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Posted: 6 years ago
Nisha next thread and next update too
Thread three..,
Yaay
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Wave Enticement

August 8, 2015

Lashing waves kissing my feet

My feet's telltale marks on the sand

Sandy beaches with crabs in their shell

Shells of all sizes  shapes hues and smells

Shaped my weekend for almost a decade and a half.

Any wonder why the sea thrills me while flowing rivers dont

Unless it tumbles and drops as a roaring cascade

Hours i can sit gazing at the lashing waves

Sunset and sunrise or gathering clouds or clear blue

All create in me a mood and tale of their own,

Tender fists and feet, scooping up shells  or escaping the wave a sight not to miss

Teens they seem to dare the sea jumping over waves a spectacle to see

The fisherfolk  fasten their catamarans and transfer catch deftly to waiting hands

Boats young people seek refuge in , as upward the sun  steadily climbs in

The beach it wears a deserted look,The buzz and the din will soon set in

The Coromandel Coast holds a haloed place in my heart

Seas everywhere with shingle or sandy shores  will forever lure me.




This is from my blog over 2 years old.. thought it is apt for the Konkan coast as well.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: moonwearer



<h2>Wave Enticement</h2>August 8, 2015

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Lashing waves kissing my feet

My feet's telltale marks on the sand

Sandy beaches with crabs in their shell

Shells of all sizes shapes hues and smells

Shaped my weekend for almost a decade and a half.

Any wonder why the sea thrills me while flowing rivers dont

Unless it tumbles and drops as a roaring cascade

Hours i can sit gazing at the lashing waves

Sunset and sunrise or gathering clouds or clear blue

All create in me a mood and tale of their own,

Tender fists and feet, scooping up shells or escapingthe wave a sight not to miss

Teens they seem to dare the sea jumping over waves a spectacle to see

The fisherfolk fasten their catamarans and transfer catch deftly to waiting hands

Boats young people seek refuge in, as upward the sun steadily climbs in

The beach it wears a deserted look,The buzz and the din will soon set in

The Coromandel Coast holds a haloed placein my heart

Seas everywhere withshingleor sandy shores will forever lure me.




This is from my blog over 2 years old.. thought it is apt for the Konkan coast as well.



Woow it's just perfect Sree
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Posted: 6 years ago
Paws & pas

Morning arrived bright and sunny after all night rains
Trisha slept in unlike usual days
Missing Aanu's reaction to her spending the night with Ashvin
Ashvin tried to make himself coffee in the Shanbag kitchen

Her father not knowing any Hindi and only little English
Waved and paused him

"I will make coffee" he said

"thank you" Ashvin mumbled gruffly

"trisha's asleep" he supplied nervously

Something he wud cringe about later.
Her father did not want to know why his daughter was sleeping in this morning.

He locked gaze with his young son in law briefly and looked away
Ashvin adjusted his glasses and leaned on the screen door leading to the back courtyard

Her father made him the best coffee he had ever had, all within minutes
"thank you"

"U want breakfast?" he asked politely

"Umm.. no not right now... thank u... I am fine now" Ashvin was nervous

Her father took his coffee and walked to the front porch to read his paper on the easy chair

He didnt check his phone or go on the internet

Leela slept soundly

Ashvin logged on to his computer and worked for a while

Trisha came out at 10 just after Prakash left for the morning

"You are awake?" she asked shocked

"Someone has to be... in this house" he muttered, grabbing her swiftly as she dodged

Bringing her on to his lap

"Where is my reward for waking up early?"

"i dont have money" she made a face

He kissed her senseless

She muffled her groans on his teeshirt

She lay cuddling on his chest, her tongue playing a dart and retreat game like her favorite cats back home, causing his veins to throb distrubingly

He had no idea what was it about her lips or her for that matter, the way took his lower lip between her teeth and did that kittenish bite.

Her soft hands moving over his shoulders tentatively as if he was fragile

"U need to rub me harder" he groaned in her ear... his phone falling on the floor with a clank

Leela turned towards them her eyes still closed

He didnt want her to pull away, cupping her curve possessively to hold her back

"I have two hands no?" she reminded him wickedly

"Oh do u?" he groaned reaching and kissing it moistly

She staggered back in shock feeling his lips there for the first time

Her face flush, her expression shy.

