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Posted: 6 years ago
The taste of creamy coconut
Blended with love and care for his young friend
Grandpa and grandson unrelenting in attention
The grain dislodged by the tongue Ashvin delighted to trap
The prior visits there surfacing, annoyed to the core
He dons the claimant hat
Shuts the door to prove to her his annoyance
The impending visit hankers him too
She is his and his alone  others beware and stay clear
Nochalantly she had admitted the home was not hers
A fact he'll correct with determination soon
Marking her as his for all to know
Shed then become in the grand dad's mind TRISHA, he'd chose to endearingly address her as BETA
Edited by moonwearer - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
http://myfancyhouse.com/2014/10/29/stunning-apartment-in-new-york-city-usa/
I imagine a Bangalore apartment somewhat like this for Ashvin
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: Nisha0604

http://myfancyhouse.com/2014/10/29/stunning-apartment-in-new-york-city-usa/

I imagine a Bangalore apartment somewhat like this for Ashvin


All the better to visualise MJ purring and stalking around, Trisha in the fancy kitchen more adept at putting food away than cooking it ( !! ), Ashvin and Trisha on the bed cuddling...Miss the awning and the lounge chair which is Trisha's favourite spot in the house though !!

Homes have got very fancy in India too and some of them take your breath away...and obviously your bank account too !!
Edited by VeeIyer - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: VeeIyer


All the better to visualise MJ purring and stalking around, Trisha in the fancy kitchen more adept at putting food away than cooking it ( !! ), Ashvin and Trisha on the bed cuddling...Miss the awning and the lounge chair which is Trisha's favourite spot in the house though !!

Homes have got very fancy in India too and some of them take your breath away...and obviously your bank account too !!


🤣 ðŸ¤£
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: Nisha0604

http://myfancyhouse.com/2014/10/29/stunning-apartment-in-new-york-city-usa/

I imagine a Bangalore apartment somewhat like this for Ashvin



Nisha you imagined an apartment and we are imagining way more then the furniture over there...
😉
Beautiful apartment just like a dream
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Posted: 6 years ago
First Fight

That evening Ashvin did not come looking for her, he didnt chat with her, the whole evening went by, Mandira went out with her friends, leaving Trisha to be by herself
She stayed up until midnight in the living room the stunning windows in every direction gave her an almost 360 view of the setting sun, when he knocked on the door.
She went to say hello to Prasad, but was able to bring MJ home since Prasad was out of town according to his "cat sitter" 
a gal who got paid JUST to keep MJ and the new kitten entertained
The kitten scowled when she picked up so she let her roll on the rug and didnt bring her
She answered it in one ring

He smiled politely nodding in acknowledgement


"Did you have a nice evening?" he asked courteously


"I brought MJ" she said and paused for his reaction.

He barely smiled

She followed him like MJ followed her... without the purring...

He went to the kitchen to grab a bottle of water from the frig

Her dinner utensils were drying neatly on a clean towel

"Did you eat dinner?" she asked politely

"Umm.. I ate ... some" he said not looking at her

"I can make eggs?" she asked

"If you are hungry go right ahead" he urged

"i already ate no?" she pointed to her stuff drying on the rack

"Then thanks... I am good" he reached for the lights to shut it out

She scampered behind him

"Your mother is not home" she said reminding him he needed to worry and not go into his room and lock himself up

"Umm.. yeah... she texted me" he said patiently

"Oh?"

"She has my number Trisha" he responded amused.. relaxing a bit

"MJ has a new friend"

"Prasad have a girlfriend now?" he asked

"Nooo" she said incredulously

"Why is that so implausible?" he asked

"whats that word?" she asked

"Umm.. never mind... who is the friend?"

"A kitten" she smiled wide

"Oh?" great then

"You are not talking to me?" she said sadly as he approached his room

"I had a long game and Chirag clobbered me Trisha so I am tired" he lied

"What game?" she asked

"Squash" he said patiently

She didnt know what the game was or how it was played

The fact was he was done talking

"Ashwinnn" she begged

He leaned on his doorjamb

"Did u call your father?" he asked grimly

She nodded

"He said everything is OK... Rao Anna has flu so he is not coming. He said I should be safe" she told him everything

He nodded

"Did he ask about me?" he asked quietly

She shook her head slowly

"Great" he said unable to hide his butt hurt expression

"But I didnt say anything about you" she explained her Dad's aloofness

He looked at her wordlessly

"Why are you upset?" she asked boldly... and then lowered her gaze self consciously

"You did not tell me you were meeting Dadu behind my back"

"He came one day, and asked me to make coffee and not to tell you" she said

"And so u kept your word"

She nodded hurt

"He has never looked at me like he cares for me... atleast not in my adult life.. I am livid he is playing these juvenile games with me" he raised his voice

"You also never told me why you are marrying me" she said softly

"So you thought it was good payback then?" he challenged

"I am just saying"

"Trisha I am in no mood to argue" he said exasperated

"You are very grumpy"

"Excuse me?" he was not happy

"I have been asking you for 25 minutes" she raised her voice

"YOU COUNTED how long you paid attention to me?" he was more hurt

"You came at 12:17 AM, its 12: 42 AM" she showed her phone

"Thanks for the time then?" he said sarcastically

"He told me not to say" she raised her voice teary eyed

"So u did good..." he said

"If I did good then why are you upset?" she asked logically

"Tris... umm... never mind... I dont want to answer that Q"

"I should not have stayed awake"

"Oh so... another thing thats my fault?" he asked

She shook her head and walked to her room taking her glasses off wiping her tears

Their first fight...








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Posted: 6 years ago
I loved the title.
And the update.

Only problem is or rather you can solve the problem "when and how will they resolve it?"

Nisha, you are going to make is wait for another 24 hours to tell that. This would be torture same as its is for Trisha and Ashwin being apart inspite of Mandira not being there. 

Ek milega kya? Please. Patch up wala chotta sa. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Fight 101...
As cute as the reasons might be, Ashvin's jealousy at the camaraderie Trisha shares with Dadu is endearing ! He is unable to sustain his anger though and I sense he would rather hold her close than hold her away ðŸ˜†

Loved Trisha following him around like MJ ðŸ˜³   Now that we have a visual image of the house, I can see her making her way around behind him, and tailing him like a puppy ( sorry pussycat !! )

Would the first fight bring them closer ??! Yes it would. and the manaana from his side would be romantic I hope..Time for the first gift...bunch of roses, box of chocolates, or even a bookquet Ishita style ðŸ˜ƒ

Look forward to dadu's visit and the sleeping arrangements that follow ðŸ˜‰
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Posted: 6 years ago
Oh!so dadu's plans are getting its reaction!🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago
On second thought I really feel sorry for Ashwin:
He feels he is not loved by person whom her had high regards for and loved a lot. The person blames him for his reckless act and consequences thereof and punishes him for it till date. This is what Ashwin thinks about Daddu. But I think Daddu just wants to teach Ashwin lesson hard way and not take life and all that he has got for granted. 

Trisha being close to Daddu will bother him no end and he loves her and will fear losing her or his Daddu corrupting her thoughts for him. 

Poor Trisha is going to suffer for her innocence. Time when she didn't tell Ashwin everything was when he was not inseparable part of her life. Technically she is not at fault. They are into relationship only now. Now they shouldn't hide anything for each other. Earlier it was just arrangement. In that both did as it pleased or was rather convenient for them.