#pyar bhari takrar ff#. naksh ff part-43/38 - Page 4

Posted: 5 years ago
part-42
nk was on floor.. he was soo much in pain.. 
ak-nk main apke bina g nhi sakti nk.. haa.. she removed shoes of nk nd started wiping position from nks leg..
nk was watching to ak only.. her concern her love.. everything.. he starts more liking to ak.. 
nk-ak nhi plz apko kuch ho gya toh plz ak mujhe mar jane dijiye.. but she didn't listen anything.. she wiping again nd again.. she was getting chakar but no she was not stooping.. nk sat on floor..
nk-ak...
ak-nk main apse bhut pyar. apko mujhpe trust karna nd went on nks hand.. closed her eyes..
nk-ak.. ee utho.. ak.. he took to ak in his arms.. ak.. koi hain meri wife.. apne toh mujhe doshi kar diya aur jayada..
he
sees a hut... went near of hut.. 
nk-koi hai door open kariye..
than one old men came.. 
men-kon hai..
nk-main hu baba meri wife behosh ho gai hai i need help..
men-andar aa jao beta.. he came inside.. now nk sees to house..
men-main aandha hu beta kya hua tumhari patni ko..
nk-woh mujhe sap ne kata tha aur inhone mera jeher chus liya aur behosh ho gai..
men-are beta kahi jeher na fel jaye meri patni bahar gai hai ek kam karo bahar safed patte hain usse lao.. aur apni patni ko andar leta do.. nk laid to ak on bed.. took leafs..
nk-yeh lijiye baba..
men-beta iska ras apni patni ko pila do aur yeh lep laga do isse pure sasir main.. 
nk-kya pure sarir main par main..
men-tumhari patni hai na jao beta kahi late na ho jaye..
nk-haa.. nk went inside.. gave ras to ak... par main ak ko kaise lep.. par yeh pehli bar toh nhi jab ak ko main touch aur ak ki life ka sawal hai.. he took aks hand nd putt lep.. now he opened aks suit zip nd started putting lep on her bare back.. nk touched this feeling nd watched her milky white skin.. it was only for nk.. now he was sure that ak is only for nk nd nk is only for ak.. nd he will never break aks trust..
he put lep all over aks body.. 
now nk sat der.. 
men-beta kuch kha lo..
nk-nhi baba bhuk nhi hai mujhe aap rest kijiye..
men-subah tak sab thik ho jayega beta chinta mat karo khana rakha hai kha lena hmm.. he went.. nk was watching to ak in whole night..
in morning ak wokeup nd sees that nk was just beside of ak nd he was in deep sleep.. 
ak-woh.. nk... he grabbed her hand tighter..
nk heard this voice.. 
nk-ak.. cupped his hand on her face.. aap thik hai na. hug to ak.. main apko kho nhi sakta tha. thankgod aapko hosh aa gya ab koi hame juda nhi kar payega aapka gala sukh gya hoga na lijiye pani.. stood nd give water..
suddenly ak sees to police.. 
po-aap thik hai maam.. nas
ksh were shocked because dey dont waana separate again.. 
ak-haa..
po-dont worry ab aap log ghar ja sakte hai.. rr ne hame kaha tha aap mil jayegi finally aap mil gai.. sir aap thik hai..
nk-haa main thik hu..
po-hamne rr ko call kr diya hai.
than rr came nd watching to naksh.. hug to nk.. 
rr-tu thik hai na..
nk-haa..
held aks hand which nk don't like.. 
nk-main yaha hu..
rr-haa i m soo happy that mere dono best frd sachi hai u know hamne shadi aage bada di.. sab khub khush honge tin din ho gye kisi ko nhi bataya aap dono ke ghar main.. bas varsha bhabhi ko pata tha.. now she is relaxed..
aao chalo.. nk aao... naksh sees to each other
in car rr was driving nd nk was besides of rr nd ak was on back seat.. 
rr-waise sab bhut worried the shadi bhi aage bada di hamne... man hi nhi kiya paresan ho gye.. tum dono kya kare the waha..
