OS: Aage Kab Badoge by Abhishek Panchal - Page 2

Posted: 7 years ago
Total U turn lol
U nailed it man 
Lmao u take Raya in altogether different version
God u are too good 
Lol I was thinking like what will happen and u consummated them 
I never expected
Wild bold hot innocent priya 
So brilliant 
I have to say ur ideas are so fantastic to Read
Do write more Abhishek 
Thanks for this one 
Posted: 7 years ago
Unlike the show it shown soon RaYa fall in love and consumate the marriage in drunken state but they didn't regret but wanna became one in full sense.
Posted: 7 years ago
wat an outstanding writing :P:P
sweet surprise for us readers..

need to tell u.. its sooo gud.. so real abt raya..

pls pls pls write such os abt raya.. we are so desparate without raya.. our rashi..
Posted: 7 years ago
heheheh nice OS abhishek.
Naughty and Romantic...
like it...

Posted: 7 years ago
naughty yet amazing so RaYa consummated their marriage but Priya was not in her senses lol... She actually seduced Ram in all way to get him for her awesome too good I really enjoyed it... but the most important part was how he disclose all the truth front of Priya in next morning so RaYa got again naughty - naughty all way awesome the way she showed her rights on him n he hope her back to take her in his world of passion & love awesome too good...
Posted: 6 years ago
sweet Romantic love story
good one
thanks for PM

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