~Fiction: Chand Chhupa Badal Mein ~ A New Beginning ~ Pg 33 - Page 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
Loved the chapter! <3 ⭐️⭐️


The best part was how Noor & Zeeshan became friends in childhood days. ❤️ The way she innocently told him that she has ample of time and asked him to play with her was really sweet & adorable. 😳
Zeeshan going bonkers in his jealousy was cute. 😛😆

Continue soon dear. 😃 And thanks for the PM, Shano. 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful part Nandini
Awesome updated
Noor and Zeeshan have a great friendship
They both understand each other so well
I loved how Noor cheered Zaeshaan
His childhood was really hard
I can understand why his thoughts about love and family changed completely
Zeeshan possessive about Noor was sweet
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Zeeshan part was so Nice.😊
Noor and Zeeshan Bonding was so Nice.😊
The Whole Part was so Interestingly explained.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

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Posted: 6 years ago
Awsm update
zee has a bad past cz pf failed relationship pf his parents
he doesn't believe in marriage
zee was getting jealous
he has feelings fr her
continue soon
thnxxx 4 pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: .Archangel.

Res. 😎

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Unres. 😛
Yeah. Yeah I'm here this early, unlike you. 😆😆😆
Like I say, I unres soon cuz being late or being lazy and unresing after that is a pain in the ass. 🥱

Well, I did unresd all my spaces early this time!! 😆 😃

So to start with, Zeeshan is an adorable fella sleeping in the only lecture Noor doesn't has in common with him. 😆😆
I even loved how he smacked Noor's head who was so engrossed in reading. 😆😆
Then his gobbling up the whole of cheese sandwich with ketchup was funnier. 🤣

Zeeshan is cute, who just wants to sleep all the time and when not sleeping, it's either his drums or soccer. A typical college bachelor. 😆

So, Noor is an avid Nora Roberts Fan like us. Hehe. 😉
And then her whole going jealous over the fact that Zeeshan had complimented Alisha who was showing off. 🤣

She is. She loves reading romances esp. NR and you know why. 😉
But she doesn't knows, she herself has been destined to have one beautiful love story with a man who deserves her. ❤️
He's her only best friend. She has all the rights to be jealous. 😛

I want to hit Zeeshan with a hathoda as to how he can be so dumb so as to not notice that soft blush on her face whenever he talks about him and her. 😕
Guys don't tend to miss such things but I'm glad he does cuz Noor has something more beautiful in store for her. 😳

Like you mentioned last time on call, aadmiyon ki akal ghutne mein hoti hai. 😆😆
It isn't difficult to notice that innocent blush or softness in her eyes. But being the dumbo Zeeshan is, he misses to notice it every time. 
She has something more more more BEAUTIFUL in her destiny. ❤️

Zeeshan had have a difficult childhood and one can understand it from the bitterness he holds towards his mother. The way Noor consoled him and the whole flashback was so so beautifully written. 👏👏

Like we were discussing, two people who can't stay together shouldn't have kids either. Coz in the end, when they part their ways, it's the child who suffers the most. 
Credits to you for flashback!! :*

Little Noor and Zeeshan, Their friendship, Their innocence is so beautiful. 
The way Noor says she has ample time and gave him her chocolate was so so beautiful. ❤️

They've the most beautiful friendship so far. She has always been adorable. ❤️

I don't blame Zeeshan for being against the ideas of marriage, kids and family but Noor's optimistic approach is refreshing balanced with his. <3
The way she fangirls about Shah and hates kjo. 🤣

I'm glad you loved their contrasting approaches because of their own experiences. Anyone in Zeeshan's place would've same opinions as his. While Noor who has always lived in a secured cocoon of her parents believes in fairytale romances. 😳
You love Shah. Hence, her love. :*
We both hate KJO, so the hate!! 😆😆

I cracked up at how she poked ball point into his ear to wake him up. 🤣
Samar likes Noor. 😳
It was sweet of how, he is so nervous yet gentle around her. I for one, absolutely loved their bonding over Prose and John Keats. ❤️

Samar is another cute character we've in this story. His character is pivotal for Noor's development as character. 😊
  
But Zeeshan is jealous and though I somewhere understand the concept of his jealousy but asking Noor to stay away from him was a bit too much. 😳
She isn't a kid to be told as to what to do and what not. 

Zeeshan has same reasons to be jealous and being protective abt her. But protectiveness/possessiveness is desirable to a limit. Beyond that, it feels like a bondage. We'll have to see what form is Zeeshan's possessiveness is going to take.
Will it be desirable or a bondage?!

Update Real Soon. 🤗
Very soon!!
Nandini

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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: sharda_123

Lovely update dear

Thanks for pm


Thank you so much!!
I'm glad you enjoyed. 😊
Edited by pcnsb - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Nice..


Thank you so much! 😊
Keep reading and commenting. 😳
Edited by pcnsb - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: whiterose29

Loved the chapter! <3 ⭐️⭐️



The best part was how Noor & Zeeshan became friends in childhood days. ❤️ The way she innocently told him that she has ample of time and asked him to play with her was really sweet & adorable. 😳
Zeeshan going bonkers in his jealousy was cute. 😛😆

Continue soon dear. 😃 And thanks for the PM, Shano. 🤗


Aashi. 🤗

I'm glad you loved the update. 😳

Noor and Zeeshan has a beautiful friendship. They're each other's support and strength. Noor is adorable and you'll have more of her cuteness in the story further. ❤️

Being her best friend, Zeeshan was hell jealous. But you'll have to read further to know if it's cute or not! 😃

Will update soon! 
Keep commenting. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Beautiful part Nandini
Awesome updated
Noor and Zeeshan have a great friendship
They both understand each other so well
I loved how Noor cheered Zeeshan
His childhood was really hard
I can understand why his thoughts about love and family changed completely
Zeeshan possessive about Noor was sweet
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊


Hey, Goldie!! 🤗

I'm glad you loved the update!! 😳

Their friendship is a beautiful one so far. ❤️

Zeeshan indeed had a difficult childhood because of his broken family. Hence, his thoughts abt marriage and family is justified. 

Zeeshan's possessiveness will have more shades. Sweet or not, that you'll have to see. 😊

Stay tuned.
Will update soon.
Keep commenting. 😃
Edited by pcnsb - 6 years ago