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Love So Pure- a poem on Shiva-Parvati

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Posted: 6 years ago
 

LOVE SO PURE

 

He watched as the Sun brightly shone,

Blazing across the white peaks,

His eyes twinkled at Nature's tone,

A playful game of hide and seek.

 

The presence of one so pure,

The smile of beauty bloom,

His very gaze was a cure,

Dispelling the loss of gloom.

 

His fluttering heart though, was no longer tethered,

From a single glance of her shy gaze,

Instead, it wildly fluttered,

Sending Him into Love's haze.

 

A soft smile formed His face,

Lighting the maiden's obvious charm,

A love that formed the base,

Protecting the world from all harm.

 

A love filled with devotion,

Eternity embedded in their hearts,

They set everything in motion,

Allowing Nature to take its course

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SriMaatangi thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
Another poem from me!
My rhyme scheme is not great, but I am an amateur poet! Do leave your reviews :) 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Amazing, this is!!
Will give a longer review later. ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 6 years ago
I can feel the love so beautiful
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful Poem. Sru.
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Shani Dev. ๐Ÿ˜ณ Edited by SilverBell - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
This is really beautiful, Srutha! Your rhyming is superb, it doesn't sound like an amateur poem at all. I love your description of Mahadev and Ma Parvathi's love. โค๏ธ
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Posted: 6 years ago
Mind blowing poem Srutha๐Ÿ‘
Edited by Nonie12345 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
This was so beautiful! Loved the simple approach in this! <3
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Posted: 6 years ago
Such a beautiful poem Srutha! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Keep writing more such pieces. Beautiful banner btw. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
A wonderful poem from our very good story writer! ๐Ÿ˜Š
You are a seasoned poetess Krishna, I loved the rhyming and the in-depth feelings of Shiv and Parvathi, their Divine Love!โค๏ธ