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hello blog users

am going now write one new story for only blog members

and i want each one reader comment this time

because of this story i going to include readers and another readers going remove from my blog...  click on follow link

My Beautiful Mistake S#2 - its accessible only for those readers whose already added in my blog list...

not going end new one now


first i going to delete current readers from blog 

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INDEX

part 1 on page 1



part 2 on page 8

part 3 on page 14

Confirmation & Removal & pw pm list on page 19

part 4 on page 20

Blog link on page 28

part 5 on page 28


part 6 on page 42

part 7 on page 52

PART 8 on page 62

part 9 on page 71

Part 10 on page 79

part 11 on page 83
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Part 1

One small cute boy sleeping peacefully hugging mom, he is happy in this moment because when you are in your parents arms, you feel safe from all worries and secure... but next moment can turn anything up-side down, who knows about this...

Another side one girl younger of him, sitting near window, one candle placing near her notebook and some light coming inside through open window, she is busy in doing homework. Life is never easy for her... But she never lose hope and find happiness in small moments... her mom laying on bed suffering from high fever from past few days, all household work burden also come on her small shoulder, his father is hardworking man, doing driver job in Malhotra Mansion... Mr. Malhotra try to help him but he deny, already his daughter all education taking care by his boss, now he not able to take more benefits...

ek ko sone ke liye raat milli

ek ko jaagne ke liye din bhi km pad gya

ah khuda kya khub likha hai tune

in hatho ki lakiro mein

.

.

One more side, one beautiful princess of malhotra, Maya sleeping peacefully hugging teddy after not completing homework, because her homework tension is not of her but of geet, her father driver daughter...

Maya and geet is good friend, her dad never did any difference between both child, providing best education of both girl... but sometime something stop us and make us greedy... and in today selfish nature is not bad... everyone want best and win in the race of life...

Now sleep, because new day come with new hope, and can turn your life for good and bad too...

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Mumma

.

Mumma

.

Aa rhi hu maan

Kya huya

Maan : dekho na mumma

Ye tie

.

The cute little Maan,10 years old said so lovely, her mother little bend and kissed on her both cheek and take tie from his hand...

La mein kr deti hu

And sit on bed then make him sit beside own.

 

Tu aur tere papa

Dono na mujhe ek pal khali nhi rhehne dete

.

.

So what wrong in this parul

Parul : raj aapko kaha kuch galat lagta hai

Ydi kal mujhe kuch ho gya toh tum dono kaise rahonge fir

Both screamed together mummaaa ------parulll

Raj : tum na subh- subh kuch bhi shuru mt kr diya kro

Chalo maan

Hum chalte hai

Maan : yes dad

.

Parul : are aap dono toh bs ase hi gussa ho rhe ho

Maan aap niche chaliye

Mein aati hu

.

Raj aap jaante hai na

Mujhe Brain tumour hai

And in this stage operation also not possible

jb tak delivery nhi ho jaati

Raj : maine phle kaha tha Baby abort kr dete hai

Parul : rajjj

Raj : itni der nhi huyi thi us waqt

You only 3.5 months pregnant

We can do this

Top doctor ki team tak aane wali thi

But you stop me giving me own swear

.

Abhi bhi 2 months hai Parul

Ydi is beech tumhe kuch ho gya toh

Parul : Maan ka sapna hai uski behn

Ek baar ye aa jaaye bs

Uske baad aap jo kahenge wo mein karungi

.

Ab niche chalo

Aur thodi meri adaat km kro

.

Raj : nhi

             ***********

Geet beta tu ready ho jaa

Ye sb mein kar lunga

.

Geet : uff oh papa

Aap kya kya karonge

.

zadu bhi ho gyi

aur maine paucha bhi maar diya

.

Mohinder : tu baith yaha aaram se

Aur phle nasta kr

Dekh school dress bhi gili kr li

.

Geet : sukh jaayengi

Dekho kitni garmi hai

.

After breakfast she pick bag and kissed on mother cheek then father and left to school...

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Where is my notebook

Geet kal yhi rakh ke gyi thi na

Fir yaha se kaha gyi

.

Beta whi hongi

Maya : no mom

Waha nhi hai

.

Princess ye lo mil gyi

Maya : thanks dad

Bag mein rakh do

.

.

Mom please tie my pony

.

Dekh rhe ho ashwin apni princess ko

Ek kaam khud nhi krti hai

.

Ashwin : toh kya huya jaanvi

Bachi hai

Sikh jaayengi khud krna

Jaanavi : bigado tum isse aur

She left after doing her all work...

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this part posting here after this only on blog , see last post for blog member list , going remove soon 

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congrats on season 2~! awesome concept! lovely banner! eagerly awaiting update! hope I am on ur blog list! 😊
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old Index - here you get all link of ongoing & completed stories till updated before 25 june 2017



Completed stories list on page 16

Completed story link start from page 16 to 18

Ongoing Story List on Page 18

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congrats on season 2~! awesome concept! lovely banner! eagerly awaiting update! hope I am on ur blog list! 😊


thank u dear

ofcourse tum ho ðŸ˜ƒ
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very beautiful edit 
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oye members ko delete kar rahi 
kar k dekh mujhe delete i ll kill u ðŸ˜¡
aur mere comment ka toh tujhe pata hi hai