nk-masti khub sari..
rr-laugh oo sry itna stupid qu ke liye.. no food nothing toh gussa aaya hoga.. nk reminds aks cooking eating with each..
no communication also than dey reminds all those fighting moments nd passed smile.. 
rr-omggg sab kitna bura tha ek bure sapne jaisa.. than nk can feel love for ak.. nd dey understand eachs feeling..
rr-ghar aa gya.. naksh were in their dreams.. oyee both sees that it was hotel..
nk-aa gye..
rr-yes mr nk apka hotel aur ak ko le ja raha waha.. hmm ready hoke aana.. nk went out ak watched to nk.
aana hmm.. car was going nd naksh were seeing to each.. 
rr-waise ak apne mujhe miss kiya..
ak-hmm..lill shocking.. 
rr-itne dino hasi nhi  hongi na hasa raha tha..
ak-mujhe fresh up hoga hain itching ho rahi.. closed her eyes.. sees all those moments which she spend with nk..
opened eyes.. 
r-aa gya hotel... ak went in her room.. didn't meet from anyone dey were waiting for ak.. but dey dont disturbed to ak.. 
naksh got ready.. nk went in hotel.. 
more parts coming soon
Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
nk was running near of hotel... searching to ak.. suddenly showed to crowd nd ak was in between.. he went der.. 
nk-kya hua rr..
rr-meri sister upset thi ak kho gai toh now ak ke samne ro rahi nd sab mil rahe hai ak se..
nk-ooh..
ak-see i m fit nd fine sshh now wipe ur tears.. u know i planned soo much for ur wedding see ur mom dad r soo happy.. nd har rasam ko tyohar ke jaise celebrate karege hum.. ssh jab ek beti bahu banti hai na sara bachpan chut jata hai.. itna kahugi ki sab ko apanana aur pati se ladai mat karna sari batiee share karna kuch bhi mat chupana unki marzi ke kilap kuch karne se problem kab hogi pata nahi chalega hmm..
that girl hug to ak..
gi-tqq soo much di aap bhut aachi ho woh kitna lucky hoga jisse aap milegi god bless u hope apko khabhi dukh n ho aur aap hamesha khush rahe..
ak-hmm chalo jaldi ready ho jao haldi rasam hain na..
gi-aap bhi ready ho ke aao hum enjoy karege aur khub pics kichawayege.. rr nd his mom filled with emotions.. rr mom gave blessing to ak.. than all went for getting ready.. nk was watching to ak.. rr too.. nk passed smile.. ak watched to nk.. 
nk-hii ak.
ak-hm..
rr-are nk waah aaj yellow shirt kya bat hai aaj toh tujhe bhi haldi lagauga main.. aur ak aap ready ho jaiye tqq meri behen ko samjhane ke liye..
nk was watching to ak nd rr was watching to both.. ak went in room for getting ready.. 
nk-i know ak sab hain isi liye aap kuch nhi keh pa rahi hai par dont worry jab hum akle honge toh main apne dilki bat bata dunga aur apko apne ghar le jauga hamesha ke liye.. nk nd rr all were in haldi rasam. bride groom came... funtion started.. than ak came in plain lehnga yellow.. all were in same lehnga... ak put haldi on bride..
rr-kitni cute hain na..
nk-hmm kon.. 
rr-ak aur kon..
nk-tu ak ko kyo dekh raha itna..
rr-kyo nhi dekh sakta she is beautiful koi bhi kaise rok sakta hai unko dekh ke..
nk-just shut up oki.. esse kisi ko dekhke chichora nhi lag raha.. went in anger... rr laugh...
here nk was searching to ak.. all r like same so nk was confused.. than he sees back on one girl.. 
nk-haa yeh toh ak hi hai.. unki watch hain maine dekha tha.. nk sees here nd der no one was here.. he swlly went near of ak nd put his hand on her stomach.. i know aap kya feel karti hai mere liye aur main apke liye.. i really love u.. mujhe ap par trust karna chahiye tha ab hame koi alg nhi kar sakta.. aa.. suddenly that girl turned nd nk was shocked that she was bindiya.. i m really sry i didnt mean that.. i thought..
