krne lage
Ye sb lines apne sehr me jaake kehna
Hum nhi maanane wale
.
Ye toh bta jaayo
Mein kaise yakeen dilayu tumhe
.
Wo toh dil dilata hai
She runs out from room...
********
Around 12, maan come out from room, he not able to sleep, his heart is restless, her face coming again and again in front of him...
Maine toh usse uska naam bhi nhi pucha
Kaise pata karu uska naam
.
He walking in corridor... And come out in garden... One room little far from main resort, caught his attention, he feel some movements here... but due to darkness he not able to see anyone...
His step stopped when someone pressed his shoulder...
Aap yaha
.
Tum yaha kya kr rhe ho
Wo mujhe neend nhi aa rhi thi
Toh bs ase gum rha tha
.
Beta
Ye ghav hai
Yaha raat ko bahar gumna khatre se khali nhi hota
.
Aap bhi toh
.
Hum toh issi mitti ke hai
.
Ab jaake so jaayo
Maan nodded and left inside...
***********
Next day, another girl come with coffee, he not like totally...
Suno
.
Ji sir
.
Wo jo kal raat ko dinner dene aay thi
.
Kaun sir
.
Mujhe bolne toh do phle
.
She nodded
.
Uska naam kya hai
.
Sir mujhe nhi pata kaun aaya tha
.
Nhi pata toh pata kro
Aur mujhe batao
Wo kaun thi
.
Dekhiye
Mein asa kuch nhi krne wali hu
Smjhe aap
Mein kaka se aapki shiqayat kr dungi
Aap aur aapke dost abhi yaha se bahar ho jaayenge
.
Sorry
Wo mein usse pasand krta hu
Par wo yakin hi nhi kr rhi
.
Pasand krte hai
Aur naam tak nhi jaante
.
Usse kal hi toh mila mein
.
Tum ab sb smjh hi gyi ho
Thodi si madad krdo meri
.
Maaf krna sir
She left saying this
********
Kajal : geet tune mujhse chupaya
Geet : kya
Kajal : wo ladka tujhe pasand krta hai
Geet : ye baat usne tujhe bhi kh di
Ab mein usse nhi chodungi
.
She enter in his room without knock and shouted tum hote kaun ho
Maan : tum subh se kaha thi
Mein kbse intzaar kr rha hu tumhara
Geet : aapko smjh nhi aata ek baari me
Kyun mere piche pade ho
Maan : I like you
Geet : but am not interested
Maan : give one chance
Tum jo kahongi
Wo mein karunga
**********
Vyom : maan are you gone mad
Shiv : maan hum yaha se jaa rhe hai
Just stop dammit
Maan : shiv, vyom
You both can go
First time I like someone
And I want she believe me
Vyom : doing cleaning work
She gone mad
I have to make her understand
Maan held his hand and said no vyom
I can do myself
Shiv : par maan
In sbse kya wo maan lengi
You are nice person
Nhi yaar
Try to understand
It's just infatuation
It's passed with time
.
Yhi toh hum aapke dost ko smjhana chahte hai
Ye bs ek khichav hai
Aur kuch nhi
Aap koi hume pasand vasand nhi krte hai
.
Aap sb ye rehne dijiye
Ye kaam aapka nhi hai
Aap jaa sakte hai
Maan : mein khi nhi jaa rha hu
.
Tumne vadaa kiya hai mujhse
Ydi maine pura resort clean kr diya
Toh tum mujhe apna naam batayongi
Aur mere sath bahar gumne jaayongi
Geet :kyun bina baat ki zid laga rkhi hai
Maan : tumhare liye khichav honga
Par mere liye usse badkar hai
Saying this, he again starts the work...
.
His friend feeling bad for him, want to help him but he denied and pushed both out from resort... vyom & shiv don't want to go but know own friend to very well, if he take decision both can't change...
And another side geet knows cleaning full resort alone is not easy task, here 5-10 girls clear full resort only on week basis... guests also come here less... by chance anyone come..
But after that kaka support the girls and taking caring all like own kid... From village many girls come here for working... kaka provide the food and clothes... and any small girl want to take education, he sponsor too up to only 8 th class...
She lost the parents when she is 10 years old , her chacha-chachi hit her, one day her uncle pushed her out from home... that moment kaka help her... give her shelter, food, education... in return of this favor, she help kaka in farming and resort work too...
With time, kaka starts helping many girls... Some girls married in small age and groom family just want heir as soon as possible... small age, no idea what family wants, kaka helped kajal and many girls like that... and give a better life...
He is very kind person, this is not only one village but nearest many villagers knows him and give respect to him...
.
Geet look towards maan, who trying best...she come near him and held his hand and said mera naam geet hai
Maan : par abhi
Geet : koi jaroorat nhi
Chalo mere sath
Maan : abhi
Geet : one hour
Maan : thanks
**********
Geet : toh aap delhi se hai
Maan nodded
Maan : am studying in college
Geet : hmm
Maan : yaha sb kitna acha hai
Here so many peacocks
Geet : Morachi Chincholi is not just about Morachis, but also chincholis! There were lot of tamarind trees around ...
Dhyan nhi diya aapne
Maan : nhi
Geet picked up few seeds and placed in his palm...
Ghar le jaana
Yaha ki yaadein smjhkar
Maan : mein tumhe apne sath leke jaana chahta hu
Geet : aap mere bare mein kuch nhi jaante
Na mein
Maan : I can tell you each thing about me
Geet : jaise aapne apne college ka naam bataya
Aur ye ki aap delhi se hai
.
