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Posted: 6 years ago
UPDATE  (chapter 92 in SOSY thread)

Nisha I am copying and pasting it here


Dangle

After a few days Sharan called the restaurant one morning at 11 AM
Trisha spent her nights crying trying to forget Ashvin. Sharanbir's face wasnt helping at all
She tried to keep her grief to herself

It physically hurt her, squeezing her soul. She hadnt eaten in two days
She tried her best to not eat with her Dad
She had her coffee and went to the restaurant
Worked all morning, and had a  small cup of shrimp, or  noodles.
By the third morning right after the coffee she threw up

Her father was taking a bath in the backyard

She ran to the washbasin outside the courtyard toilet.
The skies were blue so was she... she looked up, as she retched... the clouds foamy white

Her father panicked, ended his bath and stepped out.

She walked back up the back courtyard steps into the kitchen and almost slumped as she stepped on the raised doorframe into the central hall

"I ate shrimp" she said softly

"Did you eat dinner?" he asked patting her forehead soothingly

She sat in the central hall easy chair exhausted

He let her stay home that day, on the condition she will sleep

She did... but didnt eat... but did cry

"Why are you sad?" he asked her that night

"i dont know" she said  "I feel I should be happy I am not" she said helplessly

"Oh why?" he asked confused

"i dont know.. I just feel its going to take forever to get my Ph D. I met Jayadev yesterday and apologized"

Her father's eyes filled up with tears

"He was so nice to me... I chose to destroy everything" she whispered

He sat at her feet, he patted her knees  calmly

"sshh... shhh... Trishu" he choked

"I dont feel like doing anything. I wanted to go to MU everyday. Now I dont... everything is too far away in the future"


"No... you should not say that" he wiped his eyes on the edge of his dhoti

"I mean... we dont have the money...I dont have Jayadev... you are still cooking big pots of food..." she was distressed

"And I still cannot cook" she giggled through her sniffles

He smiled admiringly at her

Her honesty was not eroded by any setback

"You are my favorite daughter" he said with a wink

"How many more do you have? I am telling Vijaya" she teased

Her Dad had a sad expression

"She wanted to see you happy. Jayadev was IT... was THE MAN" her father appeared  resigned

"Stop the restaurant... look up what you were working on, and get back to studying" he cleared his throat

She didnt want to study

She felt hopeless and unethusiastic

"I can just drop and help you"

"And learn to cook? Oh no... Rao doesnt like women in the kitchen"

She smiled amused

"Usually women say such things" she giggled

"Well Rao cooks like a woman" her father said proudly

"Can we start wedding catering? We can buy two vans? Or cater to parties?"

"Umm... no child... its too much logistics... hauling bringing back, serving.. clean up... plus keep the restaurant open"

He balked at the idea

"We have to do something"

"Is someone talking cheerfully again?" he asked mischievously

He pretended to peer at her face

She smiled shyly

"I like your restaurant... not my life" she felt tears come on

He felt then... she was not OK

Slowly the feeling dawned on him that it might have to do something with Ashvin.

The next day Sharan called asking her if she knew "what were some good places to "see" in Ullal and if she would be willing to go with them"

Rao answered the call and handed the phone to a stir frying Prakash

"She only knows of Udupi temple and a couple of temples" Prakash said cold-politely

"That is wonderful" Sharan persisted

"You must not bother her"

"I dont think its a bother" Sharan insisted

"If she goes  with you, will you leave her alone?" Prakash asked bluntly

"umm.. OK...I will think about it"

Yes... we are no longer connected. Our families are a world apart. Please leave her alone"

She gave a tour to Rachit and Sharanbir two days later

Ashvin came to know about it, a couple days afterwards

"Youve got to be kidding me!!!" he roared calling Sharan, after his lunch date with Rachit and description of Trisha

"You know I never kid" Sharan said calmly

"You dangled your wealthy grandson in front of her?"asked Ashvin sputtering.. like a stuck spark plug.. was outraged...

"Well..You dangled money..." Sharan said laughing under his breath




Edited by KM03 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Your name I know and respect
This grandson of yours I know by name
The one that lingers in my consciousness
The reason I suffer and live on
My penance and my punishment
Shall forever remain in my heart as the man I married
The man I love, the one that hates my Aanu
That married for revenge,that looks sexy with glasses on
That wears no socks
He humoured my love for cats
In whose presence I transform into a bag of gel
Ashwin is how I connect with him
Ashwin is how I distinguish him from the rest
Gentle respectful kind and generous
Cast a magic on me I unconsciously ,willingly surrendered
He in my heart, he in my mind, he in my breath lingers on
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank you for posting dangle.
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Posted: 6 years ago
The effects of mission Ullal seems to be shaping well.
She goes on a temple circuitwith the Narangs  old and young. Did she drape a saree? If she did and looked ravishing ,Ashwin is justified in his anger.
Dadu is doing all he can to provoke his favourite grandson.
He sure knows him well and encourages the younger Narang to be a transmitter of information.
The net is cast. ..she loves her fish. .
He is a duly now sulky cat...the silver fox  is playing his game and playing it very well.
Aanu is aware now why his daughter doesn't like her life anymore.
She comes out clean admitting she has apologised and reached a kind of closure in her relationship with Jayadev.
What a negotiator Dadu is.
No wonder the reference to a fox and the silver seems indicative of sagacity.
Now that you have dangled an update...YE DIL MANAGE MORE...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank-you Kavitha with the kind of gadget glitches and since SoSy has not seen an update since 27th June would have missed DANGLE had you not posted it here. Thank-you for the  morning raga Nisha
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Posted: 6 years ago
Friday evening early update. The weekend looks very promising. Thanks a lot Nisha.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow!!!
Grandpa rockz!!!!🤣
He is irritating ashwin to that end ,that ashwin will react with all his might to get her back!!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
The last couple of lines, is he referring to Rachit as the wealthy grandson or himself? Is he accusing his Dadu of fronting Rachit as a suitor. Or is he accusing him not to parade his own cause to his wife. ? I'm a little unclear here please.

Poor thing is sick in love and being lovesick is washing her away . I was hoping father shanbag would notice her lackluster living and be forced to think about who could be behind her plight. Seeds of doubt have been sown and for a change seeds of doubt takes a positive connotation here.

Whenever I think of Dadu I'm reminded of the scudge sticking hard to the pan that's proving difficult to scrape or wash off.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Ashvin believes Dadu doesnt care about him. Why would he even think Dadu would dangle ASHVIN NARANG?
He is pissed Dadu dangled Rachit Narang instead

He WISHES it was him instead... but kya karen dadu is just getting on his nerves.
Its like Dadu is blind to his existence

Amusing, aggravating and cute...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Ashvin believes Dadu doesnt care about him. Why would he even think Dadu would dangle ASHVIN NARANG?

He is pissed Dadu dangled Rachit Narang instead

He WISHES it was him instead... but kya karen dadu is just getting on his nerves.
Its like Dadu is blind to his existence

Amusing, aggravating and cute...



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