Geet 8th Anniversary Celebration thread - Page 2

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Edited by priya_21 - 5 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
sanju : kalpi love marriage hi krna
priya : nhi kalpi arrange marriage
sanju : kalpi p2 nothing know
listen me
Priya : ha kalpi mujhe kaha kuch pata hai
gyan ki devi toh humari sanju hai na ๐Ÿ˜†
preety : can you leave kalpi sometime
ye uski life hai usse decide krne do
kalpi : thanks
sanju ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก : PC
priya : PC๐Ÿ˜†

           ***********
Arranged cum Love marriage ?

A business party...

 

 

Maan;the famous business man was shining in that party.He saw another person also catching the attention of the crowd.His eyes went blank seeing that person.

 

 

MAAN:Geet!

 

 

He was seeing her after 2 years.

 

 

Geet's eyes captured his vision by mistake.

 

 

They both kept looking at each other without knowing that their emotions were causing tears in their eyes.

 

 

Not anyone at the party knew that Maan and Geet were a couple once.

 

 

The truth is that Maan and Geet were tied upto each other through marriage.They were forced to be a couple.Both believed in love marriage,but they had to do arranged marriage for the sake of their parents.They were too young and immature to get married.

 

 

Their ego led to small childish fights which tore their bond terribly breaking their marriage.They parted their ways through divorce and concentrated on business.Both have become successful Business people.There is success in their life,but not love.

 

 

Geet realized that her eyes were becoming wet.Her ego did'nt allow her to be weak in front of Maan.So she just walked out.Maan ran after her.

 

 

MAAN:Geet!

 

 

She did'nt know whether to respond or not.

 

 

MAAN:Why are you leaving the party?You hate my face that much?I won't come before you.Don't leave the party.You come back and enjoy the party.I won't spoil your enjoyment.

 

 

GEET:I had enough enjoyment.That's why I decided to leave,not because I hate to see you.

 

 

She turned back and started walking.Suddenly she turned back.

 

 

Maan was looking at her.

 

 

GEET:Maan...I want to tell you that I don't hate you.

 

 

He felt very happy.

 

 

MAAN:Then shall I join you?

 

 

GEET:What?

 

 

MAAN:I mean...let us walk together.

 

 

GEET:Party?

 

 

MAAN:I also had enough enjoyment.So I am fine.No need of staying back at the party.

 

 

They walked together.

 

 

They sat in a garden.

 

 

Tree leaves were falling down.

 

Maan:I am happy that you were willing to spend your precious time with me.In fact I am surprised that you did'nt refuse to sit with me.

 

GEET:Maan...after divorce I when I thought about our married life I felt our fights were silly.

 

 

MAAN:You are right.I also felt so.We were so childish.All were making fun of me for divorcing you because of such silly fights.Our childish fight became a stupid  reason for our divorce.We were fools.

 

 

Geet became upset:Yes.But what's the use of talking about t now?Now it's too late.We are divorced.

 

 

 

It pricked his heart.

 

 

He said in his mind:After divorce only I realized your place in my heart.During our stupid fights and anger towards you I don't know how and when...I had started falling for you unknowingly.I realized it very late.After our separation I missed you every single minute.

 

 

GEET:After divorce only I understood that I never hated you.It was just an anger.My stupid anger.I was so short tempered.My age and experience have taught me to control my temper.Now I have control over my temper.

 

 

MAAN:Me too.Even I have learnt to control the temper.I understood that anger is unnecessary.Getting angry unnecessarily can break relationships.

 

 

They looked at each other emotionally.

 

 

Maan noticed a leaf which fell on her hair.He took off the leaf.

 

 

MAAN:Sorry.I just...

 

 

GEET:It's ok.I love Autumn.I enjoy leaves falling down...especially on my body.

 

They smiled at each other.

 

MAAN:Geet...now we both have cleared our mind.Now there is no anger for each other.So shall we be Business partners?

 

 

She smiled happily:Of course.

 

 

He became very happy.

 

 

GEET:I think I should leave now.Bye...

 

 

MAAN:Bye.

 

 

She started walking leaving him sad.He did'nt want her to go as he was enjoying her company a lot which he never did when they were a couple.

 

 

He thought:No.I should not lose her again.I should not repeat my mistake.

 

 

"Geet!'He called her loudly.

 

 

She looked back.

 

 

Maan ran towards her.

 

 

MAAN:Shall we be partners?

 

Geet:Of course Maan.I had agreed to be your partner in Business.Then why this doubt?

 

Maan:I mean...partner in my life too...

 

Geet looked at him in disbelief.

 

GEET:Means?

 

 

MAAN:I mean... can you be my life partner?

 

 

Geet could'nt believe her ears.

 

 

GEET:What did you say?

 

 

MAAN:To be frank,after you left only I realized how much I love you.

 

 

She became very emotional.Tears rolled down her cheeks.

 

 

GEET:Me too Maan.After divorce, everyday I cried thinking of my mistake.I regretted divorcing you.Because I love you.

 

 

They both became very emotional.

 

 

He wiped her tears:It is God's decision.If we had not divorced each other we would not have known each other's value.Because of separation only we realized that we love each other.

 

 

GEET:Yes.God makes pairs.God made us a pair.He separated us,he united us now.

 

They smiled tearfully.

 

He caressed her face.

 

They shared an emotional eye lock.

 

 

After a year...

 

 

Maan and Geet threw a party on their Wedding Anniversary.

 

 

They cut cake and fed each other.

 

 

 

 

One of the guests asked them:You guys had Arranged marriage or love marriage?

 

 

MAAN:Oh!It's so confusing.

 

 

Geet smiled:We had both arranged marriage and love marriage.First we did arranged marriage.After that  we fell in love with each other and then we did love marriage.

 

 

She looked at Maan and smiled:Right Maan?

 

 

He smiled:Yes sweet heart...

 

 

They smiled at each other while the guests were confused with Geet's answer.

 

 

 

 

The end

 


Edited by priya_21 - 5 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
priya : Tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
kalpi : Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
priya : Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana
Wada kiya toh wada karke nivana
preety : Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
sanju : kya baat hai aaj
bda romantic ho rhe ho teeno
priya : wo kya hai na sanju
sanju : ha
priya : chod
tujhe smjh nhi aayenga๐Ÿ˜†
preety : before one more fight start๐Ÿ˜‰
kalpi : our next story name is
          *********

Two young heart when meet, love blossom... falling in love is written of both one destiny but then why pain in this heart... This pain going reside you for forever...

Let's go few years back, when he is just 21 and she is just 18...

I belong to rich family, my parents loved me so much, I always want to go village but my full family living in cities... our college gone in trip to pune, here I get chance to see one village plus I met with her first time here

I never forget that day , that trip which changed my whole life

Vyom , shiv let's go

.

Maan just wait few hours

We just reached here

And you ready to run for outing

Maan : common shiv

Now no another excuse

You both know we have only two days, which teacher given us to explore here

Vyom : and you want to go to Village

Maan : so what wrong in this

You both coming or not

Shiv : coming

Vyom : ok

         *********

Morachi Chincholi

A famous village in the midst of non-descript villages! Morachi Chincholi village the names means peacocks and tamarind trees. This village is famous for its tamarind trees (which no one is interested in) and hundreds of free-roaming peacocks and peahens (which everyone is interested in). 

We just start taking pictures ...

The village is not very big i.e. the one road which runs through it is probably a 2-3 kms long. But, the peacocks are everywhere...


Vyom : it's looking beautiful

Maan : hmm

Shiv if you want I can drive slowly now

And you can explore here

Shiv : no you enjoy

We come here for you most importantly

We ventured into the fields a bit and managed to see quite a few peacocks. But the problem was that they were extremely fleet footed and often went into the tall grasses literally becoming invisible. Once, we were just looking around standing near the edge of the road and suddenly a peacock rushed out of the bushes just a meter ahead of us. He was there all the while and we hadn't even noticed him. Probably, a sudden movement by us startled him


.

Vyom : now what next

Hope hume yaha raat ko rukne ka kuch mil jaaye

Shiv : let's see

There is also a small temple in the village where it seems bhajans happen in the evenings. 

Bhajan voice make us stop, and we enter in temple...

Maan : nice voice

.

Why you looking me like that

Voice is nice

Vyom : kya baat hai

Yaha aate ladkiyo ko notice krne laga

Maan : common

I just talking about voice

.

But his words stopped in mid, she turn to give aarti to all, he just lost to see her face, her black eyes, long hairs which flowing in air, and she trying to put hair behind the ears in mid while giving aarti to all... Her voice which make him to enter the temple... And her glowing faces...

She come and stopped near him...

She waits few seconds, he take aarti, but he lost so much in her... She looks another two boys...

Vyom : hum le lete aarti phle

Vyom & shiv take aarti, then again her step stopped near him...

..

Inhe kya dikhayi nhi deta

Her voice like melody songs in his ears, he blink the eyes slightly...

His friends nodded absently... both not excepting she going ask something like that

Poor boy

She round the hand on fire flames and touch on his both eyes one by one... and left...

Maan touched own face and smiled to feel her...

Shiv slapped on his shoulder and said ye sb kya ho rha hai Maan

Maan : kya huya

Vyom : kya huya

Usse laga tumhe dikhta nhi hai

Maan : uske aange mujhe kaha kuch dikha waise bhi

Shiv : maan let's go back

Maan : shiv

I like her

Shiv : maan we not know her

Maan : ek pal hi kafi hai Shiv

Jaise ek pal mein sharanya ne tumhe dil de diya

Asa lag rha hai

Mera dil ye le gyi

Vyom : ye toh gya

          ***********

Trio come down , and maan again seen same girl, he take step towards her, his friend try to stop him...

Hey

.

Namastey

.

Aap kya bta sakti hai

Yaha koi resort ho

Raat ko rukne ke liye

.

Chaliye mere sath

.

Mere dost bhi hai waha

.

Vyom , shiv come

.

Aap dono kaise dost hai inke

Inhe dikhayi nhi deta hai

Aur aap dono ko ye puchna chaiye

.

