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Posted: 6 years ago
Good morning. 

Any idea how to reset a faulty mind clock (alarm) 
It is waking me an hour early daily. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Dee don't know about managing kids but I guess it would be someway similar. 
We can't be sure which one we like most with whom we want to spend most time we'll we love others equally but can support only one at a time. 

We love all three sosy, id and waves equally but we can only be with one at a time and longing for others. 



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Posted: 6 years ago
Vikas I love Ashwin and Trisha as much as I do R&B and II...sometimes they say absence makes the heart grow fonder 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: moonwearer

Vikas I love Ashwin and Trisha as much as I do R&B and II...sometimes they say absence makes the heart grow fonder 


Previously I was like how can all of you be so disloyal to RnB and II  .how can you forget them for usurpers Neil and Suvi. 

Now I am also same cader I love all three couples we miss others .hahaha 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: SAKIVIAM


Previously I was like how can all of you be so disloyal to RnB and II  .how can you forget them for usurpers Neil and Suvi. 

Now I am also same cader I love all three couples we miss others .hahaha 


Since we are discussing other stories Nisha can I request you to finish ID. Not now. This story has got great flow as of now. Wouldn't want to miss it.

Just that I want Neel and Suvi's family to be complete and that can happen only when Nihar accepts Suvi. Even Suvi hasn't allowed Neel to claim her completely. WOuld request for just proper closure for couple as and when you can give it.

As of now I am loving Ashwin and Trisha. I am going to demand something that Shruti does. I want to see this couple fight. Fight and then make up. This fight could start after the visit Grandpa Narang. Trisha caring and being close to Grandpa will bother Ashwin and Ashwin doing something silly due to that will anger Trisha and fir jagda. Mazza ayega. Yahan kaun kisski manayega? 

Even eager to know how will Ashwin react this time when his Grandpa addresses Trisha as Ms. Shanbaug ðŸ˜‰
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Posted: 6 years ago
In your mind..


As he drove, he told his Mom about Leela's call

Trisha sat upfront in his Land Rover, with a surreal feeling, as if the things she was experiencing were happening to someone just like her but not HER.

"She yelled at me about Manav" he said with a childlike voice

Mandira was squirming in the back, she absolutely did not want Trisha to know anything about her daughter

"You know her... silly girl" Mandira mumbled

"You should quit poking and let her see the guy" he said looking at his mother through rear view

"You should relax in the back seat and let the driver drive, because you are still in PT" Mandira said cleverly

"My shoulder is sore only in the mornings"

"and you fell over a bicycle two days ago in an elevator"


"the lights turned off as the doors slid open" he claimed

"Trisha tell me how do you like Bangalore weather?"

"Its nice... but not like Ullal"

"Ofcourse I would live at the coast if I could"

"You have been to Ullal?" she asked surprised

"Umm... yeah, a couple times, Ive been to a couple beaches around there, so many small towns"

"ullal is pretty" Trisha was firm

"I agree" Ashvin grinned looking at her sideways

"We have the biggest Someshwara Temple" she said

"Oh yeah, Dadu was saying you took him around and Rachit"

"Yes.. that and the fort... and the beaches, and the market" she sighed

"Ashvin loves the water, he doesnt do much history" "Give him a surf board and some friends, you wont see him for months"

Trisha nodded...

They waited at a traffic stop, Ashvin pointed to a medical shop with a red plus, "You should get some of what you wear for Leela" he chuckled casually

"Kya maanga usne? I am going to Venice with friends, I will get what she wants" Mandira said

"She said she wanted what Trisha wears on her face"

Mandira smoldered in the back, the fumes floating to the front

"Thats strange" she mumbled

"Its just Indian" Trisha said calmly


"Just Indian?" he teased

"Ashvin will drive you crazy" Mandira supplied

Trisha smiled in response

"I mean only I am talking... you dont talk?" Mandira asked when they were seated at a cozy Indian eatery

"I talk when I know people. I dont speak Hindi... umm.. I think in Konkani, so sometimes by the time I think of answer its too late" she said candidly

Mandira listened carefully

Something about the girl was charming... it was undeniable

"Umm.. what language do I think in?" she pondered... "Mostly Hindi, sometimes Punjabi, sometimes English" she smiled

"so many languages" Trisha smiled

"Ashvin's Dad spoke many languages" Mandira said somberly

Ashvin looked visibly sad...

