Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

My Fair Geet Season 2! 19th Apr: Chap 4 on Pg 15!

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Hello people!

It's the day of the Holi and your favourite Writer decided to give you a treat by going to Khurana Mansion and giving you a glimpse of all the main characters!  

 

The first person I encountered when I went in was the Matriarch of the house, Daadima.

 

 

Dressed in elegant saree with classy pieces adorning her neck and hands, she looked like a queen. Allow me to tell you that after her husband, her son and her daughter-in-law's death she singlehandedly managed the Khurana Constructions and raised her two grandsons. She is awe inspiring and an idol for the Indian career women. She seemed to be in hurry and hence, didn't seem interested in answering your Writer's questions. But one question stopped her in her place, "Mrs. Khurana. What do you love the most in this world?" She turned around and replied haughtily, "My family and my family pride!" And she walked off.

 

I was a bit disappointed that I didn't get to talk to Daadima much but oh well! I went off in search of my next bakra... Ahem ahem... the next family member of Khurana Clan. I crashed into a man and would have fallen down if the man hadn't grabbed me. "Hello beautiful!", he drawled and I was taken aback.

 

 

The man turned out to be Daadima's younger grandson Dev. He seemed to be in hurry so I asked him the same question I asked Daadima. He smirked, "I love... hmm... Tough question! But I should say drinks and girls!" Somebody called him and he ran away but not before winking at me. I rolled my eyes. Typical flirt! If you don't know then let me tell you that this fellow that I just met is the biggest flirt in the world. He sleeps with almost every girl who is interested in him but he is a good man at heart.

 

Next I came across is a young girl who seemed to be looking at Dev with dreamy eyes while partially hiding herself. I asked her name and she turned out to be Geet, the Butler's daughter.

 

 

She has lived in the house since she was born and loves the house. As she seemed to be eager to follow Dev I decided to ask her the same one question and this was her reply as she sighed dreamily, "Dev! Haaye! Kinne handsome hain! Aur kitne pyaar se mujhse baat karte hain! (He is so handsome! And he talks to me so sweetly!)" Her eyes widened and she scurried away as soon as she realised what she had blurted out. I raised an eyebrow. I was so amused by this girl! I shook my head and went in search of next family member!

 

I entered a study room and I gulped as I came across HIM.

 

 

THE MSK! Maan Singh Khurana, aka the heir and eldest Khurana grandson. Now you must be thinking, did your Writer have a crush on MSK? Nope! I was just too scared. That's MSK! The guy who could destroy you just for breathing wrong. He was the top tycoon of India and also the most ruthless businessman. I introduced myself and managed to squeak out only one question, "What do you love the most in this world?" He replied with serious expression on his face, "My business and my family!" I nodded and scrambled away. Phew!

 

Next person I found was a sexy looking dame entering the house. She was dressed in a gorgeous outfit, that I am sure was showcased in Lakme Fashion Week few weeks back. Who was she? You wonder! That is Naintara, Dev's future fianc.

 

 

Unlike most of the rich girls, she is not a snob and is very sweet. She is also a Doctor in one of the top Hospitals in Dilli. She was happy to answer my question, "What do I love? Dev! My Fiance! Who else!" She walked away in search of Dev and I felt bad for her. She was in love with a womaniser. But then she didn't agree to this marriage with eyes closed. She knew exactly what kind of man Dev was and yet wanted to marry him. She believed that she could change him.

 

As my time with the house was over, I decided to walk out. Just as I stepped out I came across an old man dressed in butler clothes. The man was Mohinderlaal Handa.

 

 

Unable to stop myself, I asked him the question too. He simply smiled at me, "Meri Jhalli Geet puttar! (My crazy daughter, Geet!)" He walked off and I left the Mansion too!

 

So what do you think about the characters? Are they interesting? By the way, if you are thinking Geet will be pregnant by Dev and Maan will marry her to save the family pride or anything similar then perish the thought because you are wrong. This story is a light hearted romantic comedy! So go ahead and enter the world of Geet Handa in My Fair Geet Season 2!

 

Thank you for reading, take care!

Kalpana


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Hello folks! How did you like the sneak peek I gave you? Did it make you want to read more? If yes, then wait not! Because My Fair Geet Season 2 is here!

 

Before you forge ahead, allow me to tell you a little bit about the story. Just like My Fair Geet first season, this season is also inspired by an Audrey Hepburn movie. The first one was based on My Fair Lady (1963) and this one is based on Sabrina (1954).

 

     You might know Sabrina as Yeh Dillagi (1994), the Indian copy of Sabrina, starring Kajol, Saif Ali Khan and Akshay Kumar. If you can't remember the movie, here are some songs from the movie to jog your memory: Jab Bhi Koi Ladki Dekhun Mera Dil Deewana Bole Ole Ole Ole and Naam Kya Hai Pyaar Ka Maara. The Indian version was slightly different from the original version and I am basing this story on the original version.