Aur aapne bechare inhe bej diya

.

Maan : what

Kisne kaha mujhe dikhayi nhi deta

.

Aapke dost ne

Vyom & shiv : no

Humne nhi kaha

Aapne khud maan liya

.

Then MR. why you staring me

.

Vyom : wah

Village me English girl

.

Oh village me rhte hai

Iska matlab ye nhi

Anpad hai hum

Smjhe aap

.

Aur aap

Hume kyun gur rhe the

Maan : tumsa hasin maine aaj tak koi nhi dekha

.

Sandle padi na

Toh ye lofarpanti sbhi utar jaayengi

.

Kaka chaliye

She sits in bullock cart and left...

         ***********

She enters in resort and seen worried face of Kajal...

Kajal kya huya

Kajal : yaar aaj bhi kaka ne hume nhi chuna us room me jaane ke liye

Wo Moni hai na

Is week wo us room me jaayengi

Aur usse wo sb cheeze milengi

Hume kb wo sb milenga

Jb hume bhi achi dresses

Bhut se jewellery

Milengi

.

Kajal abhi hum 18 tk nhi huye hai

Jb ho jaayenge

Tb hume bhi kaka

Wo sb denge

.

Kaka : shi kaha meri geet rani ne

Geet : kaka

Parsad

Kaka : khush rh

Ab jaake tum dono apna kaam kro

Khana banayo raat ke liye sbka

Geet : ji

          **********

Hume three room chaiye

.

Tum teeno yaha ke toh nhi lagte nojawan

.

Ji nhi

Hum yaha bs gumne ke liye aaye the

Aur raat ho gyi toh

.

Are achi baat hai

Humara ghav hai bhi bhut pyaar

.

Ji wo toh hai

.

Waise aapne is resort ko acha maintain kiya huya hai

.

Beta ye rhi tumhari chabiya kamre ki

Kuch aur chaiye toh bta dena

.

Dinner

.

Kyun nhi

Abhi bejwata hu kamre me

.

Thanks

        **********

Three girls enter in different room taking food tray...

She knocked on door and after getting permission, she entered...

Sir your dinner

.

He turn and both shocked to see each other...

Tum yaha

.

Aap yaha kya kr rhe hai

.

Tumse milne aaya tha

Ye kehna galat honga

Kyunki mujhe toh pata hi nhi tha

Tum yaha mil jaayongi

He takes steps towards her, she take step back, before she run from door, he pinned her to nearest wall...

Daro mat

Bs ek baar meri baat sunlo

.

Mein waisa nhi hu jaisa tum mere bare me soch rhi hu

.

Jis tarah se aapne hume pakda abhi

Usse hum kya soche fir

.

He take step back and said sorry

Dekho mein sch mein tumhe pasand krta hu

.

Kitna jaante hai aap hume

Jo pasand krne lage

Ye sb lines apne sehr me jaake kehna

Hum nhi maanane wale

.

Ye toh bta jaayo

Mein kaise yakeen dilayu tumhe

.

Wo toh dil dilata hai

She runs out from room...

         ********

Around 12, maan come out from room, he not able to sleep, his heart is restless, her face coming again and again in front of him...

Maine toh usse uska naam bhi nhi pucha

Kaise pata karu uska naam

.

He walking in corridor... And come out in garden... One room little far from main resort, caught his attention, he feel some movements here... but due to darkness he not able to see anyone...

His step stopped when someone pressed his shoulder...

Aap yaha

.

Tum yaha kya kr rhe ho

Wo mujhe neend nhi aa rhi thi

Toh bs ase gum rha tha

.

Beta

Ye ghav hai

Yaha raat ko bahar gumna khatre se khali nhi hota

.

Aap bhi toh

.

Hum toh issi mitti ke hai

.

Ab jaake so jaayo

Maan nodded and left inside...

          ***********

Next day, another girl come with coffee, he not like totally...

Suno

.

Ji sir

.

Wo jo kal raat ko dinner dene aay thi

.

Kaun sir

.

Mujhe bolne toh do phle

.

She nodded

.

Uska naam kya hai

.

Sir mujhe nhi pata kaun aaya tha

.

Nhi pata toh pata kro

Aur mujhe batao

Wo kaun thi

.

Dekhiye

Mein asa kuch nhi krne wali hu

Smjhe aap

Mein kaka se aapki shiqayat kr dungi

Aap aur aapke dost abhi yaha se bahar ho jaayenge

.

Sorry

Wo mein usse pasand krta hu

Par wo yakin hi nhi kr rhi

.

Pasand krte hai

Aur naam tak nhi jaante

.

Usse kal hi toh mila mein

.

Tum ab sb smjh hi gyi ho

Thodi si madad krdo meri

.

Maaf krna sir

She left saying this

           ********

Kajal : geet tune mujhse chupaya

Geet : kya

Kajal : wo ladka tujhe pasand krta hai

Geet : ye baat usne tujhe bhi kh di

Ab mein usse nhi chodungi

.

She enter in his room without knock and shouted tum hote kaun ho

Maan : tum subh se kaha thi

Mein kbse intzaar kr rha hu tumhara

Geet : aapko smjh nhi aata ek baari me

Kyun mere piche pade ho

Maan : I like you

Geet : but am not interested

Maan : give one chance

Tum jo kahongi

Wo mein karunga

      **********

Vyom : maan are you gone mad

Shiv : maan hum yaha se jaa rhe hai

Just stop dammit

Maan : shiv, vyom

You both can go

First time I like someone

And I want she believe me

Vyom : doing cleaning work

She gone mad

I have to make her understand

Maan held his hand and said no vyom

I can do myself

Shiv : par maan

In sbse kya wo maan lengi

You are nice person

Nhi yaar

Try to understand

It's just infatuation

It's passed with time

.

Yhi toh hum aapke dost ko smjhana chahte hai

Ye bs ek khichav hai

Aur kuch nhi

Aap koi hume pasand vasand nhi krte hai

.

Aap sb ye rehne dijiye

Ye kaam aapka nhi hai

Aap jaa sakte hai

Maan : mein khi nhi jaa rha hu

.

Tumne vadaa kiya hai mujhse

Ydi maine pura resort clean kr diya

Toh tum mujhe apna naam batayongi

Aur mere sath bahar gumne jaayongi

Geet :kyun bina baat ki zid laga rkhi hai

Maan : tumhare liye khichav honga

Par mere liye usse badkar hai

Saying this, he again starts the work...

.

His friend feeling bad for him, want to help him but he denied and pushed both out from resort... vyom & shiv don't want to go but know own friend to very well, if he take decision both can't change...

And another side geet knows cleaning full resort alone is not easy task, here 5-10 girls clear full resort only on week basis... guests also come here less... by chance anyone come..

But after that kaka support the girls and taking caring all like own kid... From village many girls come here for working... kaka provide the food and clothes... and any small girl want to take education, he sponsor too up to only 8 th class...

She lost the parents when she is 10 years old , her chacha-chachi hit her, one day her uncle pushed her out from home... that moment kaka help her... give her shelter, food, education... in return of this favor, she help kaka in farming and resort work too...

With time, kaka starts helping many girls... Some girls married in small age and groom family just want heir as soon as possible... small age, no idea what family wants, kaka helped kajal and many girls like that... and give a better life...

He is very kind person, this is not only one village but nearest many villagers knows him and give respect to him...

.

Geet look towards maan, who trying best...she come near him and held his hand and said mera naam geet hai

Maan : par abhi

Geet : koi jaroorat nhi

Chalo mere sath

Maan : abhi

Geet : one hour

Maan : thanks

         **********

Geet : toh aap delhi se hai

Maan nodded

Maan : am studying in college

Geet : hmm

Maan : yaha sb kitna acha hai

Here so many peacocks

Geet : Morachi Chincholi is not just about Morachis, but also chincholis! There were lot of tamarind trees around ...

Dhyan nhi diya aapne

Maan : nhi

Geet picked up few seeds and placed in his palm...

Ghar le jaana

Yaha ki yaadein smjhkar

Maan : mein tumhe apne sath leke jaana chahta hu

Geet : aap mere bare mein kuch nhi jaante

Na mein

Maan : I can tell you each thing about me

Geet : jaise aapne apne college ka naam bataya

Aur ye ki aap delhi se hai

.

Maan smjhiye

Hum dono bhut alag hai

Aap kuch din me bhool jaayenge

Aap kissi geet se mile bhi the

Maan : tum kyun nhi smjhti

Geet : kyunki smjhna aap ko hai

Maan : geet

Geet : bs maan

    **********

Not only maan, geet also have some feeling for him, when she come near him in temple, she feel his eyes catching her each expression, when she get to know he is blind , she feel bad, his eyes not seeing her... But when he tells truth he is not blind, she feel happiness and his confession, he seeing her only and like her... She feel special.. But she knows the limit... she is uneducated girl, like his friend gets shock with her few words only... She learned in school after that sometime she use resort computer for studying... she is simple girl of village, and he is modern boy from city...

She can't lose own existence in dream world...she can't

          ***********

Kaka called kajal in cabin and give new dress to her and said aaj raat ko 12 bje tumhe us room me jaane ka mauka milenga

Ready rehna

Kajal smiled and run to share with geet... here maan following geet...

Geet ek baar

Kajal : Mr.

Apna samaan pack kro

Aur jaayo yaha se

Aur geet tu chal

Aaj meri baari hai

Waha jaane ki

Maan : kaha jaane ki

Kajal : tum gye nhi abhi tak

Geet : maan hum baad me baat krte hai

Please go

He nodded and left both

           **********

Kajal is so excited to go in that room, geet smiled to see excited friend, kaka come and take kajal with her, geet following both...

Kaka : geet tum abhi waha nhi jaa sakti ho

Geet : kaka

Waha asa kya hota hai

Mujhe bhi dekhna hai

Kaka : kuch din aur

Fir tumhe bhi wo mauka milenga

Geet : kaka aap kbhi kuch nhi batate

Kbhi toh batao na

Waha kya hota hai

Bs humesha yhi khte ho

Guru ji aashirwaad dete hai

 

Kaka : geet jaake so jaayo

Geet : ji

.