Maan smjhiye
Hum dono bhut alag hai
Aap kuch din me bhool jaayenge
Aap kissi geet se mile bhi the
Maan : tum kyun nhi smjhti
Geet : kyunki smjhna aap ko hai
Maan : geet
Geet : bs maan
**********
Not only maan, geet also have some feeling for him, when she come near him in temple, she feel his eyes catching her each expression, when she get to know he is blind , she feel bad, his eyes not seeing her... But when he tells truth he is not blind, she feel happiness and his confession, he seeing her only and like her... She feel special.. But she knows the limit... she is uneducated girl, like his friend gets shock with her few words only... She learned in school after that sometime she use resort computer for studying... she is simple girl of village, and he is modern boy from city...
She can't lose own existence in dream world...she can't
***********
Kaka called kajal in cabin and give new dress to her and said aaj raat ko 12 bje tumhe us room me jaane ka mauka milenga
Ready rehna
Kajal smiled and run to share with geet... here maan following geet...
Geet ek baar
Kajal : Mr.
Apna samaan pack kro
Aur jaayo yaha se
Aur geet tu chal
Aaj meri baari hai
Waha jaane ki
Maan : kaha jaane ki
Kajal : tum gye nhi abhi tak
Geet : maan hum baad me baat krte hai
Please go
He nodded and left both
**********
Kajal is so excited to go in that room, geet smiled to see excited friend, kaka come and take kajal with her, geet following both...
Kaka : geet tum abhi waha nhi jaa sakti ho
Geet : kaka
Waha asa kya hota hai
Mujhe bhi dekhna hai
Kaka : kuch din aur
Fir tumhe bhi wo mauka milenga
Geet : kaka aap kbhi kuch nhi batate
Kbhi toh batao na
Waha kya hota hai
Bs humesha yhi khte ho
Guru ji aashirwaad dete hai
Kaka : geet jaake so jaayo
Geet : ji
.
Geet have no habit to sleep without kajal, she come to back garden area, here already maan sitting, she don't want one more argument...but before that he take her name...
Jaanta hu tumhe yakin nhi mujhpe
Ek baar ajma ke toh dekho mujhe
.
He stand from bench and said tum baitho mein chalta hu
Geet : hum baith sakte hai
She come and sit beside him, make him smile...
*********
Next morning when kajal not come back, geet go to meet kaka
Kaka
Kaka : ha geet
Geet : kaka wo kajal abhi tak nhi aayi
Us room se
Mein jaake dekhu kya
Kaka : geet tum jaante ho na
Guruji kripya jispe ho jaaye
Wo wapas nhi aata hai
Uski zindai guruji badal dete hai
Kajal kismat wali hai
Guruji ne usse chuna aur aange bej diya
Geet : bej diya
Wo ase kaise bina mujhse mile jaa sakti hai
Kaka : geet jaake apna kaam kro
Do din ke baad tumhe jaana hai
*********
Around lunch time, maan get chance to talk with her...
Kya huya
Sad kyun ho
Geet : wo kajal mujhe chodke chali gyi
Maan : kaha
Geet : wo guruji usse le gye
Wo ab waha maje karengi
Usse na waha bhut se new dresses milenge
Aur necklace
Uski life to set ho gyi
Par apni dost ko wo kaise bhool sakti hai
Maan : geet kaun guruji
Geet : tum nhi jaante
Kaka ke guruji hai
Jb humari ghav ki ladki 18 saal ki ho jaati hai
Toh guruji usse vishesh aahsirwaad dete hai
Aahsirwaad me wo kapde, gehne dete hai
Sirf is ghav ki nyi
Balki dusre ghav se bhi ladkiya aati hai
Unke maa-papa leke aate hai
Jinhe guruji chun lete hai
Unki life set ho jaati hai
Uski family ko bhut paise milte hai
Maan : ye guruji baithte kaha hai
Zara hum bhi mil le
Geet : maan wo room hai na
Waha kaka unhe bulate hai
Wo unki puja ka place hai
Waha koi bhi nhi jaa sakta
Sivay kaka ke
Kaka baramchari hai na
Maan : fir ladkiya kaise jaati hai waha
Geet : maan bs aashirwaad ke liye
Jaati hai
Maan : kajal kaha gyi
Geet : guruji ne usse koi kaam de diya honga apne aahram me
Maan : aashram kaha hai
Geet : mujhe kaise pata
Ek toh I missing her
And now you
She angrily left
.
Maan (kuch toh gadbad hai yaha)
Part 2
Around 1 A.M, he come out from room ,and check the place, seeing all are sleeping , he take deep breath and come out from resort, now his main target is that room, which is little far from main resort and in mid parking also given plus long garden... He ready to take step , but feel someone hold his hand...he turned and seeing her, he take relax breath...
Tum yaha kya kr rhe ho
Maan : I also can ask same question
Geet : maan bolo na
Maan : geet ye guruji wagarh kuch nhi hote hai
Mujhe us room me kuch gadbad lagti hai
I have to check
Geet : no maan
Kaka ko bilkul nhi pasand
One time rupa trying to cross the line of garden area, kaka ne usse bhut data, aur yaha se nikal diya... wo guruji ko bhut maante hai
Unhone hum sbke liye bhut kiya hai
Jitna kamate hai
Hum sb pe kharch kr dete hai
Maan : geet mujhe jaana hai
Tumhe nhi
Geet : maan jaroor koi karan honga
Isliye kaka jaane nhi dete
Please smjho
Maan : geet tumhe smjhna hai
We are leaving in 21st century and you believing on false believes
Please grow up
Geet : jaanti hu
Mein tumhari kabil nhi
Isliye khti hu
Chale jaayo yaha se
Maan : geet please
Asa mt kaho
Do din tumhare sath ne ek ehsaas ko janam diya hai is dil me
Geet : maan ek din ki baat hai
Kal mein waha jaa sakti hu
Kal mein 18 ko ho jaayungi
Fir mein aapko aake sb bata dungi
Maan : ydi tum kajal ki tarah nhi aayi toh
Her heart misses the beat, thinking about this...