bi-really sir aap mere liye essa feel karte hai blush nd went...
nk-stop hey bindiya suddenly he sees to ak... ak but she went.. nk was following to ak..
plz suniye ak aap esse bhag kyo rahi hain.. stop ak.
ak-nk.. she had tears in her eyes.. nk chodiye mujhe..
nk-abhi apne dekha woh sach nhi..
ak-mujhe nhi janna sach kya hai kya nhi..
nk-janna padega kuch sach tha pata hain kiske liye tha yeh sab.
ak-i dont waana listen anything nk from loud voice..
nk-ak pushed to ak nd came close.. sunna padega kya samjhti hai khud ko aap hmm.. i love u nd i know u that how much u love me..
ak-i dont love u nk.. pushed to nk.. kya samjhte hai khudko jab aaye jab chale gye.. main kya tajmehel hu.. jab aaye jab chale gye.. kya mere sine main dil nahi hai..
nk-par ak aap mujhse pyar karti hai hum ab ek hai..
ak-hain nhi the nk... aur pyar ki bat mat kariye main care ke karan sab kari par ab apke liye mere pass pyar nhi..
nk-par ak now mujhe realize ho gaya hai aur ab main apka trust break nhi karuga i promise sabse mafi manguga..
ak-nk apko andaja bhi hai kaise tadpi hu main apke liye kya hai ek choti bat jab mujhe laga sari duniya mere kilaf hogi par aap nhi ho sakte hai par nhi jab apne mujhe kaha maine bache ko mar dala nk us waqt esse laga jaise main mar gai mera pyar main badal gai nk.. aaj main badal gai hu toh aap mujhe pyar karne lag gye aur pehle jaise ban jau phir sab khatam ho jaiyega hain na.. nk in salo main pal pal tadpi hu main pal pal kuch kho gaya apne bache ko mar diya yeh words mujhe roj tod deti thi..
nk-par apne mujhse kuch kaha nhi
ak-kuch kaha suna aur yeh bataiye itne gusse main aapne khabhi bhi meri bat mani thi.. apne direct keh diya ki maine apne bache ko mara hai apke liye choti bat hogi par mere liye nahi hai nk... hum ek nhi ho sakte never..?
sry for late update enjoy..plz do comments soon 
Precap - ak says no but nk says u will realize my love soon.. 
Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by _nakshi_


Where is update??? 
bas on d way hi 😲
Posted: 5 years ago
Hmmm Comment after long time
OOps sorry Ruchi
But ya now nk realised his mistakes and love for ak
He wanna make a fresh new start with ak
But Ak's trust was broken
It was fault of situations and even both
They shoud take decision after atleast thinking and listening to one another
They wasted precious moments of life
Hope ak jaldi realise that she too was fault to some extent 
ANd accept mahir back
Naitik challenges Ak regarding his love wow so confident munda
Do update soon
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by _nakshi_


Hmmm Comment after long time
OOps sorry Ruchi
But ya now nk realised his mistakes and love for ak
He wanna make a fresh new start with ak
But Ak's trust was broken
It was fault of situations and even both
They shoud take decision after atleast thinking and listening to one another
They wasted precious moments of life
Hope ak jaldi realise that she too was fault to some extent 
ANd accept mahir back
Naitik challenges Ak regarding his love wow so confident munda
Do update soon
thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally  i waited 😲
but no one commented now i will again write ⭐️.. i m soo happy that u waana read my ff.. now soon soon update hogi nd jaldi se ff end ho jayegi..
haa ak will realise love i will do update soon next part 😃😳
Posted: 5 years ago
part-43
ak went in her room nd throwed pillows... 
ak-pehle dil tod dete hai aur badal jaye toh phir se apnate hai main tumse khabhi pyar nhi karugi nk.. par main toh nk se bhut pyar karti nhi mujhe weak nhi hona hain bas mujhe toh nk ko woh hak nhi dena chahe nk kuch bhi try karle... now wedding preparations starts ak got ready for haldi rasam...
