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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 4

Beautifully written Lakshmi...smiley32

It's human tendency to take things for granted .... You start to realize its importance after you lose it...

That's the case with Maan ... one side he is confused with his feelings for Pari other side Geet's words haunt him to no end...

Maan finally has accepted consciously that Geet is HIS WIFE after a year in denial

The absence of Geet has made Maan realize his past mistakes

Shantima has shown the reality of the situation to Maan

Realizations are too painful .... Maan is hurting now ...

Can imagine the hurt Geet might have been throughsmiley19

The conversation between Geet and Shantima is sweet but could feel the reluctance in returning back from Geet...

What's on Geet's mind ?

Dadima is happy seeing that Maan wants to work on his relationship smiley1

Maan going to Hoshiyarpur... is it too late?

Edited by Silvermist32223 - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Silvermist32223

Chapter 3

Maan needs to learn to keep his anger in check... smiley22

Finally he has realized that he hasn't seen Geet's face lol smiley36Maan beware more shocking realizations are on you way...smiley17

He is one confused soul .... experiencing all sorts of emotions at once....

At last Maan realized that he had been unfair to Geet smiley1

Dadima is hurting coz of Maan's behaviour towards Geetsmiley18

Wonder how is Geet coping up?

Like the way you describe the characters' emotions Lakshmi... it's quite intense smiley32smiley32

Hey ....welcome back dear...just read your comment. Hmm..its just the very beginning of a journey full of realizations and  regrets for Maan. smiley22. So..follow the chapters. smiley2

Posted: 3 years ago

Edited /Updated post for Chapter 4 moving to Chapter 5 smiley2

Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 5

Superb Chapter Lakshmi

The way you write gives clarity to the situation

Can't stand people like Manjit...

Poor Geet have to bear all the pain pasting a smile on her face ... so that her loved ones aren't hurt... but for how long will she  be able to keep this act..

It wouldn't be easy for Maan to mend his mistakes ... the hurt he has caused runs too deep in Geet's heart..


Another twist

Maan meets Pari again but the situation isn't in his favour...

Uh-oh Geet finds out that Maan loves Pari which is Geet herself lol... another confusion smiley44

Wonder now what will be Geet's reaction when she'll know who's PARI lol🤔

Edited by Silvermist32223 - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 6

So Geet has decided to move to another place ....

Loved the way you have incorporated humour in this tensed situation smiley32

Geet engrossed in her work lolsmiley17Titoo having a tough time gaining her attention lolsmiley36

The most awaited moment- Maan finally has seen Geet's face smiley17 

Edited by Silvermist32223 - 3 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

Oh God!I am so sad for GEET. It’s really tragic when you love someone so deeply and the person cares least .

An interesting start.

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