Geet have no habit to sleep without kajal, she come to back garden area, here already maan sitting, she don't want one more argument...but before that he take her name...

Jaanta hu tumhe yakin nhi mujhpe

Ek baar ajma ke toh dekho mujhe

.

He stand from bench and said tum baitho mein chalta hu

Geet : hum baith sakte hai

She come and sit beside him, make him smile...

                *********

Next morning when kajal not come back, geet go to meet kaka

Kaka

Kaka : ha geet

Geet : kaka wo kajal abhi tak nhi aayi

Us room se

Mein jaake dekhu kya

Kaka : geet tum jaante ho na

Guruji kripya jispe ho jaaye

Wo wapas nhi aata hai

Uski zindai guruji badal dete hai

Kajal kismat wali hai

Guruji ne usse chuna aur aange bej diya

Geet : bej diya

Wo ase kaise bina mujhse mile jaa sakti hai

Kaka : geet jaake apna kaam kro

Do din ke baad tumhe jaana hai

       *********

Around lunch time, maan get chance to talk with her...

Kya huya

Sad kyun ho

Geet : wo kajal mujhe chodke chali gyi

Maan : kaha

Geet : wo guruji usse le gye

Wo ab waha maje karengi

Usse na waha bhut se new dresses milenge

Aur necklace

Uski life to set ho gyi

Par apni dost ko wo kaise bhool sakti hai

Maan : geet kaun guruji

Geet : tum nhi jaante

Kaka ke guruji hai

Jb humari ghav ki ladki 18 saal ki ho jaati hai

Toh guruji usse vishesh aahsirwaad dete hai

Aahsirwaad me wo kapde, gehne dete hai

Sirf is ghav ki nyi

Balki dusre ghav se bhi ladkiya aati hai

Unke maa-papa leke aate hai

Jinhe guruji chun lete hai

Unki life set ho jaati hai

Uski family ko bhut paise milte hai

Maan : ye guruji baithte kaha hai

Zara hum bhi mil le

Geet : maan wo room hai na

Waha kaka unhe bulate hai

Wo unki puja ka place hai

Waha koi bhi nhi jaa sakta

Sivay kaka ke

Kaka baramchari hai na

Maan : fir ladkiya kaise jaati hai waha

Geet : maan bs aashirwaad ke liye

Jaati hai

Maan : kajal kaha gyi

Geet : guruji ne usse koi kaam de diya honga apne aahram me

Maan : aashram kaha hai

Geet : mujhe kaise pata

Ek toh I missing her

And now you

She angrily left

.

Maan (kuch toh gadbad hai yaha)

      

see below Edited by priya_21 - 5 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago

Part 2

Around 1 A.M, he come out from room ,and check the place, seeing all are sleeping , he take deep breath and come out from resort, now his main target is that room, which is little far from main resort and in mid parking also given plus long garden... He ready to take step , but feel someone hold his hand...he turned and seeing her, he take relax breath...

Tum yaha kya kr rhe ho

Maan : I also can ask same question

Geet : maan bolo na

Maan : geet ye guruji wagarh kuch nhi hote hai

Mujhe us room me kuch gadbad lagti hai

I have to check

Geet : no maan

Kaka ko bilkul nhi pasand

One time rupa trying to cross the line of garden area, kaka ne usse bhut data, aur yaha se nikal diya... wo guruji ko bhut maante hai

Unhone hum sbke liye bhut kiya hai

Jitna kamate hai

Hum sb pe kharch kr dete hai

Maan : geet mujhe jaana hai

Tumhe nhi

Geet : maan jaroor koi karan honga

Isliye kaka jaane nhi dete

Please smjho

Maan : geet tumhe smjhna hai

We are leaving in 21st century and you believing on false believes

Please grow up

Geet : jaanti hu

Mein tumhari kabil nhi

Isliye khti hu

Chale jaayo yaha se

Maan : geet please

Asa mt kaho

Do din tumhare sath ne ek ehsaas ko janam diya hai is dil me

Geet : maan ek din ki baat hai

Kal mein waha jaa sakti hu

Kal mein 18 ko ho jaayungi

Fir mein aapko aake sb bata dungi

Maan : ydi tum kajal ki tarah nhi aayi toh

Her heart misses the beat, thinking about this...

Maan : please

Mere liye

Humare liye

Mujhe jaane do

Wo jagah mujhe thik nhi lagti

.

Both hear some footsteps, maan twirl her and take to behind another wall...

Aaj raat ko hi us ladki ko yaha se le jaayo

Ji hajoor

.

Kaka hai ye toh

Maan placed hand on her lips and denied to speak...

Kal geet ki baari hai

Sb ready rakhna

Uske aange piche koi nhi hai

Isliye boss se kehna

Jitni raatein chahe wo uske sath bita sakte hai

Maal acha hai

Aur boss ko uski pic bhi bhut pasand aayi hai

Daam ache milenge

.

.

Hazoor hume mt bulna

.

Bula hota toh tujhe aaj bulaya nhi hota

Jaa jaake ash kr kajal ke sath

Aur wo teri huyi ab

Jb dil bir jaaye

Kya krna hai uske sath tu ache se jaanta hai

.

Ji hazoor

Both men left in different directions, her tears wetted his hand...

Maan : sshh

Hume yaha se nikalna honga abhi

Geet : kajal

Maan give helpless look to her...

Geet : mujhe meri kajal chaiye maan

Wo usse aaj raat ko le jaayenga

Mujhe usse bachana hai

She tries to run, but maan caged her in arms and take inside to nearest room...

Sshhh

Chup

If someone get to know

We knows what going on here

Bhut bdi musibat me fs jaayenge

Geet : wo meri dost hai

Meri sb kuch

Maan : aur tum meri sb kuch ho geet

Please smjho

Tears fall down from both eyes; she cupped his face and said maan mujhe usse bachana hai

Aap sath ho ya na ho

Mujhe ye krna hai

Maan : nhi geet

Geet : before going here

I just want to say something

I like you too

 Her lips touched his lips

 

Tere pyar main mar jawa

Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa

Oh tere pyar main mar jawa

Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa

 

Maan : tum akeli nhi jaayongi

Dono jaayenge

Geet : nhi maan

Mein aapko khatre mein nhi daal sakti

 

Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana

Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana

 

Maan : jaise mein tumhe khatre mein daal sakta hu

He held her hand and takes her out ...

 

Wada kiya toh wada karke nivana

Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana

            *********

Tears fall down from his eyes, remembering those days with geet, one hand wipes his tears...he turned and seen her...

Maan I also missing my friend Geet so much

Par kb tak tum ase khud ko kasoorvar maante rahonge

Kb tak uski yaado ko yu kaske thame rahonge

Maan : kajal I love her

And I can't forget her

Saying this he left the room...

Kajal picked geet photo frame and hide her in arms...

You can't go like that geet

Mujhe marna chaiye tha

Tumhe nhi

When maan loves you so much

How can you go

Kyun tum hume chodke chali gyi

Why you died

.

.

Kajal beta

Kajal hurriedly wipes the tears and said hanji

Mujhse aansu chupane se kya honga

Mujhe pata hai

aaj geet ki barsi hai

tum dono usse bhut miss krte ho

mein kbhi usse milli toh nhi

par itna jarur jaanti hu

tum dono ki jaan thi wo

.

Aur dekho har baar ki tarah maan bina pooja mein baithe chla gya

Tum toh baithongi na pooja mein

Geet ke liye

.

Ji mummy

                        *********

Kajal fearing to enter in room, but kaka hold her hand and both entered inside, full room is empty...

Kaka yaha toh koi nhi hai

Kaka : darya rakho

He pressed one button from behind the photo, in mid of room, floor parted and some stairs showing inside...

Kaka : chale

Kajal nodded...

When she reached down, here one man sitting on sofa and one bed also placed in mid...

Kaka : boss here she is

Boss come near her , and lift her chin and said beautiful

Acha hai

Is baar toh humesha ke liye hai na

Kaka : ji

Iske aange piche koi nhi hai

.

Boss : us ladki ka kya huya

Jiski pic tumne beji thi

Kaka : do din ke baad boss

18 saal ki ho jaayengi

Fir aaram se nath utarna uski

Boss hand slipped around his waist...

Kajal : kaka

Hume kuch nhi chaiye

Hume jaana hai yaha se

Boss : now you can go

Kajal tried to reach near kaka... but he left... next only her screamed rings in room...

         *********



next part 3 on page 3 (last post) - but that not mean you can skip mid posts
read in continuation 
Edited by priya_21 - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
preety : our next award is Most active Writer of the year
sanju : good
Kalpi : hmm
preety : what happen both of you
priya : because both 
are slow writer๐Ÿ˜†
       ********

our winner is 

and 1st runner up is 

Edited by priya_21 - 5 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago

Kalpi:Priya di , me and sanju may be slow writer but we both are very fast readers ๐Ÿ˜‰

Preet :๐Ÿ˜†

Sanju: yes baby, u r right๐Ÿ˜ณ

Priya: why not sanju is maaneet google Wikipedia right.๐Ÿ˜†

Sanju: PD..๐Ÿ˜ก

Kalpi: arhhh.. both Stop it yaar ..let enjoy our Active writers of the year  interview ..๐Ÿ˜›


                                                            

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Congrats dear winner of active writer of the year and thanks for wonderful interview ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

                                  


 First of thanks to Maaneetfavo for being so patient and the whole organizing team who has taken forward the celebration tradition of GHSP!! ๐Ÿ‘ You girls are fab!! Keep nailing!!๐Ÿ˜ณ

1) What was your hardest scene to write ?

Ans: Every scene is hardest and then again each scene is the easiest if we don't pay heed!! However being said that I would say writing intimate scenes are the hardest along some emotional ones!!
                            


2) how do u select the names of ur character?

 Ans:Whatever feels right, connected to the original show!! Or can be random as well!!

