TS on RaYa: The Revenge.... Last Part pg 2 - Page 3

Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful ending to another emotional story of yours.
You're an amazing writer.
Please do write the epilogue.
Thanks for pm.
Eagerly waiting.
Posted: 6 years ago
Hi dear..
Nice end to the story,.
So now sweet revenge continues after marriage.. :)
Yes priya was right too tht she cant start trusting again easily..
But Raya is raya, even though they are anger with the other one, the care and concern always shows up and they cant see the other in trouble..
Ram's realization and his true words to priya  were good..

I love the lyrics of dillagi song and u hv used one of my fav lyric line..."yeh ishq nahi aasan bas itna samjh ..."

I loved the story..beautiful end..

Thanks for the pm.. :)
Posted: 6 years ago
vry nice...
thank u so much 4pm
Posted: 6 years ago
vry nice ..story
thnx 4pm...
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sry 4 laet rply
Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely TS Arpita
Loved how Ram realized his mistakes and repented the same
thanks for Pm and sorry for being a late reader
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by peeyara


Lovely TS Arpita
Loved how Ram realized his mistakes and repented the same
thanks for Pm and sorry for being a late reader


it's OK I can understand
Posted: 6 years ago
Haaayyy yr wht a plot ...revenge new one b/w raya bt best one...
U gotta great writing skills ,...bless u
Posted: 6 years ago
awww what an second part Ram has gone threw really hard time for Priya... there Priya was not less she tried her way best to irritate him but Ram's love is as stronger as his stubbornness he waits for her to let him talk without her anger he still tried until she will engage but the end was master stroke he truly loved her he controlled himself when he knew us can't do anything now so sad but last kiss part was too good RaYa r made for each other their every stories are proof of this awesome mind blowing waiting for next hope you post soon the new stories...

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