~Fiction: Chand Chhupa Badal Mein ~ A New Beginning ~ Pg 33 - Page 5

Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by MysticRiver


Nice..

Thank you. πŸ˜Š
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by heemasomani


Good part

Thank you. πŸ˜Š
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by LOVE.GOLD


Loved it dear Shanu Awesome update
Love you lots πŸ€—
Noor and Zeeshan are too cute
Concert was really good ... And the song you choose was also beautiful
I just loved Noor authorization on Zeeshan and the way she shooed the girls away was really good πŸ‘
I really wish that they both can be together
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

Thanks Goldie. Love you lots too. πŸ€—
Noor and Zeeshan have a really adorable bond of friendship and that will be discovered more in the upcoming chapters. 

Well, both are very possessive about each other hence the jealousy. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
But destiny has something else planned for Noor which will be even more beautiful. β€οΈ

Stay Tuned. πŸ˜Š
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by ...Forever...


Awesome

Thank you. 
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by akriti154


Amazing start
noor n zee's concert was a huge hit
zee pampering noor n teasing her that her husband wonder do it fr her n her rply was cute
she was jealous of d fangirling zee was getting
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm

Thanks Akriti. 
Glad you loved it, Noor and Zeeshan will get more adorable. πŸ˜›

Stay Tuned. πŸ˜Š
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by SaRun.


"Yeh Zeeshan hai koi Adeel Hussain nai" had me in splits!! 
Loved the first chap. A nice intro to their world. Loving Noor & Zee's bond! 

Continue soonish!!

Aww, thank you Babe. <3
Glad you loved it so much. 

Stay Tuned. πŸ˜Š
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Radhikerani


Such a cute and lovely update!


Thank you Choti. <3
Stay Tuned. 
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by poojasidd123


A very interesting chapter!


Thank you. πŸ˜Š
Posted: 6 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago
Res. πŸ˜Ž
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Unres. πŸ˜›
Yeah. Yeah I'm here this early, unlike you. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Like I say, I unres soon cuz being late or being lazy and unresing after that is a pain in the ass. πŸ₯±

So to start with, Zeeshan is an adorable fella sleeping in the only lecture Noor doesn't has in common with him. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I even loved how he smacked Noor's head who was so engrossed in reading. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Then his gobbling up the whole of cheese sandwich with ketchup was funnier. πŸ€£
So, Noor is an avid Nora Roberts Fan like us. Hehe. πŸ˜‰
And then her whole going jealous over the fact that Zeeshan had complimented Alisha who was showing off. πŸ€£
I want to hit Zeeshan with a hathoda as to how he can be so dumb so as to not notice that soft blush on her face whenever he talks about him and her. πŸ˜•
Guys don't tend to miss such things but I'm glad he does cuz Noor has something more beautiful in store for her. πŸ˜³

Zeeshan had have a difficult childhood and one can understand it from the bitterness he holds towards his mother. The way Noor consoled him and the whole flashback was so so beautifully written. πŸ‘πŸ‘
Little Noor and Zeeshan, Their friendship, Their innocence is so beautiful. 
The way Noor says she has ample time and gave him her chocolate was so so beautiful. β€οΈ
I don't blame Zeeshan for being against the ideas of marriage, kids and family but Noor's optimistic approach is refreshing balanced with his. <3
The way she fangirls about Shah and hates kjo. πŸ€£

I cracked up at how she poked ball point into his ear to wake him up. πŸ€£
Samar likes Noor. πŸ˜³
It was sweet of how, he is so nervous yet gentle around her. I for one, absolutely loved their bonding over Prose and John Keats. β€οΈ
But Zeeshan is jealous and though I somewhere understand the concept of his jealousy but asking Noor to stay away from him was a bit too much. πŸ˜³
She isn't a kid to be told as to what to do and what not. 

Update Real Soon. πŸ€—
Edited by .Archangel. - 6 years ago


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