RaYa FF:Aisa koi zindagi mein aaye.. Part 7 pg16

Share
Posted: 2017-05-05T04:11:50Z
Hi guys! I'm also one of the big fan of RaYa and BALH. Till now I have been a silent reader in IF. I have been following every stories here. Every writer here in this forum are awesome. All the writers here inspire me.
This is my first ever attempt to write a story on RaYa. Please bear with grammatical and spelling errors. Would absolutely love to read your suggestions and feedback so this can be a better story.
AISA KOI ZINDAGI MEIN AYE

Part1-pg1
Part2-pg3
Part3-pg5
Part4-pg7
Part5-pg11
Part6-pg13
Part7-pg16


PART-1
SHARMA HOUSE
A lady is writing something in her diary..
Life is so so beautiful.. with a loving mother, a caring and understanding father who always supports and two naughty siblings who loves you so much.. My family is my life.. I feel myself very lucky to be surrounded by them with their love...
lekin phir bhi kyun zindagi mein ek khalipan sa mehsus hota hai.. shayad woh khalipan ek dost ki zarurat hai.. ek aisa dost jo mujhe samajh sake.. jiske saath mein apni saari feelings share kar sakun bina koi hesitation.. aur shayad yeh khalipan kabhi pura nahi hoga.. friends k mamle mein i have always been unlucky.. chahe school mein ho ya college mein.. I was the topper of my class.. lekin mera koi dost nai tha.. shayad isiliye kyun ki mere haath mein books k alawa kabhie kuch aur nahi tha.. shayad isiliye kyun ki mein dusri girls ki tarah nahi thi jo humesa looks aur fashion ki baat karte hai.. Mera best friend koi nahi tha.. sab log baate karte the apni best friend se.. mein hamesa akeli ek kone mein apni books lekar baithti.. mein bhi chahti thi ki koi mera bhi best friend ho jise mein sab kuch share kar sakun.. hansi majak kar sakun.. Its not that i hadnt tried making friends.. But har koi mukar jaata tha.. koi nahi chahta tha mera dost banna.. Meine bhi apna dost apne books aur tumhe (diary) ko chuna.. Kabhi kabhi bohot sad sa feel hota hai ki mera koi dost kyun nahi hai.. lekin fir sochti hoon shayad mein jis dost ko dhoondh rahi hoon, woh mujhe mere jeevan saathi k roop me mile.. kya pata bhagwan ne mere liye mere humsafar ko hi mera dost chuna hai...
A voice comes- PRIYAAA
the girl says- Haan ma... aarahi hoon
Priya stops writing and goes to her mother(shipra)...
she helps her mother in preparing dinner...
After dinner...
Shipra and priya are clearing the kitchen work...
Shipra-beta tujhe nahi lagta ab tujhe shaadi kar leni chahiye?
Priya- Nahi maa.. abhi Kartik padhai puri kar raha hai... ayesha ne abhi apni career par focus karna shuru bhi nahi kiya. toh aise mein main apni bhai behen ki jimmedariyan chod kar shaadi kaise kar lun..
Shipra- arre unk liye abhi bhi tere papa aur mein zinda hai.. tu kabhi apne life k baare mein kyun nahi sochti.. hamesa bhai behen k baare mein pehle kyun sochti hai... aur waise bhi tere kehne par hi toh Kartik ne job k liye apply kiya hai na? Ab tu apni life k baare mein sochna shuru kar..
Priya gets irritated...
Priya- maa abhi ye sab baat karna jaroori hai.. hum kuch aur baatein nahi kar sakte kya?
Shipra- haan thik hai.. abhi nahi kar rahi hoon... Lekin main kal tere papa se teri shaadi ki baat karne wali hoon.. aur tu mujhe nahi rok sakti...