 

The dialogues will be English and the story will have maximum 25 to 30 chapters.

 

That's all for right now!

Go ahead, read the story and have fun,

Kalpana

 

P.S. Don't forget to leave reviews!

P.P.S. Find my other fics @ Entertainment Galore! 

 

Edited by Kalpana_KaCy - 7 years ago
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congrats on season 2! 👏 fab cs...😊 will b waiting! Happy Holi 😃
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Congrats on season 2
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Congrats for second season waiting for first part
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Congrats for the season 2 of this wonderful story
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Very interesting and unique character sketch. Can't wait for the update
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Absolutely loved it kalpana plzzz continue soon 
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PROLOGUE

 

 

 

 Once upon a time in Dilli, in Khurana Mansion lived a small girl. The Mansion she lived in was built on an estate. The estate was large and the Mansion was larger. It was so large that there was more than three servants per job. The garden had three gardeners. The lawns were taken care of by two specialists, one who maintained the lawns and other who maintained the tennis court. There was also a patio in the back of the house which was used for parties on several evenings.  There were three lifeguards on standby keeping an eye on the two swimming pools built on the lawn. There was even an observatory few feet away from the pools with the green house attached to it where special plants were grown. The observatory was made up of glass with a big telescope to observe the stars. The plants and the telescopes had their own caretakers and the observatory and the green house themselves were manned by several specialists.

 

        In the house, kitchen itself had Main Chef, Sous Chef, Pastry Chef, waiters and many more servants. Maintaining the house were the several servants with each room having two servants assigned to it. And as the mansion had more main rooms and guest rooms than one could count, you can understand how many servants worked there. The person who headed these servants was the Butler aka Mr. Mohinderlaal Handa.

 

       Mr. Handa had joined the staff as a young lad of 18. At that time he was just the driver of the Late Mr. Khurana also known in the family as Daadaji. But as time passed, his job description grew and today he singlehandedly ran the whole Mansion like a well-oiled machine. While his professional life flourished, his personal life saw a tragedy. 18 years back his wife died in childbirth and since then the poor man had to raise his little daughter all alone. The little daughter is the Protagonist of our story, Geet Handa.

 

     Geet Handa is normally found in the outhouse that was given to her and her father for staying or in the garden playing with the butterflies. But today if you searched for her, you would find her on the highest branch of a tree. Are you shocked? Of course you are! Why would young girl like Geet climb a tree top? Well, our Geet had a reason. And the reason was the party thrown by the Khuranas for ... for... actually I don't know why they threw the party. They tend to keep throwing parties for one or other reason every few days. Infact, even they don't know the reason behind their throwing parties these days. Music played, couples danced, old people chatted and food was displayed nearby. All the elites of Dilli were present there. Even Daadima was present with her group of elite ladies. The only one not present was Maan Singh Khurana who was a workaholic and preferred to entertain his clients with shop talk in the lounge. So he mostly stayed in the lounge and didn't meander into such parties unless he had been summoned.

 

     In such parties, only wait staff were allowed and hence, Geet had the option to only look from outside. And looking from outside was also tough because the patio was surrounded by high walls. Luckily for Geet, there was a tree growing near the wall whose highest branch overlooked the patio. Anyone who climbed the tree can look in easily. Now you can see why Geet was lounging around the tree branches!

 

     But why was Geet so interested in these parties? Ah! Therein lies the crux of the story. Geet eagerly looked into these parties because of the Khuranas, especially one Khurana, Dev. But before we talk about Dev, let me tell you a little about the Khuranas. The Khuranas consisted of three people; Daadima, Maan and Dev. Daadima was the Matriarch of the house. She singlehandedly ran the business after the death of her husband, her son and her daughter-in-law. Now her grandchildren ran the business, or rather one grandchild ran the business. This was Maan Singh Khurana, the ruthless businessman who couldn't see anything beyond his work. He was a self proclaimed workaholic. He even decided to remain bachelor so that nothing distracted him from work. Or atleast that was the reason he gave to his Daadima. The real reason was quite different. Maan had always been awkward around girls and always spoke truth, something girls he met didn't appreciate. He didn't know how to woo a woman and this made him withdraw into himself. Any girl he met always were more impressed by his brother who was a charmer and total flirt and that made Maan realise that almost every girl he met were shallow and were easily influenced by few charming words and pleasant demeanor. They never looked deeper into a person and that annoyed Maan. So he simply threw himself into work and swore to never get married. Currently he was twenty eight years old.

 

    Now we come to 25 year old Dev, the youngest son of the Khurana family. He had been spoilt since his childhood by his Daadima and his Maan Bro and that has turned him into a playboy. He was willing to have one night stand with any girl who was interested in it. But he was not callous person. He was helpful to all his friends and always ready to cheer anyone who was feeling sad. He was the life of the Mansion and he could even make his grumpy brother smile. And this was what enticed Geet.