Maan : please
Mere liye
Humare liye
Mujhe jaane do
Wo jagah mujhe thik nhi lagti
.
Both hear some footsteps, maan twirl her and take to behind another wall...
Aaj raat ko hi us ladki ko yaha se le jaayo
Ji hajoor
.
Kaka hai ye toh
Maan placed hand on her lips and denied to speak...
Kal geet ki baari hai
Sb ready rakhna
Uske aange piche koi nhi hai
Isliye boss se kehna
Jitni raatein chahe wo uske sath bita sakte hai
Maal acha hai
Aur boss ko uski pic bhi bhut pasand aayi hai
Daam ache milenge
.
.
Hazoor hume mt bulna
.
Bula hota toh tujhe aaj bulaya nhi hota
Jaa jaake ash kr kajal ke sath
Aur wo teri huyi ab
Jb dil bir jaaye
Kya krna hai uske sath tu ache se jaanta hai
.
Ji hazoor
Both men left in different directions, her tears wetted his hand...
Maan : sshh
Hume yaha se nikalna honga abhi
Geet : kajal
Maan give helpless look to her...
Geet : mujhe meri kajal chaiye maan
Wo usse aaj raat ko le jaayenga
Mujhe usse bachana hai
She tries to run, but maan caged her in arms and take inside to nearest room...
Sshhh
Chup
If someone get to know
We knows what going on here
Bhut bdi musibat me fs jaayenge
Geet : wo meri dost hai
Meri sb kuch
Maan : aur tum meri sb kuch ho geet
Please smjho
Tears fall down from both eyes; she cupped his face and said maan mujhe usse bachana hai
Aap sath ho ya na ho
Mujhe ye krna hai
Maan : nhi geet
Geet : before going here
I just want to say something
I like you too
Her lips touched his lips
Tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Maan : tum akeli nhi jaayongi
Dono jaayenge
Geet : nhi maan
Mein aapko khatre mein nhi daal sakti
Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana
Maan : jaise mein tumhe khatre mein daal sakta hu
He held her hand and takes her out ...
Wada kiya toh wada karke nivana
Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
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Tears fall down from his eyes, remembering those days with geet, one hand wipes his tears...he turned and seen her...
Maan I also missing my friend Geet so much
Par kb tak tum ase khud ko kasoorvar maante rahonge
Kb tak uski yaado ko yu kaske thame rahonge
Maan : kajal I love her
And I can't forget her
Saying this he left the room...
Kajal picked geet photo frame and hide her in arms...
You can't go like that geet
Mujhe marna chaiye tha
Tumhe nhi
When maan loves you so much
How can you go
Kyun tum hume chodke chali gyi
Why you died
.
.
Kajal beta
Kajal hurriedly wipes the tears and said hanji
Mujhse aansu chupane se kya honga
Mujhe pata hai
aaj geet ki barsi hai
tum dono usse bhut miss krte ho
mein kbhi usse milli toh nhi
par itna jarur jaanti hu
tum dono ki jaan thi wo
.
Aur dekho har baar ki tarah maan bina pooja mein baithe chla gya
Tum toh baithongi na pooja mein
Geet ke liye
.
Ji mummy
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Kajal fearing to enter in room, but kaka hold her hand and both entered inside, full room is empty...
Kaka yaha toh koi nhi hai
Kaka : darya rakho
He pressed one button from behind the photo, in mid of room, floor parted and some stairs showing inside...
Kaka : chale
Kajal nodded...
When she reached down, here one man sitting on sofa and one bed also placed in mid...
Kaka : boss here she is
Boss come near her , and lift her chin and said beautiful
Acha hai
Is baar toh humesha ke liye hai na
Kaka : ji
Iske aange piche koi nhi hai
.
Boss : us ladki ka kya huya
Jiski pic tumne beji thi
Kaka : do din ke baad boss
18 saal ki ho jaayengi
Fir aaram se nath utarna uski
Boss hand slipped around his waist...
Kajal : kaka
Hume kuch nhi chaiye
Hume jaana hai yaha se
Boss : now you can go
Kajal tried to reach near kaka... but he left... next only her screamed rings in room...
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Maan stared at her as she entered in the party hall gaining everyones attention. why not that could be she looks beautiful .beautiful to envy the moon itself. even The moon also would be envy by her seeing her pure beauty. she was wearing white Indian dress apart from every other women present in the hall flaunting there bare body with modern western dress. she is looking as if angle have descended from heaven.
She is looking different from all in the party hall thereby gaining everyone's attention in the party. He groan at the way all men are staring at her as if to eat her there only . She is nervous along with little bite scare at this unwanted attention .
He take steps atlast to her and stop dead when she finally lifted her lashes up to see him.the time stop as if little cold wind blow by his side as he continued to stared at her heart shaped face keenly , narofying her beauty locking that in his heart through his eyes.
mere rashk-e-qamar tu ne pehli nazar, jab nazar se milaaii maza aa gaya
O my envy of the moon, when your eyes first met mine, I was overjoyed
The Great Poet invited for the party started to sing his gazal as if describing his emotions. His feelings.