3)you are writing more stories,which stories very close to ur heart?

Ans: Every story of mine has different plot, backgrounds. Can't choose one. It depends on the time and mindset as well. Sometimes when for example we are in search of something romantic I can think of Mortal Promises or Predestined!! Enigma is emotionally draining on the other hand!! It's like that so won't be able to pick one!! 

4)how could u manage ur time ? (ur daily life schedule vs forum )

Ans: Hardest part. I type when I get time. It actually relaxes me from my hectic schedule. And reading comments from dearies are the best thing for a novice like me!!

5) what the most important lesson you have learned through last year of writing?

Ans: Nothing in my life is fixated as "most"/"least"
Everyday I learn something new. So can't point at one thing alone.


6) what do you mean readers to you ? And what do u want say to readers?

Ans: Readers mean everything to me. And I would just like to give the warmest hug possible. There is nothing to say to the readers who read comment and keep our Geet forum active because they deserve respect and salutations for the love they have been bestowing upon this forum for so long!! No word can define that feeling for me!! I love them all!!๐Ÿค—

7)where do you get ideas? Its came from daily life ( personal life /others life) or reading novel/stories  or own imagination

Ans: Imagination mixed with the reality around me. I do not read and I feel creating things raw by my own rather than getting ideas based on something else. Or even if I ever do get some inspiration I would definitely give them credit as for now I shall go for my vivid imagination!! ๐Ÿ˜†

8)why u chose GHSP forum rather than other forum?

Ans: Because I love Maaneet. I love the show Geet a little too much!! โค๏ธ

9)u love reading or writing ?

Ans: I was never a reader. Joined this forum because I started writing. Reading is a nightmare to me & am more like a visual person. So you can guess.

10) Last but not least, what u think about GHSP anniversary celebration?

Ans: Geet has ended 7 years ago. We still love Maaneet and so everything associated with Maaneet. Kudos to the people who are making efforts to make Maan and Geet memorable. I guess this has been celebrated over the years and still going on due to people like you. So my heartiest congratulations and Shukriya along with the virtual hugs for making Maaneet's journey special to us!!  โค๏ธ

Also I would like to thank each and every forum member who are making this forum going on!! ๐Ÿ‘

        

Geet: very nice interview ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Maan: hmmm
Geet: maan, are u educated person with doubting face
Maan grinned teeth: dont ask rubbish question, i am running big company but u asked me.. I am study or not
Geet: i asked simple question , u give me simple yes or no ..why u give me big lecture with chuckling face๐Ÿคข
Maan: dont irriatate me๐Ÿ˜ก
Geet: that is my word..dont use it once again. 

Kalpi : oh no they started .. guys Plz check two Ipti ji followers interview .. until PD deal with maaneet ๐Ÿ˜†

Priya: Me๐Ÿ˜ฒ

                         



1) Plz tell something about Ipti dear 

Ans: Other than amazing writer she is wonderful person...  Witty,  sarcastic,  lovable, friendly human being.!! A loyal friend to the people she cares... She is multitalented ๐Ÿ˜ณ

which character u like and dislike her most 

Ans: Her honest to goodness demeanor, her friendly deportment and sisterly camaraderie, she is the one with whom I can lean and trust upon, during my thin and thick times. I love her sarcastic self !! A loyal friend to the people she cares.

3 ) if u want , she need change anything means , what do u want say or u want share something but till now u cannot express to her ,if anything u can 

Ans:  I love the way she is and never want her to change for me ever...  There is nothing that i couldnt express to her...  She is the one with whom i can express myself freely.. 

4) just imagination question : when next lives ipti and u are in blood relation  what type of relationship u want with her 
Ans:
๐Ÿ˜† Ipti is my sister from another mother in this birth and in next birth I would like to be born as her sister, with whom I can traverses space and time. However i believe that she is my soul sister โค๏ธ.  I won't mind if she turns out to be my husband as well ๐Ÿ˜›

5) last but not least , what is ur view about GHSP anniversary celebration 

Ans: First of all i would like to thank the people who are involved in this celebration... Its a tough job and you people inspite of being busy investing lots of time to make this event successful..  ๐Ÿ‘ Must say it is an innovative work ๐Ÿ‘

Kalpi : Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ Now enjoy next follower of ur story Ipti dear 

                                          




1) what u feel, she got active  writer of year
 Ans: 
its good to hear that she got chosen as an active writer of the year, as she has a lot of different concept stories which are really interesting. Also she gives times to her stories by updating them.

2 )Pls tell us something about Ipti and like and dislike character for her 

Ans :

what i like about her that she asks other readers for their advise for her story..dislike i dont have ant idea

 3) if u want , she need change anything means , what do u want say or u want share something but till now u cannot express to her ,if anything u can

 i dont want to change anything about her as everyone has their touch to their stories and so does she...so why would one want to change that 

4) just imagination, u got magical power, u can change any human being to other species , now if Ipti is ur target means, what type of species ..u will change her 

Ans  (no idea about that sorry)

5 )last but not least , what is ur view about GHSP anniversary celebration 

Ans :
oh i really miss the show maan and geet...thats why i still come on the forum to read more stories about them...
I hope all this fine for you...

kalpi: Your interview too good dear 
 
                                                                                                                                                  

Sanju di : next whose interview kalpi ๐Ÿ˜‰
Kalpi: your favourite , sweet friend , Interview di ๐Ÿ˜‰
Preet : oh yes .. sanju ka special person .. and our dear sweet friend interview ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Priya: who ๐Ÿ˜ฒ.. i am only ur sweet special person na sanju di ๐Ÿ˜ญ
sanju: what u only ๐Ÿ˜ฒ, Geet ki babaji save me ๐Ÿ˜†
Kalpi: PD, we talk about ur interview only ๐Ÿ˜›
Priya:๐Ÿ˜ณ
Preet: let check our PD interview ๐Ÿ˜Ž



                                 


๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Congrats dear RUNNER UP of active writer of the yearand thanks for wonderful interview ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

                      

1) what was your hardest scene to write?

ANS

all are hardest scene, telling about one scene is not right, for writer , writing is not easy task, sometime satisfying own self is hardest task

2)how could u remember every stories previous plot & upcoming part ?

ANS

I remember nothing, just read previous parts

3)u r writing more stories,which stories very close to ur heart?

Ans : 
for writer choosing one story is difficult task, but if you asking then I going to take my first story name KAISA YE PYAAR HAI , that story continuation Mohabbat ki adhuri kahani 

4)how could u manage ur time ?(ur daily life schedule vs forum 

ANS
no idea, just when get time, I try to write

5)what the most important lesson you have learned through last year of writing?

ANS:
writing just give me more topics to right, and that disturb my readers... because update get less , time gap increased ... Now lessson point, improvement, when I read my own story from starting and now upto till parts, it's changed so much

6)what do you mean readers to you ? And what do u want say to readers?

ANS:
readers is most important for writer, without reader no one can become writer... I just want support from readers...

7)where do you get ideas? Its come from daily life ( personal life /others life) or reading novel/stories  or own imagination

ANS:
sometime from movie, TV serial sequence,and sometime empty time give idea


8)why u chose GHSP forum rather than other forum?

ANS:
         madam why you choose ghsp forum rather than other forum Hope you get answer

9) u love reading or writing ?

ANS: both

10) u r writing more stories,most of stories , u making geet cry more than maan? What is the reason

ANS:
crying is not sign of weekness , its just shown emotion, sometime readers feel am showing geet is week, no and second thing, why I make geet cry more than maan - showing geet in dark shade is difficult from Maan


11)Give few tip to other writer , how to active in writing

ANS:
am not active so much, comparing to others, just seen poll once 


                        


Maan: Good answer๐Ÿ˜ณ
Geet:yeah I like her answer๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Maan shocked face: u did not argue rather u accept my word with dramatic face ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Geet: Maan with grinned teeth๐Ÿ˜ก
Maan: i know my name is Maan .. Maan Singh Khurana.. every girls charming through my name itself with winked eye๐Ÿ˜‰
Geet throw pillow to maan face: stupid ๐Ÿ˜ก 

Sanju: Good shot ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Next our devil ๐Ÿ˜›Followers Interview ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

                                   





1) Pls tell us something about Priya_21 and like and dislike character for her

ANS: 
I  like her stories and creative thinking and concept she chooses for her stories

2) If u want , she need change anything means , what do u want say or u want share something but till now u cannot express to her ,if anything u can

ANS:
U think I will tell her to change she will No ways she gonna change though the character she potrays in her stories are justifiable but no she will not change anything


What I don't like is she gets a little dramatic when it comes to make geet cry

3)  just imagination question : when next lives PD and u are in blood relation what type of relationship u want with her

ANS: We would be sisters out to get each other throats

4)Just imagination, u got magical power, u can change any humanbeing to other speices , now if PD is ur target means, what type of species ..u would change her

ANS:
 
I don't know dear horse I guess as she is always hopping around alot

5) last but not least , what is ur view about GHSP anniversary celebration

ANS: It's a fabulous idea of getting all the great writer and reader together under one roof where both gets to express their views and ideas while others gets to appreciate and give their opinion


              

One more reader interview add soon ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


KALPI: THANK U SO MUCH FOR FABULOUS INTERVIEW DARLINGS ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Edited by maaneetfavo - 5 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
preety : Aise lehra ke tu rubaroo aa gayi
Aise lehra ke tu rubaroo aa gayi
Dhadkane betahasha tadapane lagin
Dhadkane betahasha tadapane lagin
Teer aisa laga dard aisa jagaa
Teer aisa laga dard aisa jagaa
Chot dil pe wo khaayi mazaa aa gayaa!
sanju : wah wah๐Ÿ‘
aaj toh preety ke andaaz hi nirale hai
kalpi : maa ki har baar nirali hai
priya : pc tujhe maa bula rhi hai kalpi๐Ÿ˜†
kalpi : no i just sing the line of bhajan
priya : nhi preety
sanju : ye kaha gyi
kalpi : gayab once again๐Ÿ˜‰
            ***********
Mere Rashk-e-Qamar 


Maan stared at her as she entered in the party hall gaining everyones attention. why not that could be she looks beautiful .beautiful to envy the moon itself. even The moon also would be envy by her seeing her pure beauty. she was wearing white Indian dress apart from every other women present in the hall flaunting there bare body with modern western dress. she is looking as if angle have descended from heaven.

