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Posted: 6 years ago
Congratulations on new tale Nisha.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Waitinggg
Acha ek baat puchoon?

Har kahani mein ek ladki hoti hai jiske chote baal hain. Kya obsession hai behen ???
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Posted: 6 years ago
Tipping scale

Vishwas Narang had two brothers, each with two boys and a girl. Only Vishwas had one son and one daughter. Leela was in college now
Narang Properties was registered in bangalore and it was one of the many business ventures of the group.
They were building a multiuse office-apartment-multiplex-shopping megaplex 30 miles West of the airport

So that was why Sharanbir was frequently seen in Bangalore the last couple years.
The AGM was also slated to be in Bangalore for this reason starting this afternoon.

Cuisine Craft was the franchise licensing venture of Narangs. It brought in the least revenue and the least operating income.

It struggled every few quarters...

Ashvin was "only worthy enough" of doing that according to Sharan.

That caused the greatest heartburn for Mandira.
She saw her husband's nephews dive in and be part of the larger enterprise in Delhi and Chandigarh 
while her son slogged away at "MG Road" (NOT Delhi) "in foriegn land".

Sharanbir did not speak with Ashvin unless "he had to"

That irked Mandira no end too.

Vishwas had loved flying, and owned many planes. One such sortie one cold morning in Delhi had ended badly..

His brothers Vikas and Vipul Narang had offered complete unconditional support to Mandira Leela and Ashvin

Their wives were equally nice, strangely.

That irked Mandira too.

What ever little hope there was of Ashvin being forgiven and absorbed into the fold of Narang Inc. was gone when Vishwas was gone.

She admired the nail technician's work with interest, but did not vocally compliment

She was a bad tipper unlike her father in law

"Well I am a single parent" she would claim defensively when she went out with Sharan.

Outside Taj ManSingh and Oberoi, the doorman rarely received any cash offerings from her

Her maids and assistants got paid, but that was about it.

"Sahi hai Ma'am" the girl caught Mandira staring and enquired

She nodded, a lil flustered.

Leela called

"Mom, I am going out with friends tonight I wont be home" she said in her sing song voice.
They lived in Panchsheel Enclave. Most of their neighbors had remodeled their homes thrice in three years
Mandira was in a holding pattern

She wanted to get out of there and become neighbors with Singhanias or Mittals in the 110001 zip code

"Hmm" she said

If her daughter was sexually active, she did not want to know

She could spend a second calling the family doc to ask if Leela was on birth control but she hadnt... and she wont

"Ma'am" the nail tech hovered

"It looks gr... good" she nodded and smiled a half smile

The girl was overjoyed

"Good" meant a Rs.1,500 or a Rs 2000 tip usually. She did not know that it was going to be less than Rs. 200 today.

She dialed Ashvin

"Are you coming to the board meeting?" she asked eagerly

"Why? did he invite me?" Ashvin was visibly excited

"Umm... no beta... not quite yet" she swallowed

"Oh" she could literaly see his shoulders slump

"Dont worry... I am going to be there" she said with forced enthusiasm she did not quite feel

"How is work?" she asked shrilly

"Its OK... umm... its a job" he said gruffly

"Do you want a vacation?" she offered

"Now?" he asked chirpy

"Sure hon" she said and looked around to see if anyone noticed her obvious American slang
The nail tech brought her her second glass of wine

She nodded, slumping back on the chair..

"You are doing fabulous... keep at it beta" she urged and said the same 7 sentences afterward.
All meant to somehow tip the scale in the favor of her son.

"Mom Can I call u back?" Ashvin asked distracted

"U can . I love you A LOTTT" she said shrilly.



"U2" he said with a half smile

There was a knock on the door

The girl he had seen as the elevator doors drew shut was walking inside

She looked at the walls adorned with pictures of him playing one sport or another, or some beach vacation or another

Her eyes paused on something she thot she recognized

"Ms Shanbag?" he asked standing up politely

She looked a little intimidated

She nodded

"Trisha Shanbag" she reminded flustered

"Ashvin Narang" he shook her startlingly soft hand and noticed the burn injuries... three oil splatters...


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Posted: 6 years ago
Ashu
Haha
Nothing in particular

I grew up in 1980s Delhi in a strict Iyer house
I had hair uptil my hip.

Even most Iyer girls these days have hair 6 inches long.

Nobody cares for long locks anymore.

Hence, maybe?

Only in fairytales here in the US the girls have hair longer than 10 inches. Most of my Desi friends who have daughters they all have hair upto their waist.But for some strange reason (Amreekan fashion) I think, its clumpy and untidy... 

II was an iconic Iyer from my 1980s.

Suvechha is modeled after a Maharashtrian friend I have with short curly hair and luscious lips (no I am not a lesbian)


Trisha is a person thats different from both


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Posted: 6 years ago
Being the smaller branch in a large ( prosperous ) family tree is always a challenge !
This hero seems to have quite a few such challenges stacked against him. We are used to RB who has it all in platinum, Neel who calls the shots as the boss man, so this is new and novel !!

Dekhte hain aage aage hota hai kya ?! Picture abhi baaki hai ðŸ˜ƒ

Hero heroine abhi tho milne wale hain !!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Yes Vani
Isnt it intriguing to imagine a male protagonist who is NOT the best at everything?

An unconventional leading lady, a reluctant warrior
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Posted: 6 years ago
You k ow what...whenever I read a part of your tales, I compare  the men with RB...It happens unconsciously. Be it a sidey or the main protagonist... This guy Ashvin...is...completely different.. shattering the mould of RB .
I likeee

Aur aage batao kya hua
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Ashu

Haha
Nothing in particular

I grew up in 1980s Delhi in a strict Iyer house
I had hair uptil my hip.

Even most Iyer girls these days have hair 6 inches long.

Nobody cares for long locks anymore.

Hence, maybe?

Only in fairytales here in the US the girls have hair longer than 10 inches. Most of my Desi friends who have daughters they all have hair upto their waist.But for some strange reason (Amreekan fashion) I think, its clumpy and untidy... 

II was an iconic Iyer from my 1980s.

Suvechha is modeled after a Maharashtrian friend I have with short curly hair and luscious lips (no I am not a lesbian)


Trisha is a person thats different from both



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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Yes Vani

Isnt it intriguing to imagine a male protagonist who is NOT the best at everything?

An unconventional leading lady, a reluctant warrior


And I also wonder why I unconsciously lean towards the leading lady ?! My heart is already on applying Burnol to her burns and pushing the envelope for her towards the Narangs ðŸ˜³

She must be a tough cookie to take on and I await the next to see the reluctant warrior wear his not so shining armour !!

Btw, were you a fan of Georgette Heyer books in high school ? Just asking ?
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Posted: 6 years ago
No actually Vani. Someone else has said that before
I just conjure up people, places and things out of thin air.

Yes I have read 100s of cheap and good romance fiction

I am a sucker for romance

No I mean SERIOUSLY

I "see" love stories where none exist.
I like to be involved, butt in, interfere and meddle in other people's love stories.

The best way to do that, I realized... is to... WRITE MY OWN😆