See you on the next wave - Page 41

Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Ashu25


Gosh!!!
Ashvin is crazily envious
He will get superly angry soon
I can sooo bloody sense it.
Any setting...the green monster in him shall trigger ...am just looking forward to it😆
That overweight cat🤣
... ready to pounce !!!
Posted: 6 years ago
You know Nisha...I would imagine similar situations with the leads of certainstories ahere hatred and money comes into play...
When I was a teen...there were many soaps floating around with the same  concept and I would imagine ditto situations...girl and guy aloof...but girl talking to others and guy envious.
Reading up my imagination is giving my visuals wings
Bring it on author sahiba!!
Posted: 6 years ago
Nisha will 100% spin it differently ! Agreed Ashu ! Now it's Wait and watch game ...
Posted: 6 years ago
Jas
I already covered this one

She thinks to herself that the marriage must be to satisfy an aging relative. She knows its not real, she knows its not for love

She is not beating the dead horse too much

Whoever he married her for, she assumes they have been told and the music has been faced

Thinking about his motive is not her concern actually

She is agonizing over why her father wont as much as touch the folder

She is trying to figure out a way to "exist" in this city.

Posted: 6 years ago
All love stories are predictable
All love stories have jealousy as trigger
All love stories have attraction as foundation

I am hoping to make it not too exaggerated or dramatic or theatrical
Not too soapy

Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Nisha0604


Jas
I already covered this one

She thinks to herself that the marriage must be to satisfy an aging relative. She knows its not real, she knows its not for love

She is not beating the dead horse too much

Whoever he married her for, she assumes they have been told and the music has been faced

Thinking about his motive is not her concern actually

She is agonizing over why her father wont as much as touch the folder

She is trying to figure out a way to "exist" in this city.


Thank u Nisha. May be binge read and missed the details. Or one of 4am update I read under the comforters 😆

But this story is going to have many many re-reads. 👏
Will go and refresh it again   😊 Edited by jaschick - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
You know...its a cool morning here...breezy and calm
Give us some hot pakora type update 😆 so we  can savour the climate 
Posted: 6 years ago
Hair/Fur cut

"Food world was crowded" she said short and sweet

He waited for the long story that other guy seemed to have got

None came

Chirag appeared "what konkani snack do you make without burning yourself"

She paused for a minute thinking seriously on that question before the humor hit her

"Nothing" she said embarrassed

"Oh teri" Chirag shook with laughter

"I am a very bad cook" she said firmly

"Theek hai I wont ask you to cook for me" Chirag nodded with a pretend shiver
"I made upma" she said hurt

"Sorry yaar" he waved towards her

"Chal chalten hain" Chirag urged Ashvin

Ashvin turned to him "Sure" he nodded

"You dont want coffee?" Trisha asked sadly

"Isko bol. Yeh rukega to" he said

"Its almost done" she mumbled to Ashvin.

"ok" nodded ashvin, the first ever permission question he received from his wife
She poured some coffee for him as courtesy for that kindness
Too unsure if she shud push the cup towards him

 He reached for it and took it from the counter

Chirag and him talked about a Saturday league tennis game
Her friend Nirupama texted her

"he is still in MU" on snapchat

Her heart sank to receive that email about Jayadeva

she walked back to her room shut the door leaned on it and distressed

"Who saw him, did you?" she asked

"No, Mukesh did" "sharad also saw him in Prof Mule's class" Niru wrote

she began to cry

Weeks had gone by without them seeing each other
She was ina  strange house living like a guest
The sights and sounds of Ullal, the bus ride, Madani Nagar, Ambedkar Ngr, Asaigoli flit through her mind the colorful buses.
The stunning Ullal coastline  plagued her already shattered heart

"Can Mukesh ask him if I can call him?" she begged


"Its the same Mukesh only no?"
They knew a guy that was doing Masters in Physics

"yes"

"i dont know Trishu, just leave it"

NOW Nirupama wanted her to leave it

"How can I ? I cheated him to help my father. Now my father wont touch the money"

"just return it na and come back"

"He will lose everything. We dont make much money" she said

She didnt know the numbers exactly but things were in the red

"Trishu you gave him up already. Dont you see it?"