 

    As a kid, Geet used to run a play in the Mansion. Maan, who was a teenager by then used to be quite annoyed by her constant chatter and her habit of barging in anywhere and hence sent her packing with a glare. But Dev, who was only seven years older to Geet, always took time to talk to Geet and even protected her from bullies in their childhood. He always bought her gifts whenever he got pocket money and always celebrated her birthday with great pomp. Hence, as Geet grew up, she developed a crush on Dev. But unfortunately for her and fortunately for Geet, Maan and us, Dev never thought of her in that manner.

 

      Every party came and everytime Geet climbed on the tree branch to have a look at her Dev. Its not as if she never saw him other times. Its just that she liked to see him dance and imagine herself dancing with him. And today also Geet was staring at Dev. She watched as he roamed around the patio meeting all the guests. He was dressed in all white and had a charming grin on his lips. Geet sighed dreamily. Oh Dev! How handsome you look! You look so perfect! Her eyes narrowed as she noticed Dev glance at a girl twice. She looked away as tears welled in her eyes. She looked back as Dev grabbed the girl with her arm and dragged her to dance with him. She watched as they danced for a while.

 

   After half hour, Geet growled as Dev pulled the girl a little closer. Now he will whisper something in her ear, Geet predicted in her mind. And on the dance floor, that is what exactly happened. Dev bent down and whispered something in the girl's ear. Geet frowned as she wondered what exactly Dev whispered. Now he will excuse himself, Geet announced mentally. Just then on the dance floor, Dev walked away. The girl ran off and Geet knew exactly where she went. She would go to the observatory where she will wait for Dev. Dev would then go to the bar and order a champagne. He will pick up two champagne flutes and pocket them in the back pocket of his dress trousers. Geet hissed in annoyance as exactly what she predicted happened. Dev left for the observatory whistling. How did Geet know all this? Because this is exactly what Dev did at every party. Only thing different was the girl who was with Dev.

 

   Geet sighed as she rested on the tree trunk. I wonder what they did in the observatory, Geet mused. Unfortunately for Geet, she never got to see what happened after Dev and the girl of his choice go to the observatory as the observatory was always shielded. She imagined the spacious observatory and the beautiful plants decorating the room. She imagined the girl sitting in the middle of the room on a love couch and Dev heading towards her looking at her lovingly! She sighed again. I know they must be talking there, what else they will do, Geet shrugged. Poor Geet! She is so nave! She was raised in an all girls' convent school and her father always sheltered her from the world. Hence, Geet was too nave to understand what Dev did with his girlfriend once they escaped the party. By the way, Geet is not so nave that she didn't understand what happened between husband and wife on a marital bed, but she just never imagined that Dev slept with every girl who was interested in him.

 

   Poor Dev! Geet sighed. Everytime he thinks he has found the love of his life and everytime it turns out to be false. How many times I have asked him the next day after the party if he was in love with the girl and everytime he had the same answer. I spoke with her and realised we are not perfect for each other.', he would say. Poor Dev! Geet frowned. Everytime he must be so hopeful that this girl is his dream girl! And everytime he must be so disappointed when they didn't seem perfect for each other. Sigh! He doesn't know he is looking at all wrong places. If only he saw me, waiting right here for him! But how will he notice me! I look so bland. Geet looked down and pouted. She was dressed in plain colored salwar kameez, her hair in two plaits. She looked like a school girl. I am so boring, Geet whined. I wish I could dress up like those girls! She tossed a glare at those girls standing on the dance floor, who she knew wanted to take her Dev away from her. If only I could get one chance! And then I would be the one he would drag to the dance! I would be the one in whose ear he would whisper! I would be the one who would get to drink champagne with him! And then he will realise that I am the perfect one for him! Sigh! She imagined herself dressed in an evening gown, Dev coming to her and asking her to dance, them dancing and then them having champagne in the observatory and then Dev would say -

 

   Geet felt a harsh tug on her legs and she came crashing down to the earth. She was shocked to see that she had actually fallen down from the branch and was lying on the floor. Suddenly her arm was grabbed and she was hauled up. It was her Papaji. "Come out of your daydreaming and see the real world!", her father gently spoke. Geet pouted and looked down as her father grabbed her hand and started to walk away, "Dev will never be yours beta! Its about time you understand this! You are not a child anymore! They are the people who live in the skies and we live on the earth. They and us don't mingle! They will always be owners and we will always be servants. When will you realise..." Geet tuned her father out as she forlornly looked back at the party. I just want one chance! One chance to show Dev that I am made for him and he is made for me! Just one chance!

 

 

So how was the prologue?

Did you like it?

Next update, we will see Geet interact with Dev and also with Maan!

 

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana