🌷MG SS - O RE PIYA #1 PT 1-16. New thread added🌷 - Page 21

Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Vaidhumom




UPDATED on page 28 😉

Thanks dear ...fresh posts will be from PART 7 onwards😊. Please read my note in PART 5.



thanks for the reply!! 

ok np... 

shall wait...😃


Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
thanks for updating!! 

thanks for the note and clarifications! 

Part 5

splendid update wonderfully written! 

these ladies are so mean! Poor Geet is taunted! they have such low thinking! her anger is justified! Geet forced to lie abt Maan! glad Ridzy can see Geet is unhappy! its sad that Geet cannot share her pain with anyone! 

at least she is able to share her pain with her babaji!! 

Past well incorporated! Geet is willing to leave Maan for his happiness as he loves Pari! Maan was drunk and saw Geet! she is unaware she is his Pari! 

Geet's dilemma well written! she wishes Maan loves her and that Pari does not exist!! 

update asap


Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update 
Geet family is really too much 
Also she is sad remembering Maan 
With that she thought Bec if her Maan lost his love 
Update soon 
Posted: 6 years ago
very nice update
geet remembering her past year at her inlaws 
Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update. felt bad for Geet that she has to bear all the nonsense of society without any fault of her own. People in their jealousy and narrow thinking don't even think once before uttering rubbish. Good that her parents support her. 
Posted: 6 years ago
nice update
oh no kahin maan usko phir sirf pari hi samjhey
eagerly waiting for next
Posted: 6 years ago
India mein bhi yeh ladies Hoti hai jinko apna Ghar jannat aur Baki ka he'll lagta apna bacha sab say acha dosro k life bewajha ghus jati Hai
Yeh pagal women apna Ghar Dekho becharey geet k pechey hi par gye
Shaadi phir bacha chaye agar ladki hai toh ladka chaye jaisey ladki nahi koi robot hai Jo boley woh karey
Poor geet
Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Tayiji s taunting geet a lot and geets faking smile to all and telling lie regarding maan ... Ridz s getting worried for geet ...
Geet s praying to god and she know about pari ... Maan in drunk state took pari name ...
Continue soon
Waiting
Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome Update
Geet,s taiji and neighbours taunting Geet in all ways aur Geet ko kitna jhoot bolna pad raha hai , poor Geet also lied to her mom and assured her that Maan will come on Nandini,s wedding.Ridhima is doubting Geet,s faking smiles and observing her behaviour minutely.Maan in his drunken state called Geet as Pari and Geet was confused and thought that Maan is in love with Pari and even tried to know about Pari from dadima and Shantima in her own way, eagerly waiting to know Geet,s reaction when she will came to know who is Pari and Maan,s reaction when he will came to know who is Pari(his wife)

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