She is looking different from all in the party hall thereby gaining everyone's attention in the party. He groan at the way all men are staring at her as if to eat her there only . She is nervous along with little bite scare at this unwanted attention .

He take steps atlast to her and stop dead when she finally lifted her lashes up to see him.the time stop as if little cold wind blow by his side as he continued to stared at her heart shaped face keenly , narofying her beauty  locking that in his heart through his eyes.

mere rashk-e-qamar tu ne pehli nazar, jab nazar se milaaii maza aa gaya

O my envy of the moon, when your eyes first met mine, I was overjoyed

 

The Great Poet invited for the party started to sing his gazal as if describing his emotions. His feelings.

He looked at her.she also was staring at him like the way he is. She seems to be lost in him . He smirk seeing his effect on her too. It's like fire egnited at both sides same way.

barq si gir gaii kaam hi kar gaii, aag aisi lagaaii maza aa gaya

Lightning struck and destroyed me;

 you ignited such a fire that it made me ecstatic

 

He comes more close to her and she take steps backwards realising her mischief of what she did. She got lost in stranger it's not good. Bari maa ko pata chala na to Teri khair nahi geet. She thought to herself but loud enough to be heard by him.

He chuckle at her blabbering. But her Badi maa. What was she talking that. Maan. You just started to think lot more about her when you just now have seen her. He smirk at ownself. But next her blush make his all ignite in fire.

Oh sweet lord did anyone be more beautiful in this world. She is looking more beautiful with her blush.

But first thing is did she just blush and because of him..

 

He lost in her blush didn't get when she started to take step far from him but when he did realized some business associates come and they pulled him another business conversation.

 

jaam mein ghol kar husn ki mastiyaan, chaandni muskuraaii maza aa gaya

Mixing beauty's mischief into my drink, the moonlight smiled how enjoyable!

 

He catch her sight. She was standing there with one girl as her age. Smiling whole heartily along with her sweet blush still there. He sip his drink and continue to stared her intently.

 

chaand ke saaye mein ae mere saaqiya, tu ne aisi pilaaii maza aa gaya

In the moon's shadow, O my cup-bearer, you made me drink such a wine that I was ecstatic

 

His looks turn passionate as his drink started to do its effect on him.he didn't realized how he get drunk this much lost in his moon.

 

nasha sheeshe mein angraaii lene laga, bazm-e-rindaan mein saaghar khanakne lage

Intoxication spread through the bottle, and goblets clinked in the party of debauchees

 

He storm towards her and grab her from her wrist pulling her on the dance floor. She was shock with scared looked at him with her big hazels making it more big.

 

 

nasha sheeshe mein angraaii lene laga, bazm-e-rindaan mein saaghar khanakne lage

Intoxication spread through the bottle, and goblets clinked in the party of debauchees

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She try to go from there but he pulled her forcefully again to himself sticking her to his body he made her dance forcefully on his steps. She shivered ,quiver in his hot passionate touch.he touch her all over pressing her more and more into him.she just obey his each touch and steps like a doll last in his touch.

At last both got lost in each other hugging each one as if finding solace with other one.

Press started to take snaps of them .this would be very AWSOME headline first them of Maan Singh khurana. ...and his mistress...

She at once opened her eyes at the Sound of clicking.she gasp with utter shock of what she is doing and what happening around her. Tears well up on her eyes.she looked very scared as the people staring at her in strange way. She looked at the women's staring her in disgusting manner. She pushed him with all her might And run from there at once leaving maan in daze for some time. And when he did realized she was gone.

Part 2

He darted angry glares on everyone before leaving the party in rush.

He try to locate her if she is anywhere in sight . It started to rain heavily now.where she gone now. He started to feels empty with her departure and that time he knows she is the one.

 

maikade pe barasne lagiin mastiyaan, jab ghata ghir ke chaaii maza aa gaya

Mischief descended upon the tavern, and when storm clouds poured down, I was overjoyed

 

He stared at the sky standing in the middle of the road.its all empty like his heart feeling now. Just then he hear a payal sound. He at once jerk towards voice and as if his body come to live.his breaths became normal .his heart started to jump in joy to finding her infront own.he place his hand on his heart saying him to calm down now.she is here.

 

behijaabana woh saamne aa gae, aur jawaani jawaani se takra gaii

Unveiled, she came before me, and her youthful splendor collided with mine

She came forward slowly standing before him stare at him in his chocolate eyes.

He saw the same feeling there as of him.

 

aankh un ki lari yuun meri aankh se, dekh kar yeh laraaii maza aa gaya

Her eyes clashed with mine in such a way that seeing this fight made me joyful

He grasp her from her waist jerking her into him .she clutch him from his shoulders as a reflex.both got drench in rain fully trying to stared at other one in this heavy rain.

His gaze travel down on her petals shivering in cold rain or his effect on her.

He glance in her eyes again as if asking her permission. And she granted it blushing all red bending her head down.

 

aankh mein thi hayaa har mulaaqaat par, surkh aariz hue wasl ki baat par

Modesty was in her eyes every time we met; her cheeks blushed red when I spoke of our union

He cupped her face and place his lips on her petals and shiver run down both of there spine at there contacts. Her hands run on his scalp pulling him closer clutching him , hugging him.he pulled her upwards from her waist as he slowly started to kissed her relishing her taste. She taste so sweet,  he nibble her thursting his toung inside her mouth he kissed her passionately. The kiss goes long and long. As both kiss each other hungrily finding solace in each other arms.Rain continue to cascade down on both of them as if blessing them.

They broke the kissed and she shy away with his passionate look. This is the right moment thinking this he bend on his one knee suddenly holding her hand making her shock suddenly.

I love you...he simply confess his heart to her. Tears rolled down her eyes as guilt come in her hazels. .but along with that there was her love for him glistening in tears and her unsaid pain she is hiding.

Main  yeh...yeh nahi ho sakta.she finally utter with great difficulty and run from there before he knows anything leaving him confused with her behaviour along with sad.

 

Edited by priya_21 - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago

Part 3
Ye kya hai...Mr.MAAN SINGH KHURANA 
Savitri devi descended with new paper in her  hands .
He turn towards his dadima. She upto her drama he knows bit today he is not in the mood of that. Already he is frustrated as his mystery girl leave him yesterday and he cant able to find her. About her anything apart from her name.GEET. he have heard her talking with herself yesterday. What sweet name she have.where she got disappear don't know. 
Maan.look at this.what is this.
He nonchalantly look at where dadima 2 as showing him newspaper.  And his blood boiled looking at the news .how dared they used that word for her.there was headline as " Maan Singh khurana's mistress." No he never care for himself or this newsshit. Or any media.but today they have disrespect his love.now the have to face maan Singh khurana's wrath.
He started to rush outside but dadima called him..Maan..
Dadima not now.i will back soon.just wanted to tell you. You have got your Grand daughter in law today. Saying so he rushed outside to teach the media a lesson in his own way ,leaving his dadima all happy. 
*****************************************
Geet stand there keeping her head down tears were continuosly flowing from her eyes.
Ye kya hai geet, main tumse kuch puch rahi hoon. Jawab do.
Geet try to clarify her but she never listen instead she throw her out of there house.
You bring Shame on my family girl. Get lost from here. And never show me your face again.
But maa, dont called me that. I am not or wasn't. You are just a burden to us.
Maa geet gasp...
You are just a relative to me that's not mean you can put us in shame. Get lost from here.never ever show me your face again.
And she pushed her out not caring it was a night time and this could be dangerous for her being a young girl.
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Maan was too much frustrated,  this media people.they are just disgusting. He thought driving his car back to khurana mension. Already he was frustrated that his mystery girl is not to be seen anywhere. He want her madly.now it's becoming unbearable for him.he want his love..his jaan.now..
And break hard as one girl come suddenly infront his car.that could be so much dangerous. Already it us raining heavily...
What the heck...he shouted as he step outside his car ready to blast on her..
Geet...he gasp in utter shock and sweet surprise to finally finding his love infront him...
Part 4
He just hug her.taking her wet and shivering body on arms soothing her as well ..she closed her eyes finally relief took over her finding herself in his safe guards.she inhaled deeply his masculine scent calming herself in his arms.
Passionate hug of both of them broke by the goons who was behind geet.
Ye chore use humare hawale kar de...
As he heard that said, he clutch her more tightly getting the whole scene. His whole burn in anger. Nope.he is not gonna leave her anywhere.after ages, yes it's ages for him.he have find her.now he will not let her go far from him.
That words of goon just trigger all his frustration, pain of loosing her before at once making him bash all them with his hard punches.he makes all goons liiterely dead.they can't even stand on there place,leave running for there dear life. 
How dared they try to touch his girl.she is his love.
He turn to see her shivering with cold and fear from him.the way he beat all red and blue, it's make her scare from him to see much violence. He try to calm himself closing his eyes.
He looked at her wet form.she is wearing saree today that sticking to her body prominenting her all body parts.his eyes turn passionate to see the mermaid standing before him.

mere rashk-e-qamar tu ne pehli nazar, jab nazar se milaaii maza aa gaya
O my envy of the moon, when your eyes first met mine, I was overjoyed


He saw she was still satring at him.now there was no fear in her hazels instead little pain was there.

