MG FF- Someone Like You THREAD #6 - Page 95

Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 53...
Awesome... Beautiful...

Thanks for update...

Thanks for pm..
Continue soon..

I loved the intro .. relationships are indeed like a pendulum... Some at extreme n some mean some in between..

Everyone has their own place n importance...

Maan felt let down ... He was hurt ... The two most important ladies in his life were hiding something so important...
They were being harassed just under his nose n he didn't know..

He felt incapable , lacking somewhere .. he felt helpless...

But geet wasn't wrong either... It wasn't her story to tell...

Ana had to do that...

Maan knows his anger ... He didn't want to do anything that he would regret later hence he distanced himself from her...

Geet was worried for him... Scared of his anger. .. 

She witnessed a new side of him ... 

She felt it ... She didn't know this person... He was not HER maan ... He was someone else...

His indifference bothered her , his silence killed her , but still she doesn't realize what is he for her...

This whole scene was so perfectly depicted... Each emotion n feeling of both so well enhanced... 

Brilliant... Loved it all...

She thought she was jinxed , last days carried painful n worst memories for her ...

But maan broke this trend in the end ... 

She doesn't like to be left alone ... No one likes it ...

It haunted her ...

She got drunk ... Maan came back for her..

His little tornado ...

She told him never to repeat it again n never to leave her again...


She in her drunk state asked him what kind of a girl he liked ..

He  Said one who is no where near perfection ... Clumsy n messy ..
She couldn't believe n asked for proof ...

The last line made my day ...

His reply was so simple yet it held the entire truth...

I love you , isn't that proof enough ...

Ah .. I love you ms . Kawaii for this ...

U are a really brilliant writer .. u know which buttons to press  n  when ...
Posted: 6 years ago

Part 53

 

 Wow lovely superb omg update..te way my maan ki angry thinking he failed to protect his loved ones, his sister was in pain and his geet too was abused by tat man and he was just don't know wat going around them..te way geet ki pain thinking abt her every last day was painful for her and te way she rushing to see my maan and his words and behavior piercing her heart seeing a different side of him,yes she can bear his angry but not his silent which was hurting her...te way he left her all alone to haunt with her tears was lovely emotional..hmm tis is my maan's heart how ever angry he may be but he cant see his geet in pain and came vback to her,omg she was talking to monster puppy omg, geet was in talli..te way geet  saying him to not distance away from her and my maan feeling guilty was lovely..te way geet asking abt his likes abt girls and he burst his love omg..i love te update so much yar 

Edited by Desigirls12 - 6 years ago

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