You have a way of telling a story that is very gripping. I have to confess I was unsure about this one given the "Ghost" in the title, but reading your other ongoing story made me delve into this one. And I'm glad I did :)
ArHi's connection has always had an other worldly feel about it, a love that is on a different plane. It was interesting how you took the metaphorical and spun it to the literal.
This one was hella interesting and different story! Loved how you indeed made ne believe that there could be a relationship between a ghost and a human. However, khushi is human and she is bound to grow old. Will arnav be able to cope up with it? I hope either he got the human form or she too died(first time wishing so) so that they got actual peace in heaven!
Engaging story!
That was something new I have a ghost & a human quite Interesting.. From where did you get this idea by the way.. Would love to know.. I read all the 18 part in a go.. I Was hoping arnav would be back as human, you would do something on that term but the ending was also good.. Love it..
This was such a different story!
A quick read, and yet it felt like a comprehensive tale. It must have been a challenge to write a story with one of the leading characters being a ghost. Kudos to you for writing it so well. Also, I liked how you kept the story majorly between Arnav and Khushi, and despite that, I didn't miss other characters, or the lack of their extended presence
Do let me know if you have written any other story. Would love to read it
P.S. This one gave Paheli like vibes, but was so much better :)
Edited by Eccentrica - 3 years ago