An AR OS, TS And FS Gallery 2018 - Page 5

Posted: 6 years ago
Awsm concept... Great start...amazingly written..
Posted: 6 years ago
Mindblowing part.love the part.thanks for pm.eagerly waiting for next part
Posted: 6 years ago
OMGeee...
finally another work from that point in DMG. I love the story from that plot point and you already have one and I know I am gonna love this one like hell.

Armi is such a sweetheart <3.

di meri 2nd fav story kab update ekaroge (UMMLWF) ? 

Shanky ki toh... !!! I am happy ki Rahul nai Armi ki help ki and Nikki , Atul, Anjali sab hai. Muski & Rahul ko bhi ek saath kardena, bass aur kya chiye ?!
Posted: 6 years ago
hello ji ðŸ˜›
yar maine part read kr liya ..lekin ye to cheating hai 

itna maza aa raha tha ..pura post kyu nahi kiya ..ab jayada wait mat krvana ðŸ˜³ plsss😉

ye dmg wala track to worst track tha ðŸ¤¢

lekin mujhe tumhara wala acha laga ðŸ˜‰

plsss continue soon ðŸ¤—


Posted: 6 years ago
loved it loved it loved it...bohot emotional tha...not something i like to read, but it was so well written that it made me read all of it...hehehhe... ufff yaar ek yeh jo dooriyan hoti hai na, sabse buri cheez hai, distance is the worst thing that can happrn to anybody, chahe kisi bhi cheez ya bande ya jaga se ho, distance is the worse, and yaha to AR ki baat hai, in their case, distance bohot bara dushman hai, i knew ridzi was paralyzed with all aura around her and how she acted. Armaan ko aisi halat main nahi dheka jata so sad, bechara kis taqleef se guzar raha hai, uff yaar yeh shanky kyun hate karta hai ammy ko, doesn't he know what happened? iss mein ammy ki kya galati hai? uff bhuda khoosat kharoos shanky gupta, uper se beti bhi waisi paida kardi, chalo paidi nhi ki lekin uss jaisi banadi, jaisa baap waisi beti, loved Anjali and Riddhima's bond, atleast she still has some relations with her, warna iss halaat mein to har koi saath chor deta hai...how could ridzi think like she's a burden on her parents and armaan, iss ke bheje mein akal har ff main saalon baad aati hai, uff, HEHEHHEHEH agaya hero ghar pe, sajan je ghar aaye sajan je ghar aaye, heheheh this song is so irrelevant with this situation but i was listenting to it so what eves, hehehhehe,,, dheka ammy, kar emotional blackmail, oh teri, iss ne to pura sheesha hi tod dala, maan gaye armaan miya maan gayye, uff yaar haath hi khoon si bharwa liya, ek ki tangein nhi rahi dura apne haat lose karega lolz, acha couple rahega, hehehhehhe hayye maine emotional comment ko bhi funny bana diya omg lol, hehehhehehheh last scene was so sad, yeh shanky ki beti shanky be gayi lekin shukar hai uski biwi nhi gayi, shukar usne bina drama kiya armaan ko bata diya hehehhehhe...overall the part way amazing can't wait to read the next part, update soon, love uuu
Posted: 6 years ago
loved it loved it and loved it even more 
It truly depicts k jo dmg me hua agr armaan aesa krskta hai ridhima bhi krskti hai love rahul for this now sab kuch tkh kar hi dega armaan 
it was very very very emotional update.
loved it ab no rona dhona just happiness please

Posted: 6 years ago
diduu it was mind blowing. .. totally differen.. total opposite of DMG... bt here armaan believes his heart more than her word... how much this guy luvs his basket... I always wonder does armaan really exists? its really difficult to find a guy like him...
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by T.Peru


Great update 
Ridhima left Armaan because her body is paralysed 
Armaan came to know why she left him 
It shock him 
You stop on right track 
Thanks for PM 
Update soon plzzz

Thanks dear...
Glad u love it... 
hehe i know, u r most welcome...
Will update tonight... 
Take care :)
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by punamluvshilpa


amazing! actually hum sabhi abhi tak dmg ke usi jagah par atke hue hain jahan arman riddhima ko goli lagi thi...ek dard sa dill me hain hum sabke jab dmg achanak khatm hua tha .agar baad me AR ko sath achchi tarah karte toh shayad wo dard kam hota par cv ne nahi kiya .mujhe always dmg ka ye part dukh deta hai aur yahan se koi bhi story jab koi writer likhe i love it.
meri pahli ff prince and princess yahin se start hui thi aur maine bhi usme riddhima ko aisa dikhaya tha par fully paralyzed nahi.

 but i loved this ts,u described their pain beautifully. liked  how you started it with their nightmares ,actually i think without each other their life became nightmare..loved the whole..liked padma and anjali also..

inform me in fb  rihoo when u update next part,actually yahan pm nahi dekhti mai kabhi kabhi hi aati hun..

love
ur didu


Thanks Didu...
I m really surprise to see your comment...
Yes, yeh track hum sab ARians ke liye bohot dukhi moment ta..

Thanks Didu, 
Khushi huvi aapko accha laga...

of course didu...
Maine tab bhi aapko inform kiya ta..
Lekin usse pehle aapne yaha dekh ke padliya hehe...
sure I will...
take care :D
Love u :*
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by karankajen


Awsm concept... Great start...amazingly written..

Thanks dear...
Glad u like it...
take care :)

Related Topics

No Related topics found

Topic Info

23 Participants 213 Replies 20593Views

Topic started by RihooHaws

Last replied by chaitrika12

loader
loader
up-open TOP