The mother son exchanged a quick look, Mandira squeezed her son's fist

"You always bring me here" she smiled

"You hate it?" he grinned

"Umm.. I wont say it" Mandira was polite

"what will you have?" Ashvin looked at Trisha warmly, his gaze sliding slowly from her high cheekbones to her slender neck

"What are you having?" she asked

"Not fish.. I think..." his lips twitched

"I dont eat fish everyday" she said primly

Mandira watched the slow banter

"Just like you dont wear glasses everyday?" he whispered

"You are just too..." Trisha stared at him thoughtfully "Umm... umm.." she fumbled

"Ashvin..." Mandira scolded

Ashvin reluctantly turned to his Mom

The waiter appeared, took their beverage orders, and appys

"Have you two spoken about the future?" Mandira asked

Ashvin shook his head firmly


Trisha was nervous

"There was no ceremony, umm.. Dadu doesnt even know how official everything is"

Trisha listened...

"This is a strange situation" Mandira insisted

"You should let us figure it out" Ashvin said silkily cutting her off

"Listen... bet"

"Mom...relax" Ashvin said firmly

"You know our family?" Mandira was insistent

The appys came...

Mandira was like a book left open under the fan, she fluttered and fluttered until settling down quietly after a bit of coaxing

"What is your Ph D in?" she asked Trisha

"A protien that causes infertility" Trisha said pleasantly

"You love chemistry?" Mandira asked

"When I get the results I want" Trisha said honestly

"You speak very directly" Mandira said

"Chemistry... is very.."

"Action reaction" Ashvin supplied for her

She giggled happily

"You have a sentence finisher!!" Mandira was heart broken her son had a sync with her!!!

"I must think in konkani too" Trisha said happily

Mandira felt the opposite

They ate talking about cuisines

When they drove back, Mandira was dozing in the back.

When he parked outside the building, Mandira got off

Trisha tried to as well

"Do I get help carrying the food up?" he asked pointedly

They had ordered a few extra servings for the next day since he no longer had a cook

Trisha waited, and they rode the elevator up...

Mandira was texting on the couch


"I can put it in the frig" Trisha offered

"Looks like MJ knows you are here" Ashvin looked at his text as she gracefully put everything away in the frig

"Can I bring him?" she asked eagerly

"Your husband doesnt care for cats remember?" he challenged

She blushed intensely

"In your mind.. are we still roommates?" he asked pinning her on the frig




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Posted: 6 years ago
Nisha, you create amazing Heros.
R&B is ultimate. No one can beat him. Neel and Ashwin are amazing too.
This guy is charming and how can Trisha not fall for him every time he says something like this.
How do you do that?
Thank you so much.
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Posted: 6 years ago
So many little scenarios to think of and smile...In your mind ðŸ˜³
Mandira fluttering like an open book, smoldering in the backseat and the fumes floating to the front, being cut off mid sentence by Ashvin when she wants to take control of managing their affairs ...GREAT writing Nisha...the images just float in front of my eyes. I just need to put a real face to Mandira to enjoy it better ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜†

I hope you would be able to indulge us with the Dadu lunch update too as the wait is rather long. The dinner ended quite peacefully, with no drama, hence the request.

Lovely to see the young couple make progress in regular banter, eye locks and AshWin taking charge of Trisha's incomplete sentences ..."sentence finisher" !! ðŸ˜ƒðŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
This one is big tease. He teases her on every given occasion.
Specs, hair and the list goes on
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Posted: 6 years ago

"Your husband doesnt care for cats remember?" he challenged

She blushed intensely

"In your mind.. are we still roommates?" he asked pinning her on the frig


Let her get used to to this new role. She will take sometime to Claim her rights as wife Ashwin.