He looked at her.she also was staring at him like the way he is. She seems to be lost in him . He smirk seeing his effect on her too. It's like fire egnited at both sides same way.
barq si gir gaii kaam hi kar gaii, aag aisi lagaaii maza aa gaya
Lightning struck and destroyed me;
you ignited such a fire that it made me ecstatic
He comes more close to her and she take steps backwards realising her mischief of what she did. She got lost in stranger it's not good. Bari maa ko pata chala na to Teri khair nahi geet. She thought to herself but loud enough to be heard by him.
He chuckle at her blabbering. But her Badi maa. What was she talking that. Maan. You just started to think lot more about her when you just now have seen her. He smirk at ownself. But next her blush make his all ignite in fire.
Oh sweet lord did anyone be more beautiful in this world. She is looking more beautiful with her blush.
But first thing is did she just blush and because of him..
He lost in her blush didn't get when she started to take step far from him but when he did realized some business associates come and they pulled him another business conversation.
jaam mein ghol kar husn ki mastiyaan, chaandni muskuraaii maza aa gaya
Mixing beauty's mischief into my drink, the moonlight smiled how enjoyable!
He catch her sight. She was standing there with one girl as her age. Smiling whole heartily along with her sweet blush still there. He sip his drink and continue to stared her intently.
chaand ke saaye mein ae mere saaqiya, tu ne aisi pilaaii maza aa gaya
In the moon's shadow, O my cup-bearer, you made me drink such a wine that I was ecstatic
His looks turn passionate as his drink started to do its effect on him.he didn't realized how he get drunk this much lost in his moon.
nasha sheeshe mein angraaii lene laga, bazm-e-rindaan mein saaghar khanakne lage
Intoxication spread through the bottle, and goblets clinked in the party of debauchees
He storm towards her and grab her from her wrist pulling her on the dance floor. She was shock with scared looked at him with her big hazels making it more big.
nasha sheeshe mein angraaii lene laga, bazm-e-rindaan mein saaghar khanakne lage
Intoxication spread through the bottle, and goblets clinked in the party of debauchees
She try to go from there but he pulled her forcefully again to himself sticking her to his body he made her dance forcefully on his steps. She shivered ,quiver in his hot passionate touch.he touch her all over pressing her more and more into him.she just obey his each touch and steps like a doll last in his touch.
At last both got lost in each other hugging each one as if finding solace with other one.
Press started to take snaps of them .this would be very AWSOME headline first them of Maan Singh khurana. ...and his mistress...
She at once opened her eyes at the Sound of clicking.she gasp with utter shock of what she is doing and what happening around her. Tears well up on her eyes.she looked very scared as the people staring at her in strange way. She looked at the women's staring her in disgusting manner. She pushed him with all her might And run from there at once leaving maan in daze for some time. And when he did realized she was gone.
Part 2
He darted angry glares on everyone before leaving the party in rush.
He try to locate her if she is anywhere in sight . It started to rain heavily now.where she gone now. He started to feels empty with her departure and that time he knows she is the one.
maikade pe barasne lagiin mastiyaan, jab ghata ghir ke chaaii maza aa gaya
Mischief descended upon the tavern, and when storm clouds poured down, I was overjoyed
He stared at the sky standing in the middle of the road.its all empty like his heart feeling now. Just then he hear a payal sound. He at once jerk towards voice and as if his body come to live.his breaths became normal .his heart started to jump in joy to finding her infront own.he place his hand on his heart saying him to calm down now.she is here.
behijaabana woh saamne aa gae, aur jawaani jawaani se takra gaii
Unveiled, she came before me, and her youthful splendor collided with mine
She came forward slowly standing before him stare at him in his chocolate eyes.
He saw the same feeling there as of him.
aankh un ki lari yuun meri aankh se, dekh kar yeh laraaii maza aa gaya
Her eyes clashed with mine in such a way that seeing this fight made me joyful
He grasp her from her waist jerking her into him .she clutch him from his shoulders as a reflex.both got drench in rain fully trying to stared at other one in this heavy rain.
His gaze travel down on her petals shivering in cold rain or his effect on her.
He glance in her eyes again as if asking her permission. And she granted it blushing all red bending her head down.
aankh mein thi hayaa har mulaaqaat par, surkh aariz hue wasl ki baat par
Modesty was in her eyes every time we met; her cheeks blushed red when I spoke of our union
He cupped her face and place his lips on her petals and shiver run down both of there spine at there contacts. Her hands run on his scalp pulling him closer clutching him , hugging him.he pulled her upwards from her waist as he slowly started to kissed her relishing her taste. She taste so sweet, he nibble her thursting his toung inside her mouth he kissed her passionately. The kiss goes long and long. As both kiss each other hungrily finding solace in each other arms.Rain continue to cascade down on both of them as if blessing them.
They broke the kissed and she shy away with his passionate look. This is the right moment thinking this he bend on his one knee suddenly holding her hand making her shock suddenly.
I love you...he simply confess his heart to her. Tears rolled down her eyes as guilt come in her hazels. .but along with that there was her love for him glistening in tears and her unsaid pain she is hiding.
Main yeh...yeh nahi ho sakta.she finally utter with great difficulty and run from there before he knows anything leaving him confused with her behaviour along with sad.