nk too came in hull nd searching to ak.. than ak came in yellow suit.. 
nk was just admiring to ak... 
nk-waw he came near of ak.. she ignored to nk... he passed smile.. than nk sees to bindiya.. hii bindiya.. ak heard it..
ak didn't like it.. 
nk-bindiya came near of nk.. hii.. u looking nice..
bin-thanku sir tqq soo much.. u looking truly cute..
nk-tqq thats soo nice aacha apne jeans wear kari h khabhi mast lagegi aap par.. ak was shocked wat he is doing..
ak-excuse me.. came between naksh..
bi-g.. wat happened..
ak-programme chalu hai plz aap apni chatar patar bahar kare.. gave galre look to nk..
bi-main jarur pehnugi aacha bye sir aati hu..
nk-bye tqq for taking my advice warna yaha toh sabko main bura hi lagta hu sees to ak.. bindiya went..
ak-wat..
nk-wat wat..
ak-yeh kya tha ek side bolte ho i m in love with u nd one side mere samne bindiya pe line mar rahe tge..
nk-haa u r not interested na so socha uske sath chance marlu kyo r u jealous..
ak-i hate u..
nk-i hate u too. smile..
ak-eee... bye..
nk-ak i love u.. ak went in corner nd passed smile..
ak-eee... sshhh... ak was doing work... than it was evening nk was doing work nd searching to ak.. she came in lehnga nd chunni with mangtika nd nath.. looking like bride..
soo much cute...
nk-aachi lag rahi hain na.. than rr came near of ak..
ak-hii kaise ho..
rr-i m gud nd u..
ak-tum na main bhut aachi hu. sab kam ho gya..
rr-haa aqj nk ne bhut sath diya bas barat aane wali hai.. oye nk..
nk-haa aaya sees to ak but she was not watching..
rr-hii.. bas kar yr.. aaj ak.. hum dono mqin jayada sundar kon lag raha pata nhi puchne ka mood ho raha..
ak-woh.. i dont know..maine notice nhi kiya.. 
rr-toh ab karo plz meri behen ki shadi hai plz.. tum bol dogi toh confidence aa jayega plz plz plz..
ak-woh dono aache lag rahe..
rr-wat but best kon lag raha..
nk-tell ak g.. kahiye na mujhe bura nhi lagega agar apne rr ko aacha kha tab bhi.. ak sees to nk..
ak-i dont know nd went.. nk laughed..
nk-barat aa gai chal..
rr-wat she said uff... now dey were wlcming to varat.. nk sees to ak. he took some rose pattels nd starts showering on aks face.. ak passed smile suddenly she sees to nk nd made face..
she was running suddenly her blouse back button took off from her blouse.. nk sees this.. he went near of ak.. aks blouse was open from back.. nk held to ak..
ak-kon.. nk aap yaha kya kar rahe ho.. chodo mujhe.. but nk didnt stop. he took to ak in side.. yeh kya harkat hain.
nk-ak suno.. 
ak-yeh sab karke tum mera pyar Pana chahte ho nk.. chii kotne galt irade hai tumhare.. 
nk-just stop it.. put his hand on her mouth.. listen to me.. jabardasti na pehle kari na ab karuga tumhare blouse ka button tut gya completely so yaha laya thaki tum embrace na ho i mean aap.. removed his hand from her face.. can i help u.. 
ak-woh turned back.. nk sees her bear back.. ak took a deep breath.. 
nk-woh pin hai kya.. ak gave pin to nk.. tqq.. he starts atteching... ak was feeling this touch.. nks finger touched to ak... 
ak-aah... cuted her lips... nk can see her bechaeni for nk. he can read aks love... 
nk-nk swlly swlly put his hand on her back.. ak closed her eyes nd just felt it.. 
dey both were in their dreams.. but suddenly someone shout nd their dream broke.. nk took back his hand.. 
nk-ho gya.. woh main aata hu.. ak waana stop him but he went.. 
now ak was admiring to nk.. 
nk was busy with rr... 