KAPOOR MANSION
Two men are sitting and drinking beer...
One of the men- Ram.. tu shaadi kyun nahi karleta yar.. Krishna aunty kitna pareshan rehti hain teri shaadi ko lekar.. lekin ek tu hai ki kisi ki koi baat nahi sunta..
Ram- Vikram.. tu fir shuru hogaya.. mujhe nahi karni yar shaadi.. mujhe kisi ki jarurat nahi hai life mein.. mere saath tum log hona .. yehi kaafi hai
Vikram- tu humesa aisi baatein kyun karta hai.. har kisi ko apni life ek lifepartner ki jarurat hai.. ek aisa saathi jo kisi bhi waqt mein saath de.. humesa saath khada rahe.. Tujhe bhi apni life mein aise hi partner ki zaroorat hai jo tera akelapan dur karke tujhe apnapan de.. Shaadi k liye maan ja Ram.. Ladkiyon ki fir line lagadengi Krishna aunty
Ram- haan aisi ladkiyan jo sirf THE RAM KAPOOR k paiso se pyar karti hain.. Jinhe sirf mera bada naam apne naam se jodna hai... Tu bol kaun shadi karega mere saath.. 40 ka toh hogaya hoon mein.. kaun ladki accept karegi mujhe meri jimmedariyan.. meri insecurites.. mere problem k saath.. Aur mujhe aisi ladkiyon se shadi nahin karna jo mere paiso k piche bhaagti ho..
Vikram- Ram har ladki waisi nahi hoti..
Vikram's phone rings...
vikram-haan Neha bolo... haan mein ram k saath hi hoon KM mein... nahi yaar hum log nahi pee rahe hain.. haan haan.. mein abhi aa raha hoon..
Ram smiles seeing his friend trying to convince her wife that he is not drinking..
vikram-i need to go Ram.. nahi toh mahabharat shuru hojayegi... kal office mein milte hain
Vikram goes to his house...
Ram goes to his room and sits on his favorite chair... he goes in his deep thoughts...
He thinks about his life... Jab woh college mein tha tab uske bauji ki death hogayi thi ek accident mein.. uske baad ghar ki aur office ki saari jimmedariyan usne li thi.. Rishab aur Natasha (his brother and sister) tab bohot chote the.. Ram ne unhe apne bachhe se bhi zyada pyar diya hai... bauji ki death k baad Ram ne din raat mehnat karke Kapoor industries ko ek nahi uchayi par pahunchaya hai.. apne baare mein sochne k liye usse kabhi time hi nahi mila.. apne doston ke saath bar aur club mein jaane ka man usse bhi hota tha.. woh bhi chahta tha ki ussk doston ki tarah uski bhi ek girfriend ho.. lekin kahin na kahin usski jimmedariyan usse yeh sab karne nahi deti.. yeh sab karne ka khayal usse aata toh uski maa aur dadi ka chehra saamne aajata tha.. Vikram and his wife Neha have always been there for Ram since college days..
Woh janta hai ki usski maa uski shaadi karwana chahti hain.. lekin ab woh ye sochta hai ki usski shaadi karne ki umar beet gayi hai.. ab usse akele rehne ki aadat si padgayi hai.. Lekin kahin na kahin usske zindagi mein ek kami hai.. woh aaj itna bada aadmi ban gaya hai lekin phir bhi usse apne andar ek khalipan mehsus hota hai, shayad ek Humsafar ki...

Priya in her room thinks ki kya kabhi koi usski life mein ayega jisse woh apna keh sake?
Ram in his room thinks kya mere liye bhi koi bana hai jo meri life mein sirf mere liye ayegi aur aake wo kami puri kardegi?
Aisa koi zindagi mein aye jo zindagi ko zindagi banaye..
Thodi khusiyan ho thode aansu ho aur zara zara pe muskurayen...
Will Priya get the friend she wants in her partner ever?
Will Ram get someone who will be there for him always?
TO BE CONTINUED...
Plz do like and comments



Edited by RaYa_RaShi - 2017-07-22T08:33:38Z
18 Likes this
Posted: 2017-05-05T05:30:38Z
Awesome story
Nice start
Waiting for next update
Hope get soon
1 Likes this
Posted: 2017-05-05T05:52:22Z
welcome to the forum. story sounds to be similar to actual balh. but hope k kuch alag and Naya read karne ko mile. keep posting. plz update regularly
_____________________
Madhuri Dixit and Sakshi Tanwar....FOREVER FAVOURITES
1 Likes this
Posted: 2017-05-05T06:25:54Z
It's really nice...
I love it so much...
And welcome to forum...please continue soon...
1 Likes this
Posted: 2017-05-05T06:59:13Z
Originally posted by Mitwaa


Awesome story
Nice start
Waiting for next update
Hope get soon

Thank u for ur comment!! Will try to update soon!
0 Likes this
Posted: 2017-05-05T07:10:22Z
Originally posted by iluvusakshi


welcome to the forum. story sounds to be similar to actual balh. but hope k kuch alag and Naya read karne ko mile. keep posting. plz update regularly

Thank u for ur comment.. as its RaYa,BALH se similar ho hi jata hai.. iss story mein bhi shaadi k baad wala pyar hai.. but it will be different... will try to update soon
1 Likes this
Posted: 2017-05-05T07:12:54Z
Originally posted by kavyaaakapoor


It's really nice...
I love it so much...
And welcome to forum...please continue soon...

Thank u
Will try to update soon
0 Likes this
Posted: 2017-05-05T13:34:40Z
Very nice
Pls continue soon
1 Likes this

Related Topics

Topics Author Replies Views Last Post Reply
Janilover 13 909 2019-02-01T12:01:37Z Cute_Saakshii12
SakshiAddict 47 5002 2017-10-01T21:40:22Z leena04
Writersblock 44 3568 2017-08-13T12:43:52Z Writersblock
jeena1993 330 50341 2016-04-19T20:07:32Z leena04
raya50-50 36 8017 2014-01-20T22:11:01Z raya50-50

Topic Info

  • 129 Replies
  • 7652Views

Topic started by RaYa_RaShi

Last replied by iluvusakshi

FORUM QUICK JUMP

TOP