Love is unique feel ,its happen anywhere with anyone.sometimes we found fraction of second, sometimes we should taken more time realize our own feeling.sometimes we found out ourselves and sometimes our well wisher making us understand.More person surrounding us,we want only know about our maaneet right.let see they found their love or not and who would be cupid role in their love story mainly where they will be find their soulmate.
Story begins
A dark night,One bike harshly driving in empty road ,if anyone crossed Bike path ,they straightly goes to heaven.this youngsters why drive vehicles harshly mainly charming boys,yeah A charming boy driving a bike and cute girl sat back with him,both were very excited and unconditional happiness in their face like they did any achievement.
Girl:No one stop our destiny & showing cute smiling face to him.
Boy :yes,we won our fate,No one stop us with same excited face
But they don't know fate changed their wish, before they come out from happiness, Big truck hit their bike,both fallen into empty road with pool of blood,both eyes craving their each other glimpse ,their hearts need to confirm his/her fine or not,their heart beat slow down,both taking their last breathe painfully and their hand tried reach to mingle but their pool of blood bodies not allowed
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A white cloud around whole place,a girl wake up from sleep with rubbing her little palm to her almond eyes.
Girl :mom, Boost ...without open her eyes ,yelling her mom with pout face. she did not get any reply,she open her eyes,her vision showing only cloudy place and she rubbed her eyes once again but she in cloudy place. Where am I.her eyes looking there and here ,i am not in my bed even not in my room..then where am i.
Girl stand in her own legs and step up to forward and cloud vanished from her sight.her face confused seeing that place and her mind remembering last night moment and her angry raise ,her chubby cheek turn to red insake of angry but with whom..
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A man walking in grand mahal with arrogant and pride steps,his eyes popped look at his place changed to mini war,everyone fighting through swords,dangerous & wars equipments .
Man shouting:bas ( stop)...with roaring like lion with angry face.
Everyone stopped and look at person with scary face except two person pulling their hairs through their palm with angry face.
Man angry eyes shift to two person,his hard hand press one person shoulder but he snapped his hand with grummy face even though he did not noticed who touched his shoulder .
Man got irritate and call other person but person did not hear his shout
Man shout : stop it ..whole place one sec shaken because of hard voice
Both stopped look at person with angry face and man angry glare to them
Man: what going on...
Both look at each other, next moments both blast their laughter heavily and everyone was scary except this two person laughing madly ..
Man rolled his eyes : stop it.
Two person tried stop their laugh but their lips cannot hide their smiling
Man: u both stop it now with grinned teeth
Two person shut their mouth and one person around a man with teasing face.
Person: Geet, he is looking like jewellary show case toy and he wored more jewels in his whole body even he wored jhumkas ( ear stud) also with chucking face.
Geet giggling tone: yes,maan, but why he held this black long thread in his hand , her eyes wided,omg he is going attempt to sucide
Maan: geet, stop ur nonsense,I think he using this thread for tied drama screen in their troop.i am right while pointing his index finger infront of that angry man.
Man nod his head negatively: I am using thread, snatching soul from human body with grinned teeth
Geet placed her hand in maan shoulder : Maan, he seems like doctor nor culprit how he was snatching soul from human body.
Maan : I don't know
Man : Same way how I did it both of you like I do everyone.
Maaneet: what..
Man : yes, I am Lord of Death, Yama dharmaraja with pride tone
Maaneet once again blast their laugh: oh god stop ur joking..today we laughed more,already our stomach paining,we cannot anymore
yama: chitragupta
(chitragupta assistant of yama, he only assest keeping track and action of human beings on earth and upon the death, he has the task of deciding heaven or the hell for the humans, depending on their actions on the earth)
Chitragupta appear infront of yama: yes lord with scary face
Yama: what going on here in angry face.
C.Gupta: Lord, after they enter in our place, both doing more naughtiness in hell. Both making our hell to war place.. few minutes before
Flashback start
Girl : Maan with angry face
Yeah she only guts shouting MSK right .Girl none other our heroine Geet and got angry with maan.
Maan marched her side with angry face : geet..with angry face.
Both look at each other head to toe and both wored white dress,geet wored white chudidhar and maan wored white kurti and pant.
Maan : what the hell ,geet..where we are .. why I wored white colour, I love colourful dress with grinned teeth.
Geet: yeah I knew , not only colourful dress even ur colourful girls and every week , u r changing gilrs like ur colourful dress with mocking tone.
Maan angry face: they r my friends, don't talk like rubbish about my friends..
Geet: if I talk about them with raise one eye brow.
Maan: I say about ur Dumb boyfriend..
Geet: don't say my friend to dumb with angry mood..
Maan:I don't want waste my time with u.. why I am here .
Geet : uff.. I am also asking same question with u
Maaneet: where we are...
Some person come infront of maaneet, they wores jewellary in their bodies and look like different from human beings and little scary ,voices are hard one and holding heavy equipments.
Maan: geet,why u brought me this drama troop place.
Geet: don't lie,u only brought me here
Maan: I never lie in my life time.
One of the Person in group:really with excited voice
Geet:bhai,don't hear his words..this was big lie in his life.
Maan showing his index finger infront of geet: you r liar
Geet locked his finger to her finger: you r liar
Woman support geet and men supports maan, they started war in hell ..
Flashback end
c.gupta: that it lord
Yama hearing their fight but maaneet busily fighting with each other.
Geet:don't try smart ,u only pickup me from home and kidnapped me, now acting I kidnapped u somewhere.