Thank you.saying so she started to go from there.again leaving him.no today he will not let her go .never ever.
He rush to her clutching her wrist tightly in anger he pulled her towards himself.
You are not going anywhere. Samzi tum.
Ye aap kya kar rahe hai, chodiye muze..
She try to wriggle out of his hold bit no use he tighten it more giving her pain and she wince. .ouch...
Maan at once leave her.she was rubbing the place he hurt her. 
He try to calm himself combing his wet hairs backwards. 
Look.geet..yeh jagah thik nahi hai..chalo Main tumhe ghar chod deta hoon.
She snap her eyes at him hearing him called her by her name.
How do you know my name. She asked innocently in her sweet voice mesmerising him yet again.
I know that . yesterday only you talking with yourself. He reply honestly making her embarrassed on herself .
Hey babaji. ..
Tum yaha itni raat ko kya kar rahi ho , he asked to reduce her embarrassment.
And she come to reality...her eyes turn moist remembering how her maa.no.no.she had warned her to never called her that.she have throw her out of house. She is her chachi but she is always calling her maa but after morning all changed with that news..she looked at him.its him only.whom she have met yesterday and everything changed along with her heart.yes her heart.which started to beating for him.
It's her love at first sight.she had fallen the first time she saw him in the party.the way he was looking at her.its so new and so much made her mushy mushy with his one look.she had that knows later that she have actually fallen in love with this man.whose name she didn't know until today morning but when she come to know it's MSK she didn't know how to react.would he accept her after knowing her reality or her being just middle class where he is so rich and high class. He would get any girl then why would he will marry her.who have nothing left now instead she is an orphan now.her tears rolled down on her cheeks making it invisible in the heavy rain.
Maan saw her starring at him , there was lots of emotions showing in her hazels,  but more prominent was her unsaid pain. Her tears he can see them in heavy rain also.she was crying silently. He wanted to reduce her pain.he can't see her in pain or crying. 
His hands reach to her cheeks wiping it,making her astonished.
How did he knows she is crying..
Geet , kya baat hai.kuyn ro rahi ho.he asked softly .there was pain his eyes as well seeing her in pain.
Kuch nahi...she reply softly getting out of her shock.
He didn't stretch further. .
Let's get in the car.we are already wet.
She nodded softly still confuse of where to go now. She didn't have money with her also.
As they left the place little far he asked her of her address but from inside not really wanted to leave her .He will just go next day only to her home with his dadima for marriage proposal. He decided. There is no more wait from his side.
Geet ,tell me your address, he asked again seeing her lost somewhere.
Ji..mera address. Wo to..she thought for sometime and reply..
Aap muze yahi chod dijiye. Main yahase chali jaungi. She ask him leaving him shock with her reply.
Geet..what is the problem.will you not like my coming to your house.he asked her hurt as he thought so.
Ok.fine then if it is a thing.he come again in his MSK mode declaring with finality. 
She looked at him expecting him to stop her but didn't she is the one asked him leave her here.
She slowly come down from car keeping her eyes downcast shivering with cold.still stop there waiting for his car to move on.
But it didn't moved instead she heard his frustrated voice.
Damn..car ko bhi band padna tha.looked at her with angry orbs.she take steps back looking at his red eyes. 
He come out from car and stand infront her looking at her intently. 
Geet yaha tumhe koi bhi taxi ya bus nahi milegi.come with me I will drop you home or you can just come to my house for the night.
She looked at him shock.what did he mean.
No.no.you are getting it wrong.infact my dadima is there with me.you can come there .and in morning you can leave for your own home.
Own home.she didn't have own.she thought sadly.
Geet .why are you so sad. Baat kya hai.
He asked again seeing her sad.then a thought cross his mind.
Oh shit. .did anyone media people trouble you or anyone.tell me..he asked from her holding her bare shoulders. 
She tremble with his touch but her eyes become wet turning his assumsions right. 
Kisi aur ki kya jarurat hai.if my own family disown me.she cry her heart out infront him narrating all the happenings from the morning burning him with anger.
You come with me now..Let's go.
He forcefully pushed her inside his car not listening her anymore.
He dialed his dadima, dadima send one car now at ...place..
Maan aap waha kya kar rahe hai.she asked him frighten as she knows the place is dangerous and it's night now. 
Dadima I will explain after coming home.you go to bed . Don't worry about me.i am fine and will come soon.ok.
She looked him talking with his dadima. His dadima must be worried for him and he is stuck here because of her only.
Silence spread inside car leaving both in there own thoughts. 
Then where you have decided to go in this late rainy night. He asked suddenly remembering her stunt.she is not willing to come with him and those goons.his blood boiled at the thought.
She looked at him .he is again in his angry mode.she downcast her eyes but didn't reply Him anything.she herself have no answer. 
He look other way trying to calm down his anger.he turn towards her again hearing her clattering teeths.
We have to find some place till car arrive here .I will check car once.saying so he got down from the car and open the bonet. Rain is still pouring heavily.Geet to try to come out but heard his voice.
Seat in the car .no need to come out in this heavy rain.she seat back again silently waiting for him. 
He come huffing. Let's check if problem is solve saying so he try to start the car and it did. A small smile come only his lips at his victory. He is really worried for her.its not safe for her to be here.
Her face also brighten along with his smile.
He turn towards her seeing her all smiling  showing her cute dimple. His heart did a little summersault .
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Geet was playing in the rain forgetting all her worries. She is here in maan's mension .his dadima had welcome her warmly and asked her to stay here till the morning. Till then rain will also reduce.
She wonder if she knows her as she thought so looking at her gestures but why not that be after all the breaking news in the news all around. Will she thought her wrong like her maa.but she never done wrong anything.its not her fault.
Maan come inside taking her name. He have knock on the door many times but didn't get any reply so he followed the voice of her payal coming from balcony and he stood rooted seeing the mermaid infront him dancing in the rain but he saw her stopping suddenly and her turn moist he can see that there was pain.
Geet.he called her and she startle as she turn towards him furiously ,her foot slip on wet floor and maan hold her rom her hands before she fall.
Geet sambhal ke.he caution her.
Aur tum yaha barish main kya kar rahi ho.you will fall I'll. Let's get  inside.
She looked at him staring in his eyes that ouzed pure love and concern.she felt delighted with the thought of this was for her only.small smile come on her face.
Maan confused look at her changing emotions and he got lost in her hazels staring at her.

mere rashk-e-qamar tu ne pehli nazar, jab nazar se milaaii maza aa gaya
[O my envy of the moon, when your eyes first met mine, I was overjoyed]

Both lost in the moment come closed and finally there lips met and fire ignite in both there bodies 

barq si gir gaii kaam hi kar gaii, aag aisi lagaaii maza aa gaya
Lightning struck and destroyed me; you ignited such a fire that it made me ecstatic


as the kiss turn more and more passionate didn't know how long the kiss goes. 

Maan broke through slowly finding her breathless.he looked at her red face turning more bitroot as she shy away hiding herself in him.
Geet now don't hide yours feelings from me.i well knows you love me just like I do to you.
She nodded her head silently as there is no chance for her now to hide it.its his kiss said it all his feelings for her. Moreover she is tired now with all the happening in her life.she wanted her love beside her when her family has detract her.
Maan's happiness was knew no bounds. His heart jump in joy.
Oh geet.you don't know you make me so much happy with your acceptance today.
She blush more hiding herself into him.
But soon she snap from his arms.
Par aapki dadima. Woh.
You don't worry about her ,she knows everything from the beginning. And she too wanted you as her GDIL. Just as me wanted you to be my wife.
Geet shy away yet again with his words.as he pulled her in his arms taking her petals in his mouth for the kiss at his victory of getting his love. The rain stop long back and small moonlight appear as if giving them blessing for there new journey of love...

 jaam mein ghol kar husn ki mastiyaan, chaandni muskuraaii maza aa gaya
Mixing beauty's mischief into my drink, the moonlight smiled how enjoyable
!

They kiss to there heart content in the moonlight celebrating there new found love.

chaand ke saaey mein ae mere saaqiya, tu ne aisi pilaaii maza aa gaya
In the moon's shadow, O my cup-bearer, you made me drink such a wine that I was ecstatic

Edited by priya_21 - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
this time we going honor to those people who make some important threads , which pinned by our ADMIN of this page , or some which are so popular between in our maaneetians๐Ÿ˜‰

Ek samaan unke naam

first we want to thanks LAUGHINGPEARL๐Ÿ‘

Maaneetians Birthday Calendar - This thread manage by her, making any thread like this , never easy...thank you dear for taking this step and adding more memory here in GHSP Forum๐Ÿ‘

Edited by priya_21 - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago

Love is unique feel ,its happen anywhere with anyone.sometimes we found fraction of second, sometimes we should taken more time realize our own feeling.sometimes we found out ourselves and sometimes our well wisher making us understand.More person surrounding us,we want only know about our maaneet right.let see they found their love or not and who would be cupid role in their love story mainly where they will be find their soulmate.

Story begins

A dark night,One bike harshly driving in empty road ,if anyone crossed Bike path ,they straightly goes to heaven.this youngsters why drive vehicles harshly mainly charming boys,yeah A charming boy driving a bike and cute girl sat back with him,both were very excited and unconditional happiness in their face like they did any achievement.

Girl:No one stop our destiny & showing cute smiling face to him.

Boy :yes,we won our fate,No one stop us with same excited face

But they don't know fate changed their wish, before they come out from happiness, Big truck hit their bike,both fallen into empty road with pool of blood,both eyes craving their each other glimpse ,their hearts need to confirm  his/her fine or not,their heart beat slow down,both taking their last breathe painfully and their hand tried reach to mingle but their pool of blood bodies not allowed

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A white cloud around whole place,a girl wake up from sleep with rubbing her little palm to her almond eyes.

Girl :mom, Boost ...without open her eyes ,yelling her mom with pout face. she did not get any reply,she open her eyes,her vision showing only cloudy place and she rubbed her eyes once again but she in cloudy place. Where am I.her eyes looking there and here ,i am not in my bed even not in my room..then where am i.

Girl stand in her own legs and step up to forward and cloud vanished from her sight.her face confused seeing that place and her mind remembering last night moment and her angry raise ,her chubby cheek turn to red insake of angry but with whom..

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A man walking in grand mahal with arrogant and pride steps,his eyes popped look at his place changed to mini war,everyone fighting through swords,dangerous  & wars equipments .

Man shouting:bas ( stop)...with roaring like lion with angry face.

