#pyar bhari takrar ff#. naksh ff part-43/38 - Page 6

Posted: 6 years ago
soo hii hloo salam namasthe g... 
i know i dont have much viewers now but my frds i trusted them soo much dey waana read ff so i will starts this ff.. 
naksh one couple who r made for each other.. 
nk will be a sweet cute nd sanskari tipe boy.. on d other hand ak will be a bold nd beautiful girl but dey will do arrange marriage.. 
nd a couple faced so much problem adjustment.. this ff is all about it.. 
so this ff is all about pyar nd takrar.. 
i will try my best hope u will read it nd gave support.. 
thanku so much... 
Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
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Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
part-1
so guyzz story starts with ss house.. nk was sleeping nd all kids of his house were roaming here nd der of nk... he got disturbing so much.. 
kids-ab toh bhabhi aayegii nk bhaiya ko khub nachayegi hum toh uska denge sath woh hame chocolates kilayegi ab toh bhabhi aayegi.. 
nk-ufff... he sat on bed.. just go go go away.. wats ur problem haa.. 
yash misti rashmi stay away i waana sleep.. yeh kya hain.. 
ras-itne lal lal kyo ho rahe ho.. 
yas-haa mamu mami aayegi.. 
mi-haa chachu.. 
ras-bhabhi aayegi morden bhabhi aayegi.. hamari sanskari bhaiya ko khub rulayegi nd laugh.. 
nk-tum log mera majak udda rahe haa.. hato mujhe pooja karni hai.. 
ras-photo nhi dekhoge.. 
nk-uff.. go go than gy3 nd bm came.. 
gy-kya kar rahe laugh.. 
nk-maa yeh log mujhe paresan kar rahe dekho na.. 
gy-ab tu man ja tu sarma kyo raha meri bahu aayegi munna tu ek hi beta hain hamara dream hain hamari bahu... tu itna sarmila kyo hai hum toh bade morden hai tu kaha se shy nikala.. 
nk-maa plz haa in chitiyo ko bhagao.. 
ras-hum yeh kehne aaye hain ki hame movie jana hain nd aap leke chaloge because dj ne bola hain.. 
yas-haa hum jayege hayiee meri mummy bhi jayegi.. 
mit-chachu jaldi ready ho jao apko chachi ko bhi dekhna hain kal phir.. 
nk-oo god meri laptop main work hain mujhe sab finish karna hain no ways... plz mujhe yeh movies nd all bhut boring lagta hain yr.. 
ya-mama apke sath toh mami bhut bor ho jayegi. everyone laughs.. 
nk-oo plz abhi meri shadi hui nhi.. 
bhabhimaa-toh kya hua ho jayegi.. tujhe kam se fursat milegi tab toh photo dekhega hum sabko khub pasand aai hain woh bhut amir hain aur morden bhi.. tujhe sudhar degi.. 
nk came nd hug to gy3.. 
nk-maa main bigda hua hu kya.. 
bm-na mera munna sabse aacha hai muahh.. thabhi toh aaj love marriage ke jamane main arrange marriage kar raha.. pehli hamari is pidhi main.. 
ras-dada dada dada hamara plan ban gya hain naman dada office gye hain aur mohit jiju out of town so mujhe yash misthi nanu di bm ko aap leke chalo bas.. 
yas-yaiee chalo chalooo.. pushed to him bathroom.. 
nk-but main pooja karke hi jauga went in bathroom.. 
ras-oo god inki pooja one hiur chalegi.. phir kam maa hum apni marzi ki ladki la toh rahe par dont u think woh dada ke boring routine ke sath bor ho jayegi.. 
gy-beta thabhi toh dj ne ek free nd morden girl chuni hain thaki thoda change kare tumhare dada ko.. 
mi-kaisi hogi hamari chachi.. 
now lets go in ms house... rj nd vis were going in aks room.. 
vis-r u sure na ak willbe happy.. 
rj-pata nhi woh toh so rahi nind se uthana matlb setan ko bulane barabar hain.. man toh gai arrange marriage ke liye par. 
vis-hum hamesha se free rahe hain uske sath uski fesla hamari bhi hogi.. 
than dey entered in aks room. she was peacefully sleeping.. 