Maan yuck face: ur princess of kingdom ,I kidnapped u for ur empire
Geet: yes,princess of Handa as well as Khurana with smirked face.
Maan fuming face: u r not
Yama shout: stop.. both maaneet never stop their fight in their life time if yama said they do , No right.
Man got angry suddenly sharp sword appear in air and take sword in his hand and slashing person who stood next with maaneet ( he was one of servant of yama lok or Narka or hell ) .servant cutted into two pieces After few second he vanished in air.
Maaneet was numb in their place and their saliva gulped into their mouth.
Geet murmuring maan ear:maan, really he is yamadharma raja but why I am here.
Yama: because You both died.
Geet eye widely: kya.. Mr. yama sir, u had mistaken, I never did any crime in my life time so I am not die in my young age but he did more crime, so he was with innocent face.
Maan mouth open widely and come infront of yama: No, Mr.Yama sir, she is devil, Big dramaqueen speaking only lie.dont trust word.i am innocent person
Geet pushed maan away from yama: No sir, he saying lie, look at my face..how innocent I am ( showing her face turn left cheek to right cheek to yama with pout face). I am pure like born child and he was opposite of my character.. he such a moron person, plz send him away from me with baby crying face
Maan: yes, I am opposite from ur character because you are real devil and I am pure soul.
Maaneet arguing each other forgot surrounding and everyone starring them with few sec chuckling, shocking, giggling, weird face. Yama got irritate than before..he lost his control
Yama : u both stop, I show ..who devil and who innocent..
Maaneet unison: yeah, Yama sir, u give judge our character.. turn their face to opposite with folded arms.
Yama: hawww.. Chitragupta,read their good and bad deed in earth.
C.gupta: yes lord
he bring gold cover book infront of them through his magical power.
Geet: are u going read this book for our good and bad deeds.. its take more time.
Maan: today only she using her stupid brain lightly.
Geet grinned teeth: u shut ur mouth idiot. Are u guys,u don't have any latest technology.. with weird face
C.gupta:latest technology ..with confused face
Maan : yes,we live in modern world,we chat with other side of poles living people in few sec , video chat,whatsup,messenger,so many technology even some news in rumor,scientist tried to making time machine.. if scientist invent time machine,we will go anywhere in past and future.
Yama got angry :what.. if humanbeing go to their past & future life, they will know about their death secret ,when they will die in their life.humans food chain will be collapsed , everyone become devar ( deva means person have no death., they come to God categories).Human population increase more without death
C.gupta: and Lord, u have no work with shocked face
Yama with grinned teeth: chitragupta, I knew everything because I am yama
Maan: yes lord, u r great person, u knew everything with winked eye to geet without yama notices.
Geet mouth open widely and mind thought: u buttering Yama with ur sweet word and planning escape in this hell.. u think u could go without me with smirked face.
Geet: Mr. yama , u r not only lord of death and lord of justice and law .. u only give justice to me with fake crying face..her voice chocking.
Yama melts seeing her sobbing face: Oh sweet girl, don't cry ..i give u justice..geet winked eye to maan with naughty face before yama notices she changed to her crying face.
Maan murmur:dramaqueen.
C.Gupta scratch his finger to yama shoulder and yama turn his concern face to c.gupta.
Yama: what chitra gupta, ..with grinned teeth.
C.gupta whispering tone: Lord, they try to divert ur mind and tried to escape ur punishment with respectful voice.maaneet tried hear yama & c.gupta conversation.they talk in murmuring tone..they did not get what they speaking.
Yama: u think ,I am fool,I trust their words.
c.gupta: no lord with gulping face
Maaneet: Mr .Yamaraja.. come to our matters first.
Yama: chitragupta, read their good and bad need.
Geet: Mr.yama,atleast using ur magical power making our long journey to short film.
Yama nod his head and do magic : maaneet everyone starred magical water filled in big vessel, they could see anyone & anywhere what they doing in earth through that magic water filled vessel.
Maan: Mr.yama sir, I could see my childhood days in this water with excited face
C.gupta: yes
Flashback start
Maaneet parents were very good friends after birth of maaneet.their parents were neighbor as helped each other in critical situation. Both family don't show partiality to between them If maan family bought anything to maan, they bought same thngs to geet as vice versa like geet family. Maan thought his family love geet more than him as geet thought her family love more than her.before their age of 5, maaneet were good friends.but one day everything changed in their life.even though both not remembered what happened in age of 5 , what fought they did it ..still they thinking both were enemies
( we know right what type of enemies they were..hehehe)
Age of 7
Maaneet doing their homework in study room at maan house.. but both sitting with two end of room.
Geet father enter study room with smiling face.
G.father: My dear children doing their homework like good children..
Geet got from her chair and run to her father and hug his knees till her height.
G.father kissed her forhead:my darling..maan beta come my side.
Maan get up from his chair & stand infornt of G.father
G.father lightly remove from geet held and kneel down in front of maan and take parker pen from his shirt packet and show pen to maan.
Geet: dad, parker pen with excited face.
G.father : yes, darling for maan.. geet face pout but her dad not noticed .. maan smirked look at geet.
Maan: No uncle, give this pen to geet with innocent face
G.father kissed his forhead: so sweet beta, I buy tomorrow for her ..today u won drawing competition so this is for u.
Geet: yes dad,this pen only for maan with smiling face.
G.father: my darling understanding child.
Geet: dad,give that pen.. dadi said we buy anything,we put thing infront of god and pray to god and then use it. Give me.. I pray and then give u..after u give maan with innocent face.
