(MG-OS) A DEAL PART 2 (LAST PART) /PG 23 (Feb 13th'2K17) - Page 3

Congrats on the new OS! thanks 4 da pm! superb banner! lovely update! wonderfully written! Geet n Maan meet on the plane! Geet is so determined n gets Maan 2 agree 2 her deal! Geet is brave!  she loves her dad so much that she came to a foreign country to meet a strange man! waiting 4 next 

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Very interesting
Maan bend before her...aww she is a cutie pie...bat toh maanni hi thi
Lovely
Wonder what will he find out about her

Awesome os..

Lovely start sweety

This dude is so rude lol rhyming 😆
Fab OS.. Love part 1.. 😃
Geet is crazy she flew down to India to save her father's only treasure aww 😃
I'm glad Maan agreed to help her of course after so much pestering by her 😳
But he's good by heart I think.. He brought her home, after finding that she has no one 👏 😃
Waiting for next

Nice update dear Geet travel to meet Mann for a deal to accept her fathers wife offere

👏 wow nice concept n impressive too
After a long time I read your story
Actually missing your work
Waiting for next update
Please update soon

Woww..  Read a story after ages..  Intriguing story..  Waiting for nxt part 😊😊