Everyone stopped and look at person with scary face except two person pulling their hairs through their palm with angry face.

Man angry eyes shift to two person,his hard hand press one person shoulder but he snapped his hand with grummy face even though he did not noticed who touched his shoulder .

Man got irritate and call other person but person did not hear his shout

Man shout : stop it ..whole place one sec shaken because of hard voice

Both stopped look at person with angry face and man angry glare to them

Man: what going on...

Both look at each other, next moments both blast their laughter heavily and everyone was scary except this two person laughing madly ..

Man rolled his eyes : stop it.

Two person tried stop their laugh but their lips cannot hide their smiling

Man: u both stop it now with grinned teeth

Two person shut their mouth and one person around a man with teasing face.

Person: Geet, he is looking like jewellary show case toy and he wored more jewels in his whole body even he wored jhumkas ( ear stud) also with chucking face.

Geet giggling tone: yes,maan, but why he held this black long thread in his hand , her eyes wided,omg he is going attempt to sucide

Maan: geet, stop ur nonsense,I think he using this thread for tied drama screen in their troop.i am right while pointing his index finger infront of that angry man.

Man nod his head negatively: I am using thread, snatching soul from human body with grinned teeth

Geet placed her hand in maan shoulder : Maan, he seems like doctor nor culprit how he was snatching soul from human body.

Maan : I don't know

Man : Same way how I did it both of you like I do everyone.

Maaneet: what..

Man : yes, I am Lord of Death, Yama dharmaraja with pride tone

Maaneet once again blast their laugh: oh god stop ur joking..today we laughed more,already our stomach paining,we cannot anymore

yama: chitragupta

(chitragupta assistant of yama, he only assest keeping track and action of human beings on earth and upon the death, he  has the task of deciding heaven or the hell for the humans, depending on their actions on the earth)

Chitragupta appear infront of yama: yes lord with scary face

Yama: what going on here in angry face.

C.Gupta: Lord, after they enter in our place, both doing more naughtiness in hell. Both making our hell to war place.. few minutes before

Flashback start

Girl : Maan with angry face

Yeah  she only guts shouting MSK right .Girl none other our heroine Geet and got angry with maan.

Maan marched her side with angry face : geet..with angry face.

Both look at each other head to toe and both wored white dress,geet wored white chudidhar and maan wored white kurti and pant.

Maan : what the hell ,geet..where we are .. why I wored white colour, I love colourful dress with grinned teeth.

Geet: yeah I knew , not only colourful dress even ur colourful girls and every week , u r changing gilrs like ur colourful dress with mocking tone.

Maan angry face: they r my friends, don't talk like rubbish about my friends..

Geet: if I talk about them with raise one eye brow.

Maan: I say about ur Dumb boyfriend..

Geet: don't say my friend to dumb with angry mood..

Maan:I don't want waste my time with u.. why I am here .

Geet : uff.. I am also asking same question with u

Maaneet: where we are...

Some person come infront of maaneet, they wores jewellary in their bodies and look like different from human beings and little scary ,voices are hard one and holding heavy equipments.

Maan: geet,why u brought me this drama troop place.

Geet: don't lie,u only brought me here

Maan: I never lie in my life time.

One of the Person in group:really with excited voice

Geet:bhai,don't hear his words..this was big lie in his life.

Maan showing his index finger infront of geet: you r liar

Geet locked his finger to her finger: you r liar

Woman support geet and men supports maan, they started war in hell ..

Flashback end

c.gupta: that it lord

Yama hearing their fight but maaneet busily fighting with each other.

Geet:don't try smart ,u only pickup me from home and kidnapped me, now acting I kidnapped u somewhere.

Maan yuck face: ur princess of kingdom ,I kidnapped u for ur empire

Geet: yes,princess of Handa as well as Khurana with smirked face.

Maan fuming face: u r not

Yama shout: stop.. both maaneet never stop their fight in their life time if yama said they do , No right.

Man got angry suddenly sharp sword appear in air and take sword in his hand and slashing person who stood next with maaneet ( he was one of servant of yama lok or Narka or hell ) .servant cutted into two pieces After few second he vanished in air.

Maaneet was numb in their place and their saliva gulped into their mouth.

Geet murmuring maan ear:maan, really he is yamadharma raja but why I am here.

Yama: because You both died.

Geet eye widely: kya.. Mr. yama sir, u had mistaken, I never did any crime in my life time so I am not die in my young age but he did more crime, so he was with innocent face.

Maan mouth open widely and come infront of yama: No, Mr.Yama sir, she is devil, Big dramaqueen speaking only lie.dont trust word.i am innocent person

Geet pushed maan away from yama: No sir, he saying lie, look at my face..how innocent I am ( showing her face turn left cheek to right cheek to yama with pout face). I am pure like born child and he was opposite of my character.. he such a moron person, plz send him away from me with baby crying face

Maan: yes, I am opposite from ur character because you are real devil and I am pure soul.

Maaneet arguing each other forgot surrounding and everyone starring them with few sec chuckling, shocking, giggling, weird face. Yama got irritate than before..he lost his control

Yama : u both stop, I show ..who devil and who innocent..

Maaneet unison: yeah, Yama sir, u give judge our character.. turn their face to opposite with folded arms.

Yama: hawww.. Chitragupta,read their good and bad deed in earth.

C.gupta: yes lord

he bring gold cover book infront of them through his magical power.

Geet: are u going read this book for our good and bad deeds.. its take more time.

Maan: today only she using her stupid brain lightly.

Geet grinned teeth: u shut ur mouth idiot. Are u guys,u don't have any latest technology.. with weird face

C.gupta:latest technology ..with confused face

Maan : yes,we live in modern world,we chat with other side of poles living people in few sec , video chat,whatsup,messenger,so many technology even some news in rumor,scientist tried to making time machine.. if scientist invent time machine,we will go anywhere in past and future.

Yama got angry :what.. if humanbeing go to their past & future life, they will know about their death secret ,when they will die in their life.humans food chain will be collapsed , everyone become devar ( deva means person have no death., they come to God categories).Human population increase more without death

C.gupta: and Lord, u have no work with shocked face

Yama with grinned teeth: chitragupta, I knew everything because I am yama

Maan: yes lord, u r great person, u knew everything with winked eye to geet without yama notices.

Geet mouth open widely and mind thought: u buttering Yama with ur sweet word and planning escape in this hell.. u think u could go without me with smirked face.

Geet: Mr. yama , u r not only lord of death and lord of justice and law .. u only give justice to me with fake crying face..her voice chocking.

Yama melts seeing her sobbing face: Oh sweet girl, don't cry ..i give u justice..geet winked eye to maan with naughty face before yama notices she changed to her crying face.

Maan murmur:dramaqueen.

C.Gupta scratch his finger to yama shoulder and yama turn his concern face to c.gupta.

Yama: what chitra gupta, ..with grinned teeth.

C.gupta whispering tone: Lord, they try to divert ur mind and tried to escape ur punishment with respectful voice.maaneet tried hear yama & c.gupta conversation.they talk in murmuring tone..they did not get what they speaking.

Yama: u think ,I am fool,I trust their words.

c.gupta: no lord with gulping face

Maaneet: Mr .Yamaraja.. come to our matters first.

Yama: chitragupta, read their good and bad need.

Geet: Mr.yama,atleast using ur magical power making our long journey to  short film.

Yama nod his head and do magic : maaneet everyone starred magical water  filled in big vessel, they could see anyone & anywhere what they doing in earth through that magic water filled vessel.

Maan: Mr.yama sir, I could see my childhood days in this water with excited face

C.gupta: yes

Flashback start

Maaneet parents were very good friends after birth of maaneet.their parents were neighbor as helped each other in critical situation. Both family don't show partiality to between them If maan family bought anything to maan, they bought same thngs to geet as vice versa like geet family. Maan thought his family love geet more than him as geet thought her family love more than her.before their age of 5, maaneet were good friends.but one day everything changed in their life.even though both not remembered what happened in age of 5 , what fought they did it ..still they thinking both were enemies

( we know right what type of enemies they were..hehehe)

Age of 7

Maaneet doing their homework in study room at maan house.. but both sitting with two end of room.

Geet father enter study room with smiling face.

G.father: My dear children doing their homework like good children..

Geet got from her chair and run to her father and hug his knees till her height.

G.father kissed her forhead:my darling..maan beta come my side.

Maan get up from his chair & stand infornt of G.father

G.father lightly remove from geet held and kneel down in front of maan and take parker pen from his shirt packet and show pen to maan.

Geet: dad, parker pen with excited face.

G.father : yes, darling for maan.. geet face pout but her dad not noticed .. maan smirked look at geet.

Maan: No uncle, give this pen to geet with innocent face

G.father kissed his forhead: so sweet beta, I buy tomorrow for her ..today u won  drawing competition so this is for u.

Geet: yes dad,this pen only for maan with smiling face.

G.father: my darling understanding child.

Geet: dad,give that pen.. dadi said we buy anything,we put thing infront of god and pray to  god and then use it. Give me.. I pray and then give u..after u give maan with innocent face.

G.father: sure beta,..he gave pen to geet after three to four minutes she come back to study room and give pen to her dad.

G.father gave pen to maan and maan say thanks to g.father.he left the place.

Scene vanished in magic water.

Chitragupta: u both sacrifice everything in ur childhood ..now why u both blaming here.

Maaneet look at each other and their face look at c.gupta : movie not end..its only first half and see second half also with chuckling face.

Flashback start sorry everyone look at once again magic water.

G.father left the place and geet also silently ran to her house.. Maan remove parker pen cap, oh god pen leaked while his whole palm spread through pen ink .

Maan shout : geet ..with angry face

Geet giggled behind study room outside.: u deserve it maan...she left the place.

*******

Maan was also lesser than geet, he spoiled her homework note as poor geet got scolded by teacher . maaneet has grown very quickly , year also passed like they were enemity increase more.both have same age.so maaneet studied same school & college. Infront of parents both were very good friends , outer world both were best enemies. They did more prank and revenge opps cute revenge yeah little harm one but we both clever their prank or revenge never allow their parents reputation spoil..