vis-gud morning baby... 
ak-gud morning dad... howz u.. 
vis-fine utho utho.. 
ak-watt.. sone do na. 
rj-bhut so li na now kal wali.. 
ak-which one.. 
rj-shadi.. 
ak-haa i said yes na.. main hamesha apne rules follow kari hu but apne jo freedom di uska saman karugi really.. 
vis-yeh aacha kaha beta tum dil se saf ho yahi bhut hain ladke ki photo dekhogi bhut aacha ghar hain unki family morden hain nd u know ladka bhut sundar hain aap hamari ek hi beti hain so sare dream pure karege hum.. 
ak-love u i dont want to leave u.. dad main movie dekh aau.. 
vis-bilkul u enjoyed ur bleachers life thode din bache h jo.. kal woh aayege apse milne.. 
rj-aachese bat karna beta.. 
ak-dad if u have no problem main usse akle main bat karna chahugi plz.. yeh aap log ne aacha pasand kiya hoga but choose karna toh denge na.. 
vis-bilkul apki haa hi hamari haa hogi.. 
rj-haa jo tum kahogi wohi hoga.. 
ak-yuhuuu.. movie jau meri frds aati hongi hmm kissed to vis byeee.. she went to take bath.. 
after that nk came in hull everyone were waiting for nk.. 
dj-yeh ladka na.. 
bm-sab sochte hain hamara beta ek aacha beta ho jo kam kare pooja kare drink na kare nk kitna aacha hai.. 
dj-thabhi toh kuch jayada hi aaj kal ke bache fast hone chahiye.. than rashmi nd all kids were readdy.. 
nk came nd touched bm nd gy3 feet.. dj rb leg too.. 
rb-chalo beta jao.. 
nk-yeh log na apka udaipur pata nhi kaise log party movie nd all uff chalo.. 
ras-dekha karishma bhabhi muh banwa lo bas. dada aapne ladki ko nhi dekha.. 
gy-sshh woh sarma raha.. 
nk-main leke jau ya nhi.. 
ra-sry sry chalo.. dey went.. here ak meet from her frds on theater.. 
ak-hii whatsup.. 
frds-oye itni late madam g ki shadi hogi na uska husband usko uthata hi reh jayega.. 
ak-oye mera hubby sabse jayada lucky hoga jo main milugi usse.. 
frd-chalo yr tickets lelo end ho jayegi warna.. 
ak-main lati chal kamla.. 
dey went in line.. nk reached with his family.. 
yas-oo noo itni long line tickets nhi milegi.. 
ras-oo no.. 
nk-see tumhari advanced life.. laugh.. maine call kar di thi because yaha ek person ko main janta hu usne tickets leli yuhuu. 
mi-waww chachu smart haa.. 
nk-rule nd thinking oki.. life main sab kuch on d spot na hona.. pehle hi deal karo thaki bad main pachtawa na ho.. 
ras-oo god plzzz apka pravachan bad main sune dada plz... movie.. nk took tickets.. 
nk-tum sab yaha baitho thodi der main andar gusne denge main jab tak meeting call attand karke aata hu hmm.. he was talking in phone.. 
gy-mera munna.. 
nan-kya chachi app na isse na thoda sudharo.. are ab toh bhabhi aayegi aur nk ko sudhar degi laugh.. 
kar-haa didi sach main.. 
nk-haa g main bilkul aauga hamre desh ka program hain g.. 
ak - bhaiya 5 tickets plz.. 
men-no housefull sry.. 
ak-wat kamla.. went near of her frd.. oo god kya kare housefull no tickets sryyy.. 
her frds-no ways we will see it tu late kari lao kahi se bhi.. 
ak-uff.. tum log buy kyo nhi ki.. 
frd-madam car aapne drive kari hum usme aye oki now arrange tickets oki.. 
ak-kya karu she went in side.. 1 2 3 4 5..yesss..wawww...abhi aai oki.. 
nk-hmm hmm oki bye... cut d cell suddenly someone came on his back.. 
ak-handsup.. 
nk-kon.. 
ak-sshh police.. apne gadi galt park ki ryt.. put her hand on his back like gun.. 
nk-i guess no essa hain kya wait thik karta hu main rules nhi todta.. 