She was standing now, bent over, tempting him to do that again

"I might fall if u do that" she whispered inaudibly... shaking like a leaf

He nodded and thumbed her instead

She fell on him shuddering

"ashwinnn" she scolded a bit loudly

"guysss... get a rooom" Leela got up with her eyes closed and walked like a zombie into Trisha's room and slammed the door

"See what you did?" Trisha scolded him


"I do" he nodded lazily

"I want to go to the university" she said

He hugged her tightly

"as long as I get to hang with you and not her, I am OK"


"So baddd you are" she scolded

"she is annoying Trish"

Leela came out walking towards them

They were just cuddling

"He says you are annoying"

"shore... poor baby" Leela mocked him

Trisha got off Ashvin's lap and went into her father's room to turn on the modem

"I started the wifi" she said

"Its in your Dad's room?" Leela was shocked

"I was always browsing no, so he did that" Trisha smiled sheepishly

"Bad girl" Leela nodded

"Look who's talking" Ashvin supported his wife

"I dont care... u... umm" Leela poked him

They did a back and forth slapping duel

Ashvin finally tackled her as she screamed

Trisha walked unmindfully doing her morning chores

"Triii" she screamed

"Ashwinnn" Trisha ordered

He loosened his grip

Leela freed herself, both were on the floor now, rubbed her arms and punched him a couple times

Took his glasses that were on the floor and handed it to Trisha

"Dont give it back"

"Leee" he ordered

Leela smiled smugly and then began to cackle

"Leela" Trisha held the glasses protectively

"i smile because u are my SIL, laugh because you married THAT" she said haughtily walking away from both

Trisha checked email after making coffee for all of them 

"Dear Ms Shanbag

Thank you for responding. Good to know you reached safely. Let me know if I can help with anyway about the University

Take care

BR

Sharanbir



She wrote back

"dear Mr Narang

Thank u for the offer. I hope to get online access to some journals thats what I will talk about.

Hope you are doing well

BR

Trisha"


A couple hours later just as they were leaving for the morning restaurant chores

A email popped in

"dear Ms Shanbag

Good to hear from you.
Good luck"

BR Sharanbir

P.S. Looks like Shanbag is lost!!



A night in her husband's arms and she seemed to have abandoned her maiden name, and the wily old man seemed to have caught that faux pas



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Posted: 6 years ago
Woow
It feels like good old days when I would wake few minutes before the desired time only to read an update
Lovely Nisha
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Posted: 6 years ago
Well yes she is lost in the pool of love
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank you for early morning update Nisha.
Jasmine thank you.

Loved the flow in which their relationship is heading.
Hope both do address issues between them:
Trisha's finance
Both their parents.
How do they wish to project their relationship to society?
Will they have any formal ceremony to declare the world?

But all this can take its own time and they can get to know each other better until then 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome way to begin the day with the Morning Raga.
Nisha can we have another update and thread please.
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Nisha subah subah ek update deke kahan gayab ho ???
Waiting for new thread!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
The way the graceful emails between the graceful old pop and his friend Trisha shanbag have been segued in to the plot's story , it's story telling is very charming. These emails are great leads to keep you hooked to the progression and is woven as a natural extension to the plot. The last lines one night in her husband's arms and she is content to being Trisha dropping her maiden name blew me away. That it did not escape
her friend's observant eyes just blew me away. It's very telling ... every married woman whether she legally goes thro this transition or not, she definitely goes thro this transition mentally and with that mental transition begins the acceptance of her being married. The old pop caught that change and is so pleased about it.

I think even Aanu... he might not be very expressive but he does have a lot of grace as well . The father wants stability in his daughter's life hoping that this boy doesn't drop her after taking his fill and the 'boy'
for his part is yearning for acceptance from a man he wronged.

Ashvin is giving easy access to his sister to record him for her Insta feed 😆