RAYA SS : LOC PART 1 on Page 2 update 24-12-16 - Page 2

abhishekpanchal

@abhishekpanchal

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Posted: 7 years ago

now thats something awesome coming out from u aman bhai!!!! superb... really nice concept...now waiting for next

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Sakshi

@Sakshiashu

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Posted: 7 years ago

Nice update.
Please continue soon.

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

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Posted: 7 years ago

Superb part n hope priya ll find out his father n family too n also looking forward how raya ll meet

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Janilover

@Janilover

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara
Aman one correction, Khala is mother's sister and father's sister is called Phupi 😆
i hope u will update regularly
looking forward to next parts

i am so sorry actually i asked one friend She said khala 😲😲 i am chanding right now

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iluvusakshi

@iluvusakshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

superb. totally a different concept. lovely.

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360658

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

Hi..

Nice start..

That poetry in letter reveals the pain behind the person's heart who wrote it..that tadap of true love was visible..

Then the first part, from priya raza khan to priya sudheer sharma, and word about daughters,all were good. A diff concept or arena with Raya as centric characters...eager to read,.pls continue soon..

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Preethi

@nprithi2002

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Posted: 7 years ago

superb story... plz regularly update...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 7 years ago

so the story is based on India & Pakistan awww I hope Ram is from India from where Priya come to search of her father n fall in love with him it's interesting concept for sure I m truly loving it for sure... plz post the next part soon...

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