ak-ee.. thinking.. no u did it thabhi fine dena hoga nd mere hath main gun hain oki so hilna nhi bilkul.. yeh tickets do pehle than.. 
nk-aap girl police hain kya.. ek minute mujhe kyo lag raha piche gun nhi.. 
ak-dont be so smart oki... dont move tickets do tab tak car sachi park karke aaoge toh le lena.. 
nk-but oki fine gave tickets to ak.. 
ak-yaiee yuhuuu.. waww.. ak gave money to nk.. 
ok ok lo money oki.. 
nk-but madam y money... 
ak-laugh.. ullu banaya bada maja aaya.. mujhe mere aur mere frds ke liye tickets chahiye thi jo tumne de di uu.. 
nk got angry.. ak was about to run but nk held her hand nd was about to shout but lost in her beauty.. her pink lips round eyes... fair colour jeans nd top.. 
nk-tum.. 
ak-wattt.. leave me oo god pushed to him.. uuu.. showed her toungue nd went inside.. 
nk-watt oo god hey ruko u.. are yeh wrong woh mujhe kuch kehna oo god dey will kill me.. went near of his family.. 
ras-ticket dada.. 
nk-woh gai leke bahane se.. main bola tha ki main nhi aauga apke udaipur ke log girl essi hoti hain kya.. 
ras-dada ab housefull ho gya kya aap bhi chii woh smart nikli aap defar.. 
mi-mujhe movie dekhni hain.. 
yas-mujhe bhi.. 
nk-but mujhe nhi dekhni ek kam karta hu jo dusara wala hain waha le chalta hu tum log dekhna main apna work niptauga hmm.. 
na-kya nk thoda toh smart bano bas office ghar.. 
nk-chale.. mera time... he went.. thinking about ak.. yeh kya ho raha mujhe uufff...?? 
first attractions... 
thanku so much for support.. plz read this part nd leave comment.. 
precap-nk nd dj went ms to sees to ak.. but a funny twist😆
Edited by nakshkidiwani - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
All the best and m waiting... 
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by _nakshi_


All the best and m waiting... 
thanku so much dear... 
updated first part read nd tell.. 😳
Posted: 6 years ago
Nice intro... 
OMG everyone became modern except the one who always expected moderness in serial Mr. Nk
Hahah so funny part.. 
Ak ki chulbuli nature and nk ki old soch wali nature 
It's so good start 
Do update soon next part... 
Kya twist hain coming up.. 
Nk fida on first sight hi.. 
Ak snatching tickets nk is hahhahaha 
It's really something new pyar bhari takkar...  
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by _nakshi_


Nice intro... 
OMG everyone became modern except the one who always expected moderness in serial Mr. Nk
Hahah so funny part.. 
Ak ki chulbuli nature and nk ki old soch wali nature 
It's so good start 
Do update soon next part... 
Kya twist hain coming up.. 
Nk fida on first sight hi.. 
Ak snatching tickets nk is hahhahaha 
It's really something new pyar bhari takkar...  
admiring nd enjoying ur comments 
aww i m just so happy to read it.. thanku thanku u soo much for ur loving comments... 
haa yeh thoda different tipe hain i didnt write this tipe of ff na so hubby wife fight pyar fun hogi⭐️i will do update soon next part 😉
Posted: 6 years ago
part-2
now nk drooped to all in moll... nd he went in office... naman was here.. 
na-are dada aaj aap late how.. 
nk-oye mere chote bhai ek din hi sachi par tujhse bada hu.. ab choti umar main shadi karli toh mujhe chota mat samjho.. 
na-meri ek beti bhi hain i know i know aap big ho bro but shadi bhut beautiful ehsas hain kal toh pata chal hi jayega na.. 
nk-aacha toh yeh office hain nhi ghar hain. 
na-sry sry aap na uff.. yeh file gave to nk.. waise bhaiya aapke dil main halchal toh hain has dijiye nd went.. 
nk-uff jisse dekho maje le raha... 
here ak went in her house.. everyone were busy.. 
ak-wat happened to all kaha busy ho.. went near of her aunty.. 
kaki wat happened.. 
ka-meri beti ko dekhne ladka aayega photo dekhegi. 