College day

Maan have more girlfriends opps only friend type not girlfriend type..but he love tease geet with help of his girl friends as same geet also have more boyfriend same like maan.. only friend type.

Basket Ball match

Maan vs Geet

Maan & girlfriends one team and geet & her boy friends one team ..

Maaneet was good player in basket ball but their team not good ..they want close with maaneet and mainly they don't want maaneet become friends once again..some evil friend want maaneet enemies continue but maaneet have good friend also..they want maaneet friendship as wish they become best couple in college.

Maan team won but maan  team cheat with geet team..so maan team won the match ..geet got angry , she know maan friend cheated but maan Not accept reality.

Geet scratched maan project CD through sharp pin, insake of revenge ,maan got insult by lecture and lecture not allow attempt exam this year

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Handa & khurana assembled in garden area & talking about geet marriage.

Maan enter house with angry face and his sharp ear caught geet marriage..his mind working wrong way..

Maan smirked face and send fake letters to geet groom house and called groom house said wrongly about geet ..groom family denied marriage proposal next day.Maan not got any happiness .one side he got guilty conscious other side happy he did revenge with geet.

Handa family upset not only geet marriage proposal and groom family bad mouthed about geet but handa trust geet

Flashback end

Yama angry glare to maan: this is way u spoiled innocent girl life..

Maan little scary face: Mr.yama sir..plz see another scenes also..

Yama nod his head and magic water shown maaneet life once again.

Khurana consoled handa family and M.father ask maan marriage with geet with slow voice.

G.father: I don't want anyone pity for my child life with pain voice

M.father hit his shoulder lightly: stupid, she is not only ur daughter, she is my daughter..how could I thought that my geet is impure..she was pure like milk.. anyone bloody person said about my child..i trust them.i know my child..she is my child.. why I ask u permission for marriage.. I decided maan and geet marriage will happen after complete their college.

Maan got lighting in his head but his guilty accept geet in his life because of him , her marriage strugggle

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Geet : maan, I want talk with u alone.

Maan nod his head and follow geet silently

Geet: I don't want this marriage with head bow down

Maan: geet.. No one stop this marriage , I am sorry because of me, ur marriage stopped with guilty tone.

Geet laughed loudly and maan got confused look at geet.

Maan shout:geet stop it..

Geet placed her finger in her lip like obidient student..but her smiled smirking seeing his confused face

Maan; geet

Geet : sorry tried control laugh .

Maan: geet , I am sorry .. are u ok ..because of shock news  ur brain not affected right..u already half mad , I cannot tolerate full mad in my whole life.

Geet hit his back heavily: Idiot..moron..and don't take whole credit to stop my marriage .. I stop my marriage not u with smirked face.

Flashback end

Yama shocked face and look at geet and geet showed embrass smile to yama..and maan glare to yama, he replied sheepish smile to maan.

Flash start

Geet : I stop my marriage.. I don't want marry that mumma boy..he nod his head like scape goat what his mom saying.. I don't want marry with him and anyone.

Maan shocked : with anyone means..are u..with popped eyes.

Geet punch his stomach thorugh fist palm: I don't want marry now.. I want go abroad my studies .. I want join NASA..that my dream Job.. but dad want my marriage so I sent fake letter and my fake pregrancy report to groom family..they stopped marriage.whole credits for mine with proud tone

Maan mouth open widely : what.. pregrancy report..really u r mad geet.time god they did not show that fake report to uncle..if they did it..uncle god heart attack with grinned teeth

Geet : sorry

Maan : ok.. forgot everything how to stop our marriage ..

Geet : hmmm..let me think

Maan roaming one side to other side..and his mind striked idea: geet..i got idea.

Geet excited face: what

Maan : if we break our dad and uncle friendship means.both become enemies in both professional & personal life automatically,both stopped our marriage.

Geet hit his forhead :u r idiot .. because of our dream , u want our family to enemies ..papa & maa (m.father & M.mother ) without seeing my face, that day not good for them same like me..i cannot alive without talk them mainly dadi..no way. I cannot live without her

Maan mocking tone: then marry me and come to my family enjoy with them

Geet: uff.. I cannot..

Maan: u give idea with fuming face

Geet :I have a idea.. bring any fake priest and give more money him and say if we both married , anyone of person died soon insake of kundali .

Maan: This idea not bad but u think is it possible way to stop marriage

Geet: 200 % our family accept because they want our happiness if marriage separate anyone life from them.. they never accept marriage mainly our dadi trust astrology so much..she trust easily and make other family member understand..

Maan thumb up to geet: mission start.

Same way plan excuted , first maaneet parents not accept what priest said .slowly maaneet excuted fake dangerous harmness with ownselves..every incident made maaneet family scared and thought because of marriage ..they got injured. Both family decided stop marriage proposal.

Maaneet got happiness and maan asked bike ride with geet.. after what happen..u know very well.. They met in Hell

***********flashback end

Yama angry glare to maaneet: because of ur happiness , u both played ur family feeling.. u both deserve punishment.

Maaneet scary face and maaneet blamed each other because of current situation

Yama: u both r mad for each other but this also true one..u both love each other

Maaneet laughed madly: what.. we love each other..what funny..

Geet: this joke of the year 2018

Yama: stop it..

Maaneet shout their mouth..

Yama: every time u both fought but never allow anyone blamed u ..we both support each other without other knowledge, not only in ur matured age even after u fought in age of 5.

Geet broked ur pen thought but she did not..she filled extra ink if u opened , u thought pen broked.. she did prank with u but never want broke ur gift.

Maan surprised look at geet and geet head bow down

And u maan, u protect geet from her friend, one day he tried to misbehave to her but she not in sense..u save her and bring to home without her knowledge..

Geet eyes moist and disgust her friend ..

Maan touched her shoulder : that day nothing happen with u,geet.. I saved u and broked his every bones in bodies after No one boys never bad eyes with u.

Geet hide her face to chest with cry face..

Yama smiled : Maan,she got guilty after scratch ur CD project so she straightly went to pricinpal .ask forgiveness and princiapal allow u enter to exam because of her.

Maan head bend down :is it true.

Geet nod her head and maan smiled

Yama: maan beat groom who he talked about his geet to bad mouth..

Maan:because he deserved how dare infront me of he spoke about my geet so I beated him

Geet head raise look at maan: really

Maan: yes with little smile face

Yama smiled and c.gupta confused look at his lord face

C.gupta: lords..what happeneing yaar

Yama: they love found in hell...chita gupta..

c.gupta: but lord , u r not any counseling officer

Yama: I know what I am doing.. u shout ur mouth and check their last day in earth.

c.gupta checked their last date and he got shocked and scary face..look at yama

C.gupta: lord, I did mistaken .. before their lifes finish in earth, we snatched their soul from their bodies.. we did big mistake..if other god know about this surely they will kill us..

Yama: chitra gupta..what u did..with angry face

C.gupta: send their soul to earth

Yama: its not possible.. I have power send one soul only but two soul.. I cannot

Maaneet heared this conversation

Geet: Mr.yama..plz send maan to earth.. I am here

Maan: No lord, u send geet.. I am here

Geet: No..lord ..u send maan

Maan: No lord..geet

Geet: maan, tried to understand , u r one only son in ur family..they need u , maan

Maan: geet, u too only child to ur family.. so u go.

Geet: maan, don't behave like stupid..if u go , u take care both families..so u go to earth..

Yama : u both decided quick and jump to this Gold pond..u both directly went to ur body..u get ur life back and time very less

Geet cupped his cheeks: plz.. I did not ask anytime from u but u did more think without my knowledge.. u deserve happy life maan..plz go take care our family..

Maan: no geet..i cannot..u go plz..take our family.. I lo..

Geet pushed maan before he complete his sentence..

************

Hospital bed

Maan jerk up from hospital bed and his eyes searching there and here..and his eyes look at his geet..he confused everything happened in dream or real one..if its not dream where is geet..if dream mean..his geet not with him further life

Maan shout: mom  & dad..both handa & khurana enter in maan room..both family showering their emotion and M.mother hugged maan tightly and kissed his forhead ..: my son alright..thanks god..

Maan : Mom, where is geet with fearing face andpraying it just dream only.. his geet with him.nothing happened to her

Mom tear face: geet beta..with crying face

Maan hugged his mom tightly: mom..my geet...with tear flicked in his brown eyes.

Hell

C.gupta: Lord, u thought that u taken right decision..

Yama: yes, C.gupta.. I taken right decision.. they have two bodies but one soul..without maan or without geet both were incomplete.. so I allow both soul to earth.. but I did not use my magical power send geet , their love power send her to geet

**********

Maan: mom ,my geet died..

Mom stay away from hug : no maan, ur geet not died ...but she went to coma..doctor lost hope with her

Maan: really..where she was.. I want see her..while his face brightening

Mom: but maan..ur state

M.father: yes maan..u could ..khurana bring maan to ICU word..his legs shivering seeing his love in bed ..his chatter box  sleeping in bed with silent mode.

Everyone left alone geet with maan

Maan kissed her forhead with love filling face: Mishty, wake up soon, u r maan want say something with u..before I complete my word..u pushed me.but our fate tied with long lives ,I pulled ur hand before fallen to pond.. our love bought u to earth..come back mishty..u r maan waiting for u.

Two weeks past.. Maan stay with geet every sec and saying more funny moments what they shared in past life..both realized more ..how crazy they was..ego and revenge hidden their love from eyes Now they got true love in life

Geet eyes ball slowly moved with closed eyes and maan kissed her crown head once again.

Geet open eyes lightly and shivering lip murmuring his love name: Maan..

Maan kissed her whole face: My mishty back to me..

Geet : Now say what u want say with winked eye

Maan winked eyes: Love found in hell..

Maan placed his forhead to her forhead and both family got their happiness back in their life.. Maaneet happy live with together ever and do more cute fight and harmless revenge

End 

Edited by priya_21 - 5 years ago

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