nk can see that ak was coming near of nk so he ignored to her.. 
ak-gajab ho gaya nk mujhe dekh nhi raha ya natak kar raha.. her feelings increase more high.. 
nk-aata hu.. now bride nd groom came in mandap... ak went near of nk.. 
ak-nk. 
nk-are rr bula raha.. ak held nks hand.. 
ak-main bhi bula rahi na... took to nk in side.. haa.. wat happened to u. 
nk-nothing.. 
ak-wat happened.. 
nk-kuch nhi.. 
ak-kyo ignore kar rahe.. 
nk-nhi toh... kaha kar raha wat u waana say.. 
ak-yahi ki mujhe aacha nhi lag raha tum mujhe dekh kyo nhi rahe the.. i mean woh.. 
nk-tum mujhe dekh rahi means u felt bad haan.. thik hai kaho.. 
ak-uske liye tq help ke liye.. 
nk-dont say tqq.. kyoki main tum par apna hak samjhta hu aaj pata chal gya tum bhi mujh par apna haq samjhti ho thabhi tumhe bura laga ki maine tumhe ignore kiya.. 
ak-essa kuch nhi h par agar koi meri help kare toh tqq bolna mera farz hai baki tum jano tumhara kam jane.. 
nk-laugh i know u love me.. 
ak-i dont.. yeh sab koi bhi kar sakta hai kuch big karo toh janu.. nd leave from here.. 
more parts coming soon.. 

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
nk nd ak was seeing to bride nd groom nd dey starts reminds all those memories of their marriage... that phere that vachan.. that smp day love day.. than fight nd than separation..
aks eyes fulfill with tears.. rr sees it.. 
rr-mujhe miss karogi kya thabhi ro rahi..
ak-woh main kuch yad aa gya..
rr-konsi yad nk ki.. ak sees to rr..kya hua shock laga.. i know tum shadisuda ho nk ke sath but wih bhul wala rista h.. 
ak-rr plz i dont waana share anything. esse..
rr-relax ak.. hota hai ab toh kuch nhi h na .. jo bit gya woh ab gya. nk se mujhe koi problem nhi h... bas tum samal gai aur kya chahiye.. but ak went.. lagta h bura laga... i m sry ak par ab time aa gya hai ki main uncle se tumhara hath mangu aur sari khushi de dun wapas tumhe bas kal ka injtar h...
ak was in room. she was crying.. 
ak-yeh sab rr ko pata aur nk bhi main yaha nhi rahugi bas ab aur koi mujhe kahe ise pehle i should leave thak gai hu nk ki yad aur meri soch logo ki soch i m fedup with all this.. she moved on.. he went in her house.. here nk was searching to ak...
nk-rr tumne ak ko dekha kya..
rr-main bhi usse koj raha yr.. dekhe kahi room main hogi..
dey went in room.. ak ak dey shouted.. 
nk-yaha toh nhi h i think cupboard ko check karta hu..
rr-yaha toh ak ka koi saman nhi kahi woh wapas toh nhi chali gai.. nk was shocked..
nj-kya wapas par kyo nhi essa nhi hona chahiye par..
rr-kyo..
nk-bas esse hi...
rr-koi bat nhi itne din ho gye sabki yad aa rahi hogi na..
nk-hmm  aacha ab main bhi chalta hu bhut der ho gai hai bye. hug to rr nd went...
rr-ak i m missing u.. kyo gai tum.. nk was in car thinking about ak..
nk-kya karu aur jya nhi karu samaj nhi aata hai wapas jau ya nhi.. kya karu sab thik hoga ya nhi ak main apko ehsas dilane aaya tha par aap toh mujhse side ho gai.. aakhir kyo hota hai jab hum pass aane lagte hai aur dur ho jate hai essa nhi hona chahiye na.. ab subah ka wait rahega mujhe.. now in morning ak reached in her house.. vis was happy nd shocked to sees to ak..
ak-dad.. mom hug to them..
vis-aap yaha kaise shadi rat main hui na aur abhi..koi chodne nhi aaya apko.. 