ak-kya main.. than varsha came der.. 
va-haa meri nanad rani finally woh mil gaya suna hain siddha sadha hain khub rob jamana thoda khud sudhar jana thoda usko sudhar dena.. 
ak-uff sab tease karoge na toh main ladke ke samne aaugi hi nhi.. 
esse kaise meri son chiraiya.. 
ak-dadi aap aa gai hug to her.. sona chiraiya.. 
da-nana woh free bird.. meri golden doll.. 
ak-thats like my dadi.. 
da-dulhe raja ki photo dekhi.. 
ak-dadi aap logo ne dekh liya sundar toh hoga hi mujhe kya dekhna par haa pasand meri hogi haa ya nhi milne par hi toh bataugi na chalo song sunte hain hippop.. 
da-yoo.. 
kaki-kya karega iska dulha pata nhi bas esse hi fudakati rahe.. 
in ss house... in nyt dj nd all were talking... than nk came.. 
nk-kya ho raha.. 
dj-aa baith munna.. 
nk-hmm kahiye kuch kam.. 
bm-munna raja kam  ke alwa bhi bat hoti hain kal ladki dekhne jana hain tune photo bhi nhi dekhi.. 
nk-main kya dekhuga app sabko pasand hain bas.. 
gy-itna sarmata hain dj yeh.. dekh hum free mind ke hain tu kehde bole toh lau photo.. 
nk-pehle ke log bhi toh shadi karte the na dj ne bm ko nhi dekha apne bauji ko toh main bhi is tradition ko kaise mitha sakta hu jo aap kahe. 
kar-haye dada u so sweet.. 
mi-chachu best hain.. 
ras-main bhi jaugi kal.. 
dj-no.. pehle main aur munna jayege agar munna ko ladki pasand aa gai toh main sabko bula lunga esse sabka jana thik nhi kyo choti dulhan.. 
gy-g aapne thik kaha essa hi thik rahega.. kyo munna. 
nk-main kya kahu.. main aata hu hath pair dho ke kitchen main khana dal dijiye le lunga.. he went in room.. 
gy3 arrange dinner. nk came in kitchen.. 
nk-kya banaya hain maa.. 
gy-bas parathe.. sab cook ke hath ka khate hain par tu maa ke hath ka.. agar teri biwi ko khana banna nhi aayega tab.. 
nk-main khud bana lunga par khana toh ghar main maa ke hath ka hi bas.. 
gy-aacha thoda tujhe change hona padega.. 
nk-woh bhi toh change ho sakti hai. waise bhi todays girl.. remember to ak.. admiring lill nd felt it.. 
gy-munna.. 
nk-are haa.. woh hmm.. 
gy-kaha kho gya.. tujhe bhi samjhna hoga.. 
nk-are mera call.. aap ek bahu chahte hai aur meri care karne wali bas.. ab change main kya rakha hai.. bas sab life time esse hi chalta rahe.. are call aane wali hai.. aaj kal ki ladkiyo ko kya pasand hain i dont know went.. 
gy-pata chalega munna jab woh aayegi aur khushi bharegi.. 
now in morning.. nk was getting ready.. he was nervous so much than gy3 came.. 
gy-ho gaya ready.. 
nk-maa main thik lag raha.. she laughs.. 
woh means main kahi jata nhi bas aaj jana pad raha apki jid main. 
gy-aacha tu man le ki tere dil main gudgudi ho rahi.. 
nk-kya maa yeh gudgudi nd all i guess boys ko nhi girls ko hoti hai.. 
gy-toh yeh man le teri life badal jayegi isliye dar lag raha tujhe. 
nk-main badal no ways... 
here ak got ready nd opened d door.. varsha started laughing nd rj was shocked. 
rj-yeh kya pehna hain.. 
ak-meri fav top nd jeans. 
va-ladka itna morden nhi family morden hain but yeh jeans.. 
rj-tu kuch aur pehen beta.. 
ak-aur kya pehnu.. 
rj-yeh suit varsha ka aa.. 
ak-wattt mujhe saree nd all wear karna hoga waha.. 
rj-nhi beta but for a change kuch different bhi honi chahiye na.. 
ak-par.. 
