🌷MG SS - O RE PIYA #1 PT 1-16. New thread added🌷 - Page 47

Posted: 6 years ago
Very nice update  but geet and maan are maintaining distance when will they confornt each other
Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely update
Loved it
Maan s fighting himself and thinking about all past events ... Vicky s speaking with maan and getting angry y did he go to hp ...
He not allowing to say maan ... Maan s regretting and hurt ... He feeling helplessness an asking vicky to help him ... Vicky s teasing maan ... Maan s going to pickup geet and geet s shocked ... Maan has long way to go ...
Continue soon
Waiting
Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks for pm n long update. Nice update. Happy to see the length of it n enjoyed throughly.
One misunderstanding with miscommunication leads to destruction only. Now after facing it maan come to know the depth of his deed. Not only dadi n servants of the house but his real brother too favour geet over him n after realizing the truth he is also favouring geet.
To reconstruct the Gurudwara is a humble gesture of maan. His conversation with prem firstly full of tension then of teasing. Love their brother bonding. 
The friendship of ridz n muskan n geet is beautiful n upto the quote "FRIEND IN NEED IS FRIEND INDEED." It is hard for maan to control his emotions n for geet to control her fear. How it would be when they will come face to face in interview. Lets enjoy the function.
Waiting for next.
Posted: 6 years ago
Reading...
Shall comment tomorrow akka 
Posted: 6 years ago
glad u are well! 

thanks for the pm! 

terrific update! well written! Maan restless! Love Prem! glad he took off with Maan! Maan indeed has a tough task ahead of him! 

Maan got Geet's pic from Prem

Geet enjoys with her friends! nice seeing her laugh! Wow Maan came 2 fetch Geet! Geet stunned! 

God Maan did not take opportunity of the chance given! 

Geet called for second interview and now Maan also attending the interview! Geet surprised abt the event! 

update soon



Posted: 6 years ago
Verryy nyyc update... Realization and guilt ...vese according to mee Maan ne itna boora Naii.. kiya...Geet ki innocence Expectations and stupid society ne is worse bnaaya... 1st night jab Maan ne Reject kiya tab shadi ko p6 chod k study on career pe concentrate kr sakti thi... she choose to expect and got hurt by Maans ignorance...Maan is not that bad jitna sb use sb suna rahe hain...
Posted: 6 years ago
Amazing update 
Continue soon 
Posted: 6 years ago
Great ss akka 
Finally read all the parts 😛


Loved the flow of the story
What an irony maan was searching his pari everywhere unaware of the fact that she is already his 
He in his ignorance was hurting her .
Now damage is so extreme that she has no expectations what so ever from him and is ready to leave all her loved ones forever 😭

Maan has realized his doing and is regretting, he even got to know about his pari being only his 
He is repenting

Loved how Dadi , Shantima were always there to support geet
Admire geet and ridzi's bond , she is a true friend anybody would ask for 
Even prem and Anni are close to geet for that matter 
Maan is happy to learn all these

As said by prem it is not going to be easy for maan 
Let's see how far can he go and how long it takes to clear all the mess that he has created

So sweet of maan to have taken the responsibility of renovating gurdwara 

Eagerly waiting for the interview and ofcourse their confrontation
Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks for the pm all the PM's akka
Would be waiting for next update

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