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Posted: 6 years ago
Bath arrangement


The evening water supply was beginning to fill up the lower tank

The hose had a hole in it and there was no water pump so they filled up the two upper tanks by buckets
Trisha knew more water was needed now that there were three addl people in the house

She filled up one of the upper tanks half way through as Ashvin took a nap in the chair he first sat on
Leela slept on her "new" fixed cot in her room after spending endless minutes staring at the walls adorned with pictures of Trisha with Vijaya, Trisha's school pictures, from 5th standard onwards to college
She spotted Trisha in every picture

"what are you doing?" Ashvin spoke gruffly holding the grill twin door standing on the top step

"Just filling water" she said matter of factly

"where is the rest room?" he asked

She pointed to the door in the far corner of the back wall

Past the coconut trees

Twilight was setting in

Salty breeze swayed the palms, the jackfruit leaves rustled noisily as if they sensed there was someone new at home

When he returned to wash his hands, she poured from the small brass pot

"thats quaint" he smiled

"Old no?" she smiled

"You dont care for plastic?" he asked curiously

"It becomes slippery no... umm... I know the konkani word" she said

"Soap scum?" he offered

She nodded sincerely

"And it will break every time" she explained

"I wnat to take a shower.."

"Oh?" she looked on sadly
"I mean bath... sorry" he said

"Now?"

"yeah?"

"Oh... u can use that tank water" she informed politely

"Out here?" he asked shocked

"Nobody is seeing you no" she told him blandly

"thanks" he burst out laughing as she blushed

"the walls are so high" she waved the brass pot to show him

He nodded

"there is a bathroom also I presume?" he asked mischievously

"yes... its there, she pointed to the left corner.. a couple tiles missing from the roof

"No running water there also" she told him

"thats fine" he said

They exchanged a awkward glance as he went back up, returning with his towel and soap

She stepped out of the sub tank

"Water from down there too?" he asked as the sub tank filled up in a trickle

"Mostly take from here" she said sternly

"yes Ma'am" he nodded

She went back up"

She heard him holler her name

She went back out... he was on the steps of the sub tank, tryingt o work the faucet

"what happened?"

"the water stopped" he said

"I told no... dont use this one... its still filling up... now it wont come"

"what are you talking about?" he was baffled

"No... u stop it... then it stops" she scolded

She wiggled it..." nope!!

"You dont listen... now there is no water... it sometimes doesnt come in the morning" she was upset 

"trish"

"Its OK" she sulked trying to work the old chrome rusty faucet

He bend down and scooped up a brass pot full of water from the top tank and sloshed her

"Ashwinnn" she shrieked

She grabbed his pot

"stop it" she warned

"sorry... can I finish my bath"

"U havent started only"

"Umm.. I would if I have something to scoop water with"

"First"

"take off my clothes?" he grinned

"No... u can take bath with clothes... Aaanu always wears dhoti" she told him primly

"Darn it" he whispered

"Trish" he reached for the pot

She dodged hiding it

He picked up the half filled brass bucket laying nearby and poured over her

She gasped and choked in shock

He gently dragged her towards him

"Ashwinnn" she dropped the much dimpled pot all over again

her chest did that funny tripping thing again
He brought his mouth down on a scorchingly hot kiss that sent fire coursing through her veins and remained untouched by her damp moist body
His lips and tongue working its magic on her, sucking on her lower lip... sending raw urgent need rushing to her head

"ashwinnn" she whimpered

He held her close... "can I take that bath now?" he chuckled on her lip

Prakash had come back from half way to pick up shrimp from the old new frig

He set foot on the first step to the back courtyard.. and backed away... picked up the two flat square slabs of shrimp wrapped into one with a
konkani newspaper,and jute yarn... with a center bow

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Posted: 6 years ago
I have a grin across my face now ...Aanu is in the know of which way the wind blows now ðŸ˜³
It was a matter of time in any case.

The entire update was a throwback to my childhood in the Kerala house where you had to fill water in the bucket from the tank and take to the bathroom for a bath The dimpled brass pot too brings back memories...specially the sound when it drops from your hands and rolls across the floor !!

Woodsmoke, jackfruit tree, sound of water being drawn from the well, sepia prints on the walls,  mantras being chanted at crack of dawn, swishing of the broom when the courtyard is being swept...Lovely Lovely memories.

Remember writing of the same thoughts when Suvi's Konkan house was described ðŸ˜³
Edited by VeeIyer - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank you so much Nisha.
Annu, please let it go. Don't judge him based on just that night 10 years ago.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Trisha how will you resolve your water woes. Seems Ashwin has wasted lots of water. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Bed fixed but it has been taken by Leela.
Ashwin do you plan to sleep on chair only? 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nisha...Your updates are a balm to the soul with the world around us gone completely awry...It is a few minutes of escape from the grim reality around us and SV has rightly named it the morning raga !
I wonder what it takes to make a person who seems so completely normal to all around him, snap and bring down other lives...Unable to understand and absorb...and sadly life still goes on...

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Posted: 6 years ago
Everyone needs to have a second chance in life
Aanu please forgive him and be happy in the happiness of Trisha...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Bath arrangements done
Now sleeping arrangements is to be done 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
Commendable the dexterity and grace with which prakash did a NEAT 'About Turn' with a practiced 'Bow' after being SERVED a Creamy Shrimp DOUBLE DIP 😃 😆 😉 . Well.. we will have to ask him what he thought of the shrimp dip that he chance dunked into !!😳 😆 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
So what should we assume did Prakash saw them or it was co incidence that he turn back ...
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