rj-beta plz yeh india hai so uske liye hmm pehen lo.. 
a-fine.. she changed cloth.. 
behen g lag rahi na.. 
va-bhut sundar lag rahi aa main tumhe ready kar du.. 
ak-yeh jewelry nd all jaruri hain kya.. 
va-haa bhut thabhi toh ladka tumhe dekhte hi fida ho jayega dar lag raha kya.. 
a-dar toh nhi keh sakti but haa thoda ajib lag raha dont know kya bat hogi commen topic milega ya nhi pasand milegi ya nhi.. 
va-hmm means tu bechain hain waise maine pic dekhi h ladka bhut jayada smart lag raha h ekdom opposite sa hain dono ek dusare ko change karna.. 
ak-wat change nd main no ways.. main jaisi hu waise except kare is better but. 
va-are par jid nd pya... suddenly rj came.. 
rj-chal beta woh log pahuchne wale hain aa.. 
ak-oo god.. oki... now nk nd dj were outside.. 
nk-yeh house hain gud aacha hain dj.. 
dj-waah tarif sun tu aachese bat kar lena maine toh dekh rakhi hain ladki bhut aachi hain sundar bhi darna mat.. 
nk-kya dj app sabko le aate na main kya bat karuga esse.. dj laugh.. 
dj-shadi teri hain na.. ladki hasmuk bhut hain waise.. 
than dj sees to vis.. 
dj-are aap aa gye wlcm.. 
dj-vis hug to him.. nk said namathe nd touched his leg.. jite raho manna padega aaj ke is world main esse ladke bhi hain thabhi apko pasand kiya apni beti ke liye aao beta.. 
nk-g.. smile.. bado ki main ijat isliye karta hu thaki kuch sikhne ke liye mile u know hamare is seher main modi g ka nara aa raha.. saf safai ka.. 
vis-beta itna mante ho yaha toh ak.. areaap baithiye na.. rj came nd said.. 
she gave tea to both.. 
dj-are vis hamko ghar toh dikhao mujhe bhi apne room main decoration karana hain dikhao apne new ghar ko.. 
vis-aaiye na.. rj went vis dj also.. 
dj-ladki ko usse akle main dekhne do aur bat karne do sabko bol do nk ko na dekhe kyoki woh sarmila hain toh esse bat ho jayegi toh aacha hoga.. vis went in kitchen.. 
vis-samaj gye na koi mat jana ak ke sath woh confident hain so plz.. nd went.. 
rj-beta ak yeh tea leke ja.. 
ak-abhi toh di na waha.. 
rj-ofoo kuch samjhati hi nhi.. beta karna padta hai thoda sa plz.. 
ak-aap log ka emotional drama mera sasural essa nhi hoga na.. 
rj-beta hume jid nhi karni chahiye jo hoga aacha hoga hmm.. bat karo jo puchna h pucho akle chance mila hain na.. 
ak-that is better.. 


Edited by nakshkidiwani - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
Very superb amazing intro and title is also superb
Such a fresh story like it the core.. chulbuli ak aur bechara seedha sadha nk.. dono ki Jodi superb lag rhi 😆 
I am wondering ki ye nk ak se romance kaise karega  
Ticket scene is just wonderful like it very much.. ak ticket lekar bhag gayi aur bechara nk kuch nhi kr paya😆
twist in precap wow waiting for it
continue soon

Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by kumarandils


All the best:))
thanku so much bro.. 😃nk-udaypur ki girls essi hoti hain kya.. 
ak-kyo aap yaha nhi rehte.. 
nk-50 50 rehta hu business ke metter pe bahar rehta hu.. 
ak-ooh.. 
nk-haa.. waise meri family ko dikkat hui.. 
ak-sry but jo man kiya woh kara yeh sab apke karan hi hua.. 
nk-mere karan how.. 
ak-ha main on time uthi pqr papa mummy ne itni lambi bat kari mujhse ki tum shadi karlo ladka se milo uski pic dekho but i didnt see.. mqin late hui sirf apke karan.. 
nk-wat main.. toh tickets bhi maine di hisab barabar na.. waise bhi main girl ki respect karta hu
Edited by nakshkidiwani - 6 years ago

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