Originally posted by: Ashu25Chirag is mesmerised with Trisha
Can we set these two up ?? 🤣Ashvin is a bechara...god knows what he is doing to himself.Next pleaseee
REWARDING FAILURE
"Yes, she must. She must know you dont take it easy when you feel slighted and you do extreme things" he said hanging up
Ashvin lay back on the white sectional outdoor sofa, yanked a half white half navy rectangle cushion from under his back and flung it across the balcony"
The old pop sure knows how to go for the jugular.
The old pop sure knows how to deliver a crushing body blow
The old pop sure knows how to BEAT/ CHEAT A MISSION.
His grand pop has got a number on him and he's hitting on Ashvin"s nerve, the nerve that's prone to extreme imbalance or fury on and off and he's delivering a body blow by saying 'for all your mom's blowing the trumpet of the changed man that you are today and penance and stuff, you still are imbalanced and will be one forever'.
The young scion has to come up with new ways to get his exasperating old man off his back ... to get his grandpop to react not as if it's a rain but a flood or a storm or a hurricane But one cannot escape the reality that THERE'S NO GAME TO BE WON OR LOST IF YOU DONT PLAY IT.
Nisha, this twist was truly nach. Neither is Ashvin R&b nor do I want to equate your third baby to a Harlequin. This is your top brand of spicy tadka. The writing keeps going notches higher and reading this chapter was such a delight and it's truly a REWARDING TRIUMPH. Just loved the update's nuances and its flow in terms of expression. Best wishes.😊
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