"No... no... I didnt I dont belong to any other man" she was adamant

Her coffee went cold on the kitchen counter

The men left for their evening

She went to the kitchen to grab a glass of water and went to bed

He found her asleep in her red outfit when he returned at midnight

He shut the light out

A organic chemistry journal lay open on the bed the pages flapping in the air from the ceiling fan.

She talked with young mothers, cooed to babies and held them, she asked about nearby places, she talked about her town
He noticed while coming and going
She had three kids she was close to that played tennis near the bldg at the court

She paused and chatted with them

She showed them her Udupi pendant bending down when they wanted to see it.
At home she was almost invisible
The cook sometimes asked her if she will eat dinner or lunch
Ashvin tried his best not to notice what she was wearing
It was hard. She had a distinct style and loved colors.

He hadnt spoken with his Mom or grandpa in a couple weeks
His sister texted him warning him not to hurt "the poor girl"

"its men like you that completely throw me off the marriage idea. Congrats!! I hope you are happy. Your screwed up life has effectively destroyed my hope that I will ever find a good man"

He had called her but she wouldnt answer

"Its not about YOU Lee. This is my life, in case the bubble you live in didnt have windows" he shot back

"You PIG You married a poor broke girl. Men disgust me"

Some mornings he noticed her eyes were puffy and tired
He was hoping she would talk about the house key soon

Prasad showed up one morning with his cat

"Hows it going?" Ashvin nodded coolly

"can I talk to trisha?" he asked politely

"Umm, not sure if she is home" Ashvin declared

He went in and found her doing her hair

She stopped abruptly to stare at him through the bathroom mirror

"someone here to see you" he said

She dropped her arms and turned

"For me?" she asked shocked

He nodded reluctantly.

"hi trisha.I am going to be gone for a couple days, can you feed my cat?" he asked earnestly

The cat purred and leaped into her arms

It was a giant ball of silky fur

"Mike hates to eat at night so can you check on him in the evenings?" he handed her a paper

She nodded tentatvely

"What was the name again? Michael Bolton?" asked Ashvin

"No, its Michael JACKSON" trisha said passionately
As if he had gotten HER name all wrong

Prasad chuckled

"She is awfully young to be a MJ fan" he smiled

"I like his songs" she said

"Here is my keys" he handed her

"You can take him back when you are done. He loves staying in the arms" Prasad told her

She took him to her room he purred and circled the bed

She didnt have any toys

She sat on the floor and tried to look for stuff

"You like socks?" she giggled pulling out a sock from her drawer

Her little pin cushion from her sewing kit fell off

She watched the cat roll it across the room as she lay by it
"You like cats?" Ashvin asked surprised

She sat up in shock

Nodded child like

"He is very beautiful" she gushed

"Males arent beautiful" he said
She looked up at him

"Handsome? sexy maybe.. not beautiful" he coached

The cat sat on her lap and purred

"I like to call him beautiful" she sighed, in awe.


She reached for her hairbrush on the bed and began brushing the surprised fatso

"He needs a fur cut or grooming as they call it" Ashvin said bluntly

"No" "He is fine". "He is so pretty" she held him

"I hate cats" he said firmly as if that was going to make her throw the feline over the balcony.

"Shooo shweeet" she coed

"His hair must weigh 20 lbs" he said mocking the cat intentionally as it scowled at Trisha for brushing him

"He cant get a hair cut every week like some people" Trisha cooed to him not even looking at Ashvin's face

"You think I get a weekly haircut?" he asked.. surprised

She blushed when she realized he had found out, let the cat out of the lap that is...


Posted: 6 years ago
Hmmm...Cat out of the bag indeed ! 
her affinity to a whole bunch of people around them has him thinking...even the cat ! So what is going to be the tipping point ? 
Though at some level she realises that he is attractive, she is too bruised, overwrought and hurt with all the happenings in her life to perceive what she senses...

Wonder how they will aage badho ??! Will MJ be the catalyst ? 

The list is growing...Chirag, Prasad, fatcat...
Edited by VeeIyer - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
Okayyy
I like  how that OVERWEIGHT cat helped build a convo between the two
It came of some help to these two!!!
Am glad they have a neighbour 🤣
Phir kya hua?????
Aage sunao na

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