G.father: sure beta,..he gave pen to geet after three to four minutes she come back to study room and give pen to her dad.
G.father gave pen to maan and maan say thanks to g.father.he left the place.
Scene vanished in magic water.
Chitragupta: u both sacrifice everything in ur childhood ..now why u both blaming here.
Maaneet look at each other and their face look at c.gupta : movie not end..its only first half and see second half also with chuckling face.
Flashback start sorry everyone look at once again magic water.
G.father left the place and geet also silently ran to her house.. Maan remove parker pen cap, oh god pen leaked while his whole palm spread through pen ink .
Maan shout : geet ..with angry face
Geet giggled behind study room outside.: u deserve it maan...she left the place.
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Maan was also lesser than geet, he spoiled her homework note as poor geet got scolded by teacher . maaneet has grown very quickly , year also passed like they were enemity increase more.both have same age.so maaneet studied same school & college. Infront of parents both were very good friends , outer world both were best enemies. They did more prank and revenge opps cute revenge yeah little harm one but we both clever their prank or revenge never allow their parents reputation spoil..
College day
Maan have more girlfriends opps only friend type not girlfriend type..but he love tease geet with help of his girl friends as same geet also have more boyfriend same like maan.. only friend type.
Basket Ball match
Maan vs Geet
Maan & girlfriends one team and geet & her boy friends one team ..
Maaneet was good player in basket ball but their team not good ..they want close with maaneet and mainly they don't want maaneet become friends once again..some evil friend want maaneet enemies continue but maaneet have good friend also..they want maaneet friendship as wish they become best couple in college.
Maan team won but maan team cheat with geet team..so maan team won the match ..geet got angry , she know maan friend cheated but maan Not accept reality.
Geet scratched maan project CD through sharp pin, insake of revenge ,maan got insult by lecture and lecture not allow attempt exam this year
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Handa & khurana assembled in garden area & talking about geet marriage.
Maan enter house with angry face and his sharp ear caught geet marriage..his mind working wrong way..
Maan smirked face and send fake letters to geet groom house and called groom house said wrongly about geet ..groom family denied marriage proposal next day.Maan not got any happiness .one side he got guilty conscious other side happy he did revenge with geet.
Handa family upset not only geet marriage proposal and groom family bad mouthed about geet but handa trust geet
Flashback end
Yama angry glare to maan: this is way u spoiled innocent girl life..
Maan little scary face: Mr.yama sir..plz see another scenes also..
Yama nod his head and magic water shown maaneet life once again.
Khurana consoled handa family and M.father ask maan marriage with geet with slow voice.
G.father: I don't want anyone pity for my child life with pain voice
M.father hit his shoulder lightly: stupid, she is not only ur daughter, she is my daughter..how could I thought that my geet is impure..she was pure like milk.. anyone bloody person said about my child..i trust them.i know my child..she is my child.. why I ask u permission for marriage.. I decided maan and geet marriage will happen after complete their college.
Maan got lighting in his head but his guilty accept geet in his life because of him , her marriage strugggle
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Geet : maan, I want talk with u alone.
Maan nod his head and follow geet silently
Geet: I don't want this marriage with head bow down
Maan: geet.. No one stop this marriage , I am sorry because of me, ur marriage stopped with guilty tone.
Geet laughed loudly and maan got confused look at geet.
Maan shout:geet stop it..
Geet placed her finger in her lip like obidient student..but her smiled smirking seeing his confused face
Maan; geet
Geet : sorry tried control laugh .
Maan: geet , I am sorry .. are u ok ..because of shock news ur brain not affected right..u already half mad , I cannot tolerate full mad in my whole life.
Geet hit his back heavily: Idiot..moron..and don't take whole credit to stop my marriage .. I stop my marriage not u with smirked face.
Flashback end
Yama shocked face and look at geet and geet showed embrass smile to yama..and maan glare to yama, he replied sheepish smile to maan.
Flash start
Geet : I stop my marriage.. I don't want marry that mumma boy..he nod his head like scape goat what his mom saying.. I don't want marry with him and anyone.
Maan shocked : with anyone means..are u..with popped eyes.
Geet punch his stomach thorugh fist palm: I don't want marry now.. I want go abroad my studies .. I want join NASA..that my dream Job.. but dad want my marriage so I sent fake letter and my fake pregrancy report to groom family..they stopped marriage.whole credits for mine with proud tone
Maan mouth open widely : what.. pregrancy report..really u r mad geet.time god they did not show that fake report to uncle..if they did it..uncle god heart attack with grinned teeth
Geet : sorry
Maan : ok.. forgot everything how to stop our marriage ..
Geet : hmmm..let me think
Maan roaming one side to other side..and his mind striked idea: geet..i got idea.
Geet excited face: what
Maan : if we break our dad and uncle friendship means.both become enemies in both professional & personal life automatically,both stopped our marriage.
Geet hit his forhead :u r idiot .. because of our dream , u want our family to enemies ..papa & maa (m.father & M.mother ) without seeing my face, that day not good for them same like me..i cannot alive without talk them mainly dadi..no way. I cannot live without her
Maan mocking tone: then marry me and come to my family enjoy with them
Geet: uff.. I cannot..
Maan: u give idea with fuming face
Geet :I have a idea.. bring any fake priest and give more money him and say if we both married , anyone of person died soon insake of kundali .
Maan: This idea not bad but u think is it possible way to stop marriage
Geet: 200 % our family accept because they want our happiness if marriage separate anyone life from them.. they never accept marriage mainly our dadi trust astrology so much..she trust easily and make other family member understand..
