Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

mannet ss - destinated to be togather

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Prologue



Leave me leave me u monster singh khurana geet said trying to free herself from his grip banging her hand on his back while maan without finching throw her on his shoulder ignoring her usual drama.

Shut up geet maan say with boring expression .

G- dekhiye Rakshas singh khurana mujhe jaine dijiye main bta rhi hu aapko main nhi manti y baal vivah .

M- Ohh sorry to brust ur bubble dear princess what do u think i am dying to get marry to u? I'm not intrested in u at all.

G- aapki himmat kaise hui? She shouted

Aapne aapne hamari geet khurana ki insult kari?

M- and u just said tum nhi manti y baal vivah
Geet bite ger tounge
G- haan hum nhi mannte nhi banna hume baal vadhu
Geet say as she was on the verge of crying
G- i i'm only turned 18 aur main aap jaise rakhas ko nhi jhel sakti!!

Nieche utarie mujhe

M- tumhe kya lagta h ? Tumhe tolrate karna aasan kaam h ? Chipkali kahi ki !!

Geet make a big face
G- main MAIN CHIPKALI?
Dekha babajii aapne dekha? Inhome mujhe chipkali kya! Mujhe

Chodiye mujhe bhagna hain ! Hum apse shadi nhi karenge .
M- in ur dreams ab zyada nacho maat vrna tumhe yhi patak dunga phir langdate hue lena phere

Causing her to stop knowing very well he won't think twice before doing it!

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Ok girls so how it is? I'll update character sketch if i get a decent responce. Warning u before hand it's going to be comedy + romance !

Post it as i removed cursed prince .

Ps: I AM THE SOLE OWNER OF THIS STORY I. IF ANY SCENE MATCH WITH ANY OTHER STORY IT'S PURELY A COINCIDENCE .

ANY PROBLEM U CAN P.M. ME .. Edited by Ramjanki - 5 years ago

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INDEX




prologue - Above

Character sketch - below
Chapter1- pg2
Chapter2- pg3
Chapter3- pg5
Chapter4- pg9
Chapter5- pg12
Chapter6- pg 16
Edited by Ramjanki - 5 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
congrats on new ss loved the prologue really hilarious why u removed cursed prince it was so good plzz continue for atleast those who really like it even if its few parts plzzz yaar do continue cursed prince
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Posted: 6 years ago
congrats on the new SS! fab prologue! looking forward to the story! hope u will not discontinue!! waiting 4 cs n update! 
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Character sketch


Kunwar Maan Singh khurana- heir of khurana family a prince . 21 yrs old but MD of kc at age of 20 because he is a genius. Know to handle all situation very well.


Geet khurana- 18 yrs old , brat & innocent . Marry with maan at the age of 10 but since come to know about meaning of marrige trying to run from home . Do opposite exactly to what maan say

Savitri khurana- maan's dadi ( rani maa)

janki khurana - maan mother

Ram khurana - maan father
Both are caring & loving . Love geet as their daughter- in- law .

Rano & mohinder - geet parents . Love their only daughter yet strict with her. Belong to a high society .

Divyanka handa - geet dadi Edited by Ramjanki - 5 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Congratulations for the new story dear !
Interesting prologue
Maaneet are married in childhood and geet doesn't believe in childhood marriage but was enjoying cribbing with maan and geet was calling thyself as geet khurana too.
Fab character sketch 
Looking forward to the story dear
:))
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Posted: 6 years ago
terrific cs! update soon 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Congratulations on your new story 

Prologue is so Interesting and Captivating at the same time 
Maan and Geet are married and she seems to want to run away from her hubby

Character Sketch is also very Interesting 
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Posted: 6 years ago
heyy..
nice story and cutee..
maan and geet married whem they were kids..
geet a brat and maan and genious...continuee soon
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Chapter 1



Maan with geet still on his shoulders enter in a huge mantion with bidyguards immidatly get alert and bow their head . When one of them informed maan
Gu- Sir Rani maa is waiting for u both and mam parent's are also tensed.

He nodded his head in yes
Geet look toward them and think

G-jab main bhaggi thi tab toh yha koi nhi tha phir y ab kha s aa gye

After a minute of pause she say
G- hippo now put me down . Ab hum pahuch gye h . Dekho meri izzat k bhajipala maat karo .

Ignoring her continious attemp anger him he keep walking till he hasn't enter mantion where his dadimaa along with her & his paremts waiting for them .


S- lo aa gye maan
Savitri devi say as soon she saw maan with geet . But before she say anything she saw maan throwing geet on floor

S- MAAN

But before she continue geet yelled
G- HOW DARE U ! HOW DARE U TO THROW ME!! she say while rubbing her hands .

M- vo kya h na tumhe uthana aasan kaam nhi h . U know

He say with a smirk

Ram & pallavi shook their head knowing as usual drama . Knowing both are not less than tom & jerry .
S- Maan apko hamari bahu s ladne k sirf ek bahana chahiye

Dadi say while pulling his ears
M- dadi plz leave
G- nhi rani maa maat choda pta h inhone hume chipkali kha aur, aur hume uta kar yha le aai , aur ab hume gira dia

M- u forgot i just hint u heavy as well

S- maan

Deekha rani maa dekha apne kaise zalim , dust, durachari h ye - geet intrupted

GEET - rano shouted not liking the way her daughter creating a scene and calling her husband by names .

Geet immidatly go behind parvati

P- Rano it's ok . Bache hain mazak hi toh tha
Rano kept silant knowing it's not a right time . While mohinder was silant suspector . Both loved their daughter but behaviour of geet is totally opposite .
Mohinder & Rano are highly traditional so was also strict with her . But can't say anything in presence of khurana's . When they hear her daughter cribbing

G- ranimaa hume inse
When maan cut in middle irritating her further
M- dadi maa i don't want to marry her . Aap zra sochiye mere saath jab ek chudail khadi hogi toh kasise lagegi

R- maan
G- aapne mujhe chudail kha ? Aap bhoot. Aap aap

M- think geet morning tk soch lo phir mujhe bata dena .
M- dadimaa it's late i'm going to sleep .

She nodded her head in yes knowing geet is now confused in thinking names so will not retort back .

S- raat bahut ho gyi h ab chaliye sb apne apne rooms main

Rano finally take a breath of relief but determined to take a good class of geet
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