ak-nhi woh bhut din ho gye mera ngo ka kam bhi ruka hua tha soo aa gai aap log kaise hai..
rj-hum aache hai tum ek kam karo fresh ho jao rest karlo main breakfast bana ke bhijwati hu.. aur waha kya kya kiya shadi kaisi thi..
dad-bahu abhi aai hai rest karne do isse jao bachi jao.. ak went in her room.. varsha followed to ak.. in room..
va-ak tu thik hai na teri aankh kuch aur bol rahi hai kya hua bata mujhe.. ak hug to varsha nd starts crying told everything..
ak-main nk ko pyar nhi karti aur sabko sab pata chal gya mujhe kisi se bat nhi karni bas..
va-par ak agar nk g tujhe phir apna rahe toh man ja teri khushi isi main hai.
ak-aur mera kya haan koi matlab nhi mera.. mera dil jo tut gya rat rat ko soi nhi woh rat mental torture... varsha tu meri frd hai na.. phir chii essa mat bol warna..
va-nhi bolugi aacha nk nhi toh rr ka soch..
ak-plz mujhe akla chod de plz.. i waana stay alone..
va-thik hai rest kar... now varsha went down nd sees to rr.. he sat near of vis..
vis-kaisi thi shadi beta ak bhi aaj subah aai.. thats so sweet of u ki rest karne ki bajaye tum aaye yaha mithai dene dekha maa kam kaj wale ladke esse hote hai.. woh pariwar kitna khus nasib hoga jaha tum jamai banoge..
rr-passed smile kya yeh moka mujhe yaha mil sakta hai.. with this sudden ans all were shocked wat he said..
vis-yeh kya kaha apne beta..
rr-wahi jo mere dil main even sab ak ko bhut like karte hai.. mujhe woh bhut pasand hai aur main usse shadi karna chahta hu.. sari khushi dena chahta hu jo aaj tak nhi mili.. really uncle main usse khush rakhuga pehle main apse permission lene aaya hu phir ak se kahugi kuch toh kahiye uncle.. kya mujhme koi kami hai bataiye na main usse dur karuga promise..
vis-nhi beta kami tumme nhi balki hum main hai jo tum soch rahe woh ho nhi sakta.. reason main bata nhi pauga..
rr-i know ak ki pehle shadi hui hai aur woh sab bhi mujhe pata hain par mujhe koi fark nhi padta hai main usse apna kar rahuga... really uncle..
vis passed smile.. 
vis-khub khush raho beta tumhare jaisa ladka sayad hum koj nhi pate ak ke liye.. hame rista manjur hai jab tum itni badi bat manne ko ready ho toh main bhi ready hu.. all were shocked..
rj-par ak se toh puch lete..
vis-itne sal hamne uski bat mani kya hamari beti hamari bat nhi manegi hum manayege usse aur kahiye maa kya hamari beti ko woh khushi nhi milegi ek baap aur dadi hone ke nate kya rr main koi kami hai kahiye aap..
da-nhi hai par jaldi main mat karo kuch..
vis-jaldi nhi bhut late ho gai hai.. varsha was shocked..
va-par bauji ek bar soch..
vis-gave sweet to rr.. sabse keh dijiye ki hamne apni beti ki khushi chun li hai.. hug to rr.. feed to him..
rr-tqq uncle u soo sweet. main sabko keh dunga ki ab meri bhi ak se shadi hogi aap plz ek bar ak se aachese puch lijiyega main chalta hu.. bye.. he went..
va-bauji aap ak ki khushi kahi chin toh nhi rahe..
vis-kya chin rha kitni khush rahegi woh aur mera pyar koi jeher nhi par life main aage badne ke liye pyar jaruri hai ladka keh raha khush rakhega toh rakhega is bar hamara fesla badlega nhi waise bhi nk hamari beti ke layak tha hi nahi.. suddenly he sees to nk on door..
tum yaha.. 
nk was shocked even everyone were shocked that how nk came here.. but ak was soo happy.. 
vis-kyo aaye ho yaha tum..
dad-itne salo bad...