Maan thumb up to geet: mission start.
Same way plan excuted , first maaneet parents not accept what priest said .slowly maaneet excuted fake dangerous harmness with ownselves..every incident made maaneet family scared and thought because of marriage ..they got injured. Both family decided stop marriage proposal.
Maaneet got happiness and maan asked bike ride with geet.. after what happen..u know very well.. They met in Hell
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Yama angry glare to maaneet: because of ur happiness , u both played ur family feeling.. u both deserve punishment.
Maaneet scary face and maaneet blamed each other because of current situation
Yama: u both r mad for each other but this also true one..u both love each other
Maaneet laughed madly: what.. we love each other..what funny..
Geet: this joke of the year 2018
Yama: stop it..
Maaneet shout their mouth..
Yama: every time u both fought but never allow anyone blamed u ..we both support each other without other knowledge, not only in ur matured age even after u fought in age of 5.
Geet broked ur pen thought but she did not..she filled extra ink if u opened , u thought pen broked.. she did prank with u but never want broke ur gift.
Maan surprised look at geet and geet head bow down
And u maan, u protect geet from her friend, one day he tried to misbehave to her but she not in sense..u save her and bring to home without her knowledge..
Geet eyes moist and disgust her friend ..
Maan touched her shoulder : that day nothing happen with u,geet.. I saved u and broked his every bones in bodies after No one boys never bad eyes with u.
Geet hide her face to chest with cry face..
Yama smiled : Maan,she got guilty after scratch ur CD project so she straightly went to pricinpal .ask forgiveness and princiapal allow u enter to exam because of her.
Maan head bend down :is it true.
Geet nod her head and maan smiled
Yama: maan beat groom who he talked about his geet to bad mouth..
Maan:because he deserved how dare infront me of he spoke about my geet so I beated him
Geet head raise look at maan: really
Maan: yes with little smile face
Yama smiled and c.gupta confused look at his lord face
C.gupta: lords..what happeneing yaar
Yama: they love found in hell...chita gupta..
c.gupta: but lord , u r not any counseling officer
Yama: I know what I am doing.. u shout ur mouth and check their last day in earth.
c.gupta checked their last date and he got shocked and scary face..look at yama
C.gupta: lord, I did mistaken .. before their lifes finish in earth, we snatched their soul from their bodies.. we did big mistake..if other god know about this surely they will kill us..
Yama: chitra gupta..what u did..with angry face
C.gupta: send their soul to earth
Yama: its not possible.. I have power send one soul only but two soul.. I cannot
Maaneet heared this conversation
Geet: Mr.yama..plz send maan to earth.. I am here
Maan: No lord, u send geet.. I am here
Geet: No..lord ..u send maan
Maan: No lord..geet
Geet: maan, tried to understand , u r one only son in ur family..they need u , maan
Maan: geet, u too only child to ur family.. so u go.
Geet: maan, don't behave like stupid..if u go , u take care both families..so u go to earth..
Yama : u both decided quick and jump to this Gold pond..u both directly went to ur body..u get ur life back and time very less
Geet cupped his cheeks: plz.. I did not ask anytime from u but u did more think without my knowledge.. u deserve happy life maan..plz go take care our family..
Maan: no geet..i cannot..u go plz..take our family.. I lo..
Geet pushed maan before he complete his sentence..
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Hospital bed
Maan jerk up from hospital bed and his eyes searching there and here..and his eyes look at his geet..he confused everything happened in dream or real one..if its not dream where is geet..if dream mean..his geet not with him further life
Maan shout: mom & dad..both handa & khurana enter in maan room..both family showering their emotion and M.mother hugged maan tightly and kissed his forhead ..: my son alright..thanks god..
Maan : Mom, where is geet with fearing face andpraying it just dream only.. his geet with him.nothing happened to her
Mom tear face: geet beta..with crying face
Maan hugged his mom tightly: mom..my geet...with tear flicked in his brown eyes.
Hell
C.gupta: Lord, u thought that u taken right decision..
Yama: yes, C.gupta.. I taken right decision.. they have two bodies but one soul..without maan or without geet both were incomplete.. so I allow both soul to earth.. but I did not use my magical power send geet , their love power send her to geet
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Maan: mom ,my geet died..
Mom stay away from hug : no maan, ur geet not died ...but she went to coma..doctor lost hope with her
Maan: really..where she was.. I want see her..while his face brightening
Mom: but maan..ur state
M.father: yes maan..u could ..khurana bring maan to ICU word..his legs shivering seeing his love in bed ..his chatter box sleeping in bed with silent mode.
Everyone left alone geet with maan
Maan kissed her forhead with love filling face: Mishty, wake up soon, u r maan want say something with u..before I complete my word..u pushed me.but our fate tied with long lives ,I pulled ur hand before fallen to pond.. our love bought u to earth..come back mishty..u r maan waiting for u.
Two weeks past.. Maan stay with geet every sec and saying more funny moments what they shared in past life..both realized more ..how crazy they was..ego and revenge hidden their love from eyes Now they got true love in life
Geet eyes ball slowly moved with closed eyes and maan kissed her crown head once again.
Geet open eyes lightly and shivering lip murmuring his love name: Maan..
Maan kissed her whole face: My mishty back to me..
Geet : Now say what u want say with winked eye
Maan winked eyes: Love found in hell..
Maan placed his forhead to her forhead and both family got their happiness back in their life.. Maaneet happy live with together ever and do more cute fight and harmless revenge
End