vis-chale jao yaha se.. but rj stop to vis..
rj-aao yaha andar.. he came inside..
nk-g namaste.. nk touched vis feet but he was in anger nd dadi leg also.. but she didnt do anything..
dadi-kyo aaye ho beta.. from chidchid..
nk - ak ke liye dadi..
vis-nk in shout voice.. hamri beti ka nam apni gandi juban se mat lo.. abhi ki abhi jao yaha se warna main kuch kar dunga..
rj-plz beta jao kyo aaye ho inka gussa  dekho..
nk-nk sat in his knees mar lo cut karlo par jane ko mat kaho thabhi jauga bahar jab ak milegi aaj woh nk nhi aaya pehle wala aj ak ka nk aaya hai mujhe ehsas ho gaya hai ki ak se badkar mere liye koi nhi hai.. wahi meri sab kuch hain.. main is bar mar jauga par ak ka sath nhi choduga plz ek moka dijiye mujhe sabit karne ka..
vis-diya tha par tumne kho diya aaj meri beti tumhari nhi rahi ab meri jimedari hai jaha chahuga waha dunga..
nk-ek moka de dijiye sabit karne ka bhale mar jauga par kuch karke dikhauga.. papa issme hum dono ki galti thi rishta kamjur hua because dono ne nhi samjha..
vis-dont call me papa..
ek bar diya tha moka ab nhi milega.. aur tum held his collar.. 
dadi-vis itna gussa thik nhi jaise aaj tum guse main ho waise us din yeh tha dekha na kya hua.. aaram se bat karo aur koi hal nikalo..
nk-haa ek moka dijiye dadi ek plz.. essa mat kahiye main ak se bhut pyar karta hu aur uske liye wapas aaya hu plz.. try to understand me.. jo bolege karuga par ak ko de dijiye..
vis-aacha sab kuch kar sakte ho.. sab..
nk-kuch bhi..
vis-toh thik hai 8 din deta hu convinced karo mujhe ki tum ak ke liye better choice ho agar mai man gya ki ak ko tumse jayada pyar koi nhi kar sakta uska hath tumhare hath main dunga aur sabit na kar paye toh yaha se nikal ke fek dunga.. nd i know tum khabhi sabit kar hi nhi paoge.. meri beti ka hath maine rr ko diya hia ek wada promise.. usse tod ke dikhao yha rehkar.. tab manu ki tumhara pyar pakka hai.. nk stood nd fold his hand..
nk-8 kya main pehle hi sabit kar dunga ak ke aur apke dil main woh pyar jaga ke rahuga aap khud mujhe ak ko le jane ko kahegi wada hai mera.. touched his feet..
vis-tumhare pass aj hai jo palak jhapakte hi kal main badal jayega par tum ak se dur rahoge aur koi isse support nhi karega yeh akla ladega.. alone jo kahuga karna hoga chahe driver ka kam ho ya ghar ka.. main bhi dekta hu kitna nibhate ho.. nk passed smile nd a challenge starts now..
sssrryyy for late update.. plz do update soon.. kuch parts hai maja aayega.. 
plz do comments plzz. 
precap-nk did work vis compare to nk with rr.. ak starts melting 
Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
At that age after being married also people are behind ak
Both fell for her and want to gain her
Ak was right at her place and so as nk
But if we give some place for others clarification then things would get sorted easily
But not late than never nk relaised his mistake
But lill late
Rr took a step ahead and proposed for ak
And vish agreed to
What is this challenge OMG
Now nk will be naukar or what/??/
Dont show like that its evan a test also not so cruel
Do update naksh milan soon 😊
Posted: 5 years ago
omggg madam g ki ek month ke bad aai hai comments.. 
i forgot wat i wrote or wat i thought ... but for u i will write new part.
thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally... actually i m soo happy that u felt gud to read this part... a smile came on my face.. yahi i waana show ki both side se rishta banta hai ek side se nahi banta..
nokar nahi but vis katega means waha hoke bhi nhi hone wali bat.. 
in parts u can understand much better